the difficulties of death throes

Sounds like morning routines of preparations of a hard day to come.

Nahhh... just me being too hard on myself and feeding that wicked inner beast with indulgence... Allowing the screams to be screamed... Just wishing it all be drowned out..... lol...  
 
Most days seem to be continually difficult...  
Thanks for stopping by and for leaving me your thoughts, CS.  
I greatly appreciate it.  
   
Hope you have a great day.  
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B

Hey there, Jay
It's that inner anguish that sometimes needs to have it's own moment in the sun, I think.... or something along those lines.. lol ... Yes, you said it. I believe you're so right and I agree in thinking that we all are probably screaming, in our own ways... that, exactly. Really insightful, my friend.

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and for the generous list add... I greatly appreciate it.

Much love, dear soul
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B

difficulties of  
monotonous routine ~ the
weight of living life

fustration dialing
the frequency ~ of eching
screams within the mind

drowning inside four
walls ~ that are supposed to be
your safe protection

I know you definitely understand, Colin.... Thanks for getting the gist of it and for your poem-ply. Damn, how I do love them so!!  
You're always a bright 🔆 spot!  

I deeply appreciate you , my dear 🙏🏻  

🌹 - 💙  
B  

Btw, your senryú here, really accomplished adding an additional layer of emotional context to my existing piece... I feel.... Great work, C!!
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I feel it ..conveyed. your write has that strength. Awesome 👍 Blue🌹

Hey there, Grace :)
I'm beyond delighted that you could feel the intent, here. It's rewarding to know and motivational to read... Thanks for the confidence jolt, dear lady!

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x

Sounds like a tough day on the horizon.
My mum would say make the time to breath.
Great write beautiful but give yourself some slack
Love and light
Ron xxx

More so, my thoughts giving my inner angst a screaming voice to alleviate some 'pressure'.... Thanks for the reminder and your mum was absolutely correct. It's so helpful to take care of yourself, breathing and depressurizing...

All my warmest thanks, Brave Knight!
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xoxo
B

The sounds of a daily grind often mean nothing but yet sometimes it is our thoughts that have become awaken by the thunder 🙏🦋

That's a beautiful point of view, Stoney. Thank you for the lovely and thoughtful sentiments and the very generous list add. I deeply appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me, highlighting the positive. You're a dear soul and I am always so delighted to see you on my page 🦋

Much love and respect, my friend 🙏🏻  
🌹-💙  
B

It is my pleasure and honor to grace your page as sharing is caring with a deep exchange of thoughts 🙏👊

-💙

One love always dear poetess 🙏🦋😘

The hot steamy shower does stimulate release of strong feelings.
❣️🙏🏼

lol.... yes, I would absolutely have to agree...It definitely opens you up... An awakening of mind, body and soul.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, KP. It's nice to see you today - 💙
🌹 - B

Let all the negative energy out, do have a great ass day.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Once again, you said a mouthful, Francisco!! That's exactly what I was creatively trying to get across. Letting out all the yuckiness, to move forward feeling lighter perhaps!

Thanks for the lovely comments and encouragement!
🌹 - B

I will always encourage you.  I will also make make your heart melt butter,  LOL.

Hi Blue
We get those days
Days that fill us with hate
That each day
Is groundhog day
Hate that job
Fucking hate that boss.
Wishing I'd call in sick
But in ten years in that job
Ten days is all I've been off sick
Groundhog day bite my ass

Great words Blue, great poem
Hope monotony dies a death

Love n peace
💜💜💜💜

Hey there, WM :)
You're definitely understanding the gist of what I hoped to accomplish conveying, that's too cool 😎 ..The pressures of work, family, personal needs, mental well-being, etc.... All that my angsty inner beast loves to feast upon!! ... Squeezing me, binding (& not in a good way.. lol) and twisting me in knots.... Giving that beast the 'business' ... or maybe it's the beast itself who's screaming!?!? 🤷🏻‍♀️ ... I never really made that distinction... lol... It's subjective!! Your thoughts are totally on freaking point 👌🏻though!! Is there really anything worse than continual monotony!?!? Ugggggh!! 🤦🏻‍♀️ (shivers)

All my warmest gratitude and deep appreciation for the list add and for taking the time to leave me your thoughts and insights!!
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B

Perfect way to express something so hard on the soul beautifully.

LJ

Lj!!!
Hey there, lovely lady!! Long time no see! I hope you had a wonderful holiday and a very Happy New Year (so far!) It's truly lovely having you visit me, I missed your beautiful avatar and astute insightfulness. ✨ - 💙  

I deeply appreciate your kindness today, Lj. It means a lot to me to know that I was able to convey what I hoped, around a topic that was a bit tricky to write of. I'm so grateful for your feedback as well as for your generous list add.

Warm thanks and loads of best wishes -  
🌹 - B  
x

interestingly the cries of a banshee appear in a poem, yet to be posted, I am writing...synchronized creative juices?....L

Ooooo... Great minds definitely think alike, methinks!! *wink
I look forward to reading, L
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B

Another stunning write... the visual on this one is fantastic... it has a feminine curve to it... the line length sustains the cadence... the line breaking and "'."s maintain the suspense... then the killer lightning bolt of a last word... in bold face font... great job B...

Well, my wish was totally granted-as I was just complaining that my day needed to get better, then a few hours later, I'm reading your awesomely encouraging feedback and beaming wide from ear to ear!... lol.. Day improved , bove and beyond!!

Thank you for speaking in ref to the formatting, LilD. I do love that crawl down the page... I can't help it! Sometimes it just makes such a statement!

You really uplifted me and my whole mindset ✨  

Warmest thanks, my friend 🙏🏻
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B

so deeply comprehended, too felt for words; at most times

That deep intensity of profound emotion is where I aim to tread, riding a fine line of balance.... I am deeply appreciative that you felt this, like you described. I am fortunate to have your thoughts and eyes upon my page - 🙏🏻

All my warmest regards, dear poet
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B

I feel ya, with this one!  Once in a while, when driving, I will scream as loud as a I can to let some pressure out.  It helps!  Then I feel better!

Yours poetic words echo what so many feel.  You "spoke" it out precisely.
Excellent words, B.

I do that one, too!!!! heh heh heh 😈.... It's so freaking liberating!! It's usually accompanied by my favorite song bring played @ 11!! 😉

Thanks for your eyes upon my words, S. I know I might sound like a broken record but I really do enjoy your pov. It's always interesting, thoughtful and sincerely helpful.

Enjoy the cool weather!  ( doesn't it feel great!!)
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B

Hell yes it feels great!  Saturday is the cold morning I think.  
I have my smoking blanket ready!   I don't smoke in the house, so yeah, cold mornings means wrap up!  Lol.  

I think articulating psychological states can be tricky.

I like the way you built this up as you broke it down.

And the ending=Immaculate.

Nicely done B.  

Your comments and perceptions always leave me bettered, Cipher.

Thanks for seeing me (my writing) the way you do. It means so much to me. I am so extremely grateful for your visits and kindnesses.

Not that it's needed but I just wanted to say you're always so welcomed and I look forward to picking your brain, daily... #Truth  

What a joy!
Be well out there, my dear poet 🙏🏻 ...
🌹 - 💙
xo
B

Sometimes we all need a good scream. Maybe a bit more these days.

Great ink, friend. 😁

Ain't that the truth, DC!
Thanks so much for visiting and for leaving your thoughts with me.... it's always a pleasure to see you

Yep, It was totally one of those days yesterday!

Much obliged for the RL add as well.

Be well and be safe -
🌹 - B

I wish a good hot shower was good enough to wash away sins.....

I like it.  Of course I  like all your other works.......

Kisses, Robert.

lol.... It's usually the 'cure-all'...
Although for my own transgressions it might have taken a little longer.... under the steam 🧖🏻‍♀️.... heh heh heh 😈...


I'm extremely delighted you enjoyed reading and I deeply appreciate you leaving your thoughts with me. ... 'All of my other works!?!"... sheesh... not even I like them ALL.... 😂.... I tease, I tease, my friend
All my warmest gratitude and thanks...
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B

You likely need an "act of distraction" to awaken you and provide another avenue of vocalization! The mornings are always the hardest.

Very true poem the need to shake off that morning fog that seems to envelope you as you try to face yourself and the world; the screams in hope of dropping the internal pressure.

The mornings set the tone, that's for sure. I think this idea came because of what was in store for that day and me, allowing my inner beast to step up to the soapbox and let us all hand it!! Yes, opening the pressure valve, so to speak... Allowing the steam to vent.... I need to come up with some creative ideas to achieve that goal.. Any ideas?
😏🤷🏻‍♀️... 🕵🏻‍♂️

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