Poems for and About Lovers Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about lovers seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Today 2:36am
Today 2:36am
A Possible Ghostly Tease
John saw Denise standing naked.
"No! You're dead!" was what he said.
When he approached, she disappeared.
"No! You're dead!" was what he said.
When he approached, she disappeared.
#dark
#fiction
#ghosts
#lover
#sex
25 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:31am
Yesterday 2:31am
She's Wearing A Sheer Nightie
She's wearing a sheer nightie.
She's naked but I saw tan lines.
I feel like humping her.
She's naked but I saw tan lines.
I feel like humping her.
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#lover
#sex
97 reads
2 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 9:55pm
31st Dec 2024 9:55pm
The Scarlet of Desire (Redux)
When night falls in shadows which deepen your eyes
Do they whisper of leather or lace
or
Do you long for my desires
For I esteem neither night or day one above the other
Mine the dream that passion lives
Not in the set place
The special setting
The contrived moment
That somewhere future day
Passion lives in this moment
The immediacy of now
Fierce
Urgent
Heedless of time or place
Fires burn to consume
Thirst seeks to be quenched
Hunger knows only the desire to be filled
So...
Do they whisper of leather or lace
or
Do you long for my desires
For I esteem neither night or day one above the other
Mine the dream that passion lives
Not in the set place
The special setting
The contrived moment
That somewhere future day
Passion lives in this moment
The immediacy of now
Fierce
Urgent
Heedless of time or place
Fires burn to consume
Thirst seeks to be quenched
Hunger knows only the desire to be filled
So...
#lover
#lust
#passion
111 reads
7 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 2:39am
31st Dec 2024 2:39am
She Just Can't Be Truthful
She claimed to be sick.
Actually, she's being humped by some guy.
She just can't be truthful.
Actually, she's being humped by some guy.
She just can't be truthful.
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#lover
#sex
65 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 11:40pm
28th Dec 2024 11:40pm
My kitchen sink
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#passion
#sexy
167 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 8:01pm
28th Dec 2024 8:01pm
Silence Beckons Me
I can't believe your lying there
Silent,
my tears can't cry
You left the life we shared
Endless days after you died
Stars glisten in the night
Please come back to me
I need a sign from you
I miss you, can't you see
One last look at you
As I think back to our lives
I touch your face
Where your spirit lies
They close the coffin
I can't accept your gone
I'll see you on the other side
Silence beckons me, life carries on
Silent,
my tears can't cry
You left the life we shared
Endless days after you died
Stars glisten in the night
Please come back to me
I need a sign from you
I miss you, can't you see
One last look at you
As I think back to our lives
I touch your face
Where your spirit lies
They close the coffin
I can't accept your gone
I'll see you on the other side
Silence beckons me, life carries on
#death
#IMissYou
#loneliness
#lover
#silence
90 reads
12 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 7:29pm
28th Dec 2024 7:29pm
That Made Robert Storm Out
Robert had finally found Jane.
She was naked and humping with Jim.
That made Robert storm out.
She was naked and humping with Jim.
That made Robert storm out.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#lover
#sex
55 reads
0 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 4:16pm
27th Dec 2024 4:16pm
In a world of Juliets, call me Lady Macbeth
I had to sub a Sophomore Lit class
when the professor was out
with COVID
And my inner literary snob
screamed a thousand
deaths when the 20-year-old zygotes
romanticized about
Romeo and Juliet.
I smiled and fluttered
my eyelashes
and smashed those
cute little bitches
who thought they
invented thought
with actual arrogance.
You see children,
Shakespeare...
when the professor was out
with COVID
And my inner literary snob
screamed a thousand
deaths when the 20-year-old zygotes
romanticized about
Romeo and Juliet.
I smiled and fluttered
my eyelashes
and smashed those
cute little bitches
who thought they
invented thought
with actual arrogance.
You see children,
Shakespeare...
#dark
#narrative
#lover
#revenge
#identity
168 reads
26 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 9:49am
27th Dec 2024 9:49am
I Imagine
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#passion
#sex
299 reads
1 Comment
Pete_25
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 8:28am
27th Dec 2024 8:28am
Satin Night Dreams
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#seductive
#sexy
203 reads
14 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 11:46pm
26th Dec 2024 11:46pm
Wonderland Secret
I once hung a garland of white
Protecting me from what goes bump in the night
I once laid a vine of red
Best-laid traps under my bed
Protection from the essence of you
Growling
Snarling
Trying to tear me right through
Gentling the touch
Timid in bravery.
Little did I know
You were not here to save me
Light as the snow
as it flutters
Landing on heated skin
Synchronized breaths
Words spoken with eyes
Knowing without saying
Truth in the cries
The moon will witness the pain
As we...
Protecting me from what goes bump in the night
I once laid a vine of red
Best-laid traps under my bed
Protection from the essence of you
Growling
Snarling
Trying to tear me right through
Gentling the touch
Timid in bravery.
Little did I know
You were not here to save me
Light as the snow
as it flutters
Landing on heated skin
Synchronized breaths
Words spoken with eyes
Knowing without saying
Truth in the cries
The moon will witness the pain
As we...
#dirty
#lover
#passion #sex
#passion #sex
203 reads
25 Comments
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