Bare Feet

Great! Thank you so much for commenting and letting me know. I appreciate it. :) 👣🌨️🌘🥶

Oooo...I love the mystery in this one. Good job on the structure. The stories that could be conjured from the second line. Brava, Goddess Kristina ❣️❣️

I do love a good mystery. I really appreciate you letting me know on structure. :) And yes there were many themes that apply to this one for me. Oooo... Goddess. :) 👣🌨️🌘🥶

Well done and lovely write ... Bless and love ... ..

I kind of like these so pretty sure I will do more. ;) Thank you so much for the comment and giving me your thoughts FeN. Bless and love back at ya. :) 👣🌨️🌘🥶

its beautiful rendering.
an awesome Senryu K.
job.

Hey CF, thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. You definitely made me feel good about it and I appreciate it a lot. :) 👣🌨️🌘🥶

As we've said before we have secretly attempted this styles and we've failed. We may should had continued, there was a Lady once on this site that wrote tons of great haikus. So we must applaud your first attempt and to had been successful.. But withing three lines you gave us a thought that may go along with the piece or not, But we were just imagining a couple dealing with issues or anyone with issues, walking this snowy trail barefoot to feel something again. This is indeed tight Lady  

I think you should attempt it again, I imagine you could do some really unique ones; maybe some dark ones. ;) I have seen some people here that are able to put them out constantly. I don't think I could do that. I wrote one that does not follow the rules that I have not posted yet but I just call those Krisenryu's. lol I suppose one interesting thing about the style is you can apply so many meanings. I almost added a bunch more themes but decided not to. I like your interpretation a lot though and I definitely see it. Or someone leaving because of a fight or catching a partner cheating or any other number of things. Thank you so much for commenting and sharing your thoughts I_IS_ME. 👣🌨️🌘🥶

5
7
5

Perfect

BIG LIKE

RL Worthy

5 7 5 That's the rules! I hate rules but still... Thank you so much for acknowledging that I can follow them every so often. BIG LIKE and RL, damn I'm good. lol 👣🌨️🌘🥶

Dear K,

Perfect. Spot on syllabic count and lovely tight story line within the rigid structure. Well written. I enjoy senyru and haiku. With a bit of finesse a lot can be said and you can continue creating in your mind what was started. Great job. Lovely write. H🌷

Strangely I actually kind of liked adhering to the rules in this case. It made me say things in a little different way and I actually liked the result. :p A lot can be said but your Senryu menus are something truly special! Maybe some day I will be able to do something like that. Thank you so much for giving me your thoughts and feedback on this. I appreciate it so much. I feel motivated to do some more of these now. :) 👣🌨️🌘🥶

I be there under the moonlight to warm up you and your feet.  Keep on writing.

That's such a sweet thing to say. :) Thank you so much for the comment Francisco. Made me smile. 👣🌨️🌘🥶

Yeet a Yeti!!

Looking good masked beauty.

Geezus, I am damaged for life. Well, more damaged for life. Am I really a yeti. lol * crying *. 🦍

Okay, a good looking yeti... No, that still sounds bad. :p
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I always found warmth in the starlight 💫

I definitely know what you mean buddydog, it is so beautiful especially in the mountains where you look up and see all the stars. I actually find warmth in the cold, I love winter and the snow; it makes me feel more at peace. It's great to see you! :) 👣🌨️🌘🥶

Speaking of starlight, if you have not read it, you may like the one titled Femininity.

Nice crisp write ... like poetic sushi ... complete within itself ...

Cannot claim to be a big sushi lover but I do love "like poetic sushi". :p Thank you so much for giving me your thoughts on my first Senryu. I am really happy you liked it.  :) 👣🌨️🌘🥶

Thank you so much for reading and commenting Osem! I really love that you thought it was beautiful. 🎨🖼️✨❤️

I like the 5-7-5.

Looking for a wonderfully dark gothic Senryu from you now Adagio. ;) I found that I kind of liked it too. Following rules is not usually my thing but... :p 🎨🖼️✨❤️

Well done Kristina. The format always leave the reader open to interpretation along with the mystery behind it's brevity. I wrote a piece titled Bare Feet as well some time ago which made me smile when I saw it on my updates.
Senryus, Haikus and now Tankas are becoming quite popular around here lately. You inspired me to give it a try more often.

Definitely, I can think of many meanings for this one and I love the mysterious aspect. I have a newfound appreciation for this type. :) I will have to go look for the one you wrote with the same title. I have noticed they have become very popular as well. I am super happy if I inspired you and I will be looking out for them. 👣🌨️🌘🥶

Beautifully delicate and hauntingly vivid before the mind's eye.

I really love that description, certainly captures how I was feeling as well. Thank you so much for the comment Daniel. 👣🌨️🌘🥶