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FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
26th Jul 2024 2:15am
26th Jul 2024 2:15am
Algorithm Two (PG-13)
This best-selling formula is popular with guys like Rick Ross, 2Chainz, Future, Migos, Trinidad James, and a host of others.
Unlike the rap of Dr. Dre's influence, where memorable music carries the most weight in a song; flash, cash, and overdone excess are the selling points in this newer music.
Here it goes:
Look what I got
Look at what I'm gonna get
Look what you ain't got
Broke Bruther!!
I don't want your girl
But you know that she wants me
Just to prove the point
I'm gon "touch" her!!
Yeah, chump, ...
Unlike the rap of Dr. Dre's influence, where memorable music carries the most weight in a song; flash, cash, and overdone excess are the selling points in this newer music.
Here it goes:
Look what I got
Look at what I'm gonna get
Look what you ain't got
Broke Bruther!!
I don't want your girl
But you know that she wants me
Just to prove the point
I'm gon "touch" her!!
Yeah, chump, ...
#greed
#money
#music
#poverty
#sex
129 reads
4 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 1:15am
1st Apr 2024 1:15am
Practice Bars
Ya neck snaps as I grab your attention.
A head bang and a graphic direction.
My "techs clap" like an Apple convention.
Connects "hang" like a dangling necklace.
Some lawn work - "move green" like Hulk.
Got all the blue dream in bulk.
The chakra, Scooby in jolts.
Them kinds of clues lead to coke.
I'm "on the blocks" like a gutted Deville.
Still forming plots of the thuggery thrill.
My quarry rocks pay me utmost in bills.
Mind more to guap than a couple of pills.
...
A head bang and a graphic direction.
My "techs clap" like an Apple convention.
Connects "hang" like a dangling necklace.
Some lawn work - "move green" like Hulk.
Got all the blue dream in bulk.
The chakra, Scooby in jolts.
Them kinds of clues lead to coke.
I'm "on the blocks" like a gutted Deville.
Still forming plots of the thuggery thrill.
My quarry rocks pay me utmost in bills.
Mind more to guap than a couple of pills.
...
#rhyming
#lyrics
#myself
#rap
#metaphor
581 reads
5 Comments
lisa777
LisaB
LisaB
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 6:22pm
14th Dec 2024 6:22pm
Sweet Nothings that are Everything
I find myself longing for change
Yesterday is a closing door
I seek the highest mountain range
Where my heart is free to soar
Somewhere out there, where dreams come true
A thousand miles seems pretty far
I am capable now, now that I found you
To wish upon a great bright star
I knew I loved you before I met you
I knew you were waiting for me
Take my hand, take my whole life too
We were drawn together by destiny
Everybody wants to be understood
Hold on and don't shed a tear
We will have it good, the life...
Yesterday is a closing door
I seek the highest mountain range
Where my heart is free to soar
Somewhere out there, where dreams come true
A thousand miles seems pretty far
I am capable now, now that I found you
To wish upon a great bright star
I knew I loved you before I met you
I knew you were waiting for me
Take my hand, take my whole life too
We were drawn together by destiny
Everybody wants to be understood
Hold on and don't shed a tear
We will have it good, the life...
#courage
#hope
#love
72 reads
3 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
6th Nov 2018 9:59pm
6th Nov 2018 9:59pm
Danxing to DJbeJay
Might as well get sweaty girl,
here,
now, on the danxe floor
cuz the way you're grinding
makes me think your mind issss...
Might as well get sweaty girl,
here, on the dance floor,
because I think we agree
we're gonna take these sweaty bodies
Back to my place.
*Danxing was an avcidental misspell, but I left it.
**DJbeJay is my alter-ego
here,
now, on the danxe floor
cuz the way you're grinding
makes me think your mind issss...
Might as well get sweaty girl,
here, on the dance floor,
because I think we agree
we're gonna take these sweaty bodies
Back to my place.
*Danxing was an avcidental misspell, but I left it.
**DJbeJay is my alter-ego
#dance
#sensual
498 reads
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 00:48am
5th Dec 2024 00:48am
"The Machine" Short Audio Version
What is the machine but the child of our hand,
Born not of nature’s womb but thought's demand?
It grows like a child, then turns to a beast,
Its bones of steel, its hunger unleashed.
Heartbeat pounding, gears in time,
Is it our creation, or the shape of our climb?
Oh, the machine, a mirror of the soul,
A marvel, a terror, it makes us whole.
Does it reflect, or does it consume?
Is it life’s new dawn or our silent tomb?
You, a traveler from the stars afar,
Gaze at our machine, the iron...
Born not of nature’s womb but thought's demand?
It grows like a child, then turns to a beast,
Its bones of steel, its hunger unleashed.
Heartbeat pounding, gears in time,
Is it our creation, or the shape of our climb?
Oh, the machine, a mirror of the soul,
A marvel, a terror, it makes us whole.
Does it reflect, or does it consume?
Is it life’s new dawn or our silent tomb?
You, a traveler from the stars afar,
Gaze at our machine, the iron...
#lyrics
#philosophical
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LibraSoul96
Poem Published
16th Feb 2019 9:04pm
16th Feb 2019 9:04pm
Pay me my Respect
Flow so nasty and putrid like it's a pile of vomit.
I swear with patience and dedication my dreams will take off like a comet.
I got the sauce, the juice it's drippin baby
Lost soul trapped in a cold world come save me.
They say pop a percocet it numbs the pain,
But not a drug in this world that can stop me from going insane in the brain.
Can't no one control me like I'm some damn ventriloquist dummy being ridiculed for your amusement.
I swear none of you can compete with me, I mean why compete where you don't compare.
Ain't no playing fair,...
I swear with patience and dedication my dreams will take off like a comet.
I got the sauce, the juice it's drippin baby
Lost soul trapped in a cold world come save me.
They say pop a percocet it numbs the pain,
But not a drug in this world that can stop me from going insane in the brain.
Can't no one control me like I'm some damn ventriloquist dummy being ridiculed for your amusement.
I swear none of you can compete with me, I mean why compete where you don't compare.
Ain't no playing fair,...
#TruthOfLife
#rap
829 reads
2 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
25th Aug 2024 9:04pm
25th Aug 2024 9:04pm
In the Grey
I'm in the middle
of night and day
one foot in
one foot out
of my grave
I'm in the middle
of thunder and
miles of rain
where all the color
is washed away
You'll find me
in the grey
Colorblind
and that's okay
The clock
has her hands
filled with time
too busy to
pay any mind
My roots have
turned to stone
from my head
I grew a throne
to sit and wait
Weathered and dry
when it's time to die
keeping my cool
where all the color ...
of night and day
one foot in
one foot out
of my grave
I'm in the middle
of thunder and
miles of rain
where all the color
is washed away
You'll find me
in the grey
Colorblind
and that's okay
The clock
has her hands
filled with time
too busy to
pay any mind
My roots have
turned to stone
from my head
I grew a throne
to sit and wait
Weathered and dry
when it's time to die
keeping my cool
where all the color ...
#aging
#inspirational
384 reads
27 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
25th Oct 2019 12:22pm
25th Oct 2019 12:22pm
Killing The Innocent
I saved you remember?
having lost your lust for life
came back home to die
said it yourself
what is love that only flows one way
the point is it's fucked fated to die
Now you've taken my reason away
without a fucking care
what it's done to me
narcissist much?
get your fucking head out your arse
Laying here in a pool of self pity and abuse
blood where tears used to be
You sure played that hidden ace well
like a sledge hammer to the face
Now you've taken my reason away
without a fucking...
having lost your lust for life
came back home to die
said it yourself
what is love that only flows one way
the point is it's fucked fated to die
Now you've taken my reason away
without a fucking care
what it's done to me
narcissist much?
get your fucking head out your arse
Laying here in a pool of self pity and abuse
blood where tears used to be
You sure played that hidden ace well
like a sledge hammer to the face
Now you've taken my reason away
without a fucking...
#anger
#lyrics
550 reads
1 Comment
Rew
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 8:04pm
14th Feb 2024 8:04pm
The Troglodytes
The troglodytes come out at night
come out at night to play,
the troglodyte delights in night
and never comes out by day
by day and never comes out by day.
Oh, the troll and his mate
in a terrible state
in a terrible state by day,
they both sunlight hate
but never ever hesitate
to come out at night to play
to play, to come out and night to play.
Oh, The troglodyte is full of fright
so full of fright by day,
is at night such a horrible sight
he frightens the trolls away
away, he frightens the trolls...
come out at night to play,
the troglodyte delights in night
and never comes out by day
by day and never comes out by day.
Oh, the troll and his mate
in a terrible state
in a terrible state by day,
they both sunlight hate
but never ever hesitate
to come out at night to play
to play, to come out and night to play.
Oh, The troglodyte is full of fright
so full of fright by day,
is at night such a horrible sight
he frightens the trolls away
away, he frightens the trolls...
#lyrics
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