Song Lyrics Seeking Friendly Advice
Song lyrics poems and music poetry - Friendly feedback has been requested for these poems.
Lucrative
Poem Published
17th Apr 2018 2:24am
17th Apr 2018 2:24am
Drift Away
Life goes on as we walk, may I change today,
‘Brave With Grace’ Say my name
Call me crazy,
I’m already insane I’m trying to
Come clean,
As man walking on two legs, with two arms with a brain I ain’t smart,
We talk about love & Pain how Faith is failing us,
As broaden we come departed in what two hearts came in,
Fall in love once again and we shall meet my density.
Traveling running walking
Pace just as I (drift away)
Traveling running walking
Pace just as I (drift away)
Traveling running walking
Pace just as...
‘Brave With Grace’ Say my name
Call me crazy,
I’m already insane I’m trying to
Come clean,
As man walking on two legs, with two arms with a brain I ain’t smart,
We talk about love & Pain how Faith is failing us,
As broaden we come departed in what two hearts came in,
Fall in love once again and we shall meet my density.
Traveling running walking
Pace just as I (drift away)
Traveling running walking
Pace just as I (drift away)
Traveling running walking
Pace just as...
#WritingPoetry
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Rogerh
Poem Published
10th Apr 2018 8:14am
10th Apr 2018 8:14am
World's Coldest Love
World's Coldest Love
Stuck in the middle of world's coldest love
Soul will never thaw out in a million years
My eyes they are so cold, they are so blue
When I cry I cry icicles instead of tears
It is snowing so hard inside my broken heart
It is covered by a sheet of cracked ice
It is frozen solid it will never thaw out
It has always been unloved to be precise
Every time I try to love it slips away from me
Like trying to walk across an icy lake in bare feet
End up broken hearted and all cold alone
Frozen forever in place in a no love...
Stuck in the middle of world's coldest love
Soul will never thaw out in a million years
My eyes they are so cold, they are so blue
When I cry I cry icicles instead of tears
It is snowing so hard inside my broken heart
It is covered by a sheet of cracked ice
It is frozen solid it will never thaw out
It has always been unloved to be precise
Every time I try to love it slips away from me
Like trying to walk across an icy lake in bare feet
End up broken hearted and all cold alone
Frozen forever in place in a no love...
#music
#lyrics
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Madcinder
Poem Published
9th Apr 2018 12:24pm
9th Apr 2018 12:24pm
Dreams Of A Broken Heart
Now there's no answers coming down from above.
I get no helping from no one.
I'm just a whining vagrant who's never known love.
Drowning in a great ocean.
But there's nowhere I would rather be than here and now.
It's not as bad as it seems.
And maybe I can't breath and the currents pull me down.
But it's surely one hell of a scene.
And it feels like the dreams of a broken heart.
One who thought he would know love is somewhere.
I am just like a machine gun that's falling apart.
But there ain't no Meat Loaf song filling up this dead air. ...
I get no helping from no one.
I'm just a whining vagrant who's never known love.
Drowning in a great ocean.
But there's nowhere I would rather be than here and now.
It's not as bad as it seems.
And maybe I can't breath and the currents pull me down.
But it's surely one hell of a scene.
And it feels like the dreams of a broken heart.
One who thought he would know love is somewhere.
I am just like a machine gun that's falling apart.
But there ain't no Meat Loaf song filling up this dead air. ...
#love
#heartbroken
#lyrics
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Madcinder
Poem Published
9th Apr 2018 12:17pm
9th Apr 2018 12:17pm
The Tao Of Vanessa
#dark
#lyrics
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December_Carnation
Poem Published
8th Apr 2018 2:29pm
8th Apr 2018 2:29pm
See You In Heaven
See you in heaven, my darling friends
My story was awesome, but all stories end
We'd good times together, we were the best
And now it's come time for me to rest
See you in heaven, all whom I know
I'd love to stay, but I've got to go
I'm glad that you love me, I'm grateful you care
But wondrous things await me up there
See you in heaven, who knows what's in store?
Perhaps we'll be better than we were before
Nobody's perfect, surely not me
But I'll be the best I can possibly be
See you in heaven, it's time I should sleep
Next time...
My story was awesome, but all stories end
We'd good times together, we were the best
And now it's come time for me to rest
See you in heaven, all whom I know
I'd love to stay, but I've got to go
I'm glad that you love me, I'm grateful you care
But wondrous things await me up there
See you in heaven, who knows what's in store?
Perhaps we'll be better than we were before
Nobody's perfect, surely not me
But I'll be the best I can possibly be
See you in heaven, it's time I should sleep
Next time...
#grief
#death
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Madcinder
Poem Published
7th Apr 2018 5:20pm
7th Apr 2018 5:20pm
Coulrophobia
#music
#lyrics
#parody
44 reads
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Madcinder
Poem Published
7th Apr 2018 5:11pm
7th Apr 2018 5:11pm
Better Things
I've found a few things.
But I've lost even more.
I haven't fought much.
But I've died thrice in the war.
My friends have been shot down by the solid lead of a metal word.
Man, you wouldn't believe some of the things I've heard.
Not even a quarter of a proper life.
I feel as old as the earth.
I know something isn't right.
When people judge others' worth.
So I'll take all my words.
And I'll take what they mean.
I've got better things to do with my dreams.
The younger half of me is what you've all seen.
I've got better things...
But I've lost even more.
I haven't fought much.
But I've died thrice in the war.
My friends have been shot down by the solid lead of a metal word.
Man, you wouldn't believe some of the things I've heard.
Not even a quarter of a proper life.
I feel as old as the earth.
I know something isn't right.
When people judge others' worth.
So I'll take all my words.
And I'll take what they mean.
I've got better things to do with my dreams.
The younger half of me is what you've all seen.
I've got better things...
#dreams
#faith
#lyrics
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Madcinder
Poem Published
5th Apr 2018 6:49am
5th Apr 2018 6:49am
In The Wild
Pull up the covers.
Hold your breath if you must.
I'm the only other.
Remember I'll be just.
Across the room.
Watching you sleep from the closet.
Fending off doom.
Something is creeping, what was it?
They crawl from the dark.
Feeding off fear.
They can feel your heart.
Frantic breath they hear.
White.
Is your dreams.
Blue.
Is your screams.
Green.
Is your schemes.
Grey.
Is your beliefs.
And you're a child.
You're all smiles.
You're all wild.
You know what you heard.
But were...
Hold your breath if you must.
I'm the only other.
Remember I'll be just.
Across the room.
Watching you sleep from the closet.
Fending off doom.
Something is creeping, what was it?
They crawl from the dark.
Feeding off fear.
They can feel your heart.
Frantic breath they hear.
White.
Is your dreams.
Blue.
Is your screams.
Green.
Is your schemes.
Grey.
Is your beliefs.
And you're a child.
You're all smiles.
You're all wild.
You know what you heard.
But were...
#childhood
#betrayal
#lyrics
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Madcinder
Poem Published
5th Apr 2018 6:42am
5th Apr 2018 6:42am
Night Will Bring Chaos
#evil
#universe
#lyrics
#monsters
#apocalypse
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Madcinder
Poem Published
4th Apr 2018 11:50am
4th Apr 2018 11:50am
Starfighter
Take it to the limit.
Take it to the edge.
Take it to the farthest star.
Somewhere at the end.
At a hundred thousand Gs.
You won't feel a thing.
You can go anywhere.
All-encompassing.
No one tells you what to do.
No one gives commands.
Face it all and pull through.
Your fate is in your hands.
The future is uncertain.
But one thing you know is true.
When you're the one at the helm.
There's nothing you can't do.
You're a starfighter.
Invincible.
Starfighter.
Fly across worlds.
Starfighter. ...
Take it to the edge.
Take it to the farthest star.
Somewhere at the end.
At a hundred thousand Gs.
You won't feel a thing.
You can go anywhere.
All-encompassing.
No one tells you what to do.
No one gives commands.
Face it all and pull through.
Your fate is in your hands.
The future is uncertain.
But one thing you know is true.
When you're the one at the helm.
There's nothing you can't do.
You're a starfighter.
Invincible.
Starfighter.
Fly across worlds.
Starfighter. ...
#soldiers
#technology
#war
#universe
#lyrics
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Madcinder
Poem Published
4th Apr 2018 11:50am
4th Apr 2018 11:50am
Big Blue
It's time to ride!
Fully loaded, blasting off.
Rocket ride and burning hot.
Let it loose and holding on.
Through the dark and into rock.
Watch me fly, watch me roar.
Watch the two-tonne machine soar.
Through the air, through the core.
Breakneck speed's what I'm built for.
No tires burning this time.
The name remains the same.
Under big blue in my prime.
The Falcon wins the game.
Hit the gas, in the red.
Hit the wall and lose your head.
Strap me in, engines flare.
Jump the crowd, give them a scare.
Turn the...
Fully loaded, blasting off.
Rocket ride and burning hot.
Let it loose and holding on.
Through the dark and into rock.
Watch me fly, watch me roar.
Watch the two-tonne machine soar.
Through the air, through the core.
Breakneck speed's what I'm built for.
No tires burning this time.
The name remains the same.
Under big blue in my prime.
The Falcon wins the game.
Hit the gas, in the red.
Hit the wall and lose your head.
Strap me in, engines flare.
Jump the crowd, give them a scare.
Turn the...
#fiction
#lyrics
#sports
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Rogerh
Poem Published
4th Apr 2018 6:33am
4th Apr 2018 6:33am
Mushroom Cloud
Mushroom Cloud
She is a child bride of the sixties
and she is lost in a mushroom cloud
Whenever she played her music
she always played it loud
She would always wear flowers
have them twined in her hair
Whenever someone said something
she really just did not care
Her dress was always sunflower pattern
oh and she always wore it so well
Just above her knees is where she always
made sure that it always fell
She always had sunglasses on even inside
but you could always see her eyes
...
She is a child bride of the sixties
and she is lost in a mushroom cloud
Whenever she played her music
she always played it loud
She would always wear flowers
have them twined in her hair
Whenever someone said something
she really just did not care
Her dress was always sunflower pattern
oh and she always wore it so well
Just above her knees is where she always
made sure that it always fell
She always had sunglasses on even inside
but you could always see her eyes
...
#childhood
#aging
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