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Never knowing
If I said I loved you would you care,
If I said I loved you would you dare,
If I said I loved you would you sweep me off my feet,
If I said I loved you would you pick a place for us to meet,
If I said I loved you would you remeber what we use to have,
If I said I loved you would you take me good and bad,
If I said I loved you would you and said we could never be,
If I said I loved you would you reveal that you loved me.
If I said I loved you would you dare,
If I said I loved you would you sweep me off my feet,
If I said I loved you would you pick a place for us to meet,
If I said I loved you would you remeber what we use to have,
If I said I loved you would you take me good and bad,
If I said I loved you would you and said we could never be,
If I said I loved you would you reveal that you loved me.
Published 9th Feb 2012
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Anonymous
11th Feb 2012 4:36am
The repetition is unimaginative.
Although I like the last line.
Although I like the last line.
11th Feb 2012 4:43am
This is about love that I can never had so for me it is more imaginative to me then you think.
Anonymous
12th Feb 2012 2:11am
Well, as long as it stays true to yourself... then it's all good.
Keep it up! :)
Keep it up! :)
