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Dreams And Fallen Leaves
I sauntered in the old place
Looking about for that familiar
Thrice I had screamed
"I AM HERE,PLEASE DONT TEASE"
wind whistled through the old windows
Dust despair
filling this old soul
Drops from the cherry tree
pound the roof
Echoes of Her
reverberate
living proof
"Whatchya doing buddy,write anything new?"
"Sure did Mum,something for You"
Silent those strings
no
no songs heard here
Just my shuffle and the flowing tear
Still
the images
Remembering lineage
I am the ghost in the hall
Watching leaves
Their color
Her color
the hue
Spirit of love
the one giving me
view
Where was She
this house
these rooms
Cannot stay
Turning around to make escape
I stopped
knowing exactly what She'd say
"with you always,this you know"
"You are of my skin,carry my glow"
"Magic stays even with You"
"Footsteps,in snow"
"your colors within"
"Touches ,the visiting kin"
"The amble of your carry"
"To loves that are very"
"The way You go on"
"The perpetual Mothers son"
Knowing that and making my leave
I walk out the door spoke to trees
I am that
because
She
Waking, being
living and dream
Looking about for that familiar
Thrice I had screamed
"I AM HERE,PLEASE DONT TEASE"
wind whistled through the old windows
Dust despair
filling this old soul
Drops from the cherry tree
pound the roof
Echoes of Her
reverberate
living proof
"Whatchya doing buddy,write anything new?"
"Sure did Mum,something for You"
Silent those strings
no
no songs heard here
Just my shuffle and the flowing tear
Still
the images
Remembering lineage
I am the ghost in the hall
Watching leaves
Their color
Her color
the hue
Spirit of love
the one giving me
view
Where was She
this house
these rooms
Cannot stay
Turning around to make escape
I stopped
knowing exactly what She'd say
"with you always,this you know"
"You are of my skin,carry my glow"
"Magic stays even with You"
"Footsteps,in snow"
"your colors within"
"Touches ,the visiting kin"
"The amble of your carry"
"To loves that are very"
"The way You go on"
"The perpetual Mothers son"
Knowing that and making my leave
I walk out the door spoke to trees
I am that
because
She
Waking, being
living and dream
Published 10th May 2020
Author's Note
(entered in Dreamscapes and Ghost towns comp.)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Anonymous
11th May 2020 00:47am
And it’s writes like these that make me love you even more. It awakens all the senses, soothes all the emotions ✨💜
11th May 2020 10:32am
Anonymous
11th May 2020 10:09pm
You have the gift, .. Your font, .. I see how you see, .. words, .. word placement it's kinda magic how we see, .. I really enjoyed your words, .. and it's not the 100 mg marijuana drink speaking, .. I swear, .. a lot, .. ha ha, ..friend
12th May 2020 00:30am
Hahaaa
I appreciate You Dire
Thanks alot for picking up on me.
Magic he says-too kind
I swear alot too :D
Rock on my Bro!!!
I appreciate You Dire
Thanks alot for picking up on me.
Magic he says-too kind
I swear alot too :D
Rock on my Bro!!!
12th May 2020 3:38am
Have to concur. I found the heart and syllabic harmonies quite beautifully and organically woven. It's a testament to your spirit. It's alchemy. You honor her just by being who you are.
12th May 2020 8:59am
Appreciate You Daniel!!!
She was where my heart came from-for sure
Fun person She was, made me laugh :D
She was where my heart came from-for sure
Fun person She was, made me laugh :D
12th May 2020 9:05am
I cried... she is blessed to have a son as wonderful as you. Look at the beauty you put into the world... you are a shining star. She lives on in your memory and through you and the love she helped to instill in you. Thank you, Gabriel...
12th May 2020 9:33am
Ty NB!!!
You are kind to say that!!!
She made my life fun, childhood-to adulthood.
Laughter and music was our strongest ties
and the earth as well, the love for Nature.
You are kind to say that!!!
She made my life fun, childhood-to adulthood.
Laughter and music was our strongest ties
and the earth as well, the love for Nature.
12th May 2020 9:36am
Explains a lot about who you are today... :)
Keep up the heart-filled writings buddy. You are a light!
Keep up the heart-filled writings buddy. You are a light!
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18th May 2020 11:34pm
I read it, felt it...and almost saw it. A poignant write. Gave me goosebumps. Soul.
29th Dec 2020 5:24pm
