spitting it out.

Hey there, T
lol... We're all adults here and this post is pre-empted with the explicit warning, so you can feel a bit more comfortable "talking shop" so to speak... lol.... No worries, if that's not your style, I can absolutely respect and appreciate that, as well. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this darker and grittier write. I sometimes like to challenge my own sensibilities and see if I'm as brave as I hope and aspire to be. You are far too kind with your feedback.... Thanks so so much.

In abundant warm kindness,
🌹 - 💙
B

Gotcha 👌🏻  
Thanks for the respect AND the delicious depravity. OH, how I do enjoy them both SO very much .....  
😋 😈

-x

...The selfish cunt so truly hungry and begging for it, the slut, begging to be hurt and loving it, the fucking bitch. proud of herself because she got the lover to hurt her where she constantly need to be hurt.  She knows exactly which of his keys to push in order for him to get mad, squeeze those tits till she screams  with pain and joy....
 What a lovely rendition.................Kisses, Robert.

Damn.... your comments went even darker and more intense than my write, Robert!! Whew!!!

I am glad you enjoyed the debauchery and understood that dire needs can sometimes flare like a raging wildfire.
Much obliged, my friend
🌹 - B
x

A woman and man who are both hungry for sex, very hot indeed.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Yep, it can be molten lava hot, that's absolutely right, Francisco. You get the big picture! You keep on writing and creating, too!
Thank youuuuuuu :)  
🌹

When will man learn that woman control the universe,  when they're hungry they feed, when your hungry.....
Great write you minx
Love and light
Ron xx

hahaha.... That's the truth, my lovely friend 🙏🏻  The healthiest and most mentally stable people around (sometimes those you might least suspect) incorporate 'play' like this in their erotic sessions. When you make her happy, so blooms your own happiness as well.... is a terrific motto... lol!! I love that you get it and I'm utterly grateful for the generous list add and your thoughtful and very astute feedback.

Thank you so much, Ron
🌹 - 💙-⚔️
xoxo
B

whoops, so so sorry about the comments for the RL add, I assumed and thought I saw it and was wrong... my total mistake and my bad! No pressures applied ... just wanted to clarify.... Sorry!
🌹 - 💙
x

Well spotted I missed the button
Cheers sweetie all sorted
Love and light
Ron xx

nooooo.... I was saying that I accidentally thanked you for it and I TOTALLY didn't expect you to add it... It was my error, in the comments because I just glanced and made the assumption (like a jerk) that it was added .... and because I felt so jerky, I didn't want to just update my comments without explanation.... (am I digging myself in a hole! ?.. jeez.. bad Blue! lmao🤭)  
 
Anyway long story, short - my mistake for assuming .. I apologize...  
(hugs)  
xoxo

No I missed the button there's no apology needed sweetie
It was a mistake on my part
Love and light
Ron x

Thank youuuuuuu - 💋 💋 💋

Taking it all is satisfying 🌹 interesting read dear Blue.

Ohh my.. lol... It's definitely a dark, gritty and somewhat out of my usual wheelhouse kind of piece but it flowed, and I decided to follow.  
An amalgamation of truth and fiction....  
 
Thanks for braving it, Grace....You're awesome and it means a lot that you took the time.  
🌹-💙  
x

I read you ...we should do a Collab one day. Like a chat...sorta🌹

Ohhh that's very very interesting, indeed! I'll definitely ponder and let you know.... Hmmm... I think it could be very cool...

Keep you posted!
👍🏻

Today we read two poetess that stepped outside of their comfort zone and each posted a piece of fire. Congratulations Lady, you are indeed one of those Lady and this piece contains a buffet of erotica. This one is a glasses steamer for sure and we made need company to read it a second time. Seriously tight work Lady  

Hey there, Me ;)
Opening up and allowing a peek into the innermost desires and wanton lust that percolates beneath is freeing and terrifying at the same time. I love to be as open and fearless as I can, some days are easier than others.... lol. I adore that you felt the steam.... rising....I am all smiles and tingling skin...

Thanks for the "super tight", Me .... there's nothing better than your seal of approval - *wink

🌹 - 💙
B

heres an inferior take ...


finally knowing
what you are
a needy greedy cunt
your place
is depravity
under my hand

nothing but rape
ferocity of taking
what is yours
love this dark fire
will play with it
the way you want

deeper desire
that needs
to be feed
with that certain
pain of friction
hurting thrusts

a battering
that renders
your cunt wet
soaking wet
screaming
demanding more

everything
driven deep
as your dirty mind
skin blemished
with slaps and bites
drawing a fruitful taste

bloody lust
satisfying hurt
spraying inside
lewdly splayed legs
with a greedy cry

not wuite as eloquent

HOLY SMOKES, AP!! 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥
That must be the most arousing, fiery filled feedback, ever!.... I am speechless 😶

and totally thankful!
You know how much I love your spills....just astounding... WOW!  
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
xo

Ohhh, Selina.... My thoughts swell, ebbing and flowing, as I picture each and every one of your reads.... Don't they say "The fourth time is the charm?"...😉... Yesss! The possibilities and the deep arousal heighten, exponentially.... Without any doubt, the temperature has definitely risen... 🌋.... to epic proportions.... *wink

Thank you for such incredible feedback.

🔥 🔥 🔥

All my warm, passionate gratitude, dear lady
🌹 - 💙
B

A better poetic reply....


when
it calls
crawls
nothing
will
suffice

purgatory
of a
need
never
quite
fulfling

wanting
needing
wishing
an out
of body
experience

witnessing
the depravity
below
how every
orifice is filled

a self
fuelling
turn on
that
becomes
a supernova

of dark
matter
proportions
true
cosmic scale
orgasm

"cosmic scale"— that's for sure.. Colin!
This is another resounding and truly successful poem, my dear! I adore the verve and your immense creativity! I can't thank you enough for sharing your words and talents with me. They always impress!!

Much love sent your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B

Holy hell.  I have to say that reading things like this, to me anyway, is a dare.  The aggressive nature leads me (a decent, wholesome fella) to throw down my pen and paper and say "Oh really? You're going there?!".  
I work so hard to suppress my primal animalistic instincts.... And then this.  Fuck.  Lol.

Actually, sometimes it's exactly what is needed, the blunt, carnal, in your face type shout.  And my, how men listen.  

Great write, pal.  Lol.  

Hey there, Styxian :)    
I can't help but want to slightly corrupt (just a little bit) that wholesome sensibility....lol... Apologies, but it's part of my nature to temp and tease; however, I do definitely know the right time and place. *wink... lol... So I'll try and be good...  
 
I completely agree that this poem is not typical of an every day type of write (for me, as well) nor read. Like you alluded to, it's got it's own place amongst the intricacies of the human condition, and within my own chosen lifestyle. I thrive on pushing myself and the boundaries of where comfortability lies. I've found that testing myself, is empowering and creates opportunities for self improvement.    
   
Yes, sometimes that completely carnal, no holds barred, 'boundary pushing' extends to sexual pleasure and true howl worthy, gratification... Which cannot (and in my opinion, should never) be denied.    
   
I am so grateful you see as much as you do and understand where I'm coming from, it's such a wonderful feeling.  
   
All my warmest thanks, for taking the time to leave me your thoughts, I cherish them and you.  
   
Much love and appreciation,  
🌹 - 💙  
B

Oooo... Those were some astute and highly intuitive comments, Lt. You had my imagination sailing along, in total lock step! Your summation left me feeling such a lovely and joyful sense of accomplishment. Thanks for that and for taking the time, you have. I am delighted you enjoyed my stroll into darker side of my erotic self/sensibilities, that is extremely meaningful to me. I wholly appreciate you, the generous list add and your continued support. You're a true light to behold and I feel so lucky in your return!

All my warmest regards,
🌹-B

Hey there, Tim :)     
        
I think there's a huge misconception here, that I feel needs addressing. I believe there's this IDEA you have pictured of bdsm vs the reality and CONSENSUAL practice of it. In my world of sexuality, passion and desire, BDSM is the polar opposite of the term 'abuse' of anyone. I feel like your perception is marred by lack of information and practical experience. (not saying you need it, I absolutely know it's not for you... just an observation) There's simply no opportunity for myself, as a smart consenting women, to be so inept and unaware, that I'd put myself directly into ANYTHING abusive. I am far too savvy and informed to what it is that I connect to and enjoy, sexually. In fact, the fetish lifestyle and BDSM in particular, have more safeguards and open communication, than classic vanilla partners do. Which creates a uniquely safe atmosphere, if you're diligent with awareness and learning the ropes (no pun intended!) There's a bond and true respect created. Rules are set forth in advance and agreed to by both parties. CRYSTAL clear guidelines of what each partner wants, needs and requires. A contract of sorts, that participating individuals fully understand and covet. They go into things with eyes wide open. To be accepting of one's sexual proclivities and innermost needs, is freedom. A lover who can offer that, is cherished, in my opinion. There is total and absolute RESPECT that travels both ways from Master to slave, Dom to sub or whatever the dynamic may be. Always and without question. Not once, did this piece put on display a characterization of abuse. Period. I want that 100% known. This is the end result of all of that I just wrote and explained in detail— Two fully consenting adults, who care for each other beyond traditional explanations; so much so that they willingly and purposely fulfill one another's deeply ingrained personal needs of gratification. It's a beautiful partnership that is based on trust, respect and a deep commitment to each other. Not one ounce of abuse.

We all have our own opinions, I respect that, honor it, I even delight in our differences. I just think it's completely unfair and plain wrong to misappropriate and characterize something as abusive, therefore casting it as 'wrong' when you're not fully understanding the entire picture.  
Thanks for bearing with me in this long reply.

I always 100% appreciate the time you invest in supporting me and I hope you know that I feel the same in return. I just really needed to clarify, because this is close to my heart.     
You're always a rare bearer of truth, and I sincerely appreciate that and respect it greatly.     
    
Thanks again, for understanding (I hope!)  
(no offense intended at all, dear friend)     
🌹-hugs     
B

👏👏👏💜

Wow......
Brilliant.  
I feel intimidated  actually..... blows my mind to places I cant possibly attain to.
Again wow!!!

Lol... no no... No intimidation..... This was written in the ether... where truth and fiction collide. Bits of my personal truth mixed with my vast imagination...I do love blowing you away, but only in the best and non threatening of ways..... lol.

I very much appreciate your supportive and you taking the time to leave me your thoughts with such incredible comments .... they mean a lot to me.
🌹 - 💙
B

A clutched fist of hair, neck pulled back, a pressed in steam rewarding whisper....Good writing.

(fucking purrrrr.....)  
... and the best comment award goes to.... 🏆


—x

Devilishly delicious.

:)))

There he is!!
(yep, a little bit)

Overjoyed to see you 🦋
🌹-💙
xoxoxoxo
Blu

Intense hypersexuality of the first order... absolute pleasure...love this ..

Yesss... When the intensity of that profound driving ache inside, reaches a fever pitch....Anything is possible. *wink  

So glad you found something that moved you, within my little offering here.  

The pleasure was all mine, L
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.  
🌹 - B

Wow,,
That is wonderful,, what a read.
Feel your desire
Your needs, my needs
Your wants, my wants
Where you go
I humbly follow
I crave the deph
Your submission
Ignites within me
You're firey passion
Overshadows my thoughts
I can't hold a candle
In your maelstrom of imagery 👏👏👏❤️

Sometimes the thundering tsunami of my deepest aching can spin out of my usual containment... needing.... no, requiring that it be completely and wholly satisfied..... I can be a force, for sure... lol.  
😁 😉 😏  
 
I humbly thank you for your immersive kindness in word and thought. It's always a pure joy to meet those of like mindedness.  
 
I look forward to the possibility of a true blossoming friendship in poetry.  
 
Warmest regards,  
🌹 - B  
x

Firstly,,, I think I should explain a little about the following I wrote in my comment to you
"humbly follow
I crave the deph
Your submission
Ignites within me"
I was talking about how much I wanted to feel what you felt, I wanted to walk your path. :)
Thank you for your kindness, I would very much like a friendship to grow, on your terms of course.
I have found that when I leave a book review on Amazon, I can't find the words to explain how I feel about it.
Yet on here, I find it so much easier to leave a rhyme, even if there's no reason to it.
Looking forward to the future on here 😊💜

Just reiterating that your sense of open appreciation and solidarity makes for such positive and wonderfully refreshing tidings, felt. I am so happy you and your significant other are here and becoming part of the DU family..... It's lovely!

🌹 - B

There go my pearls...
You really delved into the nitty gritty, hard stuff that we want to "[spit] out" without holding back, lost in the confusion between pleasure and pain and that it somehow satisfies a hunger we didn't know we had (and then we'll be hungry for it again).

No filter, no pc, just raw and primitive instincts penned poetically.

Clapping and standing O.

Lmao!!... Doh!!
☺

Your standing O has me gobsmacked!

The summations you so eloquently laid out are so very spot on. 👌🏻 Finding release (or access even) of the deep carnal nature inside by consensually embracing each other's primal beasts......is UNLIKE anything else that occurs in a relationship. I hope that more couples make the effort to explore those deep depths...

I am totally immersed in appreciation and thanks such killer comments.... and feel extremely fortunate you see what you do. Thank you, W.
You are beyond cool.

Much love, my friend 🙏
🌹 - 💙
B

WOW!
I can see clearly through your brazen fine lines between fantasy and reality.
This shameless write is full of shock value and its currency is well spent.
Your very provocative erotic narrative pushes the Envelope to new limits.
And you Delivered!
Talk about the full smorgasbord of BDSM through poetry, WOW!
A taste of hot delicious poetic metaphors of debauchery fills my appetite as each word touches my tongue.
This is poem wild beyond words.
In fact, I was looking for a safe word as I overindulged myself in your eXXXtreme poem, lol.
You really are limitless in your poetic genius.
50 shades of Blue 2.0
WOW!

Hey you!
That made my giggle, about searching for a safe word.. lol..... yeah, a bit rough and tumble, indeed...😏

Thanks for taking the time to leave me your thoughts, I deeply appreciate you, my dear dear friend 🙏
🌹 - 💙
xo

well...that was hot. wowsa.

you dug in deep for that one...i can feel you touched some stuff, knocked over a few lamps while you were at it. the oscillation from who is in control and defilement is quite interesting. a very honest reflection i imagine...very nice work Blue :).

Hey there P :)
You see and understand a lot. I very deeply dug, yes... that's spot on. There were moments where I was unsure and extremely hesitant, when I thought about publishing it.... Scared of being judged, just fearful, in general. Yet, shouldn't good art (painting, sculpting, writing, etc ) come with a tiny amount of fear, attached?.... I like to think so.

My smile is ear to ear, knowing you saw what you saw, here. Thanks for visiting, for the lovely sentiments, the list add and for being of such beautiful understanding. Your words mean a lot to me and I'm truly grateful for each one of them.

Much love and appreciation - 💙
🌹 - B

most great art i find terrifying to create...but of course!

it's the honest stuff that gets ya...shedding delusion...scary to be so bare. keep going :)!

Humanity on a page, raw and real.
Intoxicating.

I really do love getting you drunk on my words, Mc! To deeply feel a driving need like an itch you can't scratch... Sometimes makes for claws that tear at flesh.... to relieve.

Thank you for stopping by, for the generous list add and for being such a faithful reader... it means a lot to me!
🌹 - B

I wonder what it's like?... To write something so very incredible that it fully expresses the Author's exact intended emotion to the reader; putting into words, perfectly, all that is imagined.

Thank you, for doing that for me.

Loved the raw passion in your words. First day on this site and loving the journey:)

Well this poem is definitely a barrage of stimulus to take in.. lol... Glad you found enjoyment here!

Welcome to the the deep underground!
I hope you enjoy your time with us 🙏🏻

Happy Holidays
🌹

Yes I will, posting my sensual beauty within nature soon. I hope you will enjoy the rose in full bloom :)

The woman in there is one really hot little bitch-whore in the body of a vampire who needs to be belted and pelted, A totally hungry woman who will have all, take all the punishment she wants and need.........and give plenty in return.  You write very juicy stuff, my dear.       Kisses, Robert.

lol.... It's something of wonder to be taken to a place that allows for such a viscerally potent mindscape, I'm thrilled and humbled that my juicy little little offering could help lead that charge for you ...

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, Robert
🌹💙
-x

Someone hiding her devilish desire... This is so fucking hot that anyone can melt 🥵🥵🥵