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Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
In cartoons
if you run over the edge of a cliff
you will not fall until you notice your mistake
therefore it is best not to notice mistakes
since cartoons are never wrong.
if you run over the edge of a cliff
you will not fall until you notice your mistake
therefore it is best not to notice mistakes
since cartoons are never wrong.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 23rd Aug 2020
| Edited 10th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.05 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/393588-gogyoshi-poem-nr-05-feigning-sane/
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.07 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/398038-gogyoshi-poem-nr-08-for-sale-by-auction/
(photo credit: andrei-ciobanu-0oVJ8VcvP8g-unsplash)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/393588-gogyoshi-poem-nr-05-feigning-sane/
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.07 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/398038-gogyoshi-poem-nr-08-for-sale-by-auction/
(photo credit: andrei-ciobanu-0oVJ8VcvP8g-unsplash)
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Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
23rd Aug 2020 10:24pm
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24th Aug 2020 9:06pm
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
23rd Aug 2020 10:48pm
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24th Aug 2020 9:08pm
It seems circular logic -- and now no logic -- is sufficient in the current environment to carry politicians a long way :))
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
Damn! And we elected the
sumbitch anyway...love it Josh
.
I looked this up,
...never knew there was such a thing...looks like we will find a label for everything... Ely
sumbitch anyway...love it Josh
.
I looked this up,
...never knew there was such a thing...looks like we will find a label for everything... Ely
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
24th Aug 2020 9:19pm
...and thank you for the RL too. "Sumbitch" -- new to me -- just been looking it up too. Yep, politicians get away with failures that engineers never would. Now we need a single word for "scary and perverse American politics in the run-up to an election"; how about "wehavetotellanevenbiggerlieinordertogetawaywithitthistime" ?
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
24th Aug 2020 00:01am
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24th Aug 2020 9:20pm
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
24th Aug 2020 3:28am
Dear J,
An absolute gem. Just keep on truckin. Wonderfully perceptive with such sweet humor. I love this write. H🌷
An absolute gem. Just keep on truckin. Wonderfully perceptive with such sweet humor. I love this write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
24th Aug 2020 9:26pm
Thank you Honoria, and for the RL; glad you liked it. I have a number of keep-on-truckin' Gogyoshis lined up -- so watch this space -- though the next poem will be different on 30th Aug to commemorate a very special 50th anniversary (clue: think England's answer to Woodstock) :))
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
24th Aug 2020 6:43pm
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
24th Aug 2020 9:35pm
Ah, excellent reminder, one of my favourites ..., RoadRunner ... & coyote (what could possibly go wrong? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0R66Fvhx0vQ )
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
25th Aug 2020 3:14pm
This made me smile I don't ever watch TV but when I do it's always cartoons give thanks to you Josh...🙌😎
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
25th Aug 2020 3:58pm
Hi, thank you for commenting. I haven't had a T.V in the house myself for over 25 years but I remember it from olden times, and the 'roadrunner' cartoons were one of my faves :))
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25th Aug 2020 4:30pm
Yes and they have real meaning you're very welcome my Brotha Peace...
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2020 5:47pm
Josh, do you remember the "A Set of Five Short Poems" comp you hosted?
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10886/
I think you are on the verge of implementing a new form : the "Go-gogyoshi"
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10886/
I think you are on the verge of implementing a new form : the "Go-gogyoshi"
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
26th Aug 2020 9:50pm
Thank you -- I've just checked out my old comp to remind myself --go-go-gogyoshis, now there's an idea.
The thing about gogyoshis is the lack of restriction (5 lines long, that's it, no other requirements) which puts the onus on the writer to actually say something worth reading in a layout that's agreeable. So I guess the lack of form is a sneaky way of putting pressure on the writer to come up with something alluring to make the freedom given him/her seen to have been used well.
The thing about gogyoshis is the lack of restriction (5 lines long, that's it, no other requirements) which puts the onus on the writer to actually say something worth reading in a layout that's agreeable. So I guess the lack of form is a sneaky way of putting pressure on the writer to come up with something alluring to make the freedom given him/her seen to have been used well.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
26th Aug 2020 3:03pm
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26th Aug 2020 9:54pm
Thank you NuBorn, and for the RL. Glad you loved it.
I reckon too that the logic is about as dubious as destroying whole economies and the remnants of democracy, based on media hype of a nasty flu virus, -- which maybe goes to show our world is somewhat cartoonish itself.
I reckon too that the logic is about as dubious as destroying whole economies and the remnants of democracy, based on media hype of a nasty flu virus, -- which maybe goes to show our world is somewhat cartoonish itself.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
26th Aug 2020 5:37pm
I love when someone sees deeper meaning in something that is overlooked everyday. 💖🙏
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
26th Aug 2020 9:58pm
Thank you Daniel. I guess poets are always striving to 'see' the overlooked as source-material for the next poem ... and occasionally one gets lucky :))
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
27th Aug 2020 10:15pm
and yet everyone else sees the mistake but aren't able to tell them ... cool poem, Josh.
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
30th Aug 2020 9:45pm
"and yet everyone else sees the mistake but aren't able to tell them ... " ... bit like today's varied global political responses to covid-flu-bug :)) Thanks for commenting AB, all the best, Josh.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
28th Aug 2020 8:44pm
Cartoons also sometimes break the fourth wall before they plunge.
Interesting thought Josh, for that split second awareness becomes so clear...and funny.
Excellent write.
Interesting thought Josh, for that split second awareness becomes so clear...and funny.
Excellent write.
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.06 A Drop of Logic
30th Aug 2020 9:49pm
"break the fourth wall" ... that's a very neat (conceptual) way of putting it, thank you. Glad you liked it.