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Woman On Fire
When I'm happy I laugh loudly, with my entire body and my head back
with my mouth open big, sometimes I'll
close one eye, usually the left one
If I hold your hand my fingers will slide in between yours, then close
and I'll kiss each finger tip incase you forgot how my lips felt
When I say I love you I do it without disguise
I love you, your thoughts
your silence
your wetness
your passion
your flaws
If I could be behind you, I'd give you warmth
and receive your warmth
wrapped up around you with my body while looking into the distance of our future
Seeing my heart float from my chest to yours
If you're ever covered in darkness my soul will be your sunshine, giving you light
whenever you need to see
My sex will be yours
clean
dirty
quick
slow sex
I am your woman, I'll build you up everyday until my last breath, until my voice has no sound, until I see you again
with my mouth open big, sometimes I'll
close one eye, usually the left one
If I hold your hand my fingers will slide in between yours, then close
and I'll kiss each finger tip incase you forgot how my lips felt
When I say I love you I do it without disguise
I love you, your thoughts
your silence
your wetness
your passion
your flaws
If I could be behind you, I'd give you warmth
and receive your warmth
wrapped up around you with my body while looking into the distance of our future
Seeing my heart float from my chest to yours
If you're ever covered in darkness my soul will be your sunshine, giving you light
whenever you need to see
My sex will be yours
clean
dirty
quick
slow sex
I am your woman, I'll build you up everyday until my last breath, until my voice has no sound, until I see you again
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Re. Woman On Fire
23rd Feb 2016 4:46am
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Re. Woman On Fire
23rd Feb 2016 4:53am
can feel the big lustiness in your poem, Tommie.
covered like a soft, warm blanket...
covered like a soft, warm blanket...
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24th Feb 2016 1:13am
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Re. Woman On Fire
23rd Feb 2016 6:58pm
He's a very lucky man and I hope he realizes it Tommie. You seem to be a woman of many moods, all of them fascinating. This one is uplifting, romantic and lightly erotic. Fine work!
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24th Feb 2016 1:15am
I'm not sure if he does or not Crow.
Thank you so much for reading me and your wonderful comment! 😊
Thank you so much for reading me and your wonderful comment! 😊
Re. Woman On Fire
23rd Feb 2016 7:27pm
beautiful Tommie such a lovely woman you are..
I would love to hear your laugh :)
he is as Sir Crow said a lucky man to have such a jewel as you to love him..
beautiful inking..
love Brenda
I would love to hear your laugh :)
he is as Sir Crow said a lucky man to have such a jewel as you to love him..
beautiful inking..
love Brenda
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24th Feb 2016 1:18am
People have said they love my laugh and yet people have been embarrassed of it.
Thank you Brenda for your kindness 😊
Thank you Brenda for your kindness 😊
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24th Feb 2016 1:19am
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Re. Woman On Fire
24th Feb 2016 7:04pm
Love the sentiment in this piece Tommie, the depth of love is vibrantly conveyed in your passionate and dedicated words. Jealous indeed!
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25th Feb 2016 1:06pm
Re. Woman On Fire
25th Feb 2016 7:48pm
Love it. A wonderful expression of how a woman in love wants her man to know how she feels and what she's willing to do because of her love
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