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The Kiss
to have your lips speak again
the native tongue of lovers,
all the murmured promises
whispered against my mouth;
to feel the sudden dig
of your fingers into my flesh,
desire confessed against your will;
I want to bathe in the revelation
the native tongue of lovers,
all the murmured promises
whispered against my mouth;
to feel the sudden dig
of your fingers into my flesh,
desire confessed against your will;
I want to bathe in the revelation
Published 24th Dec 2022
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24th Dec 2022 8:24am
24th Dec 2022 7:03pm
24th Dec 2022 10:48am
Hoi hoi
Keep on bathing, keep on falling.
There’s nothing like highs like these.
Kind regards, Gus
Keep on bathing, keep on falling.
There’s nothing like highs like these.
Kind regards, Gus
24th Dec 2022 7:04pm
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25th Dec 2022 3:37am
When a brevity words can give the reader so much, that is in my view success. Congratulations.
25th Dec 2022 3:45am
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26th Dec 2022 2:14am
I love the flow of your words as if it is a cascade and water falls in rhythmic sound. Love you all.
Hugs and kisses.
KS
Hugs and kisses.
KS
26th Dec 2022 3:07am
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27th Dec 2022 3:42pm
29th Dec 2022 1:51am
Nothing like the primal and natural emotion of falling and having those emotions run so deep.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
29th Dec 2022 2:37am
29th Dec 2022 8:42pm
Totally agree with the previous comments.
You can feel the lust and strong desire throughout.
If a poem could French kiss, then this is the one. ;)
So beautifully erotic. And those final lines are on fire.
Love it!
You can feel the lust and strong desire throughout.
If a poem could French kiss, then this is the one. ;)
So beautifully erotic. And those final lines are on fire.
Love it!
15th Jan 2023 1:53am
Thank you so much! If anyone knows about words of fire, it’s you, so I take that as quite the complement 💖
16th Jan 2023 2:19am
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