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a hypothesis of words (revisited)



you.

wield
unmatched
words
of
inspirational
precision
touched
by
whatever gods
properly chose
this passion
as a new
erotically scribed
reverenced
faith

pure
sensual
scribes
unbridled
inked cries
where fantastic
allure
delicately lies

i quiver
at each syllable
my breath
catches
and quickens
losing myself
i read
aloud
my voice echoes
raw penned
emotion
a lush clarity
of desire

as
i
s l o w l y
(tantalizingly)
narrate
each
letter
word
and
stanza
in deliberate
rapt
eloquence
crawling
upon
knees
in
a tattered
warned
wits ends
welcoming

finding
a soft
finale
of pink
quivering lips
wrapped
carefully
around
sacred
fulfilling syllables

desperate
annunciation
mixes
with verve
and anticipation

undulating
wave
after
scrawling
wave
ebbing then flowing
inner ecstasy
decidedly growing
heady emotions
tumble against
heated poeted
rocky shores
a mythical fire soars

yours
is my new religion

i can harken and hear
inspired angels
singing
so clear

confirmation
of a new day
dawning
now
i give in
weakened
in intent

i'm spent



upon
the
alter
of
your
poem






a willing sacrifice








Bluevelvete
Written by Bluevelvete
Published
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©Blu2021
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