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Nothing Left Standing...
In making me your world
you have destroyed me
engulfing me in tenderness
sweet serenity.
I did not realize the cracks
the silent tremors
the microscopic lines
grinding against each other.
I am your whole world
I'm drowning in its depth
so deep, there is no bottom
there is just being.
when a kiss causes
volcanoes to erupt
and the ground shakes
know it is me.
I am right for you
the way I make you quake
the way you lose yourself
in the abyss.
this could be pure bliss
if you'd just let us be.
accept my wild side
fill this need!
We're swimming an ocean
a vast ocean of sulphuric acid
nothing so pure as water!
although you crave my tsunami
I leave you in want
waiting to drown
in my seductive, destructive -
love, until...
there's nothing left standing -
only what's important.
Your manhood!
you have destroyed me
engulfing me in tenderness
sweet serenity.
I did not realize the cracks
the silent tremors
the microscopic lines
grinding against each other.
I am your whole world
I'm drowning in its depth
so deep, there is no bottom
there is just being.
when a kiss causes
volcanoes to erupt
and the ground shakes
know it is me.
I am right for you
the way I make you quake
the way you lose yourself
in the abyss.
this could be pure bliss
if you'd just let us be.
accept my wild side
fill this need!
We're swimming an ocean
a vast ocean of sulphuric acid
nothing so pure as water!
although you crave my tsunami
I leave you in want
waiting to drown
in my seductive, destructive -
love, until...
there's nothing left standing -
only what's important.
Your manhood!
Author's Note
Written with Billy Snagg to coincide with his fireworks night over there in the UK when a certain Mr. Guy Fawkes plotted to blow up his Houses of Parliament in a gunpowder plot back on November, 5th, 1605 but also to acknowledge our very own US election, where there are bound to be fireworks too. We hope you all enjoy this big bang special, one way or another! Actually, this wasn't really written for those occasions. It was simply just written. 🤣
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Re. Nothing Left Standing...
5th Nov 2024 6:09pm
The poem and picture remind me of the government anti-AIDS ads that went out on UK TV in the 1980s. The message narrated began "There is a danger which threatens us all..." to the backdrop of a pictured volcanic eruption. The imagery went on to feature a tombstone's inscription being carved out by drill and a bunch of flowers being thrown onto said tombstone. An English comedian called Jasper Carrott once asked onstage what the government was expecting us to interpret it, offering his take - "Don't have sex on a volcano, don't use a road drill without a condom, don't sleep around with a florist!"
Mind boggled at the image suggested in the last lines:
although you crave my tsunami
I leave you in want
waiting to drown
in my seductive, destructive -
love, until...
there's nothing left standing -
only what's important.
Your manhood! [ suggests a penis standing tall like the Eiffel Tower!]
Mind boggled at the image suggested in the last lines:
although you crave my tsunami
I leave you in want
waiting to drown
in my seductive, destructive -
love, until...
there's nothing left standing -
only what's important.
Your manhood! [ suggests a penis standing tall like the Eiffel Tower!]
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Re: Re. Nothing Left Standing...
5th Nov 2024 6:48pm
Wow I remember MTV in the UA advocating to wrap it up. thank you so much for commenting, Solomon
Re: Re. Nothing Left Standing...
Ha ha, 'Wrap it up' - good slogan. Some British bars who had condom machines in their toilets had the notice 'Condom yourself, not condemn yourself'.
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5th Nov 2024 6:50pm
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5th Nov 2024 9:50pm
Yes, manhood is important when standing. :) It needs to be satisfied before it sits down. :P
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5th Nov 2024 9:51pm
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5th Nov 2024 10:42pm
Outstanding write. Nice collaboration Fia. Always enjoy reading your stories/poems.
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6th Nov 2024 2:57am
Brilliantly written, Fia & Billy. Great collaboration. Appreciate you, both.
DL
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8th Nov 2024 00:25am
👏 👏 👏 absolutely amazing 👏 queen and deep filled with passion and desires enough to start some wild fires 🔥!!
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok queen 👸 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom queen
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok queen 👸 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom queen
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