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"PottyMouth..."
'Potty Mouth...'
...No seriously,
isn't that more
sensitive than
sayin, "Damn...
Yo motherfuckin'
breath smells like,
a cross between
a long neglected
'Port-A-Potty'
n' a Sewage Plant!?"
Thought so Lmao...
...No seriously,
isn't that more
sensitive than
sayin, "Damn...
Yo motherfuckin'
breath smells like,
a cross between
a long neglected
'Port-A-Potty'
n' a Sewage Plant!?"
Thought so Lmao...
Published 22nd Aug 2015
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22nd Aug 2015 2:47pm
22nd Aug 2015 10:42pm
22nd Aug 2015 2:55pm
22nd Aug 2015 10:51pm
22nd Aug 2015 4:04pm
"Yo motherfuckin'
breath smells like,
a cross between
a long neglected
'Port-A-Potty'
n' a Sewage Plant!?"
"Holy Shit, rancid breath Man."
Seriously Poetic, I've been on
job sites where You're talking
to someone and their breath
is FUCKING RANK.
You keep backing away from
them but they want to stay
right in Your Goddamned face.
This write is HILARIOUS though
Poetic.
Thumbs up... Pan; aka, Dantalion
breath smells like,
a cross between
a long neglected
'Port-A-Potty'
n' a Sewage Plant!?"
"Holy Shit, rancid breath Man."
Seriously Poetic, I've been on
job sites where You're talking
to someone and their breath
is FUCKING RANK.
You keep backing away from
them but they want to stay
right in Your Goddamned face.
This write is HILARIOUS though
Poetic.
Thumbs up... Pan; aka, Dantalion
22nd Aug 2015 10:53pm
Lmao hell yea bro you know it!! I've had that happen too, n u ain't never lie! They always wanna be all up on you, never noticing how each exhale is killing every living thing within close proximity lol... Thanks a bunch, appreciate you much bro. :)
22nd Aug 2015 5:22pm
Thanks--I really needed a good giggle this week, it's been a rough one!
And don't forget the part about how something crawled in there and died! haha!
And don't forget the part about how something crawled in there and died! haha!
22nd Aug 2015 10:55pm
Happy to give you a laugh n I'm honored by your visit... Yes I do recall the crawl up in died ref. n always thought their breath TRULY gotta bad
when that's said!! lol... Thanks so much :)
when that's said!! lol... Thanks so much :)
23rd Aug 2015 3:19am
23rd Aug 2015 11:10am
See?? I knew it was! lol...seriously, I've been unfortunate in a few 'breath assaults' n thought it was time to put it out there lol. Thanks my sweetness :)
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23rd Aug 2015 8:32pm
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23rd Aug 2015 10:40pm
And in your face they tend to get true?
lol... Thank you my friend, happy to hear from you again :)
lol... Thank you my friend, happy to hear from you again :)
23rd Aug 2015 11:28pm
haha......am still laughing....very good PM...very good....still laughing... :)
24th Aug 2015 1:24am
Yay! I made u laugh! That alone made it worth sharing, I'm a goofball at heart u know lol... Thank u for all ur support always :)
