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I Hope & Pray
That lovers' quarrels ev'rywhere
Subside in peace when all is through
Enlightenment to have a care
To know between of what is true.
To echo through the fam'ilies
A strong belief of loving strides
To be there for each other please
And give their all in earnest tries.
From neighborhoods in which we live
Leave arms & minds wide open for
The chance to welcome and to give
To those who'll bless you at the door.
Then more will help communities
To gather villages as one
To teach the young to help them free
The windows to let in the sun.
Who's rays will cross all bound'aries
And banish borderlines from Earth
So just like fish & birds & trees
We'll all have the same place of birth.
And as for me for the new year
I think I've covered all there is
My resolutions listed here
'Cept one more for my special "his".
Published 4th Jan 2017
| Edited 25th Dec 2017
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4th Jan 2017 7:26am
This most definitely deserved to win the comp, an outstanding piece, magnificent. Congrats on a well-deserved first place.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
Aahh dear Anon, my evening is becoming night as my energies flag from a busy, productive day, and makes me a sweet place to rest as your wonderful reaction & comment echo around my tired mind. I'm grateful for your appreciation & enjoyment. --Jadey
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4th Jan 2017 9:20am
My dearest Celestial sister, your welcome insight always shines down upon this humble creature. With grateful thanks for coming to visit & read with me.
4th Jan 2017 12:58pm
Yes - what a delightful read - what gracious thoughts, hopes and prayers for the year - trophy well deserved!
tommy
tommy
4th Jan 2017 5:34pm
4th Jan 2017 1:04pm
Such beautiful wishes and hopes you've shared for the future, Jade! Definitely a winner in this one. :)
Willow
Willow
4th Jan 2017 5:39pm
And supporting that lives of every kind, around the globe, matter. Most gracious missive from you, dear Willow, with gratitude. -Jadey🌾
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5th Jan 2017 5:52am
Thank you so much, my Zodiac sister, for your gracious embrace & express - how lovely you are.
-Jade♎️
-Jade♎️
4th Jan 2017 10:18pm
Fine work, more than deserving of the prize. Beautifully worded and rhymed, the hopes and prayers sustained. Thank you for this!
5th Jan 2017 6:23am
Ohh my dear crowfly friend, you're more than welcome, and it's I who is the thankful one for you sharing your thoughts & appreciation with me.
5th Jan 2017 5:38am
Definitely a winner indeed, glad I picked this one
And after Jadey told me what made her inspired to write it, it brought tears to my eyes after I heard it.
She truly is a sweetheart and I truly loved this entry/poem.
Amazing job well done 👏🏼👍🏼❤️😊
And after Jadey told me what made her inspired to write it, it brought tears to my eyes after I heard it.
She truly is a sweetheart and I truly loved this entry/poem.
Amazing job well done 👏🏼👍🏼❤️😊
Anonymous
8th Jan 2017 1:53am
Awe Jade......this is a heart felt ink......so many wishes you care for others to be blessed.......shows the gentle soul you are within.......precious thoughts......purple luv & hugs xo :)
8th Jan 2017 7:36am
Oh gosh, dear flower, every time I've tried to respond to your beautiful words, I become speechless. Perhaps admitting this is the best thanks & gratitude I can offer you. And may your new year be truly blessed. --ever Jade xo
