Poems for and About Lovers by Top Critiquers
#lover
Poems for and about lovers by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
At your local auto store
People are like oil filters,
after 5,000 miles or 6 months,
you should replace your lover.
Over time people build up,
harmful, abrasive, sludgy bits,
that will find their way into your heart.
If not replaced as instructed, those toxic pollutants may kill you.
So remember,
keep your organs and psyche clean.
That's my message to you...Guaranteed!
after 5,000 miles or 6 months,
you should replace your lover.
Over time people build up,
harmful, abrasive, sludgy bits,
that will find their way into your heart.
If not replaced as instructed, those toxic pollutants may kill you.
So remember,
keep your organs and psyche clean.
That's my message to you...Guaranteed!
#relationships
#motivational
#cars
#lover
#MentalHealth
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Every Breath
I just want to be free
Anything you want to do
Pleases me
Stay
And see
Loving you defies all logic
When you look at me
I loose my sense of direction
Tease me
Play
Sweetly
My every breath is yours
Put me over your bender knee
Inflame my insubordinate will
Break me
Sway
Dreamy
We unite in ecstatic rhythm
Grind into me slowly
Take me to heights unknown
Just please
Slay
Fiercely
Your touch baptizes my desires
...
Anything you want to do
Pleases me
Stay
And see
Loving you defies all logic
When you look at me
I loose my sense of direction
Tease me
Play
Sweetly
My every breath is yours
Put me over your bender knee
Inflame my insubordinate will
Break me
Sway
Dreamy
We unite in ecstatic rhythm
Grind into me slowly
Take me to heights unknown
Just please
Slay
Fiercely
Your touch baptizes my desires
...
#erotic
#lover
#romantic
105 reads
12 Comments
It Is Strange
#relationships
#lover
172 reads
5 Comments
I JUST WANT TO LOOK. . .
NO
I'm not a peeping Tom,
a weird voyeur creeping
in allies, or trying to see
people in a shower
or Jacuzzi.
IT
is YOU.
Your naked body in all
its uniqueness, lumps, stretches,
curves, dimples, and softness,
hanging breasts and soft nipples.
The shaved silky garden.
The body that gives and receives
more pleasure than all the nymphs
on Olympus.
YES,
"to each his own"
YOU my LOVER are my own..
Meet me at the Kissing Place
and we each will take a look.
OKAY?
I'm not a peeping Tom,
a weird voyeur creeping
in allies, or trying to see
people in a shower
or Jacuzzi.
IT
is YOU.
Your naked body in all
its uniqueness, lumps, stretches,
curves, dimples, and softness,
hanging breasts and soft nipples.
The shaved silky garden.
The body that gives and receives
more pleasure than all the nymphs
on Olympus.
YES,
"to each his own"
YOU my LOVER are my own..
Meet me at the Kissing Place
and we each will take a look.
OKAY?
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#orgasm
#seductive
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10 Comments
Doubt
I was at the cusp of understanding
at the brink of falling in
my soul open embraced sacred knowledge
with a delicacy not known to mortals
you touch me gently
not to own but to awaken
I was your fascination
late at night in your loneliness
you reach for me
I was there with courage to face the night
our love conquered fear
we wrestle with demons
not alone but together
we were ferocity in the flesh
you held me tightly
whispering we got this
and I knew without doubt it's truth
...
at the brink of falling in
my soul open embraced sacred knowledge
with a delicacy not known to mortals
you touch me gently
not to own but to awaken
I was your fascination
late at night in your loneliness
you reach for me
I was there with courage to face the night
our love conquered fear
we wrestle with demons
not alone but together
we were ferocity in the flesh
you held me tightly
whispering we got this
and I knew without doubt it's truth
...
#love
#lover
153 reads
12 Comments
Emma Smiles
#lover
#passion
#sex
39 reads
14 Comments
Reveal Me
never loved another so deeply
for a friendship held so briefly
though I may just be confusing
this desire for my musings, but
then again, I know deep inside
my heart, you timelessly reside
reveal me, for the lover you see
instruct me in the ways you weave
for a friendship held so briefly
though I may just be confusing
this desire for my musings, but
then again, I know deep inside
my heart, you timelessly reside
reveal me, for the lover you see
instruct me in the ways you weave
#fate
#lover
#MyInspiration
#admiration
#crush
762 reads
6 Comments
CockTale
we are a mix
of perfectly
combined
& refined
ingredients
You & me
spoons of
sweetness
+ kinky spice
a hint of tender
bites of violence
Together we float
drenched in lust
& drunk in love
high on cloud 9
a holy cocktale
its taste is utterly
& deliriously divine
of perfectly
combined
& refined
ingredients
You & me
spoons of
sweetness
+ kinky spice
a hint of tender
bites of violence
Together we float
drenched in lust
& drunk in love
high on cloud 9
a holy cocktale
its taste is utterly
& deliriously divine
#erotic
#lover
208 reads
30 Comments
Çold Coffee
I left you
Then came back to you
You weren't mad
Actually happy to see me
We have a relationship you know
Sometimes were hot and cold
But
We need each other
The coffee is cold
Yet my temperature is rising
Then came back to you
You weren't mad
Actually happy to see me
We have a relationship you know
Sometimes were hot and cold
But
We need each other
The coffee is cold
Yet my temperature is rising
#relationships
#lover
#passion
#StreamOfConsciousness
#seductive
237 reads
41 Comments
animating alabaster
color the night...
with effervescent caresses
strokes soft & warm
grazing each delicate surface
tips painting hunger...
across my blushing canvas
highlighting hidden shadows...
with your every gentle brush
and...
hold firm to the image...
as you perceive it to be
when you whisper your nuances...
...all over me
as my paleness transforms...
casting deep rosy hues...
remember, my love...
this sculpture is living
and spreading her own bit of magic...
...all over you
archive...
with effervescent caresses
strokes soft & warm
grazing each delicate surface
tips painting hunger...
across my blushing canvas
highlighting hidden shadows...
with your every gentle brush
and...
hold firm to the image...
as you perceive it to be
when you whisper your nuances...
...all over me
as my paleness transforms...
casting deep rosy hues...
remember, my love...
this sculpture is living
and spreading her own bit of magic...
...all over you
archive...
#lover
#sensual
57 reads
6 Comments
i know who
i know
who
i want
to take
me home,
to be
there, close
to our
encounter,
the two
of us
swiftly
in heated
altercation,
arm, legs
wrapped
around the
situation.
who
i want
to take
me home,
to be
there, close
to our
encounter,
the two
of us
swiftly
in heated
altercation,
arm, legs
wrapped
around the
situation.
#lust
#sex
#erotic
#lover
#passion
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9 Comments
Lies and Deception
Looking into those eyes,
so strong so true.
Never could I have imagined,
Behind those two.
Your words created a veil, a mask,
It matched the answers that I had to ask.
I wanted love, honor, and trust.
What I got was lies, cruelty, and lust.
The eyes are the picture of the soul,
But what I got was something I could not hold.
Finally, the lies slip, and the truth is revealed.
Tumbling out as if it was behind a seal.
There is only so long you can hide.
The truth that is pent up deep inside.
Here is what happens when it ends. ...
so strong so true.
Never could I have imagined,
Behind those two.
Your words created a veil, a mask,
It matched the answers that I had to ask.
I wanted love, honor, and trust.
What I got was lies, cruelty, and lust.
The eyes are the picture of the soul,
But what I got was something I could not hold.
Finally, the lies slip, and the truth is revealed.
Tumbling out as if it was behind a seal.
There is only so long you can hide.
The truth that is pent up deep inside.
Here is what happens when it ends. ...
#breakup
#lover
#FeelingLost
78 reads
6 Comments
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