Song Lyrics by Top Critiquers
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SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
30th Sep 2022 5:34am
30th Sep 2022 5:34am
This Litte Piggy
This Little Piggy went to market this Little Piggy still trying to find her way back home
Where once upon a time her evil sisters and mother turned their back on her existence leaving her all alone
In her father’s eyes she never measured up
Where can a small child get love if it is not given from the crown of her generational cup
No matter how hard she tried, dysfunctional and slightly obese
Hiding her true self behind baggish boyish clothes worn down to her knees
To everyone else she was a mistake, a disgrace, now scarred face, and lack luster of no...
Where once upon a time her evil sisters and mother turned their back on her existence leaving her all alone
In her father’s eyes she never measured up
Where can a small child get love if it is not given from the crown of her generational cup
No matter how hard she tried, dysfunctional and slightly obese
Hiding her true self behind baggish boyish clothes worn down to her knees
To everyone else she was a mistake, a disgrace, now scarred face, and lack luster of no...
#dark
#shadows
#Halloween
#monsters
#witches
498 reads
3 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
4th Nov 2023 9:48pm
4th Nov 2023 9:48pm
MAKE BELIEVE
Verse 1:
I know that I made a lot of mistakes
and you say it's too late
to try and fix things
and I'm trying to start a fresh anew
but you keep telling me we're through
and I keep telling you
Chorus:
Why can't we just pretend
so we can start over again
like things never happened
but no matter how hard I try for us to be
it'll always just be make believe
it'll always just be make believe
Verse 2:
I really can understand why
you can't get over what I did
but I realize it hurts,...
I know that I made a lot of mistakes
and you say it's too late
to try and fix things
and I'm trying to start a fresh anew
but you keep telling me we're through
and I keep telling you
Chorus:
Why can't we just pretend
so we can start over again
like things never happened
but no matter how hard I try for us to be
it'll always just be make believe
it'll always just be make believe
Verse 2:
I really can understand why
you can't get over what I did
but I realize it hurts,...
#love
#admiration
#disappointment
#bittersweet
#emotions
95 reads
11 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
25th Aug 2023 1:49am
25th Aug 2023 1:49am
Get Off My Fuchsia
Seduced by the night's scented fuchsia of high-octane
You may have a Smart Phone but I have bone
"Today's music ain't got the same soul"
Touched by your cricket on a Knucklehead Harley
Protein makes one "boogie on down"
Listening to "Old Time Rock & Roll"
Nothing gives a slice of life like profane
Formaldehyde doesn't bring any pain
Seduced by the night's scented fuchsia of high-octane
You may have a Smart Phone but I have bone
"Today's music ain't got the same soul"
Touched by your cricket on a Knucklehead Harley
Protein makes one "boogie on down"
Listening to "Old Time Rock & Roll"
Nothing gives a slice of life like profane
Formaldehyde doesn't bring any pain
Seduced by the night's scented fuchsia of high-octane
#dark
#rhyming
#lyrics
97 reads
2 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
Today 00:23am
Today 00:23am
Cage Striped Heart
My world’s so far away
Living in a parallel home
I’m hoping you’ll stay
Always on my asylum mind
How you move me even when
We’re so far apart
Locked down in a different town
Penitentiary art
Penitentiary art
Wondering where you are
And what you’re doing
Strumming bars on
My Cage Striped Heart
Phasing through concrete
Playing my heart out
Knowing you’ll hear me
Cause no one else sounds like me
I’ve got nothing but time
But I don’t want to wait
Your voice unlocks my
Paradise...
Living in a parallel home
I’m hoping you’ll stay
Always on my asylum mind
How you move me even when
We’re so far apart
Locked down in a different town
Penitentiary art
Penitentiary art
Wondering where you are
And what you’re doing
Strumming bars on
My Cage Striped Heart
Phasing through concrete
Playing my heart out
Knowing you’ll hear me
Cause no one else sounds like me
I’ve got nothing but time
But I don’t want to wait
Your voice unlocks my
Paradise...
#lyrics
#LongDistanceRelationship
#IMissYou
49 reads
8 Comments
TeeTeeAlyriAh0764
Poem Published
26th Oct 2023 8:18am
26th Oct 2023 8:18am
"Rude Girl" Lyrics Sung to Music of "Rude Boy"
#erotic
#sensual
#sexy
#passion
#seductive
72 reads
0 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
8th Oct 2023 12:09pm
8th Oct 2023 12:09pm
Hop in Boy
Hop in boy
Won’t you take a ride?
Everything works
And it’s warm inside
Been used, been driven
both near and far
Guess you could say
She’s an economy car
Not much trouble
And her motor’s fine
Start her up
She can really whine
Once you get her goin’
Her motor’s hot
So give her a jump
And slip your key in her slot
Ride might be bumpy
She likes to feel the road
But when it’s time to come
The girl can take your load
Won’t you take a ride?
Everything works
And it’s warm inside
Been used, been driven
both near and far
Guess you could say
She’s an economy car
Not much trouble
And her motor’s fine
Start her up
She can really whine
Once you get her goin’
Her motor’s hot
So give her a jump
And slip your key in her slot
Ride might be bumpy
She likes to feel the road
But when it’s time to come
The girl can take your load
#sex
#cars
#funny
195 reads
6 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
19th Nov 2023 11:04pm
19th Nov 2023 11:04pm
Hearts in the Sand (song)
Sunlight on the harbour
sparkles like mischievous eyes
Laughter of seagulls
Questions float on wind and tide
The trees where we used to walk together
They miss your footsteps now
Life comes in waves, they just keep coming
We don’t get to ride them all
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
It’s gonna be alright
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
I’m gonna be alright
The tides went on and on before us
The tides go on and...
sparkles like mischievous eyes
Laughter of seagulls
Questions float on wind and tide
The trees where we used to walk together
They miss your footsteps now
Life comes in waves, they just keep coming
We don’t get to ride them all
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
It’s gonna be alright
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
I’m gonna be alright
The tides went on and on before us
The tides go on and...
#love
#nature
#music
#LifeCycle
#IMissYou
99 reads
10 Comments
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
14th Dec 2020 8:14pm
14th Dec 2020 8:14pm
A Senryú Ode To Somewhere Over The Rainbow
Somewhere bluebirds fly
Troubles melt like lemon drops
Why oh why, can't I
Troubles melt like lemon drops
Why oh why, can't I
#love
#rainbow
#music
#lyrics
#nostalgia
476 reads
23 Comments
LongTubiFree
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2023 00:59am
2nd Dec 2023 00:59am
Something's wrong
Verse 1
You and I, never gonna fly
Oh no, not at all, there's just something wrong
but I see those tears falling in perfect rhythm,
our broken hearted song.
Grab my hand and lets dance, one last romance.
Chorus
I don't think it's you honey, it's really not
love was just something we sadly never got.
Maybe, just maybe, we'll fix each other
but somehow I don't think we'll remain lovers.
Teach me to sing with the words of your song
and I'll help you find your way along....
Verse 2
You don't need it,...
You and I, never gonna fly
Oh no, not at all, there's just something wrong
but I see those tears falling in perfect rhythm,
our broken hearted song.
Grab my hand and lets dance, one last romance.
Chorus
I don't think it's you honey, it's really not
love was just something we sadly never got.
Maybe, just maybe, we'll fix each other
but somehow I don't think we'll remain lovers.
Teach me to sing with the words of your song
and I'll help you find your way along....
Verse 2
You don't need it,...
#breakup
#SelfReflection
45 reads
0 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
5th May 2023 4:10pm
5th May 2023 4:10pm
Gift To Spit (#youcantrap)
Verse 1
Gift to spit - speech harnesses.
"Flip the script" - geek pharmacist.
Hit a spliff - weed tolerance.
Witness this - see holograms.
Rend these "ill" rhymes as "dope" - pills or poppy.
Emcees still kind of "joke" - Gilbert Gottfried.
Stanzas come, then double entendre.
Amateur - another one, common.
Scan the verse - hunger does wander.
Manic thirst - other such vodka.
I'm a formidable, mythical, literal criminal.
Mind sums invincible, digital, clinical...
Gift to spit - speech harnesses.
"Flip the script" - geek pharmacist.
Hit a spliff - weed tolerance.
Witness this - see holograms.
Rend these "ill" rhymes as "dope" - pills or poppy.
Emcees still kind of "joke" - Gilbert Gottfried.
Stanzas come, then double entendre.
Amateur - another one, common.
Scan the verse - hunger does wander.
Manic thirst - other such vodka.
I'm a formidable, mythical, literal criminal.
Mind sums invincible, digital, clinical...
#LifeStruggles
#rhyming
#lyrics
#WritingPoetry
#rap
497 reads
0 Comments
Robert
Robert Oliva
Robert Oliva
Poem Published
1st Dec 2023 2:21am
1st Dec 2023 2:21am
Skip the Selfish Road
SKIP THE SELFISH ROAD
I know, i recognize, i realize, i can't deny. My heart skips a little beat,
Sometimes i struggle just to breathe.
Never before did i believe that the love that i now feel is the reason why, why we dare to hope and dream, that the best that life can bring can humbly be achieved when we find love.
I thought i always knew about love,
It's in songs and lot's of books.
I tried and tried to live without love,
Selfish was the road i took.
U taught me life was all about love,
A fact too many overlook,
Now life's...
I know, i recognize, i realize, i can't deny. My heart skips a little beat,
Sometimes i struggle just to breathe.
Never before did i believe that the love that i now feel is the reason why, why we dare to hope and dream, that the best that life can bring can humbly be achieved when we find love.
I thought i always knew about love,
It's in songs and lot's of books.
I tried and tried to live without love,
Selfish was the road i took.
U taught me life was all about love,
A fact too many overlook,
Now life's...
#love
62 reads
6 Comments
Marks
Poem Published
1st Aug 2022 6:40pm
1st Aug 2022 6:40pm
Now or now
.. ...
Love is calling
Unexpected
I'm ready
It's a warning
So seductive
I'm melting
I'm a river
She's the ocean
I remember
I remember
She's like ... ... a memory
How long ... ... has it been?
Too long
Too long
Is she ... ... the one I want ?
She is ... ... unavoidable
Now or never
Now or now
Now, now, now
...
Love is calling
Unexpected
I'm ready
Budding romance
Autumn trees
New beginning
Hell is dying ...
Love is calling
Unexpected
I'm ready
It's a warning
So seductive
I'm melting
I'm a river
She's the ocean
I remember
I remember
She's like ... ... a memory
How long ... ... has it been?
Too long
Too long
Is she ... ... the one I want ?
She is ... ... unavoidable
Now or never
Now or now
Now, now, now
...
Love is calling
Unexpected
I'm ready
Budding romance
Autumn trees
New beginning
Hell is dying ...
#love
650 reads
18 Comments
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