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Murk
Poem Published
13th Jul 2018 12:35pm
13th Jul 2018 12:35pm
Give me your heart
Its just me and my dog on this lonely road
Trying to figure out which way go
with tears on my pillow and dollar in wallet I'm just a man with a empty soul
I beg a penny for your thoughts, while im staring at the edges of a ripped up photo
just a cautionary tale how things change, suddenly when the win blows
as time goes on everything still remains as a reminder
when the pressures of the world seem to be just a little bit lighter
Just cause your heart don't beat, don't mean that you don't feel pain no more
and even though I don't breathe I still...
Trying to figure out which way go
with tears on my pillow and dollar in wallet I'm just a man with a empty soul
I beg a penny for your thoughts, while im staring at the edges of a ripped up photo
just a cautionary tale how things change, suddenly when the win blows
as time goes on everything still remains as a reminder
when the pressures of the world seem to be just a little bit lighter
Just cause your heart don't beat, don't mean that you don't feel pain no more
and even though I don't breathe I still...
#love
#crush
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LunasChild8
Poem Published
8th Jul 2018 5:45am
8th Jul 2018 5:45am
Vis Motrix
Life goes on as the Earth spins round
I dream of flying to the heavens, yet I’m stuck on the ground
I once yearned for silence, but now I hear the sound
Of your voice calling my name; I’ve been found.
-
My heart and soul jump in unity
To receive a drop of your purity
Among the ill, please give me immunity
This is my best opportunity.
-
I ain't gonna give you up
I'm still inside you, simply asleep
I'll make you feel alive and standing up
Keep standing up, now
-
Life goes on as the Earth travels through the abyss ...
I dream of flying to the heavens, yet I’m stuck on the ground
I once yearned for silence, but now I hear the sound
Of your voice calling my name; I’ve been found.
-
My heart and soul jump in unity
To receive a drop of your purity
Among the ill, please give me immunity
This is my best opportunity.
-
I ain't gonna give you up
I'm still inside you, simply asleep
I'll make you feel alive and standing up
Keep standing up, now
-
Life goes on as the Earth travels through the abyss ...
#motivational
#rhyming
#uplifting
33 reads
6 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
8th Jul 2018 00:27am
8th Jul 2018 00:27am
Break the Vow
Verse1
I once held a high opinion of you
Back when you were my commanding officer
Little did I know that it was far from the truth
That you were a traitor, or so I’ve often heard.
I didn’t want to believe it, but the truth slapped me hard
How could you have betrayed my trust?
I would have followed you into hell; I still carry the scars
You’ve abused me for far too long; I’ve had enough.
Chorus
I’ll break the vow, and feel no regrets
Pure ecstasy flowing through me; it’s intoxicating, I confess
I know...
I once held a high opinion of you
Back when you were my commanding officer
Little did I know that it was far from the truth
That you were a traitor, or so I’ve often heard.
I didn’t want to believe it, but the truth slapped me hard
How could you have betrayed my trust?
I would have followed you into hell; I still carry the scars
You’ve abused me for far too long; I’ve had enough.
Chorus
I’ll break the vow, and feel no regrets
Pure ecstasy flowing through me; it’s intoxicating, I confess
I know...
#anger
#rhyming
#disappointment
37 reads
8 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
7th Jul 2018 1:40am
7th Jul 2018 1:40am
Fight for Life
Verse 1
The darkness is closing in, and the stars are extinguished
Whether you’re a friend or foe, it’s hard to distinguish
Can I trust myself? Is that me in the mirror?
Holding on is hard when I all see are my errors.
I soldier on in life and never look back
If I did I’d end up missing all that I’ve had
No one said that life would be easy
Enjoy the good moments, even if briefly.
Chorus
It’s the fight for life, and I’m barely holding on
Even when I want to cry, I have to be strong
Is...
The darkness is closing in, and the stars are extinguished
Whether you’re a friend or foe, it’s hard to distinguish
Can I trust myself? Is that me in the mirror?
Holding on is hard when I all see are my errors.
I soldier on in life and never look back
If I did I’d end up missing all that I’ve had
No one said that life would be easy
Enjoy the good moments, even if briefly.
Chorus
It’s the fight for life, and I’m barely holding on
Even when I want to cry, I have to be strong
Is...
#hope
#courage
#rhyming
28 reads
6 Comments
thewatcher33
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2018 10:12pm
3rd Jul 2018 10:12pm
Hot 16 (KTSE, Gonna Love Me/Issues/Hold On) instrumental
She likes that grown ass dick
cause I make her cum quick
these fuck boys nowadays ain't really worth shit
they be young as fuck plus they cum too quick
she be screaming
nigga lemme get my nut off first
fuck's wrong with these niggas I was about to buss
Grown, niggas be eating her right,
tasting that pussy all night
licking it, flicking it, long deep stroking it
hitting them cornerss, just the way she likes
drip drip drippin, damn, her pussy's tight
ear down bottom hear that thang go pop
she dials my number when she...
cause I make her cum quick
these fuck boys nowadays ain't really worth shit
they be young as fuck plus they cum too quick
she be screaming
nigga lemme get my nut off first
fuck's wrong with these niggas I was about to buss
Grown, niggas be eating her right,
tasting that pussy all night
licking it, flicking it, long deep stroking it
hitting them cornerss, just the way she likes
drip drip drippin, damn, her pussy's tight
ear down bottom hear that thang go pop
she dials my number when she...
#music
#lyrics
54 reads
1 Comment
Akhilsonu
Akhil
Akhil
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2018 2:08pm
3rd Jul 2018 2:08pm
Here we go again
Here we go again.
We are back, folks.
Shut up! Don't talk.
You are going to feel
Lots of bloody pain.
Here we go again.
We are back, folks.
You are going to shock
When you will see us
In the hall of fame.
Here we go again.
We are back, folks.
We will fix corks
In your jealous ass
And you won't be able to complain.
Here we go again.
We are back, folks.
Shut up! Don't talk.
You are going to feel
Lots of bloody pain.
Here we go again.
We are back, folks.
You are going to shock
When you will see us
In the hall of fame.
Here we go again.
We are back, folks.
We will fix corks
In your jealous ass
And you won't be able to complain.
Here we go again.
#anger
#jealousy
#hate #dark
#hate #dark
30 reads
2 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2018 4:34am
22nd Jun 2018 4:34am
Eye of the Storm
Verse 1
‘Hush’ goes the wind, blowing out all sound
Just like a tornado, the dust spins around and around
Even in the eye of danger, you still hold your ground
Showing no emotion, aside from a harsh frown.
Mother Nature is not a force to be reckoned with
The coming of Armageddon is a matter of time, not ‘if’
Most would view the scriptures as a laughable myth
Mother Nature will show you all; she’s stronger than she’s ever been.
Chorus 1
You’re struck in the eye of the storm
Your limbs are freezing over, yet your blood’s still...
‘Hush’ goes the wind, blowing out all sound
Just like a tornado, the dust spins around and around
Even in the eye of danger, you still hold your ground
Showing no emotion, aside from a harsh frown.
Mother Nature is not a force to be reckoned with
The coming of Armageddon is a matter of time, not ‘if’
Most would view the scriptures as a laughable myth
Mother Nature will show you all; she’s stronger than she’s ever been.
Chorus 1
You’re struck in the eye of the storm
Your limbs are freezing over, yet your blood’s still...
#earth
#environment
#rhyming #humankind
#rhyming #humankind
60 reads
6 Comments
S-m-sawyer
Poem Published
12th Jun 2018 8:33pm
12th Jun 2018 8:33pm
My nanna used to say...
My nanna used to say,
always tell the truth no matter what,
it's better to be an honest fool than a dodgy crook,
Believe in yourself, a personality is better than a look,
Don't waste your time on technology,
Instead read a book.
You see my nanna was cut from a different cloth,
She came from an era where you worked for everything you got
I remember she said,
as long as you've got a roof over your head,
food in your belly and a nice warm bed,
That's a good start,
And with the warmth in your heart,
And the joy that you...
always tell the truth no matter what,
it's better to be an honest fool than a dodgy crook,
Believe in yourself, a personality is better than a look,
Don't waste your time on technology,
Instead read a book.
You see my nanna was cut from a different cloth,
She came from an era where you worked for everything you got
I remember she said,
as long as you've got a roof over your head,
food in your belly and a nice warm bed,
That's a good start,
And with the warmth in your heart,
And the joy that you...
#humankind
58 reads
3 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
10th Jun 2018 2:29am
10th Jun 2018 2:29am
No Time for Bitchin
Verse 1
Life hasn’t gone the way I expected
Time’s like this I wish I had a crystal ball
To prevent myself from doing things I regretted
I’m only one step away from a high fall.
It’s hard not to just burst into tears
But I force myself to keep on moving
Yet it’s hard to stop shaking from fear
I can’t afford now to start falling.
Chorus 1
I ain’t got no time for bitchin
It’s either I make it or break it
No matter how much I pray, I still gotta pay for my sin
Even though I struggle, you’ll never see me quit.
...
Life hasn’t gone the way I expected
Time’s like this I wish I had a crystal ball
To prevent myself from doing things I regretted
I’m only one step away from a high fall.
It’s hard not to just burst into tears
But I force myself to keep on moving
Yet it’s hard to stop shaking from fear
I can’t afford now to start falling.
Chorus 1
I ain’t got no time for bitchin
It’s either I make it or break it
No matter how much I pray, I still gotta pay for my sin
Even though I struggle, you’ll never see me quit.
...
#strength
#motivational
#inspirational
70 reads
4 Comments
PurpleRainLove
Poem Published
6th Jun 2018 2:37am
6th Jun 2018 2:37am
Tonight
You got caught in the rain again
Now you’re making your way to me
You gave in to the pain again
Now you’re losing everything
I bet you want me to fix it
The way that only I can
I’m strong enough to resist it
That doesn’t mean that I can
I won’t fight
I won’t argue
All I’m going to do is love you
I won’t fight
I won’t argue
All I’m going to do is love you
Tonight—tonight
You got caught in the rain again
Now you’re drowning in your fear
You gave in to the pain again
Now you pray...
Now you’re making your way to me
You gave in to the pain again
Now you’re losing everything
I bet you want me to fix it
The way that only I can
I’m strong enough to resist it
That doesn’t mean that I can
I won’t fight
I won’t argue
All I’m going to do is love you
I won’t fight
I won’t argue
All I’m going to do is love you
Tonight—tonight
You got caught in the rain again
Now you’re drowning in your fear
You gave in to the pain again
Now you pray...
#love
#relationships
#music
#addiction
#support
89 reads
5 Comments
EliW
Elina
Elina
Poem Published
5th Jun 2018 10:12am
5th Jun 2018 10:12am
Desert Blues
You invade my head...
On the crossroads everyone is dead.
...
Mad dogs howl in my head
Mad dogs run through my head
...
And who would have thought
That ghosts are for real.
The sand is burning my feet
and the sky is raining down on me.
...
Vultures fly above my head
Vultures die above my head.
...
And who would had thought
that the devil is real...
On the crossroads everyone is dead.
...
Mad dogs howl in my head
Mad dogs run through my head
...
And who would have thought
That ghosts are for real.
The sand is burning my feet
and the sky is raining down on me.
...
Vultures fly above my head
Vultures die above my head.
...
And who would had thought
that the devil is real...
#music
#lyrics
85 reads
4 Comments
EuphoricFeelosophy
Poem Published
4th Jun 2018 9:16pm
4th Jun 2018 9:16pm
In her youth.
I'm no rapper I'm a writer,
I don't diss rather reminisce.
I look into past like,I remember this
memories comin back like,I dun did some shit.
Purple rain in my eyes
Now I'm high,
Reminiscing losing eyesight
like those nights...
high fucks and red lights
looking under diamonds in the moonlight
cross lights on a school night.
Well back then,freedom was
a responsibility.
we were bawss R.E.S.P.E.C.T
wave bye to the good times
now you're fucking with the new life.
But you're a rebel you could go back,
so hand me...
I don't diss rather reminisce.
I look into past like,I remember this
memories comin back like,I dun did some shit.
Purple rain in my eyes
Now I'm high,
Reminiscing losing eyesight
like those nights...
high fucks and red lights
looking under diamonds in the moonlight
cross lights on a school night.
Well back then,freedom was
a responsibility.
we were bawss R.E.S.P.E.C.T
wave bye to the good times
now you're fucking with the new life.
But you're a rebel you could go back,
so hand me...
#happiness
#teens
#nostalgia
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1 Comment
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