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the unknowing of loneliness.
i am but a single rose
my thorns plague
up and down my spine
constant scarring,
twist and curve
into a dangerous beauty
when closely a look,
to laugh
of such
devious petals
that serve
as secret conceal
'Tis you
and me
and ours—
Yes,
ours
is mutual sunshine
mixed of an earthly divine
sparking and igniting
a lonely vine
as together with you,
now two
only. for. you.
i shall climb,
with petals extended
my unfurled reaching out
to such heavens high
and softy,
so very softy
a very unlikely two,
unusual
and new to bloom
in wonderment-
O' how the wonderment
of all we knew to be true,
combine in new warmth
of perpetual sunshine
and now,
in all purpose apparent
we are but two roses
united and always.
Published 26th Nov 2020
| Edited 18th May 2021
Author's Note
©Blu2020
inspiration to celebrate a life in general
inspiration to celebrate a life in general
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26th Nov 2020 12:12pm
Har Har Har...
(hugs)
It's hidden in your next poem that you should post asap... lol..Ty for your lovely comments, my lovely friend. I appreciate you more than you know and I'm grateful for the RL add and your own affect on me, with your writing. I know you don't believe me, but it's true. Your poems are a forever impetus and awe inspiring motivation. You, (yes you) make me a better writer. If I could 'scribble' like you, I'd gladly be the happiest of poetess, yet I'm still learning and striving....
That's, where I am... searching for your (that) bar
😉
💜 💜 💜
Much love,
xoxo
-B
(hugs)
It's hidden in your next poem that you should post asap... lol..Ty for your lovely comments, my lovely friend. I appreciate you more than you know and I'm grateful for the RL add and your own affect on me, with your writing. I know you don't believe me, but it's true. Your poems are a forever impetus and awe inspiring motivation. You, (yes you) make me a better writer. If I could 'scribble' like you, I'd gladly be the happiest of poetess, yet I'm still learning and striving....
That's, where I am... searching for your (that) bar
😉
💜 💜 💜
Much love,
xoxo
-B
26th Nov 2020 12:23pm
AP is right you set a high bar there, I'd get vertigo trying to get that high
Beautiful piece
Go girl you got skilllzzzzz
Love and light
Ron x
Beautiful piece
Go girl you got skilllzzzzz
Love and light
Ron x
26th Nov 2020 12:30pm
Hee hee hee... you flatterer, you!!
Ty for reading and your thoughtful comments
I'm humbled you see something in me and that I resonate... It's such a terrific compliment.
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you're feeling a bit better today. I and sending my love and light... You hold onto to yours, just for today.
Take care of yourself!
💋
xoxo
-B
Ty for reading and your thoughtful comments
I'm humbled you see something in me and that I resonate... It's such a terrific compliment.
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you're feeling a bit better today. I and sending my love and light... You hold onto to yours, just for today.
Take care of yourself!
💋
xoxo
-B
26th Nov 2020 12:52pm
26th Nov 2020 1:38pm
26th Nov 2020 1:43pm
Honest
Vulnerable
Searching
I think your time is coming to find real romance. You’re just too good a person to walk it alone for too long ....
Believe
Breathe
X
Vulnerable
Searching
I think your time is coming to find real romance. You’re just too good a person to walk it alone for too long ....
Believe
Breathe
X
26th Nov 2020 2:14pm
Ty, PS
I'm just familiar (very) with longing...
but I appreciate the support and your kindness in thought.
💜
xoxo
B
I'm just familiar (very) with longing...
but I appreciate the support and your kindness in thought.
💜
xoxo
B
26th Nov 2020 2:35pm
This is such a beautiful write:) so much emotions expressed in such a calm and almost surreal way. I felt it even as I read it.
26th Nov 2020 2:43pm
Wow, thank you, Grace
🙏
I am so blown away by that comment and utterly thankful for it. All smiles that I was able to convey myself, even a wee bit.
appreciate you, muchly.
🌹
xo
-S
🙏
I am so blown away by that comment and utterly thankful for it. All smiles that I was able to convey myself, even a wee bit.
appreciate you, muchly.
🌹
xo
-S
26th Nov 2020 3:41pm
beautiful Blue to me this is a divine love very spiritual
so loving a write so exquisitely done 🌹
so loving a write so exquisitely done 🌹
26th Nov 2020 4:25pm
Oh my, thank you so much for that, B
Your thoughts are so lovely and utterly welcomed. I'm grateful for the RL add and as always, your gracious visit.... overwhelming
🙏 🌹 💜
xo
B
Your thoughts are so lovely and utterly welcomed. I'm grateful for the RL add and as always, your gracious visit.... overwhelming
🙏 🌹 💜
xo
B
26th Nov 2020 6:59pm
Love the sensual flow of this piece magical woven into a tapestry of liquid gold flowing through each word spoken indeed 😇🤗😎
26th Nov 2020 7:05pm
My Dear Stoney,...
Thank you for the lovely compliments and your beautiful inspirational insights. I'm grateful!
Have a wonderful day today and take care of yourself.
Much love and respect,
(and maybe a little bit of pie!.. lol )
🙏 🌹 💜 🥧
xo
-B
Thank you for the lovely compliments and your beautiful inspirational insights. I'm grateful!
Have a wonderful day today and take care of yourself.
Much love and respect,
(and maybe a little bit of pie!.. lol )
🙏 🌹 💜 🥧
xo
-B
26th Nov 2020 7:08pm
26th Nov 2020 9:09pm
The image paired with these beautiful words
Stunning blue absolutely stunning ☺️
Love it listed✍️👍🏻
Love Jackie
Happy Thanksgiving doll face 😘❤️
Stunning blue absolutely stunning ☺️
Love it listed✍️👍🏻
Love Jackie
Happy Thanksgiving doll face 😘❤️
26th Nov 2020 9:20pm
JACKIE!!
Hey there sexy lady!
I am super duper appreciative and I thank you for such awesome comments and the RL add, too.
I'm so so glad you enjoyed it. (it amazes me anyone does.... really!)
Have a terrific T-day and eat loads of yummy pie 🥧
It's my favorite!!
lol
💋
xoxo
Susan
Hey there sexy lady!
I am super duper appreciative and I thank you for such awesome comments and the RL add, too.
I'm so so glad you enjoyed it. (it amazes me anyone does.... really!)
Have a terrific T-day and eat loads of yummy pie 🥧
It's my favorite!!
lol
💋
xoxo
Susan
26th Nov 2020 10:23pm
I grow roses but I never allow them to be cut and put into dead vases...love is a beautiful thing...perhaps the only real "Truth"...powerful and poignant poem, Blue.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
27th Nov 2020 2:54am
Harry!
I must have missed your comment!
Yes, I agree completely, Love is indeed, one of the only real truths left. That honesty is such a desire
Thank you for beautiful comments, your RL and and visiting me today. Thank you muchly, my friend
💜 🌹💜🌹💜
xo
B
I must have missed your comment!
Yes, I agree completely, Love is indeed, one of the only real truths left. That honesty is such a desire
Thank you for beautiful comments, your RL and and visiting me today. Thank you muchly, my friend
💜 🌹💜🌹💜
xo
B
27th Nov 2020 3:31am
27th Nov 2020 6:51am
29th Nov 2020 00:40am
Excellent, excellent verse Blue. I loved the beauty and fragility your penned on this, one can almost sense the fragrance through these words.
Great work.
Great work.
29th Nov 2020 1:45am
Thank you so much Wally!
Just my hope, as I do love love love love my floral metaphors. I just do, I can't help it!
lol
I'm appreciative of your lovely comments!
💜 💜 💜
xoxo
B
Just my hope, as I do love love love love my floral metaphors. I just do, I can't help it!
lol
I'm appreciative of your lovely comments!
💜 💜 💜
xoxo
B
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7th Feb 2021 9:35am
I'm trying to get to all these ones you commented on but if I missed some, apologies, Danny. it's super late and I'm tired. Thank you for reading and I'm glad you're now a welcomed presence on my page. I am going to read "across the pond"...
💜
Talk soon
💜
Talk soon
