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drive.
to look back
upon this
particular
highway
of my
marred
and
battered
but
pseudo
picturesque
with all
of it's genuine
roadside charms
like dancing girls
lost in flowers
upon ruffian arms
or all those places
that change
your character's
ranges
yeah--
you know the ones
we've all been there
when you're driving along
to that particular song
letting the breeze
tickle those baby hairs just so,
Ohh—
that
fucking
cool
flow
ya, know?...
you definitely know
'highway hypnosis'
is what
we all called it
whenever the haze
grew
and it Grew
and it GREW
the calming night skies
slow the dew covered lies
as I ride,
and how it
permeates
dissolving
deep
seeded
pains
with each
mile
gained
'till finally
at last
it's all
but an echo
of a weirdly
wandering
past ...
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 10th Mar 2021
Author's Note
©Blu2021
Windows down, driving without purpose or care, listening to a favorite playlist...like free therapy.....
Windows down, driving without purpose or care, listening to a favorite playlist...like free therapy.....
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Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 3:12am
my drive is
Is my imahmgination
Headphones blaring
shutting out thecworld
Is my imahmgination
Headphones blaring
shutting out thecworld
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Re: Re. drive.
Almost the same... lol... accept i get the wind 🍃 in my hair and no one can hear me singing at the top of my lungs... hahaha
Ty, C
I appreciate the read and the comments
💜
xoxo
Ty, C
I appreciate the read and the comments
💜
xoxo
Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 3:38am
Now you got listening to Def Lepord's pour some sugar on me. Great poem. We need to take a drive together and do some crazy things. Keep on writing
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Re: Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 3:57am
hahaha... Once upon a time, Def Leppard would have been blaring, maybe... nowadays it's more Avett brothers or a throw back to Journey's Greatest Hits... lol...Ty for reading
🌹
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Re: Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 4:01am
How about I wanna sex you up or I'll make love to you by Boyz II Men. You are a hot sexy beautiful smart woman.
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Re: Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 4:11am
lol... I appreciate your compliments but we're friends so I'd be listening to kick ass driving songs.. me thinks... lol.... Talking Heads or Prince... 😂
Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 3:50am
nothing beats the combo of movement at speed and immersive music.
Loved the images both this one and one on the NoPoo thread.
Loved the images both this one and one on the NoPoo thread.
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Re: Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 3:54am
Ty so much for the generous list add and the kind words, cf... I truly could drive and drive, some nights... If there were no such thing as traffic - ohh swoon... lol.. I couldn't decide on either pic... so I figured one here and one on NoPoo.. lol.. score!
I appreciate you, my friend 🙏
🌹🚙 ☺
x
I appreciate you, my friend 🙏
🌹🚙 ☺
x
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Re: Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 5:43am
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Re: Re. drive.
Ohhh cassettes!! I had just started to learn to drive when cars were being switched over from cassette tape radios to CD players. The old car that I started out driving with had a total badass cassette player (for the times... lol). Those are some fond memories for me as well.
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your reminiscing, which sparked my own! Very cool... ;)
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your reminiscing, which sparked my own! Very cool... ;)
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Re. drive.
Bravissima, Goddess Blue❣❣ This poem is, to this reader, a flight of fancy that describes so well one of the perfectly satisfying, simple pleasures in life. I love this beautifully sensual pictures this passage conjures,
"roadside charms
like dancing girls
lost in flowers
upon ruffian arms"
This passage is so hip, groovy, and jazzy,
"Ohh—
that
fucking
cool
flow
ya, know?...
[I] definitely know"
All in all a fun homerun, sweet BB🌹🐻💋🐻💋🐻🌹
"roadside charms
like dancing girls
lost in flowers
upon ruffian arms"
This passage is so hip, groovy, and jazzy,
"Ohh—
that
fucking
cool
flow
ya, know?...
[I] definitely know"
All in all a fun homerun, sweet BB🌹🐻💋🐻💋🐻🌹
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Re: Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 5:33pm
lol... Ohhh BB, you get my little eccentricities hahaha. Those "little hip, groovy, jazzy" lines.... yes- an intended idea of music playing on the radio, emanating that jazzy feeling as you're driving... were my thoughts.... Hee hee ... kinda corny but then again, I am a bit when I'm driving like that. Singing full blast to my favorite music, trying to alleviate some sort of stress or just having a blast...
one my favorite things..I appreciate you reading and leaving your insightfulness, my friend
A fun home run, is a nice thing to say... thanks.
warmest regards, BB! 🐻🌹🐻
xo
one my favorite things..I appreciate you reading and leaving your insightfulness, my friend
A fun home run, is a nice thing to say... thanks.
warmest regards, BB! 🐻🌹🐻
xo
Re: Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 5:49pm
You've captured me perfectly when you say, "singing full blast" I do this all the time and it does help relieve stress. It satisfies my compliance with "dance like nobody's watching."
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Re. drive.
Anonymous
10th Mar 2021 10:33am
Man. I’d give anything to be in a car and just go somewhere else at the moment. This lockdown is a bit of a shitter indeed.
I love that you’ve included so many little details from the dancing baby hairs to the hypnosis haze. It all made this feel very much like the scene of a movie.
I too very much enjoyed reading this on the NoPoo thread. Thank you for sharing.
-M
(Who has hijacked a car and is now gone, gone, gone... 😊)
I love that you’ve included so many little details from the dancing baby hairs to the hypnosis haze. It all made this feel very much like the scene of a movie.
I too very much enjoyed reading this on the NoPoo thread. Thank you for sharing.
-M
(Who has hijacked a car and is now gone, gone, gone... 😊)
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Re: Re. drive.
I am picturing you Thelma & Louise style, driving with that sense of freedom, minus the horrible over the cliff ending, of course ... 😂
Damn.. to not even be able to hit the road and get a small semblance of that freedom feeling, is a complete shitter, indeed. Yet, in the scheme of things, your own contributions to your (yes, I empathize that it's tiresome) lockdowns have essentially saved lives. Whereas FL is chock full of people who just don't give a shit. We don't have a mandatory lockdown, we're surrounded by people who have decided not to participate in mask-wearing nor social distancing, now (or any longer) because 'Murica! . sigh... Tradeoffs being what they are, I'd much rather be missing long drives too... Then deal with "anti truthers" (sheesh!) which equal additional weeks and weeks of worry, fear, and continued mental and physical health stressors..... can I come with in your stolen fantasy car?? hahaha 😂
I really appreciate your thoughtful comments, Missy. The reading list add, too :)
Here's to you taking a long drive when days ahead aren't locked away... .
🌹
🚙 💜
x
Damn.. to not even be able to hit the road and get a small semblance of that freedom feeling, is a complete shitter, indeed. Yet, in the scheme of things, your own contributions to your (yes, I empathize that it's tiresome) lockdowns have essentially saved lives. Whereas FL is chock full of people who just don't give a shit. We don't have a mandatory lockdown, we're surrounded by people who have decided not to participate in mask-wearing nor social distancing, now (or any longer) because 'Murica! . sigh... Tradeoffs being what they are, I'd much rather be missing long drives too... Then deal with "anti truthers" (sheesh!) which equal additional weeks and weeks of worry, fear, and continued mental and physical health stressors..... can I come with in your stolen fantasy car?? hahaha 😂
I really appreciate your thoughtful comments, Missy. The reading list add, too :)
Here's to you taking a long drive when days ahead aren't locked away... .
🌹
🚙 💜
x
Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 12:56pm
I miss the solitude of jumping in my car, my 80s metal ringing in my ears, the fuck the world attitude
God I miss the open road
Its not the same in my electric wheelchair lol
Love and light
Ron x
God I miss the open road
Its not the same in my electric wheelchair lol
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 6:05pm
Ahhhh I can almost hear the Whitesnake playing on the radio.. Yesssss! Fuck the world attitude, indeed! I would drive us both (even on that wrong, right side of road of yours!!)... 💜.... just to have you relive that awesome freedom. I definitely understand exactly what you were saying, my friend 🙏
Ty for reading, leaving those thoughts, the list add and your loveliness, Ron
💜
feel better
xo
Ty for reading, leaving those thoughts, the list add and your loveliness, Ron
💜
feel better
xo
Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 1:12pm
Re: Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 6:41pm
Ty, my lovely new friend, I'm glad you think so.
Appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your remarks.
🌹
xo
Appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your remarks.
🌹
xo
Re: Re. drive.
Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 8:04pm
Driving and music ... Two favorites ... With the right music we go faster ... When I turn the music off ya better hold on ... Better with the right mix tape(playlist) lol ... Nice ... Bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 8:09pm
Ohhh my dear... you totally get it.... I can feel the breeze.... Ty for those terrific comments, dearest FeNyX
🌹
xo
🌹
xo
Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 11:22pm
Hahaha, at times distance truly is like therapy. But the weird thing is that we were considering a similar piece but was moulding it with our mind. We're kinda happy that we didn't write one judging by this piece. This is really tight Lady
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Re: Re. drive.
10th Mar 2021 11:34pm
lol... Hi there, Me.
It's very nice to see you, my friend. I enjoy your insightful comments, very much.
Darn it... about your own piece, I would really like to read it, so maybe you'll reconsider writing it.
Thank you for the kind words, and your "really tight"... it means a lot to me :)
glad you enjoyed reading...
Much love,
🌹
xo
It's very nice to see you, my friend. I enjoy your insightful comments, very much.
Darn it... about your own piece, I would really like to read it, so maybe you'll reconsider writing it.
Thank you for the kind words, and your "really tight"... it means a lot to me :)
glad you enjoyed reading...
Much love,
🌹
xo
Re. drive.
11th Mar 2021 1:59am
Not sure why I got a nostalgic feeling out of this, as if I was traveling through the mid 80s or some past I can't recall. Either way, this was terrific Blue, you conjure up great images and emotions with these wonderful spills.
Great work.
Great work.
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Re: Re. drive.
21st Mar 2021 7:16am
I got that vibe writing it Walter. I learned to drive at the very tail end of the 80's... but it's that cassette tape player memory... lol... Terrific drives with the radio up, winds blowing....Ahh... so much fun. I thank you for reading and leaving these comments for me to flashback to!!!
I'm so happy you enjoyed it and grateful for you
Much love,
🌹 🚙
x
I'm so happy you enjoyed it and grateful for you
Much love,
🌹 🚙
x
Re. drive.
11th Mar 2021 4:31am
Re: Re. drive.
Awww... thank you so much for reading and and sharing your thoughts, Remy... sorry I missed this comment... My bad... I am so happy you liked this one, it's one of my favorites... it's the sense of freedom, I think...
Anyway, I really appreciate you and your visits
🌹
Much love,
-B
Anyway, I really appreciate you and your visits
🌹
Much love,
-B
Re. drive.
12th Mar 2021 5:48am
I realised that I have exposed a piece of how my ADD works from this poem and it has made me read some of yours again.
This one particularly, shows how I need to hear me read this and interpret the written word into a spoken reading to understand how I see things differently with my ADD.
This made me think back to other poets here and I see how the connection begins to work for me and moves me to write and allows me to get why some are on my poets list and that some don't make it.
Thank you greatly for this piece that jibes so beautifully with me.
Richard
P.S. I would love to record my reading of this so you can hear my interpretation and to comment on that
This one particularly, shows how I need to hear me read this and interpret the written word into a spoken reading to understand how I see things differently with my ADD.
This made me think back to other poets here and I see how the connection begins to work for me and moves me to write and allows me to get why some are on my poets list and that some don't make it.
Thank you greatly for this piece that jibes so beautifully with me.
Richard
P.S. I would love to record my reading of this so you can hear my interpretation and to comment on that
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Re: Re. drive.
21st Mar 2021 7:23am
Your comments are so generous and open, Richard. I thank you so much for such kindness.
I hope you're doing well and I would still love your offer of recording anytime you're able.... no worries or pressures
I truly appreciate all of your support and I'm so very happy you enjoyed this piece.
I hope to see you soon, you're always welcomed here
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
I hope you're doing well and I would still love your offer of recording anytime you're able.... no worries or pressures
I truly appreciate all of your support and I'm so very happy you enjoyed this piece.
I hope to see you soon, you're always welcomed here
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
Re: Re. drive.
25th Mar 2021 11:38am
I am sorry that I have not completed the recording, I have been having a few issues lately and am just sorting the last few things out.
I will get this done in a couple of days.
Richard
I will get this done in a couple of days.
Richard
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Re: Re. drive.
25th Mar 2021 11:43am
No worries at all, Richard!
Life has a way of getting in the way... no rush, my friend. Whenever you're able... or even if you're not, it's the thought that counts.
Well wishes, your way!
✨ 💫🌟✨
best,
🌹 -B
Life has a way of getting in the way... no rush, my friend. Whenever you're able... or even if you're not, it's the thought that counts.
Well wishes, your way!
✨ 💫🌟✨
best,
🌹 -B
Re. drive.
25th Mar 2021 10:52pm
Ooooh yeeaah.... give me the open road & just the right music and I could go all night...
Love the reading! Love the writing! And from your comments, I think I want your playlist, too. 🙂❤
Love the reading! Love the writing! And from your comments, I think I want your playlist, too. 🙂❤
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Re: Re. drive.
26th Mar 2021 6:13am
Ohhh yeah!! lk.
🛣️🚗🚙
It's absolutely some of my favorite 'therapy'..
Driving and singing along... it's so relaxing!!
I love that you stopped by, I haven't seen you in a while... I hope all is well with you, k
We'll totally share Playlist! You got that right! 🎶
I appreciate your thoughtful comments
Please, don't be a stranger!
🌹
xo
-B
🛣️🚗🚙
It's absolutely some of my favorite 'therapy'..
Driving and singing along... it's so relaxing!!
I love that you stopped by, I haven't seen you in a while... I hope all is well with you, k
We'll totally share Playlist! You got that right! 🎶
I appreciate your thoughtful comments
Please, don't be a stranger!
🌹
xo
-B
Re: Re. drive.
26th Mar 2021 11:57am
I'm always here.... quietly reading. 🙂 Life doesn't allow as much time to engage as I would like.
(Or, maybe I'm just saving up all my words for the NaPo challenge!)
(Or, maybe I'm just saving up all my words for the NaPo challenge!)
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Re. drive.
25th Mar 2021 11:10pm
Re: Re. drive.
26th Mar 2021 6:09am
Re. drive.
25th Mar 2021 11:58pm
Re: Re. drive.
26th Mar 2021 6:08am
🔥
Thank you for reading /listening, my friend
You're far too kind!! I appreciate the list add, too.
🚙 🛣️ 🚗
lol..
Your visits are some of my favorites!
🌹
xo
Thank you for reading /listening, my friend
You're far too kind!! I appreciate the list add, too.
🚙 🛣️ 🚗
lol..
Your visits are some of my favorites!
🌹
xo
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Re: Re. drive.
26th Mar 2021 2:01pm
You nailed it!! It's truly liberating and just soul satisfying.... yesss!!
I appreciate your very kind words, so so much.
💜
Thank you for the list add and next drive, think of me and turn up that radio and enjoy!!
🌹
xo
I appreciate your very kind words, so so much.
💜
Thank you for the list add and next drive, think of me and turn up that radio and enjoy!!
🌹
xo
Re. drive.
31st Mar 2021 00:59am
It's so free spirited and wonderful. The wanderlust for the open road, the wind in your hair, music blasting.
Your pieces, especially this one, is very revitalizing.
Nicely done Blue.
Your pieces, especially this one, is very revitalizing.
Nicely done Blue.
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Re: Re. drive.
31st Mar 2021 1:01am
Ahhh.... revitalizing!!
I will totally take that awesome comment, Wally!!
Made my night, my friend
🌹
🚙 🛣️ 🚗 🍃
xo
I will totally take that awesome comment, Wally!!
Made my night, my friend
🌹
🚙 🛣️ 🚗 🍃
xo