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Platinum Rain

The platinum rain calms me down as it falls like platinum hail.
As I stare at the Folgers brown trees and smellin' my platinum vape with a maximum smell.
As I listen to Govinda's "Calm" or Chris Breezy's "Autumn Leaves" my mind leaves to Mercury.
I love the mercury colored rain as the grey dew lays down on the leaves like a patient on a stretcher during surgery.
My heart beats slow like I was abouta have surgery as I'm starin' at the platinum rain and clouds grey as a mouse.
The platinum rain sounds like rumblin' grey rattles in a house as I'm starin' at the fluorescent yellow sunlight rays through the clouds.
Forget the stress; forget the life tests; and fuck the rest.
My mind is at rest and ease as the platinum rain appease, and nothing less.
The platinum rain calms me down as it falls like platinum hail.
As I stare at the Folgers brown trees and smellin' my platinum vape with a maximum smell.
Written by JIPWriter1
Published | Edited 5th Mar 2015
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