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Sugar Sweet Suicide
ice cream and chocolates
moist fruitcakes, marzipan
creamy topped puddings
cinnamon and meringue
cheese pizzas
sugar powdered doughnuts
fried chicken and pie
hamburgers
and different flavoured soda
delicious sweetness
pushing me down
gently and sweetly
into the ground.
Published 17th Apr 2017
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17th Apr 2017 10:43pm
18th Apr 2017 6:56pm
17th Apr 2017 11:55pm
WOW the reality of ur words by the end is
both ironically true n painful but I'm seriously guilty of all u listed lol
both ironically true n painful but I'm seriously guilty of all u listed lol
18th Apr 2017 6:59pm
Indeed Poetik...some pleasure has serious repercussions. Thanks so much for reading me as always.
18th Apr 2017 1:16am
18th Apr 2017 7:01pm
18th Apr 2017 2:46am
Eat till we're beat! Lol
Just what an always hungry pregnant chick needed to read!😂
Enjoyable read
Just what an always hungry pregnant chick needed to read!😂
Enjoyable read
18th Apr 2017 7:05pm
KittyFH, eating is one of the pleasure of life 😀🍩....Hey! Wow! You are? Congratulations!
18th Apr 2017 9:28pm
There are certainly worse ways to go. Butter cream cake is what may do me in eventually. Appetizing and fun write Grace!
19th Apr 2017 6:55am
16th Aug 2023 3:13pm
Hey: we're all gonna die one day, so might as well enjoy a bit of it. PS: I note this is also for a comp which has to do with diabetes, I live with diabetes, but won't let it control my life entirely. Regards, Robert.
16th Aug 2023 9:55pm
Hi Robert yes it was for a competition a long time ago. It didn't win though. Thanks for reading and commenting. You're very kind.
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