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My hand is in your blood
My hand is in your blood.
Oh, how exciting it is!
Catch my breath -
It gives birth to the fire of madness.
Nails and bites digging deep.
Traces of blood on the bed,
As a result of cruel amusements.
And on your desired body
Two shallow wounds are visible.
Pleasure and pain in them
You want to take over
My fantasies of vice.
I know it's hard to resist,
But we have to wait until your
transformation is done.
Oh, how exciting it is!
Catch my breath -
It gives birth to the fire of madness.
Nails and bites digging deep.
Traces of blood on the bed,
As a result of cruel amusements.
And on your desired body
Two shallow wounds are visible.
Pleasure and pain in them
You want to take over
My fantasies of vice.
I know it's hard to resist,
But we have to wait until your
transformation is done.
Published 30th Sep 2021
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
30th Sep 2021 10:37pm
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30th Sep 2021 10:50pm
Sometimes you just get so excited that stuff happens 🩸, BP. Can I really be blamed for biting or clawing. ;) Still I hope you liked it. 🦇🪦⚰️⛓️
30th Sep 2021 10:59pm
30th Sep 2021 11:19pm
In the throes of excitement and passion can you really blame 'her' for being a vampire. ;) Oh yes! nails, teeth, and sometimes a bit of blood. 🩸 I love the hotness Tim🔥. 🦇🪦⚰️⛓️
30th Sep 2021 11:09pm
30th Sep 2021 11:17pm
You know it Ron. Originally this was just a BDSM write but it fit to well with vampires especially with Halloween around the corner so I had to go there. ;) I am really glad you could feel the pain and pleasure. 🩸🦇🪦⚰️⛓️
30th Sep 2021 11:38pm
30th Sep 2021 11:39pm
I knew you would understand 🩸, Francisco. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. 🦇🪦⚰️⛓️
30th Sep 2021 11:55pm
This is a great Halloween piece, and the pic goes perfectly with this piece. The turning, just to say when your prey is so much more than another meal. When there is so many more needs to be satiated, really tight work Lil X
1st Oct 2021 00:45am
Hey I_IS_ME, I know you appreciate a good Halloween piece so that makes me really happy! So many more needs to be fulfilled... I love turning someone into a lover of bites and nails. 🩸 ;) Have you been turned yet? Thank you so much for reading and your thoughts. (and love getting a tight work). 🦇🪦⚰️⛓️
1st Oct 2021 00:44am
1st Oct 2021 00:53am
Some chances pay off big time my dear PS. ;) Biting and clawing 🩸 just means you are doing something very right!!! Oh yes! to get very excited...🦇🪦⚰️⛓️
1st Oct 2021 9:22am
I've always had a soft spot for vampire poetry 😁 my user name was from a Dracula. Great write, friend.
1st Oct 2021 12:46pm
Hey DC! I do love vampires... and drinking blood. 🩸 ;) I have needs. Thank you so much for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 🦇🪦⚰️⛓️
2nd Oct 2021 4:44am
Dear K,
Outside the romance of vampires (which I find very sexy in a macabre way. They’re always so suave and sophisticated) the plane of passion is enviable when you don’t have it on this level. I need me a vamp man! 😉
H🌷
Outside the romance of vampires (which I find very sexy in a macabre way. They’re always so suave and sophisticated) the plane of passion is enviable when you don’t have it on this level. I need me a vamp man! 😉
H🌷
2nd Oct 2021 11:25am
Ah yes! how can you resist the romance of vampires... ;) We all need a little blood 🩸 every now and then. Some biting and clawing definitely shows a certain level of excitement. Now go get you that vamp man! ;) 🦇🪦⚰️⛓️
Nice one Kristina, the victim becomes hers so willingly, waiting for transformation.
Hot write.
Hot write.
19th Oct 2021 1:46pm
Oh yes! the allure of a vampire is irresistible. So many willing victims desiring nothing more than to be transformed in her carnal lust and desires. I am always happy to heat things up. ;) 🦇🪦⚰️⛓️
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
14th Nov 2021 1:51am
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14th Nov 2021 2:55am
Hey Ted. Thank you so much for looking back for one with fewer comments to read; that is very sweet. X And I love your appreciation of this piece. Stark, straight honesty is something I know. :) I will definitely check out the story of the geisha, sounds very interesting and I really appreciate you sharing that with me. I am so happy you enjoyed it. 🦇🪦⚰️⛓️
