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HER MAIDEN FLOWER
Her maiden flower
did not last an hour
in his company.
Her virginity
was trampled below
his body. Her 'No'
was too late, in vain.
At first came the pain,
then inner pleasure
as his full measure
settled inside her
slick wet vagina,
relishing his move
from within the groove.
Woman she became,
just another dame
to this dark Don Juan
who honoured no one,
went flitting around
for next to be found.
did not last an hour
in his company.
Her virginity
was trampled below
his body. Her 'No'
was too late, in vain.
At first came the pain,
then inner pleasure
as his full measure
settled inside her
slick wet vagina,
relishing his move
from within the groove.
Woman she became,
just another dame
to this dark Don Juan
who honoured no one,
went flitting around
for next to be found.
Published 5th Aug 2023
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5th Aug 2023 10:22am
5th Aug 2023 11:26am
Wonderful work...
(You look great my dude...
:)))
(On a side note...
Tis better to be a Poet than a Don Juan...
But then...
No True Poet could
ever be a true Don Juan...
Thought provoking...)
(You look great my dude...
:)))
(On a side note...
Tis better to be a Poet than a Don Juan...
But then...
No True Poet could
ever be a true Don Juan...
Thought provoking...)
5th Aug 2023 12:14pm
7th Aug 2023 2:34am
Very profound and vivid.
Your really painted the picture and the mood
so so well
Much respect
Naaj
Your really painted the picture and the mood
so so well
Much respect
Naaj
8th Aug 2023 2:21pm
It worries me that she said 'No.' It's in that regard that I find this read an uneasy one.
8th Aug 2023 9:18pm
8th Aug 2023 10:03pm
It is said that sometimes NO can mean YES but these are blurred lines, of course & very subjective. To paraphrase, I did like some of your descriptions however, like, 'He trampled all over her virginity.' Sounds like it was quite a rough experience! Reminds me of a saying I used to have myself when admin, where I worked, would not grant me the annual leave holiday dates I wanted. I used to say, 'They have spunked all over my leave again!' Lol. 🤣
