a hypothesis of words (revisited)

Absolutely awesome gorgeous, words are truly a powerful tool abd you wield them with the precision of a surgeon
Great write, superb read. This time I remembered to hit the RL button
Love and light
Ron xx

lol 😂 😁 😜

Ohhh, my kind knight!
I definitely appreciate and thank you deeply. I love reading your takeaway... Yes, words are mightier than the sword, that's definitely something I believe in fully. They have the power to heal, harm or rebuild, completely. I wish there was more universal understanding of that very fact...

You're presence always makes my day - 💙
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B

Scintillating and sizzling, what words will do wrapping around heart and mind

I feel they find their way into the very fabric that stitches together every iota of our emotional well-being, becoming a force, unlike any other. Powerful, luscious and uniquely heady in all aspects. You're definitely familiar with the profound impact words have, as yours are some of the most considerately chosen and beautifully constructed.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me your truly wonderful feedback. It made my day.

🌹 - 💙
B

"upon the alter of your poem"... poetic gold... excellence in poetry once again... awesome flow... killer line breaks... great use of spacing...

Your visits truly make the grind of my day dissolve into background noise... Ahhh .... I sincerely thank you for the longer read, LilD .... The input of your feedback /thoughts means a lot... You've left me beaming.... ✨  
🌹 - 💙
-x

Selina,
Your generosity is epic and your excited allure sooo very beautifully tempting. The sensuality is mirrored, reflecting back all that I feel whenever I read those here that stoke my deepest...
essence. *wink 😈

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, I adore you visiting, always - 💙
🌹 - B

A compelling read...like a cartoon fragrance pulling the reader through...love being pulled through...L

Thank you so much for stopping by, Lawrence. In return, I too, love finding exciting ways to carry you along..... The possibilities!!
.....

Very much obliged, kind sir
🌹 - 💙
B

what can anyone say to this
except be in awe
feeling the power of vutterfly wings
across skiy and ocean ....

scintillating
hypothesis
of word
power
incantations
spurring hearts

to soar
In vast
skies
of bluest
velvet
pastels

scribing
fire
upon
imagined
skin
parchment

tattooing
lust
etching
passion
enslaving
souls


mine
Imcluded


.....we but unworthy
in the presence of word sorcery

Ohhhh Myyy goodness!!!
To be showered in gorgeous poetry, is to know true joy!! You're totally spoiling me... and you know it! Especially when you know just how much I truly adore your work.... hahaha... (nicely played!)  

Beautiful comments, C. You're part of the reason that I was inspired to write what I have. Thank you for everything, my lovely friend.... I am sooo fortunate to have you here with me ....  
- 🌹 🙏  
B-xo  

Tim! ;)    
Your words and deep delve (yep, that was intentionally said!... heh heh) into the intensity and experience of process, are truly scintillating and creative. I loved seeing where your mind went; that was a true pleasure to witness. I am beyond delighted that you found this piece filled with the passionate rapture that I hoped to convey, even in a small dose.  
 
I appreciate your thoughtfulness, the list add and all of your continued open honesty.  
   
It's always interesting, amusing and sometimes it teaches me things that I might have otherwised been closed off to, without it. I am grateful, my friend 🙏  
🌹 - 💙    
B

Wow....totally inspiring stuff....wrap me in your words and send me to utopia.
Completely delightful.... gorgeous my dearest darling.....loved and taken perfectly.... and wow again.

Your comments are breathtaking and so very kind, I. My soul was 100% needing some pure goodness to light up the darkness that today saw fit spill over me (allowing it to fester a bit!) ... This visit of yours, answered my silent pleas of salvation!
I am so grateful for your understanding and the vast amount of perception you generously grace me with.

You're an original and I am deeply thankful for you and your supportive, encouraging aura.

Cool timing, indeed! 😎
🌹 - 💙
B

Wow "sacred fulfilling syllables' the ones that open secret doors to our soul..this is dope

Hey there, TezNstyn
Welcome :)
The idea of words being SO potent that they're sacred, even down to the last syllable, was my intent in meaning and IS what makes personal responsibility so vital; understanding just how important, impactful and powerful opening the doors to our souls, can be.... Great feedback, dear poet  
(My heart is full, knowing you enjoyed!)  

I sincerely thank you for sharing your thoughts with me and taking the time you have.  

All my warmest regards and deep appreciation,  
🌹💜
—B

New words are a turn on for you.   Hope you get orgasmic bliss.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Words are a turn on for us all, methinks. Nothing is better than that particular power! Thanks for the sentiments, Francisco! You definitely know the impact!


🌹 - B

This is freaking tight is there such a fetish as making love to written words. We really want a three way with this piece and the one that inspired it. Dang tight writing Lady as always

Oooooo...... your devilishly, delicious comments and astute observations make for fluttering butterflies in the tummy; where a mind races in deep, luscious possibility.

Too tight..... is exactly right.

Thank you, dear, Me
🌹 - 💙
B

Not Just Words

The
prestadigitation
of an unbridled
inner eye
above a tower
of terms

illustrates
the release
that it describes,

a cascade
of shivers
and
breathlessness.

I do thoroughly relish the idea of cascading myself via my poetry; washing over and soaking to the bone, every. single. crevice..... A celebration of emotional, exuberant release....


You amazed me - thank you.
🌹 - B

Thank you....and for being inspiring.

You've a way with words 🌼

Aww... (blushes)
Thank you so much for that unexpected thrill and your sweet kindness, AJ.

It's an absolute pleasure to see you and I hope you are doing well, my friend 🙏
🌹 - B

good evening beautiful Blue you my lady are so passionate and sexy
my words feel inadequate as I read your lines full of sensuality and desire
your pen is blessed and we are to have you here...

you are a true artist❤

Dearest Brenda.... Ohhh my!!
I'm a deer in headlights!—blinding myself on your radiant eloquence. You have made me feel truly special and I can't begin to tell you how much that sincerely means to me. I am awed and humbled as my heart overflows with the joy you've imparted. You are a magical and amazingly talented poetess, whose work I covet, adore and get constant inspiration from. The fact that you've found sexy passion in my writing, leaves me staggering in bliss and just makes my night!!  

Thank you...... for being incredibly kind and a deeply decent human being, sharing your generosity and allowing goodness to flourish.  

I feel lucky in such tremendous fortune  
All my warmest gratitude and deep appreciation,  
🌹 - 💙  
xo  
B

I love your writing, how you put those words together is inspiring,, 👏👏👏

You're a powerful light already spreading luminescence within dark spaces, dear poet.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.
I find it very meaningful.

(very happy you enjoyed reading)

🌹-💙
B

Dude...  

Are you serious.?.  :)))

Just the perfect balance of subtlety and overt sensational,
which created the provocative energy of a perfectly executed flow.

Killer wave.  :)))

Here's to the mother fucking new religion.

CIPHER!!!!
duuuuude!!
FUCK. YES.

I am beyond stoked that you are here with THE BEST comments and sick, killer observational coolness.

Missed you like mad — I'm totally ear-to-ear smiles.... Thank youuuuuuu for the generous words. *heart in eyes emoji*.... and your awesome motherfucking stamp of approval.

Tis the ONLY kind of religion that I fully support and want to 'get behind'... heh heh heh 😈

Much love, my friend 🙏
(don't be a stranger)
🌹-B

Great poem dear Blue and when you read with every fibre of your being it's .. breathlessly breathtaking 🌹talent art thine😘

Hi there, Grace :)
You've picked me up and adorned me with a wonderfully cool compliment.... I am shining bright, illuminated by your uplifting light and encouragement.

Thank you so very much, dear lady
🌹 - 💙
x

Just gorgeous BV. ..

like you, Jen - 💙


(thank you)
🌹
x

May be the fact that we are approaching the anniversary of the passing of John Lennon, but this write reminds me of his solo song, "Mind Games".

Hey there, J :)
I'm not familiar with that song but I'll definitely take any comparison to John Lennon as a humbling awesome good thing. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me and I'll be Googling that song asap!

I hope you are doing well-💙
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B

One of the things that I get out of reading poems is that within the brevity of their writing (unlike a story, where everything is given), we fill in certain blanks for ourselves, because the writer leads us to an edge, then stops and tells us " guess".  We seek to be where their mind went, and why, when we read their stuff.  
Not exactly a tease, but an intimate invite to their thoughts.  
I absolutely adore a female body. Yet what I crave are their thoughts.  I want their intellect, to know how they're wired, and maybe why.  I'm insanely curious.  
So, writings such as this you've posted, fill in those blanks.  It's nourishment.

It's awesome.

Dear Styxian,
Your confessional of sorts had my thoughts racing, leaving me pondering about insatiable curiosity and the spark that it can ignite. I think that fully understanding the complexity and entire ins and outs of what makes anyone tick, is time sensitive. Meaning, it's going to take awhile for all that information to eventually come to light, yet you truly nailed it— that my poetry absolutely has enough meat for a hungry soul to gnaw upon, filling bellies and satiating a hunger within. It's never really occurred to me before and I deeply appreciate you pointing it out.

All my thanks for highlighting that awareness. Your generosity of spirit and mind expanding feedback is unparalleled and I feel fortunate to receive it's benefits. I absolutely love seeing you visit, knowing every time I do, just how much I'll deeply enjoy our back and forth communications. They're always a pleasure... ✨

So glad you left feeling nourished, after reading .... What more could I ask for!!... ;)

Warmest regards,
🌹-💙
—B

Amazing work.
I especially love the alliteration: annunciation with anticipation. Brilliant.
❣️🙏🏼

Hey there, KP :)
That's my little favorite bit, too. I truly love the feeling of good alliteration on the lips , when reading aloud. I usually read my poems that way a few times before I publish them, just to get a solid idea of exactly how it flows and feels outside of my head. Your kind words of feedback mean a lot to me, much obliged, my friend 🙏.

I hope you're doing well and enjoying the encroaching holiday season..
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
B

Exquisitely superb my wonderful friend. Bravo!!!!

Ohh Harry, it's truly lovely to see you! 🦋

Thank you so much for the extremely generous and kind words, you made my night!! 👍🏻 I hope you are doing well, (it's been awhile! ) and that things on your side of the planet are moving towards better days. You're welcoming summer and we're welcoming winter, so it's always a uniquely awesome experience to get your Australian perspective this time of year! lol... I swear one day, I WILL make it there and finally cross it off my bucket list!!.. 🐨 - 💙

Have a wonderful holiday season, my friend
Much love your way ✨
🌹 - B
x

Always a great pleasure reading your wonderful art, Blue.
Yes we are a week into our "Downunder Summer"...only 20C today and we did have a very mild spring this year...it is heating up for the weekend though, 36C Sunday and 38C on Monday, 100F...that's here in Adelaide at least. So I've got plenty of South Aussie beer in the fridge lol. Our winters are very mild here, the coldest we get on average would be about 15C...we do not get snow here in South Australia...most of Australia never gets snow.
If you ever do get down here it would be great to catch up...we are a pretty friendly lot in general.
Take care my friend.
Cheers...Harry

Your words and stanzas truly can hypnotize the mind and send the soul into erotica
bliss!


AB4U

Awww.... you regale me with such lovely kind words, AB4U. I thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts with me and I'm beyond delighted that you found something hypnotically blissful within my little write.

I love seeing you visit, it's a pleasure!
Much love and deep appreciation,
🌹 B

Lines like "i quiver at each syllable" and "desperate annunciation mixes with verve and anticipation" had us readers breathing just the same.
Blue, this was fire and flame, burning with ache and lust from beginning to end.

Bravo.

... and here, I was shooting for not completely embarrassing 😳 myself! ... lol 😂


I'm sooooo Blown away, left staggering like a deer in headlights.... 🦌... You're supreme kindness is felt from here, Walter I LOVE that you could sense the heated fervor, it's subtle (as best as I can do anyway) that's beyond meaningful to me and so rad. I cant tell you what an amazing positive impact that has on my confidence....I'm forever grateful that you take the time you do. I am so appreciative 🙏  

All my warmest thanks,
🌹 - B
x

Dear Blue,  
 
I always come back from these life or maybe, sometimes depression sabbaticals to come right back to liberating excitement...Knowing there will be a brilliant prolific work awaiting me...wow...Brilliant  
"...touched by whatever gods properly chose this passion as a new erotically scribed reverenced faith"  
Amazing...🥰💞💞💞

Dearest Margo
Seeing you visit 🦋... is such a wonderful and heartwarming jolt. Especially when I feel like I needed something like that, in the worst way. It's been a few very harsh, sad few days, so your thoughtful and extremely kind sentiments are like a hug from out of nowhere. I am beyond delighted and truly truly thankful for that and you.

I am so glad you enjoyed reading and found some pleasure within.... it's humbling and extremely meaningful to me, dear lady.

I hope you are on an upswing from any darkness that might have been plaguing you on your end...We're always here with some positivity to share to help with illuminating, if needed.

I wish you nothing but the best holiday season and beautiful new year ahead...❄ ☃️ 🎇

All my warmest regards and tons of love,
🌹 - 💙
xo

hello Bluevelvete!!! you really know how to hypnotize with words that you choose!!!! and you have an exquisite hypothesis of words!!!! congratzzzzz

Wow!
What a tremendously beautiful and awesome compliment, I deeply thank you for such great kindness.

I am so delighted that you enjoyed reading
Welcome to DUP
I hope you enjoy your time with us 🙏
🌹 - 💙
B