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Giddyup
That's it,all done
time to get off.
Just can't be some ordinary
everyday pony.
Need to be
something different and free
a mustang running wild.
That's why I told you
"hang on with two hands"
but you let go of one,
now it's done
ride over
no remount.
Giddyup.
time to get off.
Just can't be some ordinary
everyday pony.
Need to be
something different and free
a mustang running wild.
That's why I told you
"hang on with two hands"
but you let go of one,
now it's done
ride over
no remount.
Giddyup.
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Re: Giddyup
22nd Jan 2014 00:43am
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22nd Jan 2014 00:46am
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22nd Jan 2014 00:52am
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24th Jan 2014 4:51pm
Re: Giddyup
22nd Jan 2014 1:15am
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24th Jan 2014 4:53pm
Re: Giddyup
22nd Jan 2014 9:21am
Great read Hashman, I liked this part:
no remount.
Giddyup.
Rocking :)
no remount.
Giddyup.
Rocking :)
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Re: Giddyup
22nd Jan 2014 5:02pm
Nice! People let go so quickly, so easily forgetting that the bumpy rides can be fun times, and the make-up rides even greater.
Ride on and let a stronger one mount next time.
Ride on and let a stronger one mount next time.
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24th Jan 2014 4:56pm
Re: Giddyup
22nd Jan 2014 7:02pm
Ponies are perfect for those who prefer a gentle ride....not for those who are unable to handle the more spirited!
How unfortunate this individual failed to recognize a true Thoroughbred, Hashman!
Continue to race the wind, my friend !!
How unfortunate this individual failed to recognize a true Thoroughbred, Hashman!
Continue to race the wind, my friend !!
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24th Jan 2014 4:57pm