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NewBeginnings
Poem Published
19th Jan 2019 4:31am
19th Jan 2019 4:31am
You
When you’re sad, I’ll hold you close to me…and catch your tears.
And when you’re old, I’ll still be there for you…through all the years.
You are beautiful like evergreens, riverbeds, and rocky streams!
You caught my eye!
You are beautiful like daffodils that grow along the rolling hills!
I’m so in love!
And I don’t think I’ve ever felt this way about anyone but...
You.
And when you’re down, I’ll always be around…to make you smile
When you’re glad, I’ll be there for you too…I’ll stay awhile.
You are beautiful like...
And when you’re old, I’ll still be there for you…through all the years.
You are beautiful like evergreens, riverbeds, and rocky streams!
You caught my eye!
You are beautiful like daffodils that grow along the rolling hills!
I’m so in love!
And I don’t think I’ve ever felt this way about anyone but...
You.
And when you’re down, I’ll always be around…to make you smile
When you’re glad, I’ll be there for you too…I’ll stay awhile.
You are beautiful like...
#love
#beauty
#nature #lyrics
#nature #lyrics
461 reads
30 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
17th May 2019 2:15am
17th May 2019 2:15am
Neoteric Canzonet
There’s a new song in my heart
since Beautiful Em
has set it free
There’s a new song in my heart
it’s a wonderful
synchronicity!
Most of my cares
are cast away
via transparencies
on display. . .
O what peace of mind
this is sooo sublime
There’s a new song
in
my heart!
since Beautiful Em
has set it free
There’s a new song in my heart
it’s a wonderful
synchronicity!
Most of my cares
are cast away
via transparencies
on display. . .
O what peace of mind
this is sooo sublime
There’s a new song
in
my heart!
#love
#romantic
#spiritual
214 reads
15 Comments
Pimp2ThaFuture04
Poem Published
4th Jul 2020 1:40pm
4th Jul 2020 1:40pm
Ten Kunoichi By WiseConscious
This may remind you of a
Rhapsody
maybe it's just the rap ninja inside of
me
It is now time to reveal
my techniques
I was told that if I don't work
I don't eat
I don't count on sheep
If the ends don't meet
then my city will have
drama in it's streets
I'm a vegetarian now
I got rid of the beef
I am humble
I am meek
Emotions do run deep
My Intel supersedes
Everything I was taught
I take heed
But others walk the earth
In lust and...
Rhapsody
maybe it's just the rap ninja inside of
me
It is now time to reveal
my techniques
I was told that if I don't work
I don't eat
I don't count on sheep
If the ends don't meet
then my city will have
drama in it's streets
I'm a vegetarian now
I got rid of the beef
I am humble
I am meek
Emotions do run deep
My Intel supersedes
Everything I was taught
I take heed
But others walk the earth
In lust and...
#LifeAsAWriter
#PowerOfWords
#rap #determination
#rap #determination
52 reads
4 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
1st Jul 2020 4:04pm
1st Jul 2020 4:04pm
Dark Zinfandel
Dark Zinfandel, dripping exotic notes
sweet of your nectar, my lips parched
by the winds in the fields
of your inferno's ecstasy
for I am your magician
dipping into your flute
dark Zinfandel, dripping exotic notes
sweet of your nectar, my lips parched
by the winds in the fields
of your inferno's ecstasy
for I am your magician
dipping into your flute
dark Zinfandel, dripping exotic notes
#love
#dark
24 reads
2 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2015 11:59pm
2nd Jul 2015 11:59pm
[2015] It Takes Two To Ghost Dance
I've traveled this trail of tears
so many times before
always ending with a crying shaman
left behind holding the bag
waving a white flag
Here I am, not as lawman, just a layman
giving you a taste of your own medicine
Man, do you hear what I'm sayin'?
when I say that
Apache servers make for poor spirit horses
charging buffalo wing style across
battlefield littered with bull shitters impaled
by their own disdain dipped arrows scrolled
dulled keyboard...
so many times before
always ending with a crying shaman
left behind holding the bag
waving a white flag
Here I am, not as lawman, just a layman
giving you a taste of your own medicine
Man, do you hear what I'm sayin'?
when I say that
Apache servers make for poor spirit horses
charging buffalo wing style across
battlefield littered with bull shitters impaled
by their own disdain dipped arrows scrolled
dulled keyboard...
678 reads
2 Comments
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
3rd Jun 2015 7:06pm
3rd Jun 2015 7:06pm
POETDITTY
(Sung to the tune of Waylon Jennings' "Momma Don't Let Your Babies Grow Up To Be Cowboys"-intended to be funny not inflammatory, after all I'm a member of the tribe)
*"Momma don’t let your babies"
grow up to be poets
don’t let’em write stanzas
or live in a loft
expose ‘em to hard labor
before they go soft
"Momma don’t let your babies"
grow up to be poets
they always complain
and the best are insane
pining for someone they love
* Quoted verbatim from Waylon Jennings' song,...
*"Momma don’t let your babies"
grow up to be poets
don’t let’em write stanzas
or live in a loft
expose ‘em to hard labor
before they go soft
"Momma don’t let your babies"
grow up to be poets
they always complain
and the best are insane
pining for someone they love
* Quoted verbatim from Waylon Jennings' song,...
576 reads
12 Comments
EdibleWords
Poem Published
21st Feb 2020 8:27pm
21st Feb 2020 8:27pm
Call to Heaven
Ring ring
Ring ring
Ring ring
Goddamit
Pick it up
I've been
listening
faithfully
to every
message
on earth's
answering
machine
I never
bothered
to return
your calls
because
earthlings
are used
to being
very small
Sooooo....
Ring ring
Ring ring
Ring ring
Finally I'm
answering
for everything
in my machine
Ring ring
Ring ring ...
Ring ring
Ring ring
Goddamit
Pick it up
I've been
listening
faithfully
to every
message
on earth's
answering
machine
I never
bothered
to return
your calls
because
earthlings
are used
to being
very small
Sooooo....
Ring ring
Ring ring
Ring ring
Finally I'm
answering
for everything
in my machine
Ring ring
Ring ring ...
#lyrics
116 reads
11 Comments
Blackwolf
Poem Published
14th Jan 2019 00:32am
14th Jan 2019 00:32am
Rapped Around My Finger
Rap them round your finger , then "snap" gone , word done
though they have no idea where you comin' from , respect
defect last time checked there was no connect , no introspect
just a need to interject and redirect thinking they got some
intellect dialect when all it was was a doppler effect and a
misdirect misanthrope one more reject let my bitch slap
push them back yak thwak full frontal attack a bushwhack
comeback feedback maniac coming full bore what they
begging for locked them in and sealed the door...
though they have no idea where you comin' from , respect
defect last time checked there was no connect , no introspect
just a need to interject and redirect thinking they got some
intellect dialect when all it was was a doppler effect and a
misdirect misanthrope one more reject let my bitch slap
push them back yak thwak full frontal attack a bushwhack
comeback feedback maniac coming full bore what they
begging for locked them in and sealed the door...
#power
#LifeStruggles
#MentalHealth #ignorance
#MentalHealth #ignorance
192 reads
5 Comments
ChynaBay311
Poem Published
21st Apr 2019 1:24am
21st Apr 2019 1:24am
What Happened to The Love We Once Had
Here is the revision version.
As I listen to the music on the radio,
My mind wonder to what we had yesterday.
The songs we would sing together and for each other,
The walks in the park,
Hand in hand
Paying no attention to the smiling people passing by.
The conversations we never wanted to stop,
And the passion that lead us to
Higher heights that we shared so much.
What happen to the love we had.
It's said that sometimes you have to let it go,
But if its real it'll return to...
As I listen to the music on the radio,
My mind wonder to what we had yesterday.
The songs we would sing together and for each other,
The walks in the park,
Hand in hand
Paying no attention to the smiling people passing by.
The conversations we never wanted to stop,
And the passion that lead us to
Higher heights that we shared so much.
What happen to the love we had.
It's said that sometimes you have to let it go,
But if its real it'll return to...
#relationships
#forgiveness
#romantic
#FallingInLove
#dating
364 reads
10 Comments
Joseph-Zenieh
Poem Published
4th Nov 2019 10:08pm
4th Nov 2019 10:08pm
MEANING AND RHYTHM
MEANING AND RHYTHM
Poetry, you are the truth,
gliding in the sky above.
You descend in rhythmic lines,
chanted by the lips of muse.
With the lyre in her hand,
and the thougts inside her mind,
she sings with her splendid beats
the essence of the whole life.
All her feelings have deep sense,
and she sings them in good rhythm.
She dislikes the trivial thoughts,
written in unrhythmic style.
BY JOSEPH ZENIEH
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
____________________________________
Poetry, you are the truth,
gliding in the sky above.
You descend in rhythmic lines,
chanted by the lips of muse.
With the lyre in her hand,
and the thougts inside her mind,
she sings with her splendid beats
the essence of the whole life.
All her feelings have deep sense,
and she sings them in good rhythm.
She dislikes the trivial thoughts,
written in unrhythmic style.
BY JOSEPH ZENIEH
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
____________________________________
#WritingPoetry
160 reads
3 Comments
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
30th May 2018 4:56am
30th May 2018 4:56am
The Right Side of the Grass
Well, I done lost my grip...
and my skin don't fit...
My perky parts ain't perky any more.
Cain't find my keys
and now my knees
are evenin' the score...for
all the stupid things I done
when I was a young lass.
So don't just mope
'cause there's always hope
on the right side of the grass.
Every cliff I climbed
All the falls I took
as I bounced down the hill on my ass.. ...
and my skin don't fit...
My perky parts ain't perky any more.
Cain't find my keys
and now my knees
are evenin' the score...for
all the stupid things I done
when I was a young lass.
So don't just mope
'cause there's always hope
on the right side of the grass.
Every cliff I climbed
All the falls I took
as I bounced down the hill on my ass.. ...
#courage
#LifeGoals
#aging #acceptance
#aging #acceptance
339 reads
2 Comments
DevilsChild
Poem Published
16th Dec 2015 10:12pm
16th Dec 2015 10:12pm
Entitled
Take me back to the time
When she wanted me to go with her to the school dance
I was a bad kid so I got in-school suspension
Sweet talked the teacher into letting me go
Showed up late to find her dancing with someone else
Just hung out the rest of the day with my friends
As they blasted Offspring’s “Pretty fly” on the radio
It was good to live through my generation
Guess its all perspective but
Late 90s early 2000s is where I found my favorite songs
Wish I would have known it while it lasted
Still have my old blink records in the attic...
When she wanted me to go with her to the school dance
I was a bad kid so I got in-school suspension
Sweet talked the teacher into letting me go
Showed up late to find her dancing with someone else
Just hung out the rest of the day with my friends
As they blasted Offspring’s “Pretty fly” on the radio
It was good to live through my generation
Guess its all perspective but
Late 90s early 2000s is where I found my favorite songs
Wish I would have known it while it lasted
Still have my old blink records in the attic...
459 reads
2 Comments
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