Poems for and About Lovers Seeking Honest Critique
#lover
Poems for and about lovers seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
shadow_starzzz
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:48am
Yesterday 9:48am
No one has time for mediocre BS…
#lover
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Revisionary
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:54am
Yesterday 1:54am
Red Light District
The vapors sweat the walls. Water drips from skin. Delicious
Vicious affliction, our methods dirty with seductive ambitions
Like the ring on your finger, I’ll take your breath away
Laid bare on the bed while the moonlight highlights your frame
Painted naked, we fuel a smoldering flame
Growling hysteria amongst this moment, pure joy upon your face
You licked my neck, I bit your flesh, and then you let out a soft wince
A sex-filled vex etched into our mirrored minds, while her lit cigarette hissed
Her tender fingers touched upon some old...
Vicious affliction, our methods dirty with seductive ambitions
Like the ring on your finger, I’ll take your breath away
Laid bare on the bed while the moonlight highlights your frame
Painted naked, we fuel a smoldering flame
Growling hysteria amongst this moment, pure joy upon your face
You licked my neck, I bit your flesh, and then you let out a soft wince
A sex-filled vex etched into our mirrored minds, while her lit cigarette hissed
Her tender fingers touched upon some old...
#lover
#passion
#seductive
#sexy
#temptation
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 11:37pm
28th Jan 2025 11:37pm
Sorry
Sorry
Sorry about the interruption but I just got the urge looking at you dressed that way, you look so dam hot and sensuous I just had to take you right away
Yes I've messed your hair up and I've smudged your painted lips, sorry about ruining your dress but in my defense they're kind of flimsy zips
I know you were just going out the door and your girlfriends are outside in their car but it won't take long to get ready again can I drop you off to meet them in the bar
I'll go explain make some excuse whilst you're running late, I'll apologise on your...
Sorry about the interruption but I just got the urge looking at you dressed that way, you look so dam hot and sensuous I just had to take you right away
Yes I've messed your hair up and I've smudged your painted lips, sorry about ruining your dress but in my defense they're kind of flimsy zips
I know you were just going out the door and your girlfriends are outside in their car but it won't take long to get ready again can I drop you off to meet them in the bar
I'll go explain make some excuse whilst you're running late, I'll apologise on your...
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#passion
#sexy
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asbr808
Anthony R
Anthony R
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 4:59am
28th Jan 2025 4:59am
de-fi biotic
Where is the energeticist
Diagnosed with low morale
Caught up in barreled guns
Why’s that?
Catch me on the other flight
As I make a trajectory of defeat
Curtain call, be fall,
Winter and string—
I am tied to you dear
Fate and destiny two sisters
Laid to sleep in a garden
The produce of their dreams were strange
When our heads are so close together
I see smoke and cold clouds of process
Chemically speaking we should not ignite
I am lost within there
At the edge of understanding
Where I go now, where...
Diagnosed with low morale
Caught up in barreled guns
Why’s that?
Catch me on the other flight
As I make a trajectory of defeat
Curtain call, be fall,
Winter and string—
I am tied to you dear
Fate and destiny two sisters
Laid to sleep in a garden
The produce of their dreams were strange
When our heads are so close together
I see smoke and cold clouds of process
Chemically speaking we should not ignite
I am lost within there
At the edge of understanding
Where I go now, where...
#lover
#ThrillSeeking
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 3:44am
23rd Jan 2025 3:44am
To Just Ignore Him
Kevin moved closer to Krissy.
She's letting Karina lick her one hole.
She also licked on Anna's.
Then, Kevin smacked Krissy on the rump.
Anna reminded Krissy to just ignore him.
She's letting Karina lick her one hole.
She also licked on Anna's.
Then, Kevin smacked Krissy on the rump.
Anna reminded Krissy to just ignore him.
#fiction
#lesbian
#lover
#sex
#threesome
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Deadsorrow78
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 2:41am
22nd Jan 2025 2:41am
Pleasure in thy Name
Silent winds of grace to softly touch your face.
A sensual feel over comes you like you have never felt before.
Making all your senses melt with pleasure. sensually spicy on the back of your neck.
Arousal has been provoked, as the taste of your skin hits.
your body shivering with each part of you that is caressed.
New to this kind of pleasure you want to run. but every touch has been calculated for your satisfaction.
Tasting all of you for your stimulation. as your flower secrets nectar, that sweet honey of the gods.
...
A sensual feel over comes you like you have never felt before.
Making all your senses melt with pleasure. sensually spicy on the back of your neck.
Arousal has been provoked, as the taste of your skin hits.
your body shivering with each part of you that is caressed.
New to this kind of pleasure you want to run. but every touch has been calculated for your satisfaction.
Tasting all of you for your stimulation. as your flower secrets nectar, that sweet honey of the gods.
...
#lover
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 9:50pm
21st Jan 2025 9:50pm
You Couldn't Wait For Me. Could You?
Ashley went into
a nuru massage parlor
in Paris and saw
Kevin naked in a room
with two magnificent blondes.
a nuru massage parlor
in Paris and saw
Kevin naked in a room
with two magnificent blondes.
#fiction
#lover
#sex
#tanka
#threesome
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PoetSpeak
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 3:23pm
18th Jan 2025 3:23pm
The Doctor is Always Right
Your lab coat
White and virginal
But I know what lies beneath
A song bird, a vixen, a powerhouse
Of want, desire and lust
You've got the prescription
I've got the rock hard passion
Colliding in your warm regions
Science, literature, erotica
We serve
Each other....
White and virginal
But I know what lies beneath
A song bird, a vixen, a powerhouse
Of want, desire and lust
You've got the prescription
I've got the rock hard passion
Colliding in your warm regions
Science, literature, erotica
We serve
Each other....
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#temptation
#ThrillSeeking
218 reads
21 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 5:30am
18th Jan 2025 5:30am
Folded Clothes
I picture such a vivid future for us,
my dear.
A place of my own,
made into our own.
I can see a whole life,
laid out on my bed.
It is neat and folded,
like the outfit I plan to wear tomorrow.
I want to take you with me.
I want to learn you.
I want to lay with you.
I want to share my life with you.
It scares me,
something so perfect.
Because nothing perfect,
ever lasts.
I want this to last.
I need it too.
I am not so strong.
I don't think I could try again.
The...
my dear.
A place of my own,
made into our own.
I can see a whole life,
laid out on my bed.
It is neat and folded,
like the outfit I plan to wear tomorrow.
I want to take you with me.
I want to learn you.
I want to lay with you.
I want to share my life with you.
It scares me,
something so perfect.
Because nothing perfect,
ever lasts.
I want this to last.
I need it too.
I am not so strong.
I don't think I could try again.
The...
#FallingInLove
#love
#lover
#relationships
#romantic
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asbr808
Anthony R
Anthony R
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 10:12pm
17th Jan 2025 10:12pm
Over and Over
the moment is fleeing itself,
scared of its own deflection
looking into the pond
out of the pond, siren song,
islets scattered with eyelets
shells borne of seasickness
a vessel emptied, clear glassy ides
marching towards a frail old secret
buried pleasure
of broken tongues
cooled flames of mild temper
sacrificial lamb risotto
spurned, scorned, and soured
as if you look past me, through me,
what do you see?
scared of its own deflection
looking into the pond
out of the pond, siren song,
islets scattered with eyelets
shells borne of seasickness
a vessel emptied, clear glassy ides
marching towards a frail old secret
buried pleasure
of broken tongues
cooled flames of mild temper
sacrificial lamb risotto
spurned, scorned, and soured
as if you look past me, through me,
what do you see?
#boyfriend
#lover
#mystery #SelfReflection
#mystery #SelfReflection
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asbr808
Anthony R
Anthony R
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 10:10pm
16th Jan 2025 10:10pm
Anyone Can Cook
Riddle me this, that, the other thing
Fortune cookies reveal a sliver
Of paper money worth an ideal
An idea
Of a whisper
You say this, that, the other thing
It’s hard to follow
A ghostly waiter
suivez-moi maintenant
Training you on a new chemical process
An hour to cook, sit, rest, consume
Interned at the holy grounds of black pepper
I mark the gravesite
With my mother’s recipe
Just the way she used to make it
Fortune cookies reveal a sliver
Of paper money worth an ideal
An idea
Of a whisper
You say this, that, the other thing
It’s hard to follow
A ghostly waiter
suivez-moi maintenant
Training you on a new chemical process
An hour to cook, sit, rest, consume
Interned at the holy grounds of black pepper
I mark the gravesite
With my mother’s recipe
Just the way she used to make it
#anxiety
#LifeCycle
#lover
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1 Comment
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 11:40pm
11th Jan 2025 11:40pm
Electricity in her kiss
#lover
#passion
#seductive
#sensual
#sexy
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