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souladareatease
Darkness crept the length
And breadth, in limbs
Of spindly black
Window lights bloom, blood
Rises
To the throat
And supernovas
Churn
Into aether
Spirits rise
In aches
And glow baskets,
Cast skyward
All brows fall
Like
Tumblers, heavy
With ghosts,
Lost,
Irretrievably,
To the endless cycles
Of consequential time
Tides flow in fire
And music, tranquility
In the downing realm,
Violence
In the tumult
Skins,
Upon the scintillating
Palm
Of moonlight,
Turned upward,
Beckoning
Tides make us small
Like little else,
I dream,
And a second moon
Hovers
Beside the first
Poems in the hollows
Of his hands,
A blue white
Haze,
Interspersed,
Throughout the marbled
Veins
Of darkness
A blast puffs out
The cherubim’s cheeks,
An aurora, crackling in
Electric
Polarities,
Rises in the hallows of sound,
And spectral symphonies
Of colors,
Here,
Now,
It halos the street lights
Into amber spheres,
Lends to the ambience of
This
Waking dream,
And the whole world
Slowed
Into some nascent torpor,
Ancient bones
Exposed
Beneath a translucent breath
His words,
Upon the face
Of the waters
A chorus,
Rising beneath his steps
Sunlight gathering, bundled
With gardeners
Care, ease of old
Friends, gathered
Gently liquid
In our oscillating gravities
And
There,
In the corner of the room,
Warmth pulsing
In stellar radiation,
Our talks,
Texts, exchanged
Smiles, hands
To heart center, whisper
Of our hushed
Conversations
And, now
Silence
Ticks the ebbing pendulum, between
Eddies
Of slowly oscillating air,
Sliding,
Under a closed door
Clouds drift in counterrevolutions,
Casting
Shadows
From where your strides
Are departing,
In palpable echo
I feel your light.
Smiles on my face
In the morning with
Child’s abandon,
Smiles on my neck
In the afternoon, hands
Cupped
In the harsher wind,
Forearm going before me
Death sits in lotus,
Gently
In grace swept,
Upon the ocean floor,
Within this most quiet valley
Dust motes milling about,
Aimless
And languid,
Come to rest
Upon his still, white brow,
Wisdom etched in smooth lines,
At the corners of his mouth
Faint, trace light, silvered
By the moon, which descends
To meet
His hand, raised
In fare thee wells
Miles press together, hours
Squeeze
Into moments,
For the honor
To carry him
Hence
Flame shadows sway
Drowsily,
Limn the shores in
Gold,
Their thirst,
Never slaked
Clouds hover like sea birds,
Low enough to graze
Morning dew is fevered upon every
Phalanx
Blade
Of grass,
Bristling
At attention,
Gently
Bent
By the weight,
Carrying unspoken promise,
As if listening
Stones warm like sleeping housecats,
Beneath the rising
A stone descends into all that
Quiet,
Passing, layer
By layer, into the deep,
Center
Of gravity,
Hard
As volcanic glass,
Where all points meet
The monolith gazes into the star ocean,
Hurtling,
Immovable
Autumnal moon at dusk,
Lowers its glowing road
To the gently sliding scales
Of the musical waters
And breadth, in limbs
Of spindly black
Window lights bloom, blood
Rises
To the throat
And supernovas
Churn
Into aether
Spirits rise
In aches
And glow baskets,
Cast skyward
All brows fall
Like
Tumblers, heavy
With ghosts,
Lost,
Irretrievably,
To the endless cycles
Of consequential time
Tides flow in fire
And music, tranquility
In the downing realm,
Violence
In the tumult
Skins,
Upon the scintillating
Palm
Of moonlight,
Turned upward,
Beckoning
Tides make us small
Like little else,
I dream,
And a second moon
Hovers
Beside the first
Poems in the hollows
Of his hands,
A blue white
Haze,
Interspersed,
Throughout the marbled
Veins
Of darkness
A blast puffs out
The cherubim’s cheeks,
An aurora, crackling in
Electric
Polarities,
Rises in the hallows of sound,
And spectral symphonies
Of colors,
Here,
Now,
It halos the street lights
Into amber spheres,
Lends to the ambience of
This
Waking dream,
And the whole world
Slowed
Into some nascent torpor,
Ancient bones
Exposed
Beneath a translucent breath
His words,
Upon the face
Of the waters
A chorus,
Rising beneath his steps
Sunlight gathering, bundled
With gardeners
Care, ease of old
Friends, gathered
Gently liquid
In our oscillating gravities
And
There,
In the corner of the room,
Warmth pulsing
In stellar radiation,
Our talks,
Texts, exchanged
Smiles, hands
To heart center, whisper
Of our hushed
Conversations
And, now
Silence
Ticks the ebbing pendulum, between
Eddies
Of slowly oscillating air,
Sliding,
Under a closed door
Clouds drift in counterrevolutions,
Casting
Shadows
From where your strides
Are departing,
In palpable echo
I feel your light.
Smiles on my face
In the morning with
Child’s abandon,
Smiles on my neck
In the afternoon, hands
Cupped
In the harsher wind,
Forearm going before me
Death sits in lotus,
Gently
In grace swept,
Upon the ocean floor,
Within this most quiet valley
Dust motes milling about,
Aimless
And languid,
Come to rest
Upon his still, white brow,
Wisdom etched in smooth lines,
At the corners of his mouth
Faint, trace light, silvered
By the moon, which descends
To meet
His hand, raised
In fare thee wells
Miles press together, hours
Squeeze
Into moments,
For the honor
To carry him
Hence
Flame shadows sway
Drowsily,
Limn the shores in
Gold,
Their thirst,
Never slaked
Clouds hover like sea birds,
Low enough to graze
Morning dew is fevered upon every
Phalanx
Blade
Of grass,
Bristling
At attention,
Gently
Bent
By the weight,
Carrying unspoken promise,
As if listening
Stones warm like sleeping housecats,
Beneath the rising
A stone descends into all that
Quiet,
Passing, layer
By layer, into the deep,
Center
Of gravity,
Hard
As volcanic glass,
Where all points meet
The monolith gazes into the star ocean,
Hurtling,
Immovable
Autumnal moon at dusk,
Lowers its glowing road
To the gently sliding scales
Of the musical waters
Written by
DanielChristensen
(The Fire Elemental)
Published 26th Nov 2020
Author's Note
Dedicated to the memory of souladareatease, my friend Gabe. Our friend. A spirit of incomparable beauty. He walks with angels now.
"You are blessed Daniel 😊
Keep the light shining Brother!!!"
Last thing he said to me
Copyright © 2020 by Daniel Christensen. All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced, distributed, or transmitted in any form or by any means, including photocopying, recording, or other electronic or mechanical methods, without the prior written permission of the publisher.
"You are blessed Daniel 😊
Keep the light shining Brother!!!"
Last thing he said to me
Copyright © 2020 by Daniel Christensen. All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced, distributed, or transmitted in any form or by any means, including photocopying, recording, or other electronic or mechanical methods, without the prior written permission of the publisher.
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26th Nov 2020 3:58am
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26th Nov 2020 4:00am
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26th Nov 2020 4:23am
Before I read the dedication, ..which is just so fitting.., your words gave me to me the feeling of something dear to me, ... a beautiful fall. Specifically the month of November, where colors dance in defiance then lay their heads to dream. Around this time of year is when my younger sister passed. I appreciate how you articulated the bittersweet experience of loss, understanding, and reconciling with what is and what what was, it brought sense of comfort to me. Thank you.
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26th Nov 2020 4:31am
Thank you I really appreciate the resonant understanding and quiet kinship of loss. Those of us still here have their memory and each other. 💖🙏
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26th Nov 2020 5:10am
This is a beautifully written tribute to your friend. I did not have the pleasure of knowing Gabe, but his light shines here through all those who did 💜.
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3rd Dec 2020 8:25pm
You can browse through his catalogue honey. He left all his poems here for us. *hugs*
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Dear D,
I’m so sorry. You’ve paid him a great homage and I’m very sorry for your loss in him and his friendship. I must echo Luna’s perfect sentiment, and I’m sure he knows what a lovely friend he had in you. X H🌷
I’m so sorry. You’ve paid him a great homage and I’m very sorry for your loss in him and his friendship. I must echo Luna’s perfect sentiment, and I’m sure he knows what a lovely friend he had in you. X H🌷
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3rd Dec 2020 8:33pm
Thank you. *hugs* He was a beautiful person and his legacy will be of light. 💖🙏
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26th Nov 2020 10:04am
My sweet Lord. Such a beautiful tribute my friend. The cradle may rock above the abyss, but I truly believe that the soul/spirit lives on, somewhere in this cruel universe. Rob
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3rd Dec 2020 8:35pm
Thank you Rob. I've been taking a hiatus from site, but I'm back now. We carry on in the light our friends and loved ones have passed to us. We are their legacy. 💖🙏
Re. souladareatease
I am so saddened to see this .. thank you Daniel for this profoundly beautiful tribute 🌹.. I have no words ... tears
Hugs ♥️🙏
Hugs ♥️🙏
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3rd Dec 2020 8:37pm
*hugs* He touched our hearts and left a legacy of light. He was positive and thought only of others until the end. It is a beautiful thing to have known him.
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26th Nov 2020 4:38pm
Such an incredibly beautiful tribute to your friend, I am so sorry for your loss. As Luna said so perfectly "I did not have the pleasure of knowing Gabe, but his light shines here through all those who did 💜." *hugs* 💖🙏
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3rd Dec 2020 8:38pm
*hugs* Thank you Kristina. His catalogue of works is available if you'd like to see peruse. Poem title is his screen name. 💖🙏
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26th Nov 2020 8:07pm
Oh no, I wasn’t aware Gabe has passed he will be missed deeply . I have no words except thank you for this beautiful tribute Daniel.
❤️Jackie
❤️Jackie
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3rd Dec 2020 8:40pm
I wasn't aware either until I was told by a mutual friend. It was a shock, but I hope I did him some small honor. He deserves more than I have power to give. Thank you, I'm so glad it was meaningful to you and our friends. 💖🙏
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An extroadinary poem, Daniel, well worth waiting for...a wonderful tribute to a lost friend. I have to admit, this beautiful piece of art reminded me of some of Nietzsche's most profound pieces in thus Spoke Zarathustra...I think perhaps it was his deeper feelings with the death of "God"...something anyway. Bravo!
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
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3rd Dec 2020 8:41pm
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27th Nov 2020 3:15am
Gabe was my friend. I loved him, and was so blessed to have the conversations he and I shared. He was a bad mother fucker on a guitar... had just an unbelievably kind and gentle spirit but could rage on the guitar and played in a band once called Vomit Snack 😂
He was in so much pain, but never left me without an encouraging word.
My heart aches that he’s gone... but I know he’s in a place of peace, where no pain or questions exist.. only pure awareness and understanding..
this is a beautiful write Daniel. Thank you for it.
He was in so much pain, but never left me without an encouraging word.
My heart aches that he’s gone... but I know he’s in a place of peace, where no pain or questions exist.. only pure awareness and understanding..
this is a beautiful write Daniel. Thank you for it.
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27th Nov 2020 6:59am
I am profoundly saddened to know of Gabe's passing. Daniel, in your inimitable eloquence you have captured the essence of a wonderful poet and human being. I am happy to know that you and he were so close. Thoughts of Gabe evoke feelings of serenity and I pictured him like a Thoreau living on his own terms nestled in his cabin in the woods. His poems were, everyone of them, flights of fantasy. He continues on his “magical mystery tour” without the burden of pain. Whenever I ponder the life of a loved-one lost I remember the words of one of my favorite poets, Dr. Seuss, he said, “Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened.”
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3rd Dec 2020 8:43pm
Thank you Bob. I really appreciate it brother. Well said. I'll take those words to heart. 💖🙏
Re. souladareatease
27th Nov 2020 5:44pm
A beautiful and moving send off for your friend. Please accept my condolences, Daniel. It sounds as though you shared the magic of a deep friendship. My heart goes out to you ❤️
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3rd Dec 2020 8:44pm
Thank you. I didn't know him as well as I would have liked to, but I treasure having gotten to know him at all. He never complained, always thought of others, until the end. It is a legacy of light. 💖🙏
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2020 00:24am
Hey Daniel........absolutely beautiful tribute to Soul.......he touched more hearts than I think he ever knew........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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3rd Dec 2020 8:45pm
Thank you so much. He was such a beautiful spirit and has left us a legacy of light. We can treasure having known him. 💖🙏
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6th Dec 2020 4:39am
What an amazing tribute to the gentle soul who was at one with nature, merging in your poem with all the elements with upturned hands of poetic giving and full understanding. May he walk in the woods in eternal awe and communion. Its great that he can be remembered by his interview, as well, giving him a voice and a true friend, you. Very nice memorial 💕:)
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6th Dec 2020 6:07pm
Thank you so much. I hope I did him some small honor, but the way he lived his life, the way he touched people, is all the legacy we can ask for.
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8th Dec 2020 4:34am
I might write a little woodland piece in memory of him, I'll listen to the interview again to get some ideas and look at his poems.
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15th Dec 2020 5:51pm
That would be very apropos. I really liked his bird watching videos on YouTube. I'll be crawling down my updates page for the first time in about a week, so I hope it'll be there or anything by your very talented and skilled quill.
In friendship,
Daniel
In friendship,
Daniel
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17th Dec 2020 5:42am
I just posted it, I mentioned birds in the poem not even knowing he was a birdwatcher, I'd love to look at the videos. Hope you like it 💕
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19th Dec 2020 2:18am
I look forward to reading it. It doesn't surprise me that you tapped into his essence so deeply. I admire that often in your work. Here is a link to his YouTube channel.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCYep0h7py9zW9BH76fcShbw
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCYep0h7py9zW9BH76fcShbw
Re. souladareatease
I like how your poems depict a physical landscape - moons, trees, rivers - as a means of conveying an internal landscape. I found this one rather long, but as it’s a eulogy I don't feel that I can critique that aspect too much.
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22nd Dec 2020 6:16pm
I'll give you long as your arms and legs laid out in a line, no worries there. 😅 I had intended this write as purely an atmospheric, had kind of stalled out with it, until I learned of Gabe's passing, which invigorated me to imbue that emotion and what I felt of his essence into it. 💖🙏
Re. souladareatease
19th Dec 2020 4:14am
Daniel,
First I'd like to start off by apologizing but I don't know why I haven't been following you sooner. We've crossed paths once in a while and I always enjoyed your readings and listening to your conversations on the podcast.
Second, your oratory skills are absolutely one the best. If you aren't doing this professionally I'll be surprised, but your confidence and projection are surely inspiring.
But most of all is this wonderful and stunning piece attribute to Soul. You've gave us a glance of that friendship and with such a deep and profound effect I can't help but feel the heartache to lose a friend.
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece and I pray that his family is well, taking comfort in his memory and his work.
Sincerely,
Walter
First I'd like to start off by apologizing but I don't know why I haven't been following you sooner. We've crossed paths once in a while and I always enjoyed your readings and listening to your conversations on the podcast.
Second, your oratory skills are absolutely one the best. If you aren't doing this professionally I'll be surprised, but your confidence and projection are surely inspiring.
But most of all is this wonderful and stunning piece attribute to Soul. You've gave us a glance of that friendship and with such a deep and profound effect I can't help but feel the heartache to lose a friend.
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece and I pray that his family is well, taking comfort in his memory and his work.
Sincerely,
Walter
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22nd Dec 2020 6:24pm
Walter thank you so much. No worries my writes tend to be, almost exclusively, quite long and involved, so plenty of people will only read occasionally or take a pass entirely, preferring the clean focus of brevity, and I understand that. It seems I was well suited to podcasting, I even started writing and performing the stupid little raps I often send to friends for a laugh. 😅 I was given a couple of offers for other podcasts, a cohost and a panel discussion group, that I am still considering. It is a beautiful and rewarding experience, when all said and done, but I find the contacting people and coordinating with them to set up interviews and what not so tiresome, with all the rescheduling and such, so I'm not keen to jump back into at this time, a lot of things up in the air right now that might be settled by Spring, but I'm not sure. I always tell people, when they create an audio poem, don't rush through the enunciation, summon your inner Shatner! lol I like to keep my line breaks short and where I would naturally pause while speaking. The podcast helped me grow my audio recording skills and also helped me meet so many wonderful people on site. I guess I'll see where life takes me next. Gabe was such a wonderful soul, what pained me the most, when I was told he passed, was that he never complained of his suffering, fear of the approaching end, he always wanted to know how I was and to encourage me. That kind of selflessness is so rare and such a loss to this world, but I feel honored that he considered me a friend. 💖🙏
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5th Jan 2021 2:32am
Feel free to browse my catalogue for the various techniques I employ. I wrote this for a beloved friend and member of the site who died recently. The title of the poem is his screen name and many of his beautiful poems are here as one of his legacies.
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7th Jan 2021 4:47am
Aw no worries. One thing at a time, one day at a time. Every time you try something new, you're growing!
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Anonymous
26th Jan 2023 3:20pm
The voices echoing in the background were pulling me towards it, as if some party was going on and I had to go there... Well it's fantastic with it's emotions, imagination n words...
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26th Jan 2023 6:56pm
Thank you. It's a tribute to an amazing writer on DU that has passed on, Souladareatease. 💖🙏🏻
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Anonymous
27th Jan 2023 00:26am
Ohhh I'm sorry.. i only heard the video. Didn't saw te captain.. well sorry
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27th Jan 2023 00:30am
No problem at all I'm happy you would look back in my catalogue and find this poem. His writing was so beautiful and soulful and he was such a kind person.
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Anonymous
27th Jan 2023 1:07am
Hey it's a great pleasure that you added my stuff in your reading list.. many thanks 😻🐥
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Anonymous
27th Jan 2023 00:37am
Awwww..i pray his soul rests in piece... It's definitely a pleasure to read you as i m sure that you are a big writer.. ha ha.. well nice to read you..
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