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Diesel
Though it happened long ago,
I can feel your pain.
I am right there with you
on the day it happened.
Feeling your anguish,
feeling your hurt
your fear,your helplessness
your anger.
I'm wet with your tears,
they cover me completely,
let them fall,
I will catch them all.
I am always with you,
you will always be with me.
I can feel your pain.
I am right there with you
on the day it happened.
Feeling your anguish,
feeling your hurt
your fear,your helplessness
your anger.
I'm wet with your tears,
they cover me completely,
let them fall,
I will catch them all.
I am always with you,
you will always be with me.
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re: Re: Diesel
18th Feb 2014 11:04am
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re: Re: Diesel
18th Feb 2014 11:05am
Re: Diesel
18th Feb 2014 6:00am
To support
To share the pain
to say it's ok I'm here
quite an amazing scribe
well done Hash
well done indeed.
To share the pain
to say it's ok I'm here
quite an amazing scribe
well done Hash
well done indeed.
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18th Feb 2014 11:07am
Re: Diesel
18th Feb 2014 11:02am
Truly heartfelt. Speaks volumes about the scribe, brother. Power on Mr Hash.
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20th Feb 2014 00:46am
I can feel your pain and righteous anger here Hash.. great expression of feelings.. much love Crim
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20th Feb 2014 1:05am
Re: Diesel
1st Aug 2014 5:08pm
Ah, Hashman, luv :-* ~
This is perhaps the most intensely loving and present-in-the-moment poem I've ever read.
Absolutely, the most powerful lines in this poem for me are:
I'm wet with your tears,
they cover me completely,
let them fall,
I will catch them all.
That is it, all you have to say. You get it, and you're there forever. So, I'm thanking you too, wholeheartedly, for sharing something so deeply felt and so intimate with us all, luv. :-*
This is perhaps the most intensely loving and present-in-the-moment poem I've ever read.
Absolutely, the most powerful lines in this poem for me are:
I'm wet with your tears,
they cover me completely,
let them fall,
I will catch them all.
That is it, all you have to say. You get it, and you're there forever. So, I'm thanking you too, wholeheartedly, for sharing something so deeply felt and so intimate with us all, luv. :-*
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2nd Aug 2014 7:29pm
All my cryings Savaja...thank you for being beautiful and for your love...it feels so good (peace) :)