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It's all over now baby I'm blue

 
These feelings ebb and flow  
like a tidal wave  
crashing its crescendo hard  
Fourty five minutes curled fetal  
on the floor  
another thirty sprawled on the sofa  
ceasing suddenly as if the wells empty  
 
Baby can't you see me falling  
baby you know im slowly dying  
here alone  
Take it break it  
You got it if it makes you feel good  
the scent of your ghost still lingers in this home  
 
Tangled up in blue  
after each crash  
often feel some new  
energetic elation  
mixed with a cocktail of despair
not sure though how to ride it  
next crashing of the crydalwave arrives
Written by Carpe_Noctem
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