Poems for and About Lovers Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about lovers seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
monovox128
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:19am
Yesterday 7:19am
WAITING TO SHARE DESSERT
Lying on your bed in the cool darkness,
My small body clothed in your loose, large t-shirt,
I wait for you, my lover, to come to me;
We've had dinner, but I crave dessert.
My body is sprawled out on the soft sheets
With my legs spread apart,
As I leisurely finger my pussy and
Taste my juices, which are sweet yet tart.
My heart quickens as you step in the room
And switch on the overhead light;
When your searching eyes find mine,
I thrill at the tangible hunger filling them tonight.
...
My small body clothed in your loose, large t-shirt,
I wait for you, my lover, to come to me;
We've had dinner, but I crave dessert.
My body is sprawled out on the soft sheets
With my legs spread apart,
As I leisurely finger my pussy and
Taste my juices, which are sweet yet tart.
My heart quickens as you step in the room
And switch on the overhead light;
When your searching eyes find mine,
I thrill at the tangible hunger filling them tonight.
...
#lust
#lover
#temptation
#orgasm
#seductive
136 reads
4 Comments
Thesilverymoon
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:31am
Yesterday 3:31am
Jagged Edge
🩵
In
her
dream
one friday
at lunchtime
she carved out
a message to him
written in the sand
beneath the shadow
that captured her breath
floating between jagged rocks
swift and curious he moved his hand
across the top of her thigh, learning the
angles and edges of her shape and skin
following the line of mellowed sunlight
sharpened above the crests of waves
a streamlined net that tossed itself
widely across the ocean’s teeth
sitting beneath the stone walls
pawing...
In
her
dream
one friday
at lunchtime
she carved out
a message to him
written in the sand
beneath the shadow
that captured her breath
floating between jagged rocks
swift and curious he moved his hand
across the top of her thigh, learning the
angles and edges of her shape and skin
following the line of mellowed sunlight
sharpened above the crests of waves
a streamlined net that tossed itself
widely across the ocean’s teeth
sitting beneath the stone walls
pawing...
#lust
#sea
#beach
#lover
#sensual
92 reads
5 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 6:56pm
14th Apr 2024 6:56pm
This Is For Cheating On Me, You Jerk!
Richard was humping
Lucy and enjoying it
before he saw Grace
aiming a shotgun at the
two before shooting them dead.
Lucy and enjoying it
before he saw Grace
aiming a shotgun at the
two before shooting them dead.
#death
#fiction
#lover
#tanka
#sensual
30 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 3:35pm
14th Apr 2024 3:35pm
How About It, Stud? Care To Join Us?
Matthew went over to Caroline's
apartment with hopes of getting
her to take him back only
to find her naked in
bed with her roommate
Wilma before
they looked and
smiled at
him.
apartment with hopes of getting
her to take him back only
to find her naked in
bed with her roommate
Wilma before
they looked and
smiled at
him.
#lesbian
#home
#fiction
#lover
#sensual
54 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Apr 2024 9:50pm
13th Apr 2024 9:50pm
I'm Kind Of Busy Right Now
Melanie called Simon and asked him to
pick up Mark from school while Luke
touched her naked body.
pick up Mark from school while Luke
touched her naked body.
#friendship
#school
#fiction
#lover
#sensual
50 reads
0 Comments
shadow_starzzz
Poem Published
13th Apr 2024 5:32pm
13th Apr 2024 5:32pm
Elusive
He whispers
sweet nothing
whilst
spooning me
pressed
hard
against me
flesh on flesh
heated
kindling
hot & elusive
once bitten
never
shy
fingers twined
as he
makes me
gasp
drawing upon
my breath
with one
swift
motion
to pierce my
glistening
tight
wet
wholly
being
and
he whispers
fuck me
whilst pulling
all my
strings
until
he locks me
down
hips grinding
deeper & harder ...
sweet nothing
whilst
spooning me
pressed
hard
against me
flesh on flesh
heated
kindling
hot & elusive
once bitten
never
shy
fingers twined
as he
makes me
gasp
drawing upon
my breath
with one
swift
motion
to pierce my
glistening
tight
wet
wholly
being
and
he whispers
fuck me
whilst pulling
all my
strings
until
he locks me
down
hips grinding
deeper & harder ...
#lover
40 reads
4 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
13th Apr 2024 1:39pm
13th Apr 2024 1:39pm
The Virgin And The Poet
The young man held her
With his gaze after studying
Her body from head to toes
He found the words to gently say
To the virgin where she lay
"You've captured my heart
With just your eyes
"They are the kind that mezmerize"
Said she the Virgin to the poet
I've lived long enough to know it
Your desire is the youthful culprit
Makes you prone to fantasize
Of wild lovemaking of every style
I don't know if you realize
I am a virgin otherwise"
Then I will have to
Woo you with...
With his gaze after studying
Her body from head to toes
He found the words to gently say
To the virgin where she lay
"You've captured my heart
With just your eyes
"They are the kind that mezmerize"
Said she the Virgin to the poet
I've lived long enough to know it
Your desire is the youthful culprit
Makes you prone to fantasize
Of wild lovemaking of every style
I don't know if you realize
I am a virgin otherwise"
Then I will have to
Woo you with...
#lust
#lover
#passion
70 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Apr 2024 12:06pm
13th Apr 2024 12:06pm
At your local auto store
People are like oil filters,
after 5,000 miles or 6 months,
you should replace your lover.
Over time people build up,
harmful, abrasive, sludgy bits,
that will find their way into your heart.
If not replaced as instructed, those toxic pollutants may kill you.
So remember,
keep your organs and psyche clean.
That's my message to you...Guaranteed!
after 5,000 miles or 6 months,
you should replace your lover.
Over time people build up,
harmful, abrasive, sludgy bits,
that will find their way into your heart.
If not replaced as instructed, those toxic pollutants may kill you.
So remember,
keep your organs and psyche clean.
That's my message to you...Guaranteed!
#relationships
#motivational
#cars
#lover
#MentalHealth
21 reads
8 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 9:48pm
12th Apr 2024 9:48pm
I'll Be Staying Late At The Office, Honey.
Laura called Roger and said she'll be at
the office working late just
before George humped her hard.
the office working late just
before George humped her hard.
#fiction
#lover
#sensual
#temptation
#deception
54 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 7:38pm
12th Apr 2024 7:38pm
You Would Rather Turn Dyke Than Stay With Me?!
David went to Sharon's apartment.
He saw her naked and kissing Joanna.
He stormed out of there.
He saw her naked and kissing Joanna.
He stormed out of there.
#lesbian
#home
#fiction
#lover
#sensual
49 reads
0 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 5:37pm
12th Apr 2024 5:37pm
No Distant Lands
All of the men who befriend you
they aren't looking to wed you
Some will break or try to bend you
And it seems all they want is to bed you
It's easy to want to detach, fall into despair
You're all alone and wished you didn't care
It's easy to believe everyone's got someone
Who is going to end up being true
Except for in the case of lonely little you
You don't have to go to distant lands
To find someone you can care for
It's better to believe there's a good man here
Who's looking for somebody like you
they aren't looking to wed you
Some will break or try to bend you
And it seems all they want is to bed you
It's easy to want to detach, fall into despair
You're all alone and wished you didn't care
It's easy to believe everyone's got someone
Who is going to end up being true
Except for in the case of lonely little you
You don't have to go to distant lands
To find someone you can care for
It's better to believe there's a good man here
Who's looking for somebody like you
#relationships
#lover
58 reads
8 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 10:52am
12th Apr 2024 10:52am
Embrace Me
I want you to embrace me
With all my imperfections
Hold me in high regard
And most of all respect me
I won't hide anything
I won't even try
Because You are the one
Who taught me how to fly
With all my imperfections
Hold me in high regard
And most of all respect me
I won't hide anything
I won't even try
Because You are the one
Who taught me how to fly
#love
#lover
93 reads
12 Comments
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