Poems About Courage Seeking Honest Critique
#courage
Poems about courage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
veins_of_shame
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:47pm
Yesterday 2:47pm
Dope You Know?
Here I am no surprise, checked into rehab again
fucked around and thought the drugs were my one and only friend.
Yet they left me so empty and sicker as can be
clouded my judgement, made it impossible to see.
That this addiction wants me till I'm blue and dead
it will NEVER let me go, just like they always said.
Bag after bag I shoot, hit after hit after hit
to the point where I'm nodding like a zombie and can't stop smoking this fuckin shit.
Numbing the pain and all the feelings I hate
letting the drugs take me down continuously taking the...
fucked around and thought the drugs were my one and only friend.
Yet they left me so empty and sicker as can be
clouded my judgement, made it impossible to see.
That this addiction wants me till I'm blue and dead
it will NEVER let me go, just like they always said.
Bag after bag I shoot, hit after hit after hit
to the point where I'm nodding like a zombie and can't stop smoking this fuckin shit.
Numbing the pain and all the feelings I hate
letting the drugs take me down continuously taking the...
#addiction
#courage
#heroin
#hope
#inspirational
25 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:09am
Yesterday 3:09am
Storytime! Shut up and Listen!
#courage
#patience
#TimeHeals #vanity
#TimeHeals #vanity
65 reads
2 Comments
jigg82
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:34am
Yesterday 1:34am
Hunter ranger
Nothing is more infuriating as the wrath of a man’s blood soaked heart,nothing is more infuriating than a man’s gentle hand upon the love of his lusting drive.nothing is more infuriating than a man’s protection of his true love.your insulted?,but I’m soul challenged .a challenge of absence and loss.a challenge of everything I stand to lose,and everything I expect …..let me ask you. Would you challenge your own heart? and self worth?or would you become the ranger hunter.a subclass that’ll never be beat.because his or hers arrows of
of truth and confidence always fly straight and true.and...
of truth and confidence always fly straight and true.and...
#courage
#heroic
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
28 reads
1 Comment
anandosen
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 6:33pm
5th Feb 2025 6:33pm
Coyotes
Stormy winds gushing down the signature sips of life;
Even when raindrops were forced to change their directions of downpour;
The son of Sun & Mercury stood aloud & gore.
Like a king he won, like a dog he lost;
His own kingdom defeated him like an enemy;
The son of Sun & Mercury was reborn as Gemini.
Alas with his confidence he build his prudence;
Rejuvenated like a beast bathing in sagacity;
The son of Sun & Mercury swayed the coyotes crazy.
Even when raindrops were forced to change their directions of downpour;
The son of Sun & Mercury stood aloud & gore.
Like a king he won, like a dog he lost;
His own kingdom defeated him like an enemy;
The son of Sun & Mercury was reborn as Gemini.
Alas with his confidence he build his prudence;
Rejuvenated like a beast bathing in sagacity;
The son of Sun & Mercury swayed the coyotes crazy.
#courage
#hope
#motivational
#redemption
#strength
26 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 11:13pm
2nd Feb 2025 11:13pm
Need
Society has tamed you
once wild and unapologetic
Your hunger was insatiable
no one dared cross your path
I need for the fire to rise in your blood
to remember how it felt to be seen and heard
I need the raven and not a dove trained to fly at reasonable altitudes
When will you need to override the conditioning?
Will you stay broken by life?
I see you lurking underneath your skin
break free and meet me
One step forward
palm up
waiting
once wild and unapologetic
Your hunger was insatiable
no one dared cross your path
I need for the fire to rise in your blood
to remember how it felt to be seen and heard
I need the raven and not a dove trained to fly at reasonable altitudes
When will you need to override the conditioning?
Will you stay broken by life?
I see you lurking underneath your skin
break free and meet me
One step forward
palm up
waiting
#courage
#motivational
#strength
171 reads
14 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 4:16pm
2nd Feb 2025 4:16pm
Runaway Bride
I wonder
Would it be fine
I pondered
If I was the runaway bride
I’d leave the alter
And fireworks would follow
The doves would fly
I’d feel alive
And I would not live a lie
I’d speak my heart out
Off I would go
To lands beyond
Places I’ve never been
I’d feel free again
If I was a runaway bride
I think I’d be just fine
Would it be fine
I pondered
If I was the runaway bride
I’d leave the alter
And fireworks would follow
The doves would fly
I’d feel alive
And I would not live a lie
I’d speak my heart out
Off I would go
To lands beyond
Places I’ve never been
I’d feel free again
If I was a runaway bride
I think I’d be just fine
#courage
#happiness
45 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 1:21pm
2nd Feb 2025 1:21pm
It's a blessing in disguise
It's a blessing when we can connect on a positive, level of energy and understanding and respect. FOR what we share and have as one love. For it's true, that we all will go through so much sometimes, that it will test our strength and commitment which could either. Make us or break us or just separate us, from the deepness of the truth of our love and hearts. But yet we will find the deepness of being reunited so comfortable, even with the struggles that we have to face in the very depths of the darkness. For sure it's necessary to be able to share our thoughts, and insight and spiritual...
#admiration
#courage
#gratitude
#happiness
#strength
68 reads
8 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 1:27am
1st Feb 2025 1:27am
God...
Everything is a miracle
you,me,us,them
the world
the sky
the ocean
mountains,valleys,hills and rivers
dogs,cats,mices and ants
"Lions and tigers and bears...oh my!"
children,babies,women and man
moms and dads...
dirt,sand,rocks
flowers,trees,grass and weed
music,sound...air and the stars and the wind
touch-smell-ears -eyes
your heart
your soul
stardust
rain,snow,the sun and the moon
take a second,a minute,an hour
take all the time you...
you,me,us,them
the world
the sky
the ocean
mountains,valleys,hills and rivers
dogs,cats,mices and ants
"Lions and tigers and bears...oh my!"
children,babies,women and man
moms and dads...
dirt,sand,rocks
flowers,trees,grass and weed
music,sound...air and the stars and the wind
touch-smell-ears -eyes
your heart
your soul
stardust
rain,snow,the sun and the moon
take a second,a minute,an hour
take all the time you...
#courage
#inspirational
#kindness #love
#kindness #love
70 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 9:43pm
28th Jan 2025 9:43pm
Leave what's not yours
To a man or woman leave a man or woman, that's not yours alone 🤔 I say that to get you to think and understand, that there is a true differences, between a good woman and a good man. WHO believes in having, a strong relationship with someone, who doesn't have to cheat or lie for they have a real relationship with honesty and truth and trust. For sure it's a subconscious thoughts on your part, to be able to share your thoughts and insight and spiritual soul with love and honor and respect.
#courage
#kindness
#love
#respect
#strength
57 reads
0 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 1:33pm
28th Jan 2025 1:33pm
BIG FAT PHONY
Truth is hard
Truth is real
But truth is truth...
It's the only way
No lying
No cheating
No make believe
Live it, don't fake it
Karma lives
Karma finds you
No hiding
No ducking
No denying it
Truth is truth
B True
It's the only way.
Truth is real
But truth is truth...
It's the only way
No lying
No cheating
No make believe
Live it, don't fake it
Karma lives
Karma finds you
No hiding
No ducking
No denying it
Truth is truth
B True
It's the only way.
#courage
#respect
59 reads
10 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 4:54pm
27th Jan 2025 4:54pm
She Walks In Silence
She walks in silence, like a lapping wave
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.
Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.
She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze ...
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.
Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.
She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze ...
#courage
#inspirational
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
67 reads
8 Comments
Glaxian
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 4:49pm
25th Jan 2025 4:49pm
Beautiful
Beautiful
I know how you feel and see who you are.
You say to get real and that I don't understand,
But I do.
I see you
You're excited, in love, bored and afraid.
When push comes to shove, you think you may fade.
You love to be loved but feel unworthy;
Like life is playing a joke;
Too good to leave,
But too good to believe.
Once you step over the line.
You will get swept into another time.
Afraid to overstep who you can become.
I know how you feel
...
I know how you feel and see who you are.
You say to get real and that I don't understand,
But I do.
I see you
You're excited, in love, bored and afraid.
When push comes to shove, you think you may fade.
You love to be loved but feel unworthy;
Like life is playing a joke;
Too good to leave,
But too good to believe.
Once you step over the line.
You will get swept into another time.
Afraid to overstep who you can become.
I know how you feel
...
#acceptance
#courage
#motivational
#respect
#SelfWorth
54 reads
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