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Windowpane
Screaming out loud
pounding my chest
primal in the mid of night.
By the sacred fire
deep in the woods
dancing flames, rising ember's
carrying spirits to the stars.
Colors splash in my head
visions fill my mind
inside and out,
the wind talks to me
"just listen" she says.
The trees they dance with me
swaying in the breeze,
everything blends
my spirits and the wind
the flames and the stars
me and planets.
The fire is alive,
night becomes dawn
we are one
all things and me.
pounding my chest
primal in the mid of night.
By the sacred fire
deep in the woods
dancing flames, rising ember's
carrying spirits to the stars.
Colors splash in my head
visions fill my mind
inside and out,
the wind talks to me
"just listen" she says.
The trees they dance with me
swaying in the breeze,
everything blends
my spirits and the wind
the flames and the stars
me and planets.
The fire is alive,
night becomes dawn
we are one
all things and me.
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17th Feb 2014 2:21pm
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17th Feb 2014 8:19pm
Me and mars - how swell's that!
It's a captivating poem
showing motion and emotion.
Faszinating ink, Hashman!
It's a captivating poem
showing motion and emotion.
Faszinating ink, Hashman!
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re: Re: Windowpane
17th Feb 2014 11:32pm
Yes Miss Chi...every things flowing through the Windowpane (your words make me glow)...thanks :)
Re: Windowpane
17th Feb 2014 11:45pm
I envy you...
anyone screaming
and setting fires
round here gets
the boys in blue
annoyed..:)
anyone screaming
and setting fires
round here gets
the boys in blue
annoyed..:)
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re: Re: Windowpane
18th Feb 2014 00:50am
Ha,yes Sir Paul back in the 70's...youth,you remember those crazy days...it was different then...more freedom (peace)
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18th Feb 2014 10:59am
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18th Feb 2014 11:11am
That night I surely was in touch...you are welcome my friend and thank you always :)
Re: Windowpane
18th Feb 2014 2:09pm
i'll have two of whatever you're on Mister Hash. this was a feast for the senses, thoroughly enjoyed.
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18th Feb 2014 7:54pm
Re: Windowpane
13th May 2014 11:19pm
Evokes a picture of a shaman in a peyote trance, dancing around the fire, trying to heal his tribe and finding success at the break of dawn. Good write.
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14th May 2014 00:34am