Song Lyrics by Top Critiquers
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Song lyrics poems and music poetry
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
14th Dec 2020 8:14pm
14th Dec 2020 8:14pm
A Senryú Ode To Somewhere Over The Rainbow
Somewhere bluebirds fly
Troubles melt like lemon drops
Why oh why, can't I
Troubles melt like lemon drops
Why oh why, can't I
#love
#rainbow
#music
#lyrics
#nostalgia
146 reads
23 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2021 5:27am
3rd Apr 2021 5:27am
Purple Reign
I do NOT own the rights to this song rewritten or in its altered state
This is so beautiful in harmony if you sing it as Prince is singing his version, try it, trust me
I never meant to cause you any problems
Or walk away with distress to the brain
I only wanted one time to see you smile and changing
Rapture while dancing in the bliss of a SweetKitty’s Purple Reign
Purple reign, purple reign
Purple reign, purple reign
Purple reign, purple reign
Only want to see you...
This is so beautiful in harmony if you sing it as Prince is singing his version, try it, trust me
I never meant to cause you any problems
Or walk away with distress to the brain
I only wanted one time to see you smile and changing
Rapture while dancing in the bliss of a SweetKitty’s Purple Reign
Purple reign, purple reign
Purple reign, purple reign
Purple reign, purple reign
Only want to see you...
#music
#lyrics
104 reads
21 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
9th Feb 2021 1:53pm
9th Feb 2021 1:53pm
IF I COULD WRITE A LOVE SONG
There are a million love songs
That I could sing
I wish I could write one
It seems like the right thing
Our love is so different
In oh so many ways
A song can't do it justice
I'd like to write one anyway.
CHORUS:
If I could write a love song
I tell you what I would say
I'll always love you darling
'Till my dying day
If I could write a love song
It would include your name
You are my love song
The music that I sing.
It wouldn't be just another ...
That I could sing
I wish I could write one
It seems like the right thing
Our love is so different
In oh so many ways
A song can't do it justice
I'd like to write one anyway.
CHORUS:
If I could write a love song
I tell you what I would say
I'll always love you darling
'Till my dying day
If I could write a love song
It would include your name
You are my love song
The music that I sing.
It wouldn't be just another ...
#happiness
#love
#inspirational
#admiration
#respect
68 reads
0 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
13th Aug 2020 4:44pm
13th Aug 2020 4:44pm
A Little This
With a little this, and a little that
something to amuse myself
perhaps memories of guacamole
or a cat cradle with strings
winding around your fingers
silence whispers, reading Gunga Din
baa baa baby have you kissed my shadow
with a little this, and a little that
a little birdie told me so
something to amuse myself
perhaps memories of guacamole
or a cat cradle with strings
winding around your fingers
silence whispers, reading Gunga Din
baa baa baby have you kissed my shadow
with a little this, and a little that
a little birdie told me so
#love
#romantic
150 reads
2 Comments
Em-ily
Poem Published
11th May 2021 4:32am
11th May 2021 4:32am
66 Emily Salt (19 August 2020)
2020 was...a year. Visual poem
Male 2 Moi? Breath Yes I am human
I'm a transgender woman in my life. It is confusing. He
is an impostor
And I loved the lover. Ever since I raised my hands and talked to hell with hell, I have not touched or touched anyone else.
The idea of trying to be
I take hormones
that was 22 tears ago.
I wish someone would
touch me - [Mich I knew what was in this "new" transgender
body.] It's true, my life has become a valley
...
Male 2 Moi? Breath Yes I am human
I'm a transgender woman in my life. It is confusing. He
is an impostor
And I loved the lover. Ever since I raised my hands and talked to hell with hell, I have not touched or touched anyone else.
The idea of trying to be
I take hormones
that was 22 tears ago.
I wish someone would
touch me - [Mich I knew what was in this "new" transgender
body.] It's true, my life has become a valley
...
#pandemic
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0 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
17th Jan 2016 00:20am
17th Jan 2016 00:20am
Working On A Rose Garden
On an icy winter morning
I get up out of bed
Roll away from the beautiful woman
Who always keeps me fed
I'd rather stay at home though
Can't satisfy my boss
With my girl I know I'm welcome
Good Lord, my woman's soft
I head out to the pickup
That's never let me down
Then race out to the jobsite
Just outside of town
They work me like a rented mule
Be good and dirty 'fore I'm through
Well that's fine And I don't mind
Just a thing a man must do
Well I know my woman loves me
And she knows I love her too ...
I get up out of bed
Roll away from the beautiful woman
Who always keeps me fed
I'd rather stay at home though
Can't satisfy my boss
With my girl I know I'm welcome
Good Lord, my woman's soft
I head out to the pickup
That's never let me down
Then race out to the jobsite
Just outside of town
They work me like a rented mule
Be good and dirty 'fore I'm through
Well that's fine And I don't mind
Just a thing a man must do
Well I know my woman loves me
And she knows I love her too ...
446 reads
2 Comments
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
3rd Jun 2015 7:06pm
3rd Jun 2015 7:06pm
POETDITTY
(Sung to the tune of Waylon Jennings' "Momma Don't Let Your Babies Grow Up To Be Cowboys"-intended to be funny not inflammatory, after all I'm a member of the tribe)
*"Momma don’t let your babies"
grow up to be poets
don’t let’em write stanzas
or live in a loft
expose ‘em to hard labor
before they go soft
"Momma don’t let your babies"
grow up to be poets
they always complain
and the best are insane
pining for someone they love
* Quoted verbatim from Waylon Jennings' song,...
*"Momma don’t let your babies"
grow up to be poets
don’t let’em write stanzas
or live in a loft
expose ‘em to hard labor
before they go soft
"Momma don’t let your babies"
grow up to be poets
they always complain
and the best are insane
pining for someone they love
* Quoted verbatim from Waylon Jennings' song,...
668 reads
12 Comments
Penguinphile
Poem Published
4th May 2021 11:24am
4th May 2021 11:24am
I don't know
Now that I belong to the winds
Lost like a kite in it
When did these changes came
I don't know
Took me under the new grey skies
One with no birds or flies
Wondered if one could even fly there
Brought me now where?
I don't know
The cloud of time was just fleeting
Opened my palms and made a fist
But, it just brushed by with greetings.
Brought me now where
I don't know
Even at this height,
My eyes could not find
birds of dreams.
Still have hope
I will ever return
Back...
Lost like a kite in it
When did these changes came
I don't know
Took me under the new grey skies
One with no birds or flies
Wondered if one could even fly there
Brought me now where?
I don't know
The cloud of time was just fleeting
Opened my palms and made a fist
But, it just brushed by with greetings.
Brought me now where
I don't know
Even at this height,
My eyes could not find
birds of dreams.
Still have hope
I will ever return
Back...
#sky
32 reads
1 Comment
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2015 11:59pm
2nd Jul 2015 11:59pm
[2015] It Takes Two To Ghost Dance
I've traveled this trail of tears
so many times before
always ending with a crying shaman
left behind holding the bag
waving a white flag
Here I am, not as lawman, just a layman
giving you a taste of your own medicine
Man, do you hear what I'm sayin'?
when I say that
Apache servers make for poor spirit horses
charging flaming buffalo wing style across
battlefield littered with bull shitters impaled
by their own disdain dipped arrows...
so many times before
always ending with a crying shaman
left behind holding the bag
waving a white flag
Here I am, not as lawman, just a layman
giving you a taste of your own medicine
Man, do you hear what I'm sayin'?
when I say that
Apache servers make for poor spirit horses
charging flaming buffalo wing style across
battlefield littered with bull shitters impaled
by their own disdain dipped arrows...
772 reads
2 Comments
samael
Poem Published
19th Apr 2019 6:08pm
19th Apr 2019 6:08pm
Galatic puddle,piddle paddle pouty lip pressure wash the smile right off my face
I want a postmarked package in the mail filled with your hearts, and kiss,& love.
I want your war,
I want your fashion.
I'll be your bathtub water rub a dub passion.
I'd be your dental floss up between your teeth.
the moist towel wrapped around your head,
the monster built on flashlight death crawling in your bed,
it's who I am.
expensive cup of coffee spilled dripping in your lap,
hopeless romantic requiem feel free to scream "you sap"
I want your love.
I want your war,
I want your fashion.
I'll be your bathtub water rub a dub passion.
I'd be your dental floss up between your teeth.
the moist towel wrapped around your head,
the monster built on flashlight death crawling in your bed,
it's who I am.
expensive cup of coffee spilled dripping in your lap,
hopeless romantic requiem feel free to scream "you sap"
I want your love.
#love
#FallingInLove
#UnrequitedLove #PowerOfWords
#UnrequitedLove #PowerOfWords
219 reads
0 Comments
Razzerleaf
Poem Published
27th Jan 2020 2:55am
27th Jan 2020 2:55am
Reason to carry on
Another back street drinking wine
sleeping rough and losing time
I knelt down in the gutter
and I offered up a prayer.
I wanted to hear him answer
but he don't come round here.
I listened hard but I'll tell you
I didn't know which way to go
I listened hard but I'll tell you
No one came to save me I know.
So I sat back by the roadside
many times I've took that ride
I tell you friend it was so cold
that I offered up my soul.
This time I asked for nothing
didn't want a single thing.
...
sleeping rough and losing time
I knelt down in the gutter
and I offered up a prayer.
I wanted to hear him answer
but he don't come round here.
I listened hard but I'll tell you
I didn't know which way to go
I listened hard but I'll tell you
No one came to save me I know.
So I sat back by the roadside
many times I've took that ride
I tell you friend it was so cold
that I offered up my soul.
This time I asked for nothing
didn't want a single thing.
...
#lyrics
159 reads
0 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
17th May 2019 2:15am
17th May 2019 2:15am
Neoteric Canzonet
There’s a new song in my heart
since Beautiful Em
has set it free
There’s a new song in my heart
it’s a wonderful
synchronicity!
Most of my cares
are cast away
via transparencies
on display. . .
O what peace of mind
this is sooo sublime
There’s a new song
in
my heart!
since Beautiful Em
has set it free
There’s a new song in my heart
it’s a wonderful
synchronicity!
Most of my cares
are cast away
via transparencies
on display. . .
O what peace of mind
this is sooo sublime
There’s a new song
in
my heart!
#love
#romantic
#spiritual
318 reads
15 Comments
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