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Grief of a Good Samaritan
He challenged a broken heart,
in the end his was shattered
none cared.
Neither could he,
not anymore.
The pieces were everywhere.
What a fucking mess.
If only he had walked away.
in the end his was shattered
none cared.
Neither could he,
not anymore.
The pieces were everywhere.
What a fucking mess.
If only he had walked away.
Published 18th Apr 2020
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18th Apr 2020 3:07am
Sometimes we hurt ourselves trying to help another...
Powerful write, Nikki. Thanks for sharing!
Powerful write, Nikki. Thanks for sharing!
18th Apr 2020 3:16am
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18th Apr 2020 6:30am
Dear N,
What heartbreak in this write. It does sometimes seem the one trying to do good gets the short end of the stick. Makes you wonder where is the justice? Very thoughtful piece. H🌷
What heartbreak in this write. It does sometimes seem the one trying to do good gets the short end of the stick. Makes you wonder where is the justice? Very thoughtful piece. H🌷
18th Apr 2020 7:18am
Ahh ... To help another truly, one should expect to lose or be hurt ... While hoping for the best ... I have more hidden scars from things such as these than physical ... I still try ... Blessed write ... Bless and love ...
