deepundergroundpoetry.com
bloodied lotus
aching torturous
clean today
but my demons are calling
damn lady you got my attention
I feel you under my skin
my demons know you
they allowed you to come in
my soul is open
merging with you
like a lotus blossom
bloodied from being torn open
my gaping wounds
seep their love for you
coming to me
weapons lay down
I see you victorious
the devil seduced
he longs for a taste of your soul
fuck me
god damn it
I'm hurting
I want to crawl inside
and rub my hurt in you
you are the Demon Master
we weep for the moons
apart from you
let the day die
that took you from me
the ugly sun who made weak
vodka days that stole my heart
tweaker nights I hid from all of you
I will come back strong than ever
you broke me
so you could give my soul back to me
I owe you, my Dark Queen,
this is a shit storm
you walked through
and marked me
as one of your own
my mind is clearing
yes I know you
fuck the nights
that damned me
I'm your bloodied lotus
come inside and taste of me
Published 15th Jul 2018
Author's Note
for my Queen Devlin....
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 1
comments 12
reads 551
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
15th Jul 2018 00:35am
15th Jul 2018 00:56am
thank you beautiful Dragonfly for feeling the dark in this write...
love Brenda
love Brenda
Anonymous
15th Jul 2018 00:47am
Very few know the darkness
and know how to embrace
and accept it ... aside from the
gardenia, the lotus is my second
fave (something you didn`t know)
so with that said, you have some
inclination of me ...
I understand your pain
from the past of having to leave
- or to have left - something behind
as I have done the same.
There is a song under ``something behind``
that I wish to dedicate to you:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3rgnCnCb_us
I hope you enjoy it,
and now I shall take this poem
and enjoy it with the others
you have written me.
I Love you Lady always ... Devlin
15th Jul 2018 00:53am
I love you my Queen
and I understand...
my demons know you
I know them
they get excited when you enter
talking to me
telling their feelings...
I listened to the song
I feel you beautiful
do what you need to...
I will be fine legion cares for me
they are my guards and keepers...
love you lady so much...
Brenda
and I understand...
my demons know you
I know them
they get excited when you enter
talking to me
telling their feelings...
I listened to the song
I feel you beautiful
do what you need to...
I will be fine legion cares for me
they are my guards and keepers...
love you lady so much...
Brenda
"like a lotus blossom
bloodied from being torn open
my gaping wounds'
this exorcism is fairly hardcore Crims...it was like riding my dirt bike in '83 through the woods flying by the trees because I was unbreakable, of course, as the powerful limbs come close every second to snapping my neck
jolting spirit envocation
Jeff
bloodied from being torn open
my gaping wounds'
this exorcism is fairly hardcore Crims...it was like riding my dirt bike in '83 through the woods flying by the trees because I was unbreakable, of course, as the powerful limbs come close every second to snapping my neck
jolting spirit envocation
Jeff
16th Jul 2018 2:13am
thank you dearest Jeff most graciously for going on this wild ride... I loved the images it conjured in your mind...
love Crim
love Crim
15th Jul 2018 2:06am
beautifully disturbing write - as always you are so good at these :-))))
Love and Hugs :-)))))))))))
Love and Hugs :-)))))))))))
16th Jul 2018 2:14am
thank you graciously dearest David for going on this ride with me...
love Brenda
love Brenda
15th Jul 2018 9:46am
Sometimes the demons can suck you into the abyss, so you have to fight them.
Excellent writing.
Dark Sun.
Excellent writing.
Dark Sun.
16th Jul 2018 2:15am
thank you graciously dearest Dark Sun for your insight on this write....
love Crim
love Crim
15th Jul 2018 10:21pm
Wow! Here's one stanza that hits home:
the ugly sun who made weak
vodka days that stole my heart
tweaker nights I hid from all of you
Reminds me of me. Aside from the personal relevance, this is fine work, one for the RL.
the ugly sun who made weak
vodka days that stole my heart
tweaker nights I hid from all of you
Reminds me of me. Aside from the personal relevance, this is fine work, one for the RL.
16th Jul 2018 2:15am
