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Carnation
Mist of Mothers Day
She is gold-spun love
with blue-eye smiles
wealth within home
an ethos for in awe
'O' Carnation
Pink, white and temperate red
sung from beach combs
ponds to woodland kisses
they belong to You
swung up in hearty chuckle
A day, such today
it is surely one I pray
settling astride to wrap
arms about neck, pecks
to loving forehead
and yet...
just too far away
yet here...
in the land of
weep and willow
another son
hugs
and we close
whatever distance
this time has chose
to embrace as always
Love, respect, Honour
and cherish
Absolute In Beauty
My Golden Sunshine
Mother Of Fair
Published 10th May 2020
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10th May 2020 12:22pm
Awwww, that was so sweet and endearing, Gabriel :)
Very beautiful!! Much love present in your words here, and well said!
Very beautiful!! Much love present in your words here, and well said!
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10th May 2020 1:38pm
Awwwww TY Summer!!! :D
I Love her so, she is far from me unfortunately...so I tried for an extra smile :D
I Love her so, she is far from me unfortunately...so I tried for an extra smile :D
10th May 2020 1:40pm
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10th May 2020 4:49pm
The poem and your comment replies broke the strings of my heart! Cherish her mate. Sadly, mine resides in Nursing Home and haven't seen her in weeks. She prob doesn't realise though. Rob
10th May 2020 5:25pm
Good to see You here Rob!!!
Indeed cherish I do...
Could not imagine Rob, conversation is our bind.
I thank You for Your kindness Good Sir!!!
Indeed cherish I do...
Could not imagine Rob, conversation is our bind.
I thank You for Your kindness Good Sir!!!
10th May 2020 5:00pm
What a lovely tribute to your mother, Soul. My mom's gone all these ten years but I miss her still. Great read.
10th May 2020 5:26pm
How long such poor Dear!!!
Thank You for visiting, She is beloved to be sure!!!
Thank You for visiting, She is beloved to be sure!!!
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10th May 2020 10:20pm
You are very Kind Hunter
I sure do Appreciate Your time and Energy!!!
And my gosh RL-Too Kind!!!
I sure do Appreciate Your time and Energy!!!
And my gosh RL-Too Kind!!!
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