Poems for and About Lovers Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about lovers seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
anonymous125
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:53pm
Yesterday 6:53pm
repeat
like a catchy song on the radio
your on repeat in my mind
not a second goes by where I
don't think of you
your love has captured my heart...
please don't leave anytime soon?
your on repeat in my mind
not a second goes by where I
don't think of you
your love has captured my heart...
please don't leave anytime soon?
#love
#boyfriend
#lover
18 reads
0 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
14th Jan 2021 3:52pm
14th Jan 2021 3:52pm
Good Morning
#sex
#erotic
#lover
124 reads
3 Comments
joeborg
Poem Published
13th Jan 2021 10:18am
13th Jan 2021 10:18am
weather and future
Here it rains and there it shines
Crazy weather with no signs,
Like the future so oblique
None can ever take a peek,
For the present were all live
Cause the time is fugitive,
Let us cheer all that we got
Tied together in a knot,
No one knows what future holds
We’ll have to wait till it unfolds,
In the meantime let’s just cheer
What we have to us so dear.
Crazy weather with no signs,
Like the future so oblique
None can ever take a peek,
For the present were all live
Cause the time is fugitive,
Let us cheer all that we got
Tied together in a knot,
No one knows what future holds
We’ll have to wait till it unfolds,
In the meantime let’s just cheer
What we have to us so dear.
#girlfriend
#romantic
#inspirational #lover
#inspirational #lover
34 reads
1 Comment
joeborg
Poem Published
12th Jan 2021 10:51am
12th Jan 2021 10:51am
searching
Its on the news and on the net
A face like yours one can’t forget,
Though I searched so far and wide
No one other so defined,
Silky skin and beauty lips
In your view my mind just trips,
I get puzzled and confused
Its a bomb I can’t diffuse,
In the end I will explode
With information overload,
My eyes open or else closed
Up your pics remains imposed,
Got this crush I got this lust
Where all my dreams go to combust,
They’ll crumble down turning to ash
But still my mind is left in rash.
A face like yours one can’t forget,
Though I searched so far and wide
No one other so defined,
Silky skin and beauty lips
In your view my mind just trips,
I get puzzled and confused
Its a bomb I can’t diffuse,
In the end I will explode
With information overload,
My eyes open or else closed
Up your pics remains imposed,
Got this crush I got this lust
Where all my dreams go to combust,
They’ll crumble down turning to ash
But still my mind is left in rash.
#wife
#lover
#sensual
#crush
#passion
45 reads
3 Comments
XiaoLong
Poem Published
11th Jan 2021 11:18pm
11th Jan 2021 11:18pm
Lover-man Too
#lust
#sex
#animals
#lover
#passion
91 reads
3 Comments
joeborg
Poem Published
11th Jan 2021 11:40am
11th Jan 2021 11:40am
lost my senses
My eyes are stuck they cannot move
Can’t find anything that can improve,
I have the feel but I can’t touch
And so I got this big a Crunch,
My nose is blocked and I can’t smell
And all the scents I can’t compel,
All my senses went astray
None have seemed to come my way,
They just stopped and I feel blocked
Like a statute cold and shocked,
I need freedom from this stun
A bit of meltdown in the sun,
To be able to revive
So watching you turns into thrive
Can’t find anything that can improve,
I have the feel but I can’t touch
And so I got this big a Crunch,
My nose is blocked and I can’t smell
And all the scents I can’t compel,
All my senses went astray
None have seemed to come my way,
They just stopped and I feel blocked
Like a statute cold and shocked,
I need freedom from this stun
A bit of meltdown in the sun,
To be able to revive
So watching you turns into thrive
#girlfriend
#lover
#sensual
#crush
#passion
45 reads
5 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
10th Jan 2021 9:51pm
10th Jan 2021 9:51pm
SOMETIMES YOU HAVE TO CUT YOUR LOSES
Here I am again walking around in the depth of the darkness within the dead of night, all alone by thyself as though I was sleep walking in my inner thoughts. As they are creeping up on me as I hear your voice so loud and clear. Running through my head screaming at me and accusing me that, I'm not man enough to want to love you yet you don't see it through my actions. For didn't I give you the opportunity to unlock the door to my heart, after it had been broken and damaged by loving someone else more than I loved myself. For didn't I make promises to you as I kept them with my words, as I did...
#relationships
#marriage
#lover
#UnrequitedLove
#ForbiddenLove
34 reads
10 Comments
slipalong
Poem Published
10th Jan 2021 6:00pm
10th Jan 2021 6:00pm
Just Morning
Tousled hair, reflection's unkempt wisps;
January's sale, strewn underwear
disheveled. like Tracy Emin's bed.
Regretted turnstile, of your nights
lay alone with just your thoughts
and so much pleasure tinged with guilt.
Conceited stains, mark the grubby quilt.
Each lover they set sail
left you crying, unrepaired.
Tempus fugit as they fled
ignored the gift that you'd prepared.
Lays the empty tanning tube
the razor blunt, that shaved your pubes.
A gift that togetherness achieved. ...
January's sale, strewn underwear
disheveled. like Tracy Emin's bed.
Regretted turnstile, of your nights
lay alone with just your thoughts
and so much pleasure tinged with guilt.
Conceited stains, mark the grubby quilt.
Each lover they set sail
left you crying, unrepaired.
Tempus fugit as they fled
ignored the gift that you'd prepared.
Lays the empty tanning tube
the razor blunt, that shaved your pubes.
A gift that togetherness achieved. ...
#regret
#lover
#disappointment
20 reads
3 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
8th Jan 2021 5:21pm
8th Jan 2021 5:21pm
LET THE HEART BEWARE
This goes out to each and everyone who has ever encountered, a situation that you are face with that just makes you wanna run away and hide. Behind the close doors never to be seen through open eyes, nor to trust your heart and soul to another one. For what I am talking about is the devils in human skin that comes from out of nowhere. Wearing a smile on their face only to be hiding behind the scenes wearing a mask, as an disguise all because you trusted your heart to the wrong one. As they Sometimes come innocent as a man or a woman to the naked eyes, to try you behind their smiles sometimes...
#BestFriend
#relationships
#lover
#UnrequitedLove
#ForbiddenLove
40 reads
4 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
8th Jan 2021 00:51am
8th Jan 2021 00:51am
just brings it all home
office party wasn't particularly good last christmas I ever spend with zoom capturing me naked
in the wardrobe with my wife ..
in the wardrobe with my wife ..
#BestFriend
#friendship
#lover
22 reads
2 Comments
JAZZMANOR
Poem Published
6th Jan 2021 3:54pm
6th Jan 2021 3:54pm
Inspiration de la Creme
Majesty of attraction
has me craving traction
not a sensation brief
touch my relief
Winter chill outside
eyes can side to side
blood flows in my veins
want to give a sticky rain
Comes with her near
stirring Eros with no peer
I wonder what she does
Is she sharing a hot buzz
Making him call her name
as he inspects her frame
quivers as orgasms run
bodies tight with the Sun
Knowing she enjoys him
are my chances now dim
my virility all in my head
long to feel...
has me craving traction
not a sensation brief
touch my relief
Winter chill outside
eyes can side to side
blood flows in my veins
want to give a sticky rain
Comes with her near
stirring Eros with no peer
I wonder what she does
Is she sharing a hot buzz
Making him call her name
as he inspects her frame
quivers as orgasms run
bodies tight with the Sun
Knowing she enjoys him
are my chances now dim
my virility all in my head
long to feel...
#lust
#erotic
#lover
60 reads
5 Comments
joeborg
Poem Published
6th Jan 2021 10:34am
6th Jan 2021 10:34am
lines of love
I look and stare
I watch the glare,
Try to compare
From anywhere,
To find a flare
that is so rare,
that could impair
my sanity ware,
that beauty rare
makes me despair,
and I just care
that I won’t share,
from anywhere
your sweet affair.
I watch the glare,
Try to compare
From anywhere,
To find a flare
that is so rare,
that could impair
my sanity ware,
that beauty rare
makes me despair,
and I just care
that I won’t share,
from anywhere
your sweet affair.
#girlfriend
#lover
#sensual
#crush
#passion
58 reads
4 Comments
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