Poetry competition CLOSED 7th August 2018 10:07pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
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DUP Idol
LunasChild8
Forum Posts: 540
Dangerous Mind
21
Joined 27th Dec 2017 Forum Posts: 540
Poetry Contest Description
Write your own songs and share them with DUP
Welcome to DUP Idol! I'm your host, Luna's Child, and starting today we'll be eagerly waiting for members of DUP to submit their own songs that they've written. The songs can be from any genre, they can be old works or new, and members can submit up to 3 songs.
Show your proud colors, and let the fun begin!
Show your proud colors, and let the fun begin!
SatansSperm
Forum Posts: 3112
Dangerous Mind
13
Joined 19th Nov 2015Forum Posts: 3112
SatansSperm
Forum Posts: 3112
Dangerous Mind
13
Joined 19th Nov 2015Forum Posts: 3112
LunaLove6963
Forum Posts: 1347
Dangerous Mind
3
Joined 14th Jan 2016Forum Posts: 1347
Love lust high (erotic love song)
You're exactly what I want
The only drug I need
So tell me baby when can I cum
Aren't I what you crave
I'm addicted to you
And the way you make me feel
You make me wanna squirm and squeal
Ill be your Goddess
If you'll be my God
Giving you my all
I can't deny
You get me wet
Beading up with sweat
You're all that I need
Keep me coming back
Like the crack
In Need of a pipe
Leaving me wanting more
Just one last hit one more score
Knees hit the floor
Begging for a filling
Wet and dripping, Naked and willing
Deep Desire
You caught my pussy on fire
Even sneaking in my dreams
And fucking me
Late night sexual hallucinations
Have me cumming
I'm in love with this lust
Turning these wings in to dust
But I don't mind
Not like I was ever going to fly to heaven
I'm on my knees but I'm not praying
You know what I'm saying
You're in my veins now
My head to you, I do bow
The only drug I need
So tell me baby when can I cum
Aren't I what you crave
I'm addicted to you
And the way you make me feel
You make me wanna squirm and squeal
Ill be your Goddess
If you'll be my God
Giving you my all
I can't deny
You get me wet
Beading up with sweat
You're all that I need
Keep me coming back
Like the crack
In Need of a pipe
Leaving me wanting more
Just one last hit one more score
Knees hit the floor
Begging for a filling
Wet and dripping, Naked and willing
Deep Desire
You caught my pussy on fire
Even sneaking in my dreams
And fucking me
Late night sexual hallucinations
Have me cumming
I'm in love with this lust
Turning these wings in to dust
But I don't mind
Not like I was ever going to fly to heaven
I'm on my knees but I'm not praying
You know what I'm saying
You're in my veins now
My head to you, I do bow
Written by LunaLove6963
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LibraSoul96
Forum Posts: 539
Fire of Insight
1
Joined 1st July 2015Forum Posts: 539
Slayage Shit
I'm solar laflare came from a planet called mars.
I spit kit kats and Hersheys all types of bars.
My flow be the shit bitch spray some febreeze (ew)
My wrist on cold look watch how my diamonds on freeze (bling).
I swear none of you got the juice
I Hawaiian punched it.
Pull up on you in that orange lambo I maid it in a minute.
I swear your pockets on slim fast bitch you hold no weight.
My money so afluent so I keep it on my plate.
Talking like you cardi saying you making bloody moves.
Meanwhile, you in the slums with yo momma catching the blues.
I swear I'm the original ain't no new editions.
No more hitting me up so stay the fuck up out my mentions.
I'm dead to the drama,
You mess we me its your karma.
All that regret is in your conscience,
I don't got time for the nonsense.
Your a cartoon mouse shout out to Mickey
Have you running like Tom did Jerry.
Your a squeaker just like Minnie,
Imma a bear just like winnie.
Who can stop me shit not too many.
Y'all lyrics is wack I should be your ghostwriter,
Do some nip and tuck on your rhymes just to make them tighter.
Imma true Libra nahhh I'm not a fighter, but if you push me imma light you up like a cigarette lighter.
You don't want no smoke with me this ain't a hookah stick.
You can get blew down along with your side kick.
They say flare be humble sit down like kendrick.
But how imma stay calm when all these haters do is mimic.
I slay for a living you slay for a week.
Look at your teeth they playing hide and seek.
Before you look at me take care of your mouth.
Breath smelling like the part of your body that points down south ( like ass).
I'm a boss your the help go and dust something.
Get down on your knees and kiss my pinky ring.
Bitch I'm Solar laflare and I keeps a mean mug as my glare.
Written by LibraSoul96
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LibraSoul96
Forum Posts: 539
Fire of Insight
1
Joined 1st July 2015Forum Posts: 539
Slayage Shit -climax
I swear all y'all do is throw subliminals,
I'm at the top of my pinnacle.
Talking shit hey here's a diaper,
My words sting like a fucking viper.
I don't waist time on people that's irrelevant.
Man you hating and that shit is evident.
Y'all act like some fucking nazis,
Imma drop bombs on y'all with an impact of a kamikaze.
Must be the drugs or the alcohol got y'all getting outta pocket.
My words and its meanings have dead aim like a fucking rocket.
Don't be overdosing on confidence thinking you are my equal.
This ain't no prequel to my slayage shit this a mother fucking sequel.
My poetry is like pollen,
Come take a sniff and get high off it.
Yeah may I reiterate that I should be yall ghostwriter,
Man y'all need my penmanship and it's dire.
Spitting these pre school ass rhymes
Thinking that shit can take me out my prime.
Flowing this hard should be a fucking crime.
I don't gotta throw shade cuz I have the whole tree at my disposal.
Stop trynna explain yourself to me like a damn proposal.
Y'all trying me with these disses that are a hit and miss.
Didn't y'all teachers teach y'all that ignorance is bliss.
They say flare you should keep quiet and turn the other cheek.
That the meek shall inherit the earth.
That you still are the best that you know your worth.
Imma be humble and shout out my competition.
Glad y'all tried to end me but failed the mission.
But I ain't done I ain't finish it's just the intermission.
I'm at the top of my pinnacle.
Talking shit hey here's a diaper,
My words sting like a fucking viper.
I don't waist time on people that's irrelevant.
Man you hating and that shit is evident.
Y'all act like some fucking nazis,
Imma drop bombs on y'all with an impact of a kamikaze.
Must be the drugs or the alcohol got y'all getting outta pocket.
My words and its meanings have dead aim like a fucking rocket.
Don't be overdosing on confidence thinking you are my equal.
This ain't no prequel to my slayage shit this a mother fucking sequel.
My poetry is like pollen,
Come take a sniff and get high off it.
Yeah may I reiterate that I should be yall ghostwriter,
Man y'all need my penmanship and it's dire.
Spitting these pre school ass rhymes
Thinking that shit can take me out my prime.
Flowing this hard should be a fucking crime.
I don't gotta throw shade cuz I have the whole tree at my disposal.
Stop trynna explain yourself to me like a damn proposal.
Y'all trying me with these disses that are a hit and miss.
Didn't y'all teachers teach y'all that ignorance is bliss.
They say flare you should keep quiet and turn the other cheek.
That the meek shall inherit the earth.
That you still are the best that you know your worth.
Imma be humble and shout out my competition.
Glad y'all tried to end me but failed the mission.
But I ain't done I ain't finish it's just the intermission.
Written by LibraSoul96
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LibraSoul96
Forum Posts: 539
Fire of Insight
1
Joined 1st July 2015Forum Posts: 539
Slayage Shit: The Grand Finale
Imma lyrical bastard there ain't no skill
that I ain't mastered.
You masturbated with the beat,
my flow so vicious that it castrated you to defeat.
There's a bunch of strange creatures trynna grind my gear ( who are you)
Well Imma force on my own so fuck having a peer.
Yeah Imma savage, like a gorilla in the zoo.
Try me you go missing having Steve searching for Blue's clues.
These babies crying to me what you need a rattle.
Ya'll rhymes were sugar coated to say that this is a rap battle.
Ya'll some leaches sucking off my style like a teething ring.
Stay trying to piece me together, like a sleuth.
Trynna mix up the perfect ingredients on how I spit in the booth.
Imma put ya'll raps in a body bag and zip em up with a zipper.
Leave em all bloody and decomposed like Jack the ripper.
This one lame mentioned my name in a battle rap (do I know you).
With that wack ass repetitive garbage it need to be scrapped.
You post everyday like damn let the competition breathe.
Trynna make an invalid message that no one will receive.
Look I am your father shout out to Darth Vader
Imma smoke ya'll out this battle bitch come catch these vapors.
Damn you that desperate to get a name riding off other people's wave, what a damn shame.
Comparing me to Hannibal Lecter, Imma Silence of the Lamb this motherfucker.
Hey where's my machete, Imma Friday the 13th these fools shout out to Jason
Ya'll act like ya'll ain't got no religion or no sense of direction.
The tip of my pen cuts deep with great precision.
I swear yall need to be in a mental aslyum
Ya'll hate don't stop my momentum.
So this has been fun loading up these bullets in my gun
Shooting down the adversity and the belittlement.
Put ya'll pens down and go into retirement.
I been on this slayage shit no one can come close to it.
Please don't ever put my name next to these peasants.
No more free promo off my name you getting charged to represent it.
Imma ghostwriter hey inbox me for a feature.
I swear my sermons will reach your soul like a preacher.
I'm the grim reaper, I'm snatching souls.
Death is eternal, but the sunshine in the afterlife is bountiful.
I got a librasoul that out weigh the zodiac
Bitch I'm Solar laflare and I just led ya'll into cardiac arrest.
that I ain't mastered.
You masturbated with the beat,
my flow so vicious that it castrated you to defeat.
There's a bunch of strange creatures trynna grind my gear ( who are you)
Well Imma force on my own so fuck having a peer.
Yeah Imma savage, like a gorilla in the zoo.
Try me you go missing having Steve searching for Blue's clues.
These babies crying to me what you need a rattle.
Ya'll rhymes were sugar coated to say that this is a rap battle.
Ya'll some leaches sucking off my style like a teething ring.
Stay trying to piece me together, like a sleuth.
Trynna mix up the perfect ingredients on how I spit in the booth.
Imma put ya'll raps in a body bag and zip em up with a zipper.
Leave em all bloody and decomposed like Jack the ripper.
This one lame mentioned my name in a battle rap (do I know you).
With that wack ass repetitive garbage it need to be scrapped.
You post everyday like damn let the competition breathe.
Trynna make an invalid message that no one will receive.
Look I am your father shout out to Darth Vader
Imma smoke ya'll out this battle bitch come catch these vapors.
Damn you that desperate to get a name riding off other people's wave, what a damn shame.
Comparing me to Hannibal Lecter, Imma Silence of the Lamb this motherfucker.
Hey where's my machete, Imma Friday the 13th these fools shout out to Jason
Ya'll act like ya'll ain't got no religion or no sense of direction.
The tip of my pen cuts deep with great precision.
I swear yall need to be in a mental aslyum
Ya'll hate don't stop my momentum.
So this has been fun loading up these bullets in my gun
Shooting down the adversity and the belittlement.
Put ya'll pens down and go into retirement.
I been on this slayage shit no one can come close to it.
Please don't ever put my name next to these peasants.
No more free promo off my name you getting charged to represent it.
Imma ghostwriter hey inbox me for a feature.
I swear my sermons will reach your soul like a preacher.
I'm the grim reaper, I'm snatching souls.
Death is eternal, but the sunshine in the afterlife is bountiful.
I got a librasoul that out weigh the zodiac
Bitch I'm Solar laflare and I just led ya'll into cardiac arrest.
Written by LibraSoul96
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LibraSoul96
Forum Posts: 539
Fire of Insight
1
Joined 1st July 2015Forum Posts: 539
These are all raps I hope you all enjoy.
ReggiePoet
Reggie
Forum Posts: 363
Reggie
Fire of Insight
28
Joined 13th May 2018Forum Posts: 363
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Forum Posts: 5134
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
ECSTATIC (feat. Ecstasy*)
There comes a time
When lovers are just friends without a means.
It’s not too long
Before you find romance is just a scene.
Reality
Becomes a fact that steals all your dreams.
And then they die
When you believe there’s nothing in between...
You make me ecstatic —
Even when I’m feelin’ sad
Just because I know the truth.
You got me ecstatic —
Desperation setting in,
Has no bite without a tooth.
You spell out ecstatic —
In the dictionary there’s
A picture just like you.
I feel you, ecstatic —
Taking over me and there’s
Just nothing I can do...
There comes a time
When lovers are just friends without a means.
Copyright©️2018 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
When lovers are just friends without a means.
It’s not too long
Before you find romance is just a scene.
Reality
Becomes a fact that steals all your dreams.
And then they die
When you believe there’s nothing in between...
You make me ecstatic —
Even when I’m feelin’ sad
Just because I know the truth.
You got me ecstatic —
Desperation setting in,
Has no bite without a tooth.
You spell out ecstatic —
In the dictionary there’s
A picture just like you.
I feel you, ecstatic —
Taking over me and there’s
Just nothing I can do...
There comes a time
When lovers are just friends without a means.
Copyright©️2018 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
Written by Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
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SatansSperm
Forum Posts: 3112
Dangerous Mind
13
Joined 19th Nov 2015Forum Posts: 3112
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Forum Posts: 5134
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
SONG
( a Pantoum )
A note from deep within rewrites our song,
That from above in cloudless sky rains down.
All senses come alive before too long,
Electrified from daybreak to sundown.
That from above in cloudless sky rains down,
The first sound that I hear is but a taste.
Electrified from daybreak to sundown,
To multiply and drench me in your haste.
The first sound that I hear is but a taste,
To what you'll bring to me in thunder's roll.
To multiply and drench me in your haste,
And further drown me as my lover's soul.
For what you'll bring to me in thunder's roll,
Can more than equal others' want of me.
And further drown me as my lover's soul
To match & raise the stakes to keep me free.
Can more than equal others' want of me,
All senses come alive before too long.
To match & raise the stakes to keep me free,
A note from deep within rewrites our song.
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A note from deep within rewrites our song,
That from above in cloudless sky rains down.
All senses come alive before too long,
Electrified from daybreak to sundown.
That from above in cloudless sky rains down,
The first sound that I hear is but a taste.
Electrified from daybreak to sundown,
To multiply and drench me in your haste.
The first sound that I hear is but a taste,
To what you'll bring to me in thunder's roll.
To multiply and drench me in your haste,
And further drown me as my lover's soul.
For what you'll bring to me in thunder's roll,
Can more than equal others' want of me.
And further drown me as my lover's soul
To match & raise the stakes to keep me free.
Can more than equal others' want of me,
All senses come alive before too long.
To match & raise the stakes to keep me free,
A note from deep within rewrites our song.
.
Written by Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
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fred_r_kane
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Twisted Dreamer
2
Joined 3rd Sep 2010Forum Posts: 206
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