Poems for and About Lovers Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about lovers seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
I CAN HEAR YOUR ACHE
I can hear your voice inside my fantasies and my dreams
beckoning behind the veil from
beyond, it loudly screams
into my unconsciousness stirring
within the depths my soul
An ache, a heartbreaking hunger
pierces, wanting to be whole
In those fragments of you there are pieces I may never hold
for your body has always needed
to be warmed from the cold
in words and actions pulled out
from the darkness within
Oh! How I crave to be the comfort and shelter from such sin
To ward againist the blinding light
of all...
beckoning behind the veil from
beyond, it loudly screams
into my unconsciousness stirring
within the depths my soul
An ache, a heartbreaking hunger
pierces, wanting to be whole
In those fragments of you there are pieces I may never hold
for your body has always needed
to be warmed from the cold
in words and actions pulled out
from the darkness within
Oh! How I crave to be the comfort and shelter from such sin
To ward againist the blinding light
of all...
#lover
#lust
#passion
#sensual
#temptation
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The Lady Blue (Making Up)
Gary and I were back together in no time at all. He said he couldn't stand being without me anymore. Of course, I was ecstatic!
What happened was that he started asking me to have a drink with him in his office after my final set. Things started steaming up between us once again.
One night, we started fooling around and ended up making love on his desk. It was around this time Gary and Carol started having some really serious martial problems and he started sleeping nights on the office sofa. He told me they were constantly fighting and he saw divorce in their future....
What happened was that he started asking me to have a drink with him in his office after my final set. Things started steaming up between us once again.
One night, we started fooling around and ended up making love on his desk. It was around this time Gary and Carol started having some really serious martial problems and he started sleeping nights on the office sofa. He told me they were constantly fighting and he saw divorce in their future....
#lover
#lust
#sex
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AN OBSESSION
Within silences of night, the mind's in an exhilarating flight,
Obsessed within visions, too vivid to ignore or to fight.
Flames flicker in the dark, as our passions awaken bright,
Fueled by lustful desires, that now are yearning to ignite.
This is our obsession, beautifully blind but completely bare,
A hunger so very relentless, sanity from reality it does snare.
In thralls of our aspiration, as wanderers we unite,
Chasing the elusive, feeling the power we do incite.
Within the lure of ambition, we hear a seductive melody, ...
Obsessed within visions, too vivid to ignore or to fight.
Flames flicker in the dark, as our passions awaken bright,
Fueled by lustful desires, that now are yearning to ignite.
This is our obsession, beautifully blind but completely bare,
A hunger so very relentless, sanity from reality it does snare.
In thralls of our aspiration, as wanderers we unite,
Chasing the elusive, feeling the power we do incite.
Within the lure of ambition, we hear a seductive melody, ...
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#passion
#seductive
145 reads
4 Comments
You Two Cheating Creeps Deserve Each Other
Janet had gone
over to Kirk's
place and saw him naked in bed with her
best
friend Jane before they saw her.
over to Kirk's
place and saw him naked in bed with her
best
friend Jane before they saw her.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#lover
#sensual
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The Lady Blue (The Affair)
At last, I was living a dream life. I was having a hot and heavy romance with with Gary. I found I was unquestionably and hopelessly in love with him. I had grown up admiring him and fantasized about us having a close relationship. It did not occur to me to turn away from him even though he wasn't really mine.
Being with Gary would sometimes remind me of something that Pa used to say to ma.
"If you're gonna play you have to pay." Ma liked to flirt with other men but if she ever actually stepped out on pa I never knew it.
I would have to...
Being with Gary would sometimes remind me of something that Pa used to say to ma.
"If you're gonna play you have to pay." Ma liked to flirt with other men but if she ever actually stepped out on pa I never knew it.
I would have to...
#boyfriend
#love
#lover
#men
#sex
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The Lady Blue (The Dreams)
Our affair began that night There was already a party planned at my house for after my audition. When I asked Gary if he wanted to come he said he wouldn't miss it for anything. I knew we were going to make love for the very first time in my very own bed. How was I so sure? I saw it happening in a dream one night.
I guess I should explain about the dreams. For as long as I can remember I have special dreams sometimes that present themselves as glimpses of the future. My mother had them, too, though not nearly as often as I did. She had a fancy name for them but over the years...
I guess I should explain about the dreams. For as long as I can remember I have special dreams sometimes that present themselves as glimpses of the future. My mother had them, too, though not nearly as often as I did. She had a fancy name for them but over the years...
#boyfriend
#erotic
#lover #sex
#lover #sex
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Dark Love
#BDSM
#dirty
#lover
#orgasm
#sex
250 reads
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SIGN UP
Let my body forever be your muse
And my skin be your white canvas
Feel me gently within texture hues
For only you will understand this
Plan out your contours on me
Feel all the ways you can adorn
With your licks and juices set free
Your swirling tongue keeping score
On those buds on and in me
Making them firmer, harder
Your tongue making me juicy
Deep within my hidden ardor
Making us both even wetter
Let your hands and lips feel it all
Take out your cock stir it better
Let me make you beg and crawl ...
And my skin be your white canvas
Feel me gently within texture hues
For only you will understand this
Plan out your contours on me
Feel all the ways you can adorn
With your licks and juices set free
Your swirling tongue keeping score
On those buds on and in me
Making them firmer, harder
Your tongue making me juicy
Deep within my hidden ardor
Making us both even wetter
Let your hands and lips feel it all
Take out your cock stir it better
Let me make you beg and crawl ...
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#orgasm
#passion
159 reads
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The Lady Blue (For The Love)
#love
#lover
#sex
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The Lady Blue (Growing Desire)
#lover
#lust
#narrative
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EVERLASTING FRIENDSHIP
Place your hands on my hips,
Your tongue against my lips;
Touch your thighs to mine,
I promise everything's fine.
No one truthfully has to know,
Let loose and go with the flow;
Whisper your desires in my ear,
I promise you've nothing to fear.
Feel how I tremble at your touch,
I need and want you so much;
I'll drop your clothes to the floor,
Soon you’ll be begging for more.
I will suck you from deep within,
And make you want to lots of sin;
Let's now also remove my shirt,
Suck on my nipples til they...
Your tongue against my lips;
Touch your thighs to mine,
I promise everything's fine.
No one truthfully has to know,
Let loose and go with the flow;
Whisper your desires in my ear,
I promise you've nothing to fear.
Feel how I tremble at your touch,
I need and want you so much;
I'll drop your clothes to the floor,
Soon you’ll be begging for more.
I will suck you from deep within,
And make you want to lots of sin;
Let's now also remove my shirt,
Suck on my nipples til they...
#love
#lover
#porn
#seductive
#sexy
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Murmuré Doucement
Avec tendresse, vous êtes là
Fermez lentement les yeux, sentez le rythme de nos âmes
Dansant dans l’abandon le plus doux auquel je me soumets
Attire-moi dans l’étreinte de tes désirs les plus profonds et les plus sombres
Chuchote
mon nom alors que tu gémisses au cœur des souhaits célestes
Convoite-moi de mes mains puissantes, que ta volonté soit le guide de ce qui se trouve dans les sentiments séduisants de moi
Alors que nos âmes dansent magnifiquement dans et hors du temps
Fermez lentement les yeux, sentez le rythme de nos âmes
Dansant dans l’abandon le plus doux auquel je me soumets
Attire-moi dans l’étreinte de tes désirs les plus profonds et les plus sombres
Chuchote
mon nom alors que tu gémisses au cœur des souhaits célestes
Convoite-moi de mes mains puissantes, que ta volonté soit le guide de ce qui se trouve dans les sentiments séduisants de moi
Alors que nos âmes dansent magnifiquement dans et hors du temps
#lover
#seductive
#sensual #flowers
#sensual #flowers
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DU Poetry : Poems for and About Lovers Seeking Honest Critique