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Just Passing Through
Passing through
without feeling
without touching
to see it,but not know it
to be there and miss it
to walk through
just touching the ground
never feeling the sky
to breathe the air
but not deep enough
thinking about tomorrow
like it was yesterday
waving goodbye
before I say hello.
without feeling
without touching
to see it,but not know it
to be there and miss it
to walk through
just touching the ground
never feeling the sky
to breathe the air
but not deep enough
thinking about tomorrow
like it was yesterday
waving goodbye
before I say hello.
Published 24th Jan 2014
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24th Jan 2014 7:02pm
Mind provoking wrote. Like sensing the end before the beginning. Enjoyed this. :)
24th Jan 2014 7:48pm
24th Jan 2014 7:57pm
That's interesting...like meeting your soulmate but not knowing it, passing each other in a crowded street. :) good read, Hashman.
24th Jan 2014 7:59pm
24th Jan 2014 8:02pm
25th Jan 2014 00:55am
That's a sad and painful piece. To pass by without getting in touch with the things surrounding you. Deep and thought-provoking, Hashman.
26th Jan 2014 10:43pm
