A Mosaic of desires

I love the phrase: 'souls in a kaleidoscope'.
Well done, poet.

I am really happy you liked it Kink. :) That is one of my favorite lines as well. Thank you so much for commenting and the compliment. 🎨🖼️✨❤️

Now thats a great piece sweetness
Awesome write, great read
Excellent poetry
Love and light
Ron xx

Thank you so much for the beautiful comment and compliments Ron. I think I was being poetic with this one so I am feeling like maybe I accomplished something. :) 🎨🖼️✨❤️ Oh, and I really like sweetness. ;)

You as a person are a masterpiece of art with these words.  Keep on writing.

"You as a person are a masterpiece of art with..." That is such an incredibly beautiful thing to say Francisco. I really don't know what to say but I love that so much. Thank you! 🎨🖼️✨❤️

We have read the piece twice and studied the piece, but are examples of in the most confusion there can be a oneness. There can be a oneness of the mind or even the act regardless of the intensity. There is a a coming together of all things necessary to create for both painting and piece to display their tightness.

I like making you think I_IS_ME. ;) Indeed there can be oneness and much passion in confusion and chaos. I have a lot of intensity. :p Thank you so much for commenting and sharing your thoughts. I am really happy you could see how everything came together and of course I love displaying tightness. 🎨🖼️✨❤️

This is one of my favorite poems in the Kx Chronicles.
Everything is here to intrigue and push the reader.

A collective of wanting and poetic lust in their lives

A rush of desire in a once in a lifetime relationship....

Thank you for using my watercolor painting, you did it justice !

Miraculous

BIG LIKE

Always pushing the reader somewhere; maybe off a cliff... Sometimes into my mind, that's a dangerous place to hang out. Always good when people understand what I write, other than just me though. :p Definitely wanting, lust, and desire in there always. Thank you so much for letting me use the painting. I really love it and it works perfectly. Love the BIG LIKE too. :) 🎨🖼️✨❤️

you did justice on this canvas write very nice

I am really happy that you liked NB! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. 🎨🖼️✨❤️

Intertwining lovely write ... bless and love ... ..

I like intertwining... ;p Thank you so much for the comment and thoughts  FeNyX. I am really happy you thought it was lovely. 🎨🖼️✨❤️

Dearest Kristina, This piece  is so exquisitely sensual. A journey through your brain would be a fascinating trip...I probably would set up camp and stay awhile. Your avant garde use of word combinations is fantastic like this oxymoronic pair, "Captivity unrestrained."
I have always found kaleidoscopes to be magical and your writing, with it's panoply of colors and textures, is one of my favorites literary kaleidoscopes  .  Oh my stars this passage is so delightfully titillating,
"Slowly ... you taste the  
Tight flesh of burst petals ..."
Deeeelicious 😘 Bravissima BD❣️❣️ The image is awesome as well.

I love exquisitely sensual and I definitely trust your opinion on that. ;) Fascinating is one word for it. It might be like a fun house, haunted house, carnival ride, brothel, prison, well the list is too long to cover - let's just say that would be one crazy trip... I really love everything about this comment GW. Avant Garde, good description for me. I think kaleidoscopes are magical too but what you said about my writing is definitely a deer in the headlights. Oh I knew you would like that line. lol I think the painting is perfect for it. Thank you so much, I cannot say enough how wonderful your comment made me feel. I am so happy you really enjoyed this one. 🎨🖼️✨❤️

Intense, chaotic.... I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke. 😉
Well done, Kx!

Intense and chaotic, yeah that's what it looks like in my head. I don't smoke either but causing people to smoke sounds like me too. * cough * Thank you so much for the comment BT, I love it. 🎨🖼️✨❤️

I'm a little speechless with this one Kristina! That second to last stanza was just so je ne sais pas like sensual and subtly erotic.
Terrific piece. You continue to amaze me.

Let's be speechless together, because I am little speechless from your comment Wally. I LOVE that I can continue to amaze you! Always want to keep things interesting... Giving you variety. :) I am very happy you thought it was terrific piece, thanks for the amazing compliment. 🎨🖼️✨❤️

I love how you are connecting and drawing inspiration in reciprocity with others. Terrific eloquence, palpable passion in harmonious dimensions. Gorgeous write.

I think I can draw inspiration from just about anything. You might remember way back when we had that comment exchange and I wrote something on that. ;) Anyway, you do have me wondering what others though. lol Deer in the headlights on that last part. I love that! Eloquence, passion, and I guess some harmony in chaos. ;) Thank you so much for the great compliment. 🎨🖼️✨❤️

Thank you so much for the comment and compliment Osem! I really love 'Amazed'. :) 🎨🖼️✨❤️

Splendid coupling of art and poetry ... I truly love it ... such an artistic melding ... great flow with the lines ... the line breaks ... the varied spacing parallels the behavior of the lines in the artwork ... I can tell that you studied the work ... then worked on the poem ... that a poetic synergy ... bravo dear poetess ... exquisite ... truly ...  

P.S. The title is simply perfect

Deer in the headlights. :) Thank you so much for the truly awesome comment and compliment. I am really happy you could see how the poem and art are so compliment each other. I love that you could see the synergy. And of course I always love any positive mention of my impatient formatting, sometimes it works. :) I had hoped you would read this one because I was sure you would like it. Although somewhat chaotic, I feel like it's poetic. 🎨🖼️✨❤️

WoW       Some petals especially for you .. xx

I always love getting a WoW, Thank you... Who doesn't love petals. Maybe a stargazer lily. ;) 🎨🖼️✨❤️

Your writing has elegance.  I like this.

Thank you so much Remy, I really love elegance and I am so happy you liked. it.🎨🖼️✨❤️

Best merging of sex and emotion I've come across in ages. Like the art piece, your poem is a melange of colors, emotions, and sensations. You have dazzled me and taken me to a Lourve of poetry. Amazing where this took me.

Xo
John

Deer in the headlights. Such an amazing comment, you left me speechless. I am over the moon that you liked this one so much. I really love that I could be your guide to a Louvre of poetry. Hopefully it's a fun tour with a lot variety as you look around. And I hope I can continue to dazzle you some. Stick with me and I will take you around the world John. :p 🎨🖼️✨❤️ In regards to the art piece, Poetspeak has a lot of those with some great art.