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Dawn
I sit here and watch the tide
Along the midnight beach
I feel the longing deep inside
But death seems out of reach
My mind is cloaked in darkened shades
The shadows of my soul
My lust for life too quickly fades
As I watch the waters roll
But the dawn finally appears
And my dismal thoughts take flight
No more dread and hidden fears
Gone with the morning light.
Along the midnight beach
I feel the longing deep inside
But death seems out of reach
My mind is cloaked in darkened shades
The shadows of my soul
My lust for life too quickly fades
As I watch the waters roll
But the dawn finally appears
And my dismal thoughts take flight
No more dread and hidden fears
Gone with the morning light.
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29th Feb 2020 1:52am
Great poem. I really like how you use the day/night to describe your emotions. The sea(waves) is also a nice symbol for the fluid passing of life(emotional states)
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Anonymous
29th Feb 2020 2:17am
Hey Crow.......I luv this.......so many times things don’t seem so bad in the morning.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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