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Happy Endings.
I would love to wax poetic
the moon and stars.
How beautiful life is~
shared with my one true love,
Prince Bullshit.
That’s not what happened
that’s not who I became.
I’m not soft and huggable.
Life taught me not to trust,
and I believed it with
ferocious willingness.
Far from being all in,
I’m completely out.
My purse contents:
credit card,
passport,
lipstick.
The color~
“Fuck You”.
the moon and stars.
How beautiful life is~
shared with my one true love,
Prince Bullshit.
That’s not what happened
that’s not who I became.
I’m not soft and huggable.
Life taught me not to trust,
and I believed it with
ferocious willingness.
Far from being all in,
I’m completely out.
My purse contents:
credit card,
passport,
lipstick.
The color~
“Fuck You”.
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Re. Happy Endings.
Damn, Honoria.
I love you.
I love this epic poem.
Period.
No holds barred, tell it like it is with that special witty essence only you bring... and you brought it extraordinarily well!
Thank you for your bold beautiful share.
🌹 - 💙
I love you.
I love this epic poem.
Period.
No holds barred, tell it like it is with that special witty essence only you bring... and you brought it extraordinarily well!
Thank you for your bold beautiful share.
🌹 - 💙
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26th Jun 2022 7:23pm
Dear BV,
❤️ Right back at ya!
Wonderfully uplifting response that totally lightened my burden today. I can’t thank you enough for such a great comment and RL add. If I had a mic I’d drop it😊 H🌷
❤️ Right back at ya!
Wonderfully uplifting response that totally lightened my burden today. I can’t thank you enough for such a great comment and RL add. If I had a mic I’d drop it😊 H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
26th Jun 2022 6:13am
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26th Jun 2022 7:25pm
Dear F,
Ah, good, then my job here is done. 😊
Thank you so much for your comment and RL add. Truly, I’m honored. Xx
H🌷
Ah, good, then my job here is done. 😊
Thank you so much for your comment and RL add. Truly, I’m honored. Xx
H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
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26th Jun 2022 6:54am
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26th Jun 2022 7:28pm
Dear S,
Thank you very kindly for your wonderful comment. “Packed with venom” love it! 😊 I’m grateful for your read and support today. Thank you again. H🌷
Thank you very kindly for your wonderful comment. “Packed with venom” love it! 😊 I’m grateful for your read and support today. Thank you again. H🌷
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
26th Jun 2022 7:31pm
Dear R,
LOL. Your delightful comment has me feeling quite puffed up and empowered. Thank you so much! Xo
H🌷
LOL. Your delightful comment has me feeling quite puffed up and empowered. Thank you so much! Xo
H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
26th Jun 2022 10:46am
There's always Bourbon and Trouble down my way when you need shelter from trying to be good....
Box Heads available as well to soothe your needs
Quality smackdown
BIG LIKE
Box Heads available as well to soothe your needs
Quality smackdown
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
26th Jun 2022 7:35pm
Dear PS,
I’m touched and smiling by that gracious offer and don’t be surprised when one of these days i actually show up with rocks glass in hand. 😊🥃 Thank you very much for your lovely offer, wonderful comment and generous RL add. Xx
H🌷
I’m touched and smiling by that gracious offer and don’t be surprised when one of these days i actually show up with rocks glass in hand. 😊🥃 Thank you very much for your lovely offer, wonderful comment and generous RL add. Xx
H🌷
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
26th Jun 2022 7:39pm
Dear R,
Agreed. A leopard will always be a leopard. I’m so appreciative of your thoughtful comment, generous RL add and your visit today. Smiles all around. Thank you. H🌷
Agreed. A leopard will always be a leopard. I’m so appreciative of your thoughtful comment, generous RL add and your visit today. Smiles all around. Thank you. H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
26th Jun 2022 4:52pm
I love this beyond reason. So relatable, and expressed in the perfect tone.
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26th Jun 2022 7:41pm
Dear PD,
Wow! Thank you so much for such an awesome comment and generous RL add. While I’m sorry it’s relatable I’m excited you caught the “tone” because there was a “tone” 😉 Thank you again. H🌷
Wow! Thank you so much for such an awesome comment and generous RL add. While I’m sorry it’s relatable I’m excited you caught the “tone” because there was a “tone” 😉 Thank you again. H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
26th Jun 2022 8:24pm
Hi H!
Love all of the punches in this amiga.
My kinda of woman. You are amazing and you should always expect amazing.
Hell yeah - make him prove it -and if not -
Fuck that dude!!
Love ya on so many levels:)
Love all of the punches in this amiga.
My kinda of woman. You are amazing and you should always expect amazing.
Hell yeah - make him prove it -and if not -
Fuck that dude!!
Love ya on so many levels:)
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
27th Jun 2022 4:47am
Dear A,
LOL! “fuck that dude”. Totally awesome. Some days I simply don’t have it in me to deal. Yesterday was one of those days. But your lovely comment and RL add was just the ticket. Xo thank you! H🌷
LOL! “fuck that dude”. Totally awesome. Some days I simply don’t have it in me to deal. Yesterday was one of those days. But your lovely comment and RL add was just the ticket. Xo thank you! H🌷
Re: Re. Happy Endings.
27th Jun 2022 4:50am
Dear T,
Double bam thank you!! 😊 such a lovely comment. Double treat of the RL add. Made my day. Thank you so much! H🌷
Double bam thank you!! 😊 such a lovely comment. Double treat of the RL add. Made my day. Thank you so much! H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
27th Jun 2022 1:55am
Ouch! Please don't hit me with that purse!
Some women carry a handgun in their purse. Yet methinks yours is far more lethal.
Good to see you posting stuff! Most awesome too.
P.s. We're friends, right? No purse!
Some women carry a handgun in their purse. Yet methinks yours is far more lethal.
Good to see you posting stuff! Most awesome too.
P.s. We're friends, right? No purse!
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
27th Jun 2022 4:56am
Dear S,
LOL. No. No guns. Only because they revoked my permit. Dag nabit!
Thank you kindly for the RL list and wonderful comment. And yes, we’re friends. I’m not going to hurt you…promise…really…sort of…H🌷
LOL. No. No guns. Only because they revoked my permit. Dag nabit!
Thank you kindly for the RL list and wonderful comment. And yes, we’re friends. I’m not going to hurt you…promise…really…sort of…H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
27th Jun 2022 3:29am
I don't even care what shade that is, and I don't really wear lipstick, but I'd wear that one.
Love the "here's who I am, no fucks to give you" vibe of this one. It's straightforward and so very human. Really well written.
Love the "here's who I am, no fucks to give you" vibe of this one. It's straightforward and so very human. Really well written.
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
27th Jun 2022 5:07am
Dear PS,
Well today is your lucky day because I have an extra tube I can give you of this shade 😉. Thank you very much for this wonderful comment and RL list. I’m flattered and grateful beyond measure. H🌷
Well today is your lucky day because I have an extra tube I can give you of this shade 😉. Thank you very much for this wonderful comment and RL list. I’m flattered and grateful beyond measure. H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
27th Jun 2022 2:28pm
Dear H 🌹
Love this .. powerfully profound, hard hitting in all the right places . I love that shade of lipstick and wear it proudly.
Big hat tip! 💋
JeJe 🦋
Love this .. powerfully profound, hard hitting in all the right places . I love that shade of lipstick and wear it proudly.
Big hat tip! 💋
JeJe 🦋
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
28th Jun 2022 4:59am
Dear JJ,
Well this certainly brought a smile to my face. My guess is this shade of lipstick looks fabulous on you. 😊
Thank you very much for this wonderful comment and RL add. I’m truly honored and very grateful. X
H🌷
Well this certainly brought a smile to my face. My guess is this shade of lipstick looks fabulous on you. 😊
Thank you very much for this wonderful comment and RL add. I’m truly honored and very grateful. X
H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
27th Jun 2022 6:48pm
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28th Jun 2022 5:02am
Dear LJ,
It seems to be a shade that goes with everything. 💄
Thank you very much for your kind comment and including this on your RL list. I really appreciate the honor and am so flattered. Thank you again. H🌷
It seems to be a shade that goes with everything. 💄
Thank you very much for your kind comment and including this on your RL list. I really appreciate the honor and am so flattered. Thank you again. H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
29th Jun 2022 8:44pm
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30th Jun 2022 2:41am
Dear L,
Thank you kindly for the lovely comment and RL add. As always I enjoy your visits. H🌷
Thank you kindly for the lovely comment and RL add. As always I enjoy your visits. H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
4th Jul 2022 6:03am
I loved the structure and pacing of this poem. It didn't need to go too long, quickly got to the point yet with the feeling of a lot of time narratively taking place.
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
26th Jul 2022 6:19pm
Dear S,
Thank you for your wonderful comment. I really appreciate your thoughts on this and glad you felt it didn’t ramble on. I’m very grateful for your constant support. H🌷
Thank you for your wonderful comment. I really appreciate your thoughts on this and glad you felt it didn’t ramble on. I’m very grateful for your constant support. H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
4th Jul 2022 9:29am
A fine ranting poem and you expressed in a strong sharp way. For many the prince charming thing is bs yeah you're not alone. Kudos and keep writing!
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
26th Jul 2022 6:21pm
Dear Z,
Thank you for your read and thoughtful comment. I’m very appreciative and grateful to you.
H🌷
Thank you for your read and thoughtful comment. I’m very appreciative and grateful to you.
H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
31st Jul 2022 1:55am
That second stanza and the last line came out of nowhere for me.
It's a damn good poem.
Amazing stuff H.
It's a damn good poem.
Amazing stuff H.
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
31st Jul 2022 5:49am
Dear W,
Thank you very mightily for this lovely comment and generous RL add. I’m psyched this had an element of surprise for you. I like to keep my peeps on their toes 😉
Thank you again for the wonderful comment. H🌷
Thank you very mightily for this lovely comment and generous RL add. I’m psyched this had an element of surprise for you. I like to keep my peeps on their toes 😉
Thank you again for the wonderful comment. H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
7th Aug 2022 2:40pm
Wow I like how you stay 100 in this piece... two thumbs up for great ink! :D
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
8th Aug 2022 1:08am
Dear MV,
Thank you very much for this wonderful comment. I’m very flattered. You’ve made my night. 😊
H🌷
Thank you very much for this wonderful comment. I’m very flattered. You’ve made my night. 😊
H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
11th Aug 2022 6:32pm
Dearest, Honoria🌹
Pray I be not, dear lady, yon royal pile o' poop 🤠 You;re still loveable/huggable to this chaotic prince. I have felt this way, on a daily basis of late, "Far from being all in,
I’m completely out."
Brava, sweet goddess poet💕
Pray I be not, dear lady, yon royal pile o' poop 🤠 You;re still loveable/huggable to this chaotic prince. I have felt this way, on a daily basis of late, "Far from being all in,
I’m completely out."
Brava, sweet goddess poet💕
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
12th Aug 2022 1:39am
Dear GW,
“ yon royal pile o' poop” of my god this is the single funniest and best response ever! I’m still laughing.
I am sorry though, that you’re feeling more out than in. As a fellow “outer” I can totally relate. I think we have to keep moving forward and eventually we’ll get back in. I’m hoping anyway. Thank you so much for making me laugh today with this awesome comment and sweet RL add. I’m eternally grateful. H🌷
“ yon royal pile o' poop” of my god this is the single funniest and best response ever! I’m still laughing.
I am sorry though, that you’re feeling more out than in. As a fellow “outer” I can totally relate. I think we have to keep moving forward and eventually we’ll get back in. I’m hoping anyway. Thank you so much for making me laugh today with this awesome comment and sweet RL add. I’m eternally grateful. H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
20th Aug 2022 7:38pm
being all in on being completely out is how I found a voice - seems like the same might be true for you. this poem is so unique, and originals are awe inspiring in this dimension. there's so much BS that brutal honesty is now medicine.
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
21st Aug 2022 2:02am
Dear N,
I would concur, I had to get completely out to find that lost voice. It’s been a trip and I’m glad for it. And let’s not get me started on all the bs in the world 🙄😉
Thank you so much for your lovely and thoughtful comments. I’m truly grateful. H🌷
I would concur, I had to get completely out to find that lost voice. It’s been a trip and I’m glad for it. And let’s not get me started on all the bs in the world 🙄😉
Thank you so much for your lovely and thoughtful comments. I’m truly grateful. H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
4th Sep 2022 10:47pm
So no Prince Charming huh?
Doesn’t sound like you need him anyway.
Oh btw I’d like a shirt in that color have
any idea where I could find one?
Love the in your face of this write.
Keith
Doesn’t sound like you need him anyway.
Oh btw I’d like a shirt in that color have
any idea where I could find one?
Love the in your face of this write.
Keith
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Re. Happy Endings.
4th Sep 2022 10:47pm
So no Prince Charming huh?
Doesn’t sound like you need him anyway.
Oh btw I’d like a shirt in that color have
any idea where I could find one?
Love the in your face of this write.
Keith
Doesn’t sound like you need him anyway.
Oh btw I’d like a shirt in that color have
any idea where I could find one?
Love the in your face of this write.
Keith
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Re: Re. Happy Endings.
5th Sep 2022 3:18am
Dear K,
Thank you for your wonderful comment. It was just the ticket tonight to make me smile.
(You can find the shirt in that particular hue on “don’t be a dupe.com” 😉)
Thank you again. H🌷
Thank you for your wonderful comment. It was just the ticket tonight to make me smile.
(You can find the shirt in that particular hue on “don’t be a dupe.com” 😉)
Thank you again. H🌷
Re. Happy Endings.
9th Dec 2022 11:52pm
The switch in v.2 makes the pitch of the poem and carries through to the end without a glitch. Nicely done.
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10th Dec 2022 4:53am
Dear J,
What an awesome surprise! I’m so glad to see you! I hope you and V are well. Thank you very much for this lovely comment. I’m glad for the observation of the write. It was a bit saucy for my normal boo hoo, woe is to me stuff. H🌷
What an awesome surprise! I’m so glad to see you! I hope you and V are well. Thank you very much for this lovely comment. I’m glad for the observation of the write. It was a bit saucy for my normal boo hoo, woe is to me stuff. H🌷
Re: Re. Happy Endings.
10th Dec 2022 6:53pm
You have introduced to the world the colour of 'fuck you' - which is an awesome contribution to the continued evolution of human-kind.
Me & V are recovering from boomeranging to each other some flu bug with nasty cough attached. Today is first day we begin to feel 'normal' again; thank you for asking.
Meanwhile, before getting ill I managed to fit 140/210 windows on my new dome green-house. Pic at the bottom of page 37 on Forums/Speakeasy/Things you've made, which I think is here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/speakeasy/read/11128/540/
Hope you're doing o.k too - you have many fans on DUP and it is well-deserved. Look forward to reading your next write. Best wishes for the coming season of 'good cheer' - hope it is so for you, - Josh :))
Me & V are recovering from boomeranging to each other some flu bug with nasty cough attached. Today is first day we begin to feel 'normal' again; thank you for asking.
Meanwhile, before getting ill I managed to fit 140/210 windows on my new dome green-house. Pic at the bottom of page 37 on Forums/Speakeasy/Things you've made, which I think is here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/speakeasy/read/11128/540/
Hope you're doing o.k too - you have many fans on DUP and it is well-deserved. Look forward to reading your next write. Best wishes for the coming season of 'good cheer' - hope it is so for you, - Josh :))
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