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Came With the Wind
Scarlett languid in the sun
Sipping her fifth mint julep
Gentlemen callers at her feet
Lick the ground she walks on
She strikes them with her parasol
Returns to the plantation
A rogue awaits in her boudoir
A suave sadist known as Rhett
He flicks the lash across her breasts
Not breaking perfect skin
Scarlett blushes, prepared to swoon
But Rhett frankly doesn't give a damn
The bodice is the first to go
Then her petticoat is in tatters
Scarlett stands pale and naked
Her pride gone with the slightest breeze
Rhett provides hell to the southern belle
The lash applied, and then his tongue
Scarlett emits her "fiddle-dee-dee"
And makes up her mind to come
When Atlanta burns they take their leave
Disdaining further war
That ill wind is blowing from the north
But tomorrow, she insists, is another day.
Sipping her fifth mint julep
Gentlemen callers at her feet
Lick the ground she walks on
She strikes them with her parasol
Returns to the plantation
A rogue awaits in her boudoir
A suave sadist known as Rhett
He flicks the lash across her breasts
Not breaking perfect skin
Scarlett blushes, prepared to swoon
But Rhett frankly doesn't give a damn
The bodice is the first to go
Then her petticoat is in tatters
Scarlett stands pale and naked
Her pride gone with the slightest breeze
Rhett provides hell to the southern belle
The lash applied, and then his tongue
Scarlett emits her "fiddle-dee-dee"
And makes up her mind to come
When Atlanta burns they take their leave
Disdaining further war
That ill wind is blowing from the north
But tomorrow, she insists, is another day.
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1st Oct 2016 7:30pm
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1st Oct 2016 7:43pm
Thanks Jade. I get a kick out of messing with movie classics, sexing them up. I'm going to stay away from "The Exorcist."
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1st Oct 2016 7:54pm
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1st Oct 2016 8:13pm
Sir Crow I love this naughty take on the classic Gone With The Wind tale so sexy ;)
love Crim
love Crim
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Re. Came With the Wind
1st Oct 2016 10:51pm
One of my favorite movies of time. Loved this Crow. I wanted more! <3
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Re. Came With the Wind
2nd Oct 2016 1:26am
Scarlett stands pale and naked
Her pride gone with the slightest breeze
Crow missed you like crazy
Sweet kisses and warmezt hugs
Her pride gone with the slightest breeze
Crow missed you like crazy
Sweet kisses and warmezt hugs
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Re. Came With the Wind
2nd Oct 2016 7:45am
This write made me laugh out loud!
I've read a lot since I'm here, but never came across something like this...
Truly very creative and unique! Thoroughly enjoyed :-)
I've read a lot since I'm here, but never came across something like this...
Truly very creative and unique! Thoroughly enjoyed :-)
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Re. Came With the Wind
2nd Oct 2016 7:14pm
LOL at your 'Fifty Shades of Grey' take on Gone With The Wind. Favourite line, for the rhyme within it:
Rhett provides hell to the southern belle
Rhett provides hell to the southern belle
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Re. Came With the Wind
3rd Oct 2016 00:43am
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Anonymous
3rd Oct 2016 3:55am
Hey Crow......luvin this.......you're talent is beyond the sunrise.......always enjoy your creativeness......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Came With the Wind
3rd Oct 2016 3:57am
...something so sexy and nostalgic about this ink, with a pinch of smiles to make it very entertaining. :)
Crow, I love your mind and the way it creates....
Crow, I love your mind and the way it creates....
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Re. Came With the Wind
5th Oct 2016 00:33am
it came, & just as quick was gone.
a rogue is always there when a woman needs to be kissed...
a rogue is always there when a woman needs to be kissed...
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2016 00:52am
O you naughty, clever man;)
This had me smiling, blushing, and truly in complete awe of your talent.
Amazing Crow twist, on a classic 💓
Brilliant ink.
This had me smiling, blushing, and truly in complete awe of your talent.
Amazing Crow twist, on a classic 💓
Brilliant ink.
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