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erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
In strengthened arms of heated combust
I am yours
Completed within our divine
Ours is genuine
No contrived eye rolling diatribes
Truth in confirmation
An adored fanciful reminding slap~
as still evidentiary proof of the celebrated consensual cherished retribution
reddens and glistens
Oh, those marks bond and hold us
each pulse entrusts
and reinforces through a combination
of my need to devoted please
and your driven desire to dominate.
"Yes, Sir "germinates on my lips and wetness of immediate, is very apparent between my legs
As I force--
voice strong in an attempt not to whimper in beg
I'm all inner wry smile, as I can just barely spy,
that vein in your neck,
It deliciously bulges in urges
As we both search for our joint designated fucktastical high
Cries! Yes!!... again,
CRIES—
Ohh now reverberate,
from satiated mouth to hungry trained ears
Music of their own erotic
and in the moment,
loving hands of learned mettle
how they just know to elicit
the perfect amount of yearned for beautiful pain
to such duel emotions
they both recognize and settle
The Yang of her Ying
in glorious performance,
A welcomed tortured symphonic
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 26th Nov 2020
Author's Note
©Blu2020
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Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
26th Nov 2020 7:45pm
Theres 🔥🔥🔥 here
Needed a fire blanket
To orotect me
From the fkaming heat
Needed a fire blanket
To orotect me
From the fkaming heat
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Re: Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
26th Nov 2020 8:55pm
Ohh Colin, I want to shield your (not so innocent) eyes.... lmao... haha 😂
Ty for enjoying my sensuality.
I am grateful for the list add, too
💜
xoxo
(hugs)
Ty for enjoying my sensuality.
I am grateful for the list add, too
💜
xoxo
(hugs)
Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
26th Nov 2020 7:45pm
The is the perfect give and take, the completion of both incomplete, satiation meeting need, Hahaha, freaking steamy tight
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Re: Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
26th Nov 2020 8:56pm
Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
26th Nov 2020 8:13pm
Ummm Wow! Nice little tour into the erotic depths of a beautiful soul... very well done Miss Blue... as always ⚘🔥
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Re: Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
My sensuality, as you might see it through a keyhole... lol. Ty for sharing your thoughts, adding me to your RL and mostly, for seeing your lovely flowers, Eli, that always lets me instantly know that there's someone out there that gets me.
🌹
xo
B
🌹
xo
B
Re: Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
26th Nov 2020 9:04pm
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26th Nov 2020 9:07pm
Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
26th Nov 2020 8:36pm
Ok what are you eating or who are you eating. Just when I think your work cant possibly get better you smash one out of the park
You are getting better, stronger by each piece. Absolutely in awe of the standard of poetry you are submitting
This one needs a fire warning
Love it you legend, you wordsmith my friend
Love and light
Ron xx
You are getting better, stronger by each piece. Absolutely in awe of the standard of poetry you are submitting
This one needs a fire warning
Love it you legend, you wordsmith my friend
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
My beautiful soul.... thank you for reading and your thoughtful comments. This is my first sensual write that I've been avoiding, since losing my (potential) new Dom. Wow, it's almost been a few (three) months now, if not more!! I must figure out what or who I am and this was a good start. Ty for reading and enjoying it. I'm ecstatic you did.
💜 💜 💜 💜
xoxo
B
💜 💜 💜 💜
xoxo
B
Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
26th Nov 2020 10:28pm
Love it, Blue...hot...reminded me of the Nine Inch Nails song, Closer...
Through every forest
Above the trees
Within my stomach
Scraped off my knees
I drink the honey
Inside your hive
You are the reason
I stay alive
🙏 Harry
Through every forest
Above the trees
Within my stomach
Scraped off my knees
I drink the honey
Inside your hive
You are the reason
I stay alive
🙏 Harry
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Re: Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
Thank you Harry
I love that song and NIN.. Trent Reznor just does something to me... lol
I'll take that compliment and run with it, Oh HELL YEAH... lmao..
You have excellent taste, my lovely friend
💜
xoxo
Ty for reading and sharing your thoughts
S
I love that song and NIN.. Trent Reznor just does something to me... lol
I'll take that compliment and run with it, Oh HELL YEAH... lmao..
You have excellent taste, my lovely friend
💜
xoxo
Ty for reading and sharing your thoughts
S
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26th Nov 2020 11:47pm
Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
27th Nov 2020 3:16am
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28th Nov 2020 10:51am
Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
27th Nov 2020 11:06am
Re: Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
27th Nov 2020 4:25pm
Grace,
Thank you for reading and you're absolutely right.
I hope your day is showing you a bit of kindness and I'm still thinking of you.
💜
hugs
xo
B
Thank you for reading and you're absolutely right.
I hope your day is showing you a bit of kindness and I'm still thinking of you.
💜
hugs
xo
B
Re: Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
27th Nov 2020 5:02pm
Grief is breathing at the moment. Hit you hold you and sometimes it embraces you but maybe it will grow kinder soon. Thank you so much kind B. Hugs, poetess.
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27th Nov 2020 7:43pm
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Re: Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
27th Nov 2020 7:46pm
Tucked in tight.
💜
(you must have been peeking)
Thank you, Tim
I'm lucky to receive your much welcomed visits
🌹
xo
B
💜
(you must have been peeking)
Thank you, Tim
I'm lucky to receive your much welcomed visits
🌹
xo
B
Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
28th Nov 2020 7:22am
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28th Nov 2020 10:57am
Hee hee hee... I do my best
Ty, Jenny!
I love seeing you here and I'm so glad you visited.
Yes, I felt like hiding behind a not so incognito avatar! (naughty Blue!)
What? (she says innocently) It's just graphic art??... to anyone asking... Mwahahahaha!!
😇
Ty, Jenny!
I love seeing you here and I'm so glad you visited.
Yes, I felt like hiding behind a not so incognito avatar! (naughty Blue!)
What? (she says innocently) It's just graphic art??... to anyone asking... Mwahahahaha!!
😇
Re: Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
28th Nov 2020 3:38pm
Velvety blue too :) it was a good choice, has nice emphasis... of color 😊
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28th Nov 2020 3:40pm
Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
29th Nov 2020 1:02am
Truly a torrid and tantalizing write Blue.
The " "Yes sir" " line was just the epitome of fantasy and erotic dialogue most of seek.
Outstanding work.
The " "Yes sir" " line was just the epitome of fantasy and erotic dialogue most of seek.
Outstanding work.
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Re: Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
29th Nov 2020 1:40am
Wally,
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I adore your visits.
I'm honored that you take the time to read and give me your thoughtful response.
I'm extremely lucky 🍀 Your visits allow me to grow and become a better writer with each attempt I make. Yours is motivation that I'm on the right path. I'm so appreciative.
💜
xoxo
B
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I adore your visits.
I'm honored that you take the time to read and give me your thoughtful response.
I'm extremely lucky 🍀 Your visits allow me to grow and become a better writer with each attempt I make. Yours is motivation that I'm on the right path. I'm so appreciative.
💜
xoxo
B
Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
Wow! ....this sexy, provocative, and hottttt write "Hits" all the erotic "Marks'' for an arousing read. This sensuous "Submission" is pure seduction. It is truly a stimulating experience throughout the entire read and sooooooo easy to get ''Tied Up" in your incredible impassioned words. I raise my glass to this deliciously kinky creation and salute you, "Bottom's Up"!!!!
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Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
The darkness of this erotic symphonic (a non diatribe) has an ah beautiful taste to it's textural structure of line for line release to me. This darkness there of is ah captivatingly eloquence. Grateful ass job on this piece Velvety.
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Re. erotic symphonic (a non diatribe)
5th Sep 2022 4:03am
A symphony of dominance and submission that resounds strong and passionate as a Bach fugue played by the Canadian brass. I felt the sensuality here like a candle in the dark burning deep and bright. The slaps were intimated subtly yet unmistakably. Each expression of his dominance played out beautifully and with tonalities of total nova with your timbre gathering strength to please your master. Truly a dom sub poem to remember.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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