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Old Me in Current Day
Sunset
Early autumn
Translucent
Prepubescence
As though it were
Yesterday
All those thoughts
Unimaginable
Unattainable
Now are the sky
Of reality
Then fear
Closing windows
And comfort
The comfort
I pray will rebirth
Out of the womb
Of the sunrise
Reborn
From the depths
Of the death
Lurking within
Nocturnal pessimist
That I am
Drowning in concern
Draining color away
Never do I ever learn.
Early autumn
Translucent
Prepubescence
As though it were
Yesterday
All those thoughts
Unimaginable
Unattainable
Now are the sky
Of reality
Then fear
Closing windows
And comfort
The comfort
I pray will rebirth
Out of the womb
Of the sunrise
Reborn
From the depths
Of the death
Lurking within
Nocturnal pessimist
That I am
Drowning in concern
Draining color away
Never do I ever learn.
Published 6th Mar 2017
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6th Mar 2017 5:58am
6th Mar 2017 7:20am
Indeed we do, I am glad we do, we gain better perspectives. Thank you dear Grace for reading me, it is an honor. ~anonshadow😏
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6th Mar 2017 7:22am
Perfectly stated, Amelia. Thank you for reading and for the input. Always love to see you around. ~anonshadow😏
6th Mar 2017 9:47am
great ink...
the thing with your ink is that i always discover new words that i didn't know existed.
learning whilst enjoying good f*cking poetry!!! excuse the profanity i'm trying to make a point here.
enjoyed this esp first stanza
the thing with your ink is that i always discover new words that i didn't know existed.
learning whilst enjoying good f*cking poetry!!! excuse the profanity i'm trying to make a point here.
enjoyed this esp first stanza
6th Mar 2017 10:34am
A teacher and an artist, these are my professions;) jk. Thank you for the kind words, Sy. I am very happy you enjoy my work, I greatly appreciate you reading it! ~anonshadow😏
That's why we keep repeating the lesson until we learn it. We are destined to succeed, Anon!
7th Mar 2017 7:25am
Amen Ahavati. It is quite a load lifted off ones shoulder once they realize it, it was for me any way. Honored you stopped by for the read, I greatly appreciate you doing so:) ~anonshadow😏
