Poems About Courage Seeking Honest Critique
#courage
Poems about courage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Academic
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 8:07pm
16th Nov 2024 8:07pm
A UFO with strings attached? Could only happen in North America!
By Stanley Collymore
Such an incident would be absolutely
ironic and equally too, belly rolling
seen as hilarious if true! But quite
intelligently to sentient and erudite minds is a
state of affairs that's crucially not true! Since
for a solitary lucid moment, actually logically
consider, this purported scenario. The sheer
irony of these quite alleged Aliens with their
unquestionably, to specifically say the least,
very undoubtedly far superior technology to
what Homo sapiens...
Such an incident would be absolutely
ironic and equally too, belly rolling
seen as hilarious if true! But quite
intelligently to sentient and erudite minds is a
state of affairs that's crucially not true! Since
for a solitary lucid moment, actually logically
consider, this purported scenario. The sheer
irony of these quite alleged Aliens with their
unquestionably, to specifically say the least,
very undoubtedly far superior technology to
what Homo sapiens...
#courage
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
#respect
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MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 10:30pm
15th Nov 2024 10:30pm
Remember
I have been thinking for so long
To write for you and compose my song
So much my fear you got my tune wrong
But relieved you and I well get along
Not important from what I would start
As my words do flow from my very heart
Remember
I am your mum
And you are my daughter and sons
For a few years dating back
I kept to you saying “my life give me back”
Perplexed you looked and could not quite comprehend
That phrase of mine and what of message could send
Though you all proved each single time
You can read my...
To write for you and compose my song
So much my fear you got my tune wrong
But relieved you and I well get along
Not important from what I would start
As my words do flow from my very heart
Remember
I am your mum
And you are my daughter and sons
For a few years dating back
I kept to you saying “my life give me back”
Perplexed you looked and could not quite comprehend
That phrase of mine and what of message could send
Though you all proved each single time
You can read my...
#courage
#gratitude
#hope
#motivational
#strength
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 11:49pm
14th Nov 2024 11:49pm
We have so much to lose
We will always have a choice to choose, what we need and want to have in our lives, with a relationship between the lines of uncertainties. For sure we will never know, how things will go down the road of trails and tribulations.
THROUGH this life with the challenges, that could make us or break us up and destroy, the deepness of the truth of the foundation. Built from steel and stones, and the deepness of the love that we shall share, for we have a history together as woman to man and man to woman. For sure let's ask thyself what was the point for do we really want and need, that kind...
THROUGH this life with the challenges, that could make us or break us up and destroy, the deepness of the truth of the foundation. Built from steel and stones, and the deepness of the love that we shall share, for we have a history together as woman to man and man to woman. For sure let's ask thyself what was the point for do we really want and need, that kind...
#anger
#courage
#disappointment
#frustration
#strength
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 00:24am
14th Nov 2024 00:24am
Storm’s Reckoning
She was a force in the bar,
a slip of heat in midnight’s haze,
her hips swayed like music, slow and sure,
dark hair wild, flowing down her back
like thunder waiting to break.
Storm, they called her
fitting, I thought,
she had a body built to ruin peace,
lips like fire, eyes that caught,
and hips that dared the night to dream.
She slipped close, a whisper of heat,
hand on my shoulder, her nails like claws,
fingers tracing the line of my jaw
as she grinned up, a flash of sin. ...
a slip of heat in midnight’s haze,
her hips swayed like music, slow and sure,
dark hair wild, flowing down her back
like thunder waiting to break.
Storm, they called her
fitting, I thought,
she had a body built to ruin peace,
lips like fire, eyes that caught,
and hips that dared the night to dream.
She slipped close, a whisper of heat,
hand on my shoulder, her nails like claws,
fingers tracing the line of my jaw
as she grinned up, a flash of sin. ...
#courage
#passion
#seductive
#sexy
#temptation
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drone
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 10:17am
13th Nov 2024 10:17am
Placebo
Change your perspective
Change your mind
Clean your filters
Sharpen your splne
Use the Placebo
Against your Mind
So you can Change
Your Mind
Change your mind
Clean your filters
Sharpen your splne
Use the Placebo
Against your Mind
So you can Change
Your Mind
#courage
#inspirational
#kindness
#motivational
#strength
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yonahjeong0-
Yonah Jeong
Yonah Jeong
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 1:41am
13th Nov 2024 1:41am
689
Hill.............Heal.
#courage
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Academic
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 4:22pm
12th Nov 2024 4:22pm
Disruptive British school pupils! Distinctively well done, Michael Good!
By Stanley Collymore
I'm afraid that too many of these
little darlings are quite used to
entirely getting their own way,
and are therefore rather dreadfully offended
if anyone rightfully puts them in their place!
And all this very basically so, because their
actually asinine sense of entitlement, is an
undoubted problem; along, of course, also
with an obviously, evidently complete lack
of respect for anyone, and including most
crucially in this clearly selfish, scenario of
their own, their fellow students who quite ...
I'm afraid that too many of these
little darlings are quite used to
entirely getting their own way,
and are therefore rather dreadfully offended
if anyone rightfully puts them in their place!
And all this very basically so, because their
actually asinine sense of entitlement, is an
undoubted problem; along, of course, also
with an obviously, evidently complete lack
of respect for anyone, and including most
crucially in this clearly selfish, scenario of
their own, their fellow students who quite ...
#admiration
#courage
#gratitude
#inspirational
#respect
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 9:29pm
11th Nov 2024 9:29pm
The Midnight Marauder
In midnight’s quiet hour, she lies at rest, body aching unable to sleep, the air musky with desire, Cool sheets wrapped around her breast, like a snake slithering around her, coiling her and wrapping her nakedness, she moves slowly, sensually feeling the soft fabric tickle her skin drifting in and out of sleep.
The room is still, no breeze to stir, quiet enough to hear the clock beating , tick tock tick tock, O how she loves the sound of a big clock beating, but unaware something wicked draws to her.
A daring thief comes through her window, his hunger for her...
The room is still, no breeze to stir, quiet enough to hear the clock beating , tick tock tick tock, O how she loves the sound of a big clock beating, but unaware something wicked draws to her.
A daring thief comes through her window, his hunger for her...
#bittersweet
#confusion
#courage
#emotions
#shame
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 8:26pm
10th Nov 2024 8:26pm
I'M STILL HERE
I'm still here 😔 upon another day in my life, with the closeness of God 🙏 in my mind and heart. ❤️ I'm still here going through the, process of the storms, that I had to face head on in my own life. 😔 YET I'm still here standing strong and resilient, to what might happen to me when my time comes. YET I'm still here not afraid of the truth about the darkness. THAT follows behind the mask of clouds of the very state of the depths of my future. Yet I'm still here with my own perseverance, and raw and uncut determination. Even with the ups and downs that I...
#courage
#hope
#love
#redemption
#strength
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Academic
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 7:31pm
7th Nov 2024 7:31pm
Please! Don't try to insult my intelligence you fawning serf sycophants, as you evidently won't succeed!
By Stanley Collymore
The Britain monarch, you keep telling
the rest of us citizens, quite livingly
has no political power, which is
in fact a blatant and orchestrated travesty of
the truth. Simply a lie, in actual terminology!
Since the monarch does, in fact, have huge,
political power! Just one, but very simply a
significant example of this is, that actually
any MP who we, as the literally, legitimate
electorate obviously, democratically elect
must specifically and similarly too, rather
compulsorily, swear complete...
The Britain monarch, you keep telling
the rest of us citizens, quite livingly
has no political power, which is
in fact a blatant and orchestrated travesty of
the truth. Simply a lie, in actual terminology!
Since the monarch does, in fact, have huge,
political power! Just one, but very simply a
significant example of this is, that actually
any MP who we, as the literally, legitimate
electorate obviously, democratically elect
must specifically and similarly too, rather
compulsorily, swear complete...
#courage
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
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Vandel_Viaclovsky
Van
Van
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 3:00pm
7th Nov 2024 3:00pm
Humanity, whatever once you were...
Humanity, whatever once you were,
Has gone the wayside by.
Share ye a coffee, share ye a tea,
Share ye a sigh and wonder why.
Tears will cry until they dry. Oh life,
However once you tried,
To make of men their better selves,
Has been, by stubborn choice, denied.
Let us now play it as it lies- humanity,
Whatever once you were, is for the birds.
To live now is to be absurd. So be absurd.
Has gone the wayside by.
Share ye a coffee, share ye a tea,
Share ye a sigh and wonder why.
Tears will cry until they dry. Oh life,
However once you tried,
To make of men their better selves,
Has been, by stubborn choice, denied.
Let us now play it as it lies- humanity,
Whatever once you were, is for the birds.
To live now is to be absurd. So be absurd.
#courage
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 3:35pm
5th Nov 2024 3:35pm
Nothing Left Standing...
In making me your world
you have destroyed me
engulfing me in tenderness
sweet serenity.
I did not realize the cracks
the silent tremors
the microscopic lines
grinding against each other.
I am your whole world
I'm drowning in its depth
so deep, there is no bottom
there is just being.
when a kiss causes
volcanoes to erupt
and the ground shakes
know it is me.
I am right for you
the way I make you quake
the way you lose yourself
in the abyss.
this could be pure...
you have destroyed me
engulfing me in tenderness
sweet serenity.
I did not realize the cracks
the silent tremors
the microscopic lines
grinding against each other.
I am your whole world
I'm drowning in its depth
so deep, there is no bottom
there is just being.
when a kiss causes
volcanoes to erupt
and the ground shakes
know it is me.
I am right for you
the way I make you quake
the way you lose yourself
in the abyss.
this could be pure...
#admiration
#confusion
#courage #StreamOfConsciousness
#courage #StreamOfConsciousness
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