Denouement~(a senryú)

delightful amid its intensity

I am so very glad you enjoyed, Tim. It means a lot that you've taken the time....  
 I have a serious enjoyment (bordering fetish) of senryú and haiku... So much so, that it creates an immense thrill to try to string together a poem from 17 syllables that can really truly evoke emotion... the kind, like I know I like to read ... THAT... drives my brain's pleasure centers, wild!.. lol...I think it goes hand in hand with all my other kinks....lol... *wink  

It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B

felt the tremors from here
got me fire blanket ready just in the fire follows

lmao.... 😂 😂
🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥
Thanks, Colin.... I am giggling 🤭 in reverence of your lovely thoughts. It makes my naughty side smile that devilish grin 😈, knowing that you felt the heat! I am terrifically humbled and all kinds of deliciously delighted that you, with all that your masterfully penned senryú has taught me along my journey, are so taken by my attempt to swelter!

How incredibly cool!! 😎.

All my gratitude and thanks, dear friend
🌹-💙
B

Shower time phew that was hot gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x

Now that's what I LOVE to read, dear Ron. I am giddy, by this truly beautiful and heated response..I'm so glad, happy, stoked that you enjoyed.... Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for the generous list add, I'm a lucky lady!!

Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹-💙
B

Orgasmic.  .love it. L

Indeed, Lawrence!!
Thanks for the lovely visit... - 🌹


—B

So much said with so few words Lady, does it get any better. Freaking tight piece

I do absolutely love the challenge of trying to evoke heady, immense emotion within the restriction of 17 syllables.... To me, there's something additionally erotic, in doing so.... I guess I'm a little bit strange that way... lol.

Thanks so much for reading and your yummy comments, Me.
It's a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B

I really relish these titillating comments, Tim .... Ohhh yess, you absolutely get it ... Thanks for the read, the list add and all your support.... It's always a true joy...

Much love,
🌹 - 💙
B

Enjoy orgasmic bliss.  Keep on writing.

You're absolutely correct!!
Thanks Francisco.
🌹 - B

Dearest, Lady Blue  
This is a true erotic feast for the senses. I can feel every orgasmic tremor and hear the corresponding, deeply satisfied moans and perhaps hedonic epithet. It even conjured some long remembered flavor and fragrance. Bravisima, diosa guapisima🌹🐻💞🐰

Thanks for the read, BB. I'm glad you enjoyed it and that it brought back cherished erotic memories.... That's a true compliment. It's so very nice to see you on my page.... You were severely missed.


Best regards,
🌹 - B
x

Un dénouement avec beaucoup de ooooooohs (and cream?)

Yes, the culmination of perfection oral mastery and specifically delving techniques of digital delightments.... An ending of all endings!!
*Wink


Thanks for the visit, R
Much obliged - 🌹
💙 - B

I like the concept of oral mastery.  As with a 6 and a 9, perhaps?  That you like to enjoy at times?   Kisses, Robert.

beautiful Blue this is powerfully sensual
it's funny it appears we are on the same wavelength
I just posted mine I loved the intensity and passion here❤

Ohhh,lovely Brenda!... How your words wash over me with the best feelings of sisterhood and the poignant sweetness of understanding.... I can't thank you enough for that, it means the world to me. I will definitely be on my way to read your poem, that's for sure.... They always, always draw me in with your gorgeous phrasing and unique creativity.... Some of my favorites!

I loved seeing you and I wholly appreciate the generous list add....

I'm sure I'll see you soon; much love your way
✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - B

I just experienced multiple denouements after reading this work (snicker, snicker).


hugs,
buddhakitty.

(Hee hee hee 😈)
🏆<-------Your trophy for best comment of the month!!! *wink



.... just THE best, bk
(Thx for the generous list add)
🌹 - 💙
xo
B

That senryu so aptly captions what is going on in the picture.

Well that's truly awesome, Solomon. Thanks, it's nice to know that I found a photo that worked so well...👍🏻  


Much obliged, my friend 🙏🏻

I hope you are doing well -
🌹 - B

Well if you want an honest clitique....

This is like a bullet, the sudden impact goes deep.  Well thought out!
It probably takes more work, to complete something totally with less, like this, than the rambling stuff like I do.  Applause!

Hey there, S ;)
Your comments really hit into the heart of why I love and have such affinity for senryú and haiku. It's taken a while for me to learn how to operate my thinking to fit within 17 syllables. I am totally humbled by just how much harder it was (and still is) than I would have ever figured, to write a decent senryú that makes me feel like I've really connected emotionally. I'm absolutely hooked by the challenge that presents; so I take your lovely comments to heart, deeply. Thank you so much for such incredible sentimentsy, it's extremely meaningful to me.

I am beyond delighted that you enjoyed reading and found it impactful!!

Warm regards,
🌹 - B

PS:  I readily admit that I am a visual creature.  I notice everything!  So when these erotic/artistic pictures are added as headers, it makes a good lead-in to where you want the reader to follow, mental image wise.
Good choice.

I am such a visual person that I sometimes take longer find a specific image to accompany my poems than it took to write the poem itself.... lol...
So I fully appreciate you noticing that, in this instance, S! That's definitely smiling inducing, my friend 🙏🏻

Thanks again and it's always a pleasure ✨
🌹-B
x

Sounds like intense squirting to me. I always love a good pussy bath. Wet and nasty.

Bahahahaha!! .... Omg, 💦💦  
That's the beauty of subjectivity and oh how I adore that in art... Plus, It takes a very talented partner to elicit such a spray down.... lol.... I've not been so recently fortunate...... I look at an experience like that like a Bigfoot sighting... Rare and close to impossible.... Haha.... Yet, once in a great while.... Maaaaybe..... *wink  
 
It's always such pleasurable fun, to see you, CS  
😎 - You're cool AF, my friend  
 
🌹 - 💙  
B  
 

Sensual. You said so much in so little words. 🌹Awesome, dear Blue.

Hey there, Grace :)
That's such a truly awesome comment, which sincerely means a lot to me; as senryú and haiku are so very near and dear to my heart.  

I am deeply appreciative 🙏🏻  

Thanks for the pleasurable visit... love seeing you 🦋  

🌹 - B
 x

Dear BV,

Ooo la la and fa la la la la! This gem reminded me of the Tootsie pop commercial centuries ago… how many licks to the center of the lolly? Three.
How many syllables to achieve bliss? Seventeen. Well oiled and finely tuned madame! H🌷

There she is!! 👀 🕵🏻‍♂️
Whew! ... You had me worried you left... and I was almost about to ball up in the fetal position, never to be the same again! .. Thank goodness....😌
Needless to say, it's really good to see you 🦋
You were missed.. you were! - (hugs)....

Now—to business... lol

Ohhh ABSOLUTELY 👍🏻 - I love that old commercial that owl slightly sings.. 🎶 1.... 🎶... 2 🎶...3!!!—
*crunch*... I adored that comparison, H. Made me smile, fondly.... This ol' gal, still has it in her! .... hahaha... (no pun intended! ... 😏😂 ).

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading; all my humble gratitude and deep appreciation for the kind words and generous RL add.


Hope you are doing well - 💙
🌹- B

Darker evening--
Night blooming cereus spreads
Its fragrant spell.

Wondrous aroma
'tis delicate sweet wafture
Night-time's.... 'come hither'




🌵 - 🌸
x

Spent blooms fall in sleep--
Expectations disappear,
And moonlight wavers.

Rousing from slumber
the light of day, gently fuels
coaxing.... tender buds


🌹🌸🌷💮🥀🌺🌻🏵️🌼

Are you talking about, oh! (clutching my pearls)
I see the themes...
You're leaving a lot of folks here smiling.
Wonderful work blue.

Ohhh how I adore your pearl clutching! .... lol... It makes me feel like I've accomplished my goal, so so well... Much thanks for that and the giggle, Walter.  

I hope those smiles leave spent and satisfied!!... *wink  

Your comments always uplift, in appreciation of the work, and I am sincerely thankful for that, you and all your kind visits you bestow. - 🙏🏻  

Happy Thanksgiving, to you and yours!
🌹 - 🥧
B
x

I have recently started to travel again for my employer and I don't sleep well because of that fact. This poem, this senryu is reason enough to want to continue to stay awake and discover.

Very nice comments, MN
I am delighted that you enjoyed and that you find my senryú pleasurable.... Thank you.


🌹 - B

Nice piece..I'm new here and my question is are we only supposed to drop spicy pieces after hours..real question lol

Welcome to DUP... Thanks for the kind words!

No, you can write whatever you want, whenever you want!

Enjoy yourself -
🌹 - B

. . . And, alas, he just came. . .

In
Her
Face.

This comment is a reminder of just how truly potent and deeply penetrative words can be.. Oh, the exquisite arousal- just by the stroke of a pen... How it leaves the imagination to go wild with wonder...
*wink

Thank you for sending me into a joyously filled evening with mischief, surely in store! 😈
haha
🌹 - B
x

nice word...i might need to ogle it...haha.

lol.... ohh my, please do.... ha!
*wink



Thank you for stopping by, dear poet 🙏
🌹 - B
x

Strong and intense - your juices dripping from the blooming rose aa taste devine

Thank you for reading and for the admiring of honesty intensity....
🌹