Scarlet And Diana

That last line is hard-hitting. To bond with someone, only to find out of their demise later on must be heartbreaking.

Thanks for the comment.  Such fortune to have such a moment, although that ring of melancholy surely is there.

So touching and stimulating; great write. Hugs and love, Oral

Thanks!

Whoa, there's a lot going on here.
this is a romantic account for a threesome.  The last line is overpowering information given the size of the piece.  It's more than poignant and sort of takes your head off.  I'd love a more intimate account of the experience that somehow foreshadows the end.  

Very difficult subject matter.  Quite a challenge to poetically address this.

Very possible that it could be explored in further detail down the road.  I've revisited that evening a few times (in mind) but hadn't written about it until now.  And strangely, it was much more innocent than it might imply.  Appreciate the thoughts on this.

The moments that stand out are what shapes us. This says a whole lot about your character, my friend.  
The sensuality is top notch, but it’s the appreciation for the people and their memory that speaks volumes.
Just my take.

I really appreciate that.  Sometimes the best mode of action is to go with the flow.  I've always tried to value those I've been fortunate to connect with in whatever capacity.