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he stood there
mounds of rocks
roaring water
rushing behind him
she offered to take his photo
making him stay there
a little longer than necessary
tall drink of water
and she was suddenly
thirsty
mounds of rocks
roaring water
rushing behind him
she offered to take his photo
making him stay there
a little longer than necessary
tall drink of water
and she was suddenly
thirsty
Published 15th Mar 2020
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15th Mar 2020 7:08pm
15th Mar 2020 7:13pm
Hehee, tall drink of water indeed :D
Extremely witty Je
This tie-in was flawless
Extremely witty Je
This tie-in was flawless
Anonymous
15th Mar 2020 8:13pm
I love the imagery you paint 😊
15th Mar 2020 10:07pm
15th Mar 2020 11:34pm
17th Mar 2020 6:59pm
Striking, creative visuals.....My Friend! This is an intriguing word-painting, with such a clever twist of word-play!
Closing my eyes, i could clearly imagine the imagery of this scene...especially the final stanza!
(......And now, i cannot help but wonder, did she fancy quenching her thirst, in slow sips...or in larger gulps/swallows? ;)
Couldn't help but smile with this one!
Closing my eyes, i could clearly imagine the imagery of this scene...especially the final stanza!
(......And now, i cannot help but wonder, did she fancy quenching her thirst, in slow sips...or in larger gulps/swallows? ;)
Couldn't help but smile with this one!
