Poems for and About Lovers by Top Critiquers
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Poems for and about lovers by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Aug 2024 8:07pm
21st Aug 2024 8:07pm
A Habit Forming Love Story
"Tie me off sweetheart", she said.
Sure honey sweetie baby, I love to watch you vomit
Don't get any on my shoes
Oh fuck it, I'm so in love with you
I even love your puke
You have the cutest drool I've ever seen
I think you're the coolest junkie-musician-poet-visionary I've ever shared a needle with
It would be an honor to get a disease from you
I have herpes scars from the best of them
Let's look for a new vein for you
The others are so flat
WOW, you've really been around
I love a woman with experience.
Sure honey sweetie baby, I love to watch you vomit
Don't get any on my shoes
Oh fuck it, I'm so in love with you
I even love your puke
You have the cutest drool I've ever seen
I think you're the coolest junkie-musician-poet-visionary I've ever shared a needle with
It would be an honor to get a disease from you
I have herpes scars from the best of them
Let's look for a new vein for you
The others are so flat
WOW, you've really been around
I love a woman with experience.
#addiction
#drugs
#heroin
#love
#lover
69 reads
4 Comments
Her
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:51pm
Yesterday 2:51pm
High Tide
My rolling seas
Crashed
Into his dynamic lifeforce
My longing
To be
Violently claimed
Before the eventual
Ebb that always befalls us
Flooded him
With every reminder
Every fiber
Every last drop of memory
Retreating
I was Left on the fringes
Of us
As purgatory
Engulfed
Me
Crashed
Into his dynamic lifeforce
My longing
To be
Violently claimed
Before the eventual
Ebb that always befalls us
Flooded him
With every reminder
Every fiber
Every last drop of memory
Retreating
I was Left on the fringes
Of us
As purgatory
Engulfed
Me
#bittersweet
#erotic
#ForbiddenLove #lover
#ForbiddenLove #lover
87 reads
12 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
9th Sep 2024 2:19pm
9th Sep 2024 2:19pm
SPONTANEOUS LOVER
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#passion
#seductive
148 reads
2 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
29th May 2024 12:48pm
29th May 2024 12:48pm
Naked Soul
He gnawed it over in his mind,
how he would invade her kingdom.
Possess all her sums.
Her soul was dressed with the body.
He saw her naked soul, it's all and far.
External battles carve wisdom's scars.
His eyes burrowed through
tattered flesh and bone's soil.
Beyond her crumbling stone walls.
His hand on the door to her existence.
She lacked a shred of resistance.
There was a brilliant spectrum of her energy.
Our understanding of the magic
is still in it's infancy.
But her smile contained an elaborate...
how he would invade her kingdom.
Possess all her sums.
Her soul was dressed with the body.
He saw her naked soul, it's all and far.
External battles carve wisdom's scars.
His eyes burrowed through
tattered flesh and bone's soil.
Beyond her crumbling stone walls.
His hand on the door to her existence.
She lacked a shred of resistance.
There was a brilliant spectrum of her energy.
Our understanding of the magic
is still in it's infancy.
But her smile contained an elaborate...
#lover
#spiritual
#universe
159 reads
19 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
2nd Aug 2019 3:41pm
2nd Aug 2019 3:41pm
it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
it may not always be so; these stone
walls lining castle ruins, where these
fortresses of our heart seem invincible-
in love, their towering turrets a standard’s
base upon these dusty ramparts-
witnessing architecture wed landscape-
supporting our unyielding faith.
it may not always be so; victors
come and go; wars fought and lost-
as much as they are won; should
another champion capture your heart
as I myself have done, your attention
a profession of new-found love-
then, shall it...
walls lining castle ruins, where these
fortresses of our heart seem invincible-
in love, their towering turrets a standard’s
base upon these dusty ramparts-
witnessing architecture wed landscape-
supporting our unyielding faith.
it may not always be so; victors
come and go; wars fought and lost-
as much as they are won; should
another champion capture your heart
as I myself have done, your attention
a profession of new-found love-
then, shall it...
#sadness
#love
#heartbroken #lover
#heartbroken #lover
993 reads
20 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 12:00pm
6th Sep 2024 12:00pm
HONOR AND RESPECT
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ I would like to tell you a story, that happen along time ago 11 yrs ago of an awakening, there on a road of a journey and travel and walk. For the elders say no one is sent to someone, by accident for it was by designed by fate and spiritual intention of deep subconsciousness. For sure it was a blessing in disguise and something that we both wanted and needed and want in our lives. For as the years passed by we became truly as inseparable as we became like fire 🔥 to a flame. For I have no regrets with my own commitment, to having...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#lover
#marriage
55 reads
3 Comments
Shilohverse
Shiloh Mello
Shiloh Mello
Poem Published
7th Sep 2024 7:41pm
7th Sep 2024 7:41pm
Slip Away
We had a love that felt like it could conquer time
We danced in circles 'round our fears,
around our dreams
I would’ve given you the sky, torn at the seams
You brought light into my darkest night
Now, dim the moon, for it’s lost its light
It aches so deep
All the mountains we climbed,
every tear, every sigh
Now, with you gone, how do
I even say goodbye
I searched for reasons, asked the poets,
asked the wise
They said, “Love is always weighed
in loss and goodbyes”
And when the world...
We danced in circles 'round our fears,
around our dreams
I would’ve given you the sky, torn at the seams
You brought light into my darkest night
Now, dim the moon, for it’s lost its light
It aches so deep
All the mountains we climbed,
every tear, every sigh
Now, with you gone, how do
I even say goodbye
I searched for reasons, asked the poets,
asked the wise
They said, “Love is always weighed
in loss and goodbyes”
And when the world...
#ForbiddenLove
#lover
#relationships
106 reads
11 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
27th Aug 2024 8:39am
27th Aug 2024 8:39am
Title, Poem, Refrain …
You always come back even though you never left
Heart
Irregular
3:30am love poem
Emotional
That’s the dreaded word
The audacity of wanting
I can’t sleep
Better to write
You think you’ll remember it in the morning
You won’t
You always come back but you never left
Great line
Went to take a leak
Did so
Got my phone
Writing this
Maybe I’ll sleep now
Maybe not
You always come back but you never left
The refrain
Poets are often song writers that never sing
Title ...
Heart
Irregular
3:30am love poem
Emotional
That’s the dreaded word
The audacity of wanting
I can’t sleep
Better to write
You think you’ll remember it in the morning
You won’t
You always come back but you never left
Great line
Went to take a leak
Did so
Got my phone
Writing this
Maybe I’ll sleep now
Maybe not
You always come back but you never left
The refrain
Poets are often song writers that never sing
Title ...
#crush
#depression
#emotions
#LifeAsAWriter
#lover
240 reads
38 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
9th Sep 2024 8:31am
9th Sep 2024 8:31am
dancing in the night
in nature
that fire
awakens,
desires
to be
holding,
to be
held,
watching
the joy
in her
early
bloom,
as
we dance,
i hear
her singing
from the
darkness.
that fire
awakens,
desires
to be
holding,
to be
held,
watching
the joy
in her
early
bloom,
as
we dance,
i hear
her singing
from the
darkness.
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#passion
#sexy
73 reads
4 Comments
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
17th Aug 2024 9:00pm
17th Aug 2024 9:00pm
Lady of the Cake
They wanted a Kagami Mochi. I never baked a rice cake before. How difficult could it be? Unfortunately it was the size of the job that stomped me. How could I have known rice doesn’t stick. A few days ago the Japanese consulate asked me to bake them a Mochi cake for their New Year’s celebrations which was supposed to be on January 1. “You Lady very good cake design….Yes?!” the Japanese lady from the consulate asked. Oh yes.. I was. She asked for a traditional Japanese cake that consists of two Mochi rice cakes. The first was to be a large round rice cake with another smaller one placed on...
#love
#lover
82 reads
7 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
8th May 2023 7:31am
8th May 2023 7:31am
ROCK, AND ROLL
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming #lover
#rhyming #lover
257 reads
1 Comment
wallyroo92
Poem Published
27th Sep 2023 3:40am
27th Sep 2023 3:40am
Divine Perversion
#lust
#erotic
#lover #sensual
#lover #sensual
324 reads
4 Comments
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