Song Lyrics Seeking Friendly Advice
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Song lyrics poems and music poetry - Friendly feedback has been requested for these poems.
Solesleftsoul
Poem Published
5th Oct 2018 10:09pm
5th Oct 2018 10:09pm
[Untitled]
If I hit you with just four licks
Like you're deficient of the folic
The head spins, the floor your jaw hits
Let me influence your heart
Like you're deficient of the folic
The head spins, the floor your jaw hits
Let me influence your heart
#passion
13 reads
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Taurus385
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2018 5:11am
2nd Oct 2018 5:11am
Sundial Blues
(These are song lyrics from the alt-rock band Echo of a Sundial, a relatively popular early 90’s group hailing from a suburb of Seattle in the United States of My Head. All song lyrics - unless otherwise noted - are credited to lead vocalist Jeremy Whitfield with occasional input from his band mates)
What did we make of the gods
the sky
when we wore marble feet?
When we drank knowledge
in Athenian malls and
tomorrow was so sweet
Making circles that
pointed the way
through the valley of days
We knew the creatures that...
What did we make of the gods
the sky
when we wore marble feet?
When we drank knowledge
in Athenian malls and
tomorrow was so sweet
Making circles that
pointed the way
through the valley of days
We knew the creatures that...
#identity
#culture
41 reads
8 Comments
EliW
Illusion
Illusion
Poem Published
1st Oct 2018 7:53am
1st Oct 2018 7:53am
She smiles
The fragile, helpless days passed
No more pinkish clouds obscured the mystery
Picture perfect shrunk in the distance.
A new strain was up ahead
And It was okay.
The sacred naiveté was stolen,
from a caterpillar heart.
The metamorphosis was broken,
soon the auction too was over.
And it was okay.
A new life was destroyed
A tired traveler, always getting high to get by.
No one really knew her, or why?
And it was okay.
Then she saw herself
through some stranger's eyes,
a monster...
No more pinkish clouds obscured the mystery
Picture perfect shrunk in the distance.
A new strain was up ahead
And It was okay.
The sacred naiveté was stolen,
from a caterpillar heart.
The metamorphosis was broken,
soon the auction too was over.
And it was okay.
A new life was destroyed
A tired traveler, always getting high to get by.
No one really knew her, or why?
And it was okay.
Then she saw herself
through some stranger's eyes,
a monster...
#sadness
#hope
#LifeStruggles
24 reads
2 Comments
Ralph_Tamez
Wasere
Wasere
Poem Published
30th Sep 2018 2:19am
30th Sep 2018 2:19am
Night comes down
In the last rays...
Of the setting sun....
And the past days .... yeah....
That's where our memories. ..Run...
And all of those times...
Still race thru my mind. ...
I'm shattered inside ...to find...
When the night comes down. ..
And I'm here all alone....
When the night comes down ...
And there's no place to go.....
Call me and I'll wait till the summer
You never understood
Then I'll wait forever
For a love that's only good
As the light starts to dim
The fear closes in
And the...
Of the setting sun....
And the past days .... yeah....
That's where our memories. ..Run...
And all of those times...
Still race thru my mind. ...
I'm shattered inside ...to find...
When the night comes down. ..
And I'm here all alone....
When the night comes down ...
And there's no place to go.....
Call me and I'll wait till the summer
You never understood
Then I'll wait forever
For a love that's only good
As the light starts to dim
The fear closes in
And the...
#love
30 reads
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Taurus385
Poem Published
24th Sep 2018 11:04pm
24th Sep 2018 11:04pm
All You Pretty People
(These are song lyrics from the alt-rock band Echo of a Sundial, a relatively popular early 90’s group hailing from a suburb of Seattle in the United States of My Head. All song lyrics - unless otherwise noted - are credited to lead vocalist Jeremy Whitfield with occasional input from his band mates)
Tuxedo union suits
Carbonation soothes the mood
in disguise
Diamond blue in their eyes
Perfect Cleavage smiles lies
of paradise
Tell me
Who cut you into
this television fool
I find
locked in the static snowing ...
Tuxedo union suits
Carbonation soothes the mood
in disguise
Diamond blue in their eyes
Perfect Cleavage smiles lies
of paradise
Tell me
Who cut you into
this television fool
I find
locked in the static snowing ...
#humankind
33 reads
3 Comments
MrLimitless
Poem Published
13th Sep 2018 00:07am
13th Sep 2018 00:07am
Knowledge speaks, wisdom listens.
First of all, keep your circle small, research the law cause this world is raw, it’s war until the curtain call, be true to you cause if you ain’t you’ll probably be the first to fall, see the truth isn’t controvertible, regrets are irreversible, so I suggest you chase whatever it is that you’re yearning for, learn from wrongs and make sure every move you make is purposeful, learn that everything can be a positive cause pain cuts deep like it’s surgical, the people of this earth ain’t merciful, you’re gonna get dealt a lot of dirt and more, but keep your head up... chest out and your...
#rhyming
54 reads
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Taurus385
Poem Published
4th Sep 2018 5:44am
4th Sep 2018 5:44am
Cigarette Shadows
(These are song lyrics from the alt-rock band Echo of a Sundial, a relatively popular early 90’s group hailing from a suburb of Seattle in the United States of My Head. All song lyrics - unless otherwise noted - are credited to lead vocalist Jeremy Whitfield with occasional input from his band mates)
Trailing
Off to the air
Swimming
through dark oxygen, like
phantom hair
Faces of broken mirrors
crowd the clouds
of memories
I’d like to think that something
worth smoking lies
inside of me
Didn’t they say ...
Trailing
Off to the air
Swimming
through dark oxygen, like
phantom hair
Faces of broken mirrors
crowd the clouds
of memories
I’d like to think that something
worth smoking lies
inside of me
Didn’t they say ...
#dark
#shadows
#TruthOfLife #suffering
#TruthOfLife #suffering
51 reads
5 Comments
Taurus385
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2018 6:11pm
2nd Sep 2018 6:11pm
The Calm Between the Storms
(These are song lyrics from the alt-rock band Echo of a Sundial, a relatively popular early 90’s group hailing from a suburb of Seattle in the United States of My Head. All song lyrics - unless otherwise noted - are credited to lead vocalist Jeremy Whitfield with occasional input from his band mates)
The Static raindrops
The wreckage fading
Swimming
jumping
Falling off the earth
The endless envy
Of Pieces in me
Still drifting
floating
Falling to the dirt
On my knees
Beneath the weeping trees ...
The Static raindrops
The wreckage fading
Swimming
jumping
Falling off the earth
The endless envy
Of Pieces in me
Still drifting
floating
Falling to the dirt
On my knees
Beneath the weeping trees ...
#drugs
#addiction
53 reads
4 Comments
Medinda
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2018 5:47am
2nd Sep 2018 5:47am
Banjo Shuffle
Banjo Mama sing that song
The one we love to sing along
When the music's right
It can't be wrong
So, how bout it, let's hear it
Hey, hey, hey
Yeah, tap your feet and turn around
So we can revel in the sound
When nothing's lost that can't be found
Let's sing it, let's shout it
Yeah, how bout it
Hey, hey, hey
Cuz tonight we don't want the blues
No lonesome wind, no worn out shoes
Nothing dark, no somber mood
Yeah, tonight we wanna sing
Tonight we wanna dance
Get lost and be free ...
The one we love to sing along
When the music's right
It can't be wrong
So, how bout it, let's hear it
Hey, hey, hey
Yeah, tap your feet and turn around
So we can revel in the sound
When nothing's lost that can't be found
Let's sing it, let's shout it
Yeah, how bout it
Hey, hey, hey
Cuz tonight we don't want the blues
No lonesome wind, no worn out shoes
Nothing dark, no somber mood
Yeah, tonight we wanna sing
Tonight we wanna dance
Get lost and be free ...
#music
#lyrics
#freedom #dance
#freedom #dance
38 reads
2 Comments
Taurus385
Poem Published
1st Sep 2018 11:25pm
1st Sep 2018 11:25pm
Banshee Care
(These are song lyrics from the alt-rock band Echo of a Sundial, a relatively popular early 90’s group hailing from a suburb of Seattle in the United States of My Head. All song lyrics - unless otherwise noted - are credited to lead vocalist Jeremy Whitfield with occasional input from his band mates)
Spin little ballerina
Spin like the wind inside
Twirl in the glass between us
Before you cry
Hold me in arms of vapor
Fold me into your mind
Twirl us in the grass beneath us
Before we die...
Before we die...
Oh...
Beauty...
Spin little ballerina
Spin like the wind inside
Twirl in the glass between us
Before you cry
Hold me in arms of vapor
Fold me into your mind
Twirl us in the grass beneath us
Before we die...
Before we die...
Oh...
Beauty...
#angels
#ghosts
38 reads
1 Comment
Taurus385
Poem Published
1st Sep 2018 5:06pm
1st Sep 2018 5:06pm
Swimmers
#erotic
#dirty
#sensual
110 reads
5 Comments
TheChadDupree
Poem Published
26th Aug 2018 9:06pm
26th Aug 2018 9:06pm
A Poet's Soliloquy
Look at me
Look at him
Do I look like a rapper to you?
The poet is here
And he is here to stay
You got strong naïveté
Where you thought I was going anyway?
Please
My game is James Harden
H-Town forever
Yours, well...
Yours need to smarten
Up a little
Getting with Women
And getting money
That’s how you feel?
I’m not a rapper
Even I know that’s not ideal.
When will you realise
That your fantasy world ain’t real?
I graduated from college
Barely can use a rhyming app
And I have the gall...
Look at him
Do I look like a rapper to you?
The poet is here
And he is here to stay
You got strong naïveté
Where you thought I was going anyway?
Please
My game is James Harden
H-Town forever
Yours, well...
Yours need to smarten
Up a little
Getting with Women
And getting money
That’s how you feel?
I’m not a rapper
Even I know that’s not ideal.
When will you realise
That your fantasy world ain’t real?
I graduated from college
Barely can use a rhyming app
And I have the gall...
#lyrics
#rap
32 reads
0 Comments
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