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Tallen
Poem Published
21st Feb 2019 9:46pm
21st Feb 2019 9:46pm
Your Love (And I'm in Love!)
Oooooo. . .
What can I do
When You're the one who's got control?
Oooooo. . .
It's a brand new day
And I love what You're doin' to my soul!
And I'm in love!
Love!
And I'm not afraid to say it.
Love! Love!
Singin' and a playin'
I can step out in love 'cause I know ----
You'll never let me go!
If I am sad and feelin' so blue
I think of who loves me----eeeee.
And vision of memory starts to come through
And You're beauty sets me free----eeeee.
Oooooo. . .
What can I do
When...
What can I do
When You're the one who's got control?
Oooooo. . .
It's a brand new day
And I love what You're doin' to my soul!
And I'm in love!
Love!
And I'm not afraid to say it.
Love! Love!
Singin' and a playin'
I can step out in love 'cause I know ----
You'll never let me go!
If I am sad and feelin' so blue
I think of who loves me----eeeee.
And vision of memory starts to come through
And You're beauty sets me free----eeeee.
Oooooo. . .
What can I do
When...
#love
85 reads
20 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
27th Jul 2018 4:00pm
27th Jul 2018 4:00pm
Revelry
The morning pangs still drum out revelry
but now are cast aside in this self-made leprosy
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're already suffering
So I hit the shelf and pour out some punishment
get riled up on CNN and the government
I burn my songs with a lifetime effigy
senseless days long lost in the wondering
Midday comes and the smoke's still stuttering
life's a mess, as my mind keeps uttering
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're...
but now are cast aside in this self-made leprosy
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're already suffering
So I hit the shelf and pour out some punishment
get riled up on CNN and the government
I burn my songs with a lifetime effigy
senseless days long lost in the wondering
Midday comes and the smoke's still stuttering
life's a mess, as my mind keeps uttering
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're...
#depression
#death
138 reads
11 Comments
Lookawaynow
Rose
Rose
Poem Published
31st Mar 2018 6:27am
31st Mar 2018 6:27am
Eighth Ball
#UnrequitedLove
163 reads
4 Comments
crowfly
Poem Published
21st Oct 2014 4:25pm
21st Oct 2014 4:25pm
Dracula: The Opera
Mist rising from the twilit ground
Awake, my children of the night
The sun has retreated and the lost are found
And darkness encourages our sight
I rejoice in this perfect hour
As remnants of sleep fall away
I thrill in this surge of power
Still growing with the death of day
We're emerging in a barren land
The landscape long curse with terror
The righteous will no longer take a stand
Their resolve has vanished in the air
My spirit will learn to dip and soar
Set sail beneath the stars above
I will step proudly on a foreign...
Awake, my children of the night
The sun has retreated and the lost are found
And darkness encourages our sight
I rejoice in this perfect hour
As remnants of sleep fall away
I thrill in this surge of power
Still growing with the death of day
We're emerging in a barren land
The landscape long curse with terror
The righteous will no longer take a stand
Their resolve has vanished in the air
My spirit will learn to dip and soar
Set sail beneath the stars above
I will step proudly on a foreign...
396 reads
2 Comments
NewBeginnings
Poem Published
19th Jan 2019 4:31am
19th Jan 2019 4:31am
You
When you’re sad, I’ll hold you close to me…and catch your tears.
And when you’re old, I’ll still be there for you…through all the years.
You are beautiful like evergreens, riverbeds, and rocky streams!
You caught my eye!
You are beautiful like daffodils that grow along the rolling hills!
I’m so in love!
And I don’t think I’ve ever felt this way about anyone but...
You.
And when you’re down, I’ll always be around…to make you smile
When you’re glad, I’ll be there for you too…I’ll stay awhile.
You are beautiful like...
And when you’re old, I’ll still be there for you…through all the years.
You are beautiful like evergreens, riverbeds, and rocky streams!
You caught my eye!
You are beautiful like daffodils that grow along the rolling hills!
I’m so in love!
And I don’t think I’ve ever felt this way about anyone but...
You.
And when you’re down, I’ll always be around…to make you smile
When you’re glad, I’ll be there for you too…I’ll stay awhile.
You are beautiful like...
#love
#beauty
#nature #lyrics
#nature #lyrics
225 reads
29 Comments
SoulzGirl69
Poem Published
8th Dec 2018 8:13pm
8th Dec 2018 8:13pm
Love me back to life
Your words
Your touch
Your loving
Your passionate kiss
I have your words
Your touch lingers
In my dreams
Your love for me
Sealed with your
Final kiss
This is no goodbye
I touch your lips
Skin on skin
Forever
Here in
My dreams
I don't love you
...not yet
But I love
Everything about you
Your touch
Your loving
Your passionate kiss
I have your words
Your touch lingers
In my dreams
Your love for me
Sealed with your
Final kiss
This is no goodbye
I touch your lips
Skin on skin
Forever
Here in
My dreams
I don't love you
...not yet
But I love
Everything about you
#hope
#admiration
141 reads
13 Comments
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
jade tiger
Poem Published
16th Jan 2019 10:26am
16th Jan 2019 10:26am
Faith, in Chains
( uncut version )
When the weather takes a turn
For the worst of how you feel.
Ripped down to bare bones that burn,
Stripped down to your cage of steel.
I’m the lover waiting there,
In the deepest of your pain.
Lets you know your heart I’ll wear,
Locked it with your ball & chain.
Sudden glimpse the underworld,
I furtive meet another.
Brazen crave, the other’s furled,
Of every man his brother.
Gone, my sweet touch while alive,
Feel the claws that open you.
Take the honey from the hive, ...
When the weather takes a turn
For the worst of how you feel.
Ripped down to bare bones that burn,
Stripped down to your cage of steel.
I’m the lover waiting there,
In the deepest of your pain.
Lets you know your heart I’ll wear,
Locked it with your ball & chain.
Sudden glimpse the underworld,
I furtive meet another.
Brazen crave, the other’s furled,
Of every man his brother.
Gone, my sweet touch while alive,
Feel the claws that open you.
Take the honey from the hive, ...
#dark
#faith
#lyrics
#lover
#denial
165 reads
14 Comments
cold_fusion
Poem Published
30th Dec 2017 1:16pm
30th Dec 2017 1:16pm
mama never told me no lie
mama you said there is light
mama i can't see
mama i can't see
mama you say that there is light
mama i can't see
mama i can't see
though you never told me no lie
mama how can it be?
mama how can it be?
then why can't i see?
you say dad'll come home soon
mama when will he?
mama when will he?
you said dad'll come home soon
mama when will he?
mama when will he?
it's been too long we played
mama daddy and me
mama daddy and me...
mama i can't see
mama i can't see
mama you say that there is light
mama i can't see
mama i can't see
though you never told me no lie
mama how can it be?
mama how can it be?
then why can't i see?
you say dad'll come home soon
mama when will he?
mama when will he?
you said dad'll come home soon
mama when will he?
mama when will he?
it's been too long we played
mama daddy and me
mama daddy and me...
294 reads
14 Comments
DevilsChild
Poem Published
16th Dec 2015 10:12pm
16th Dec 2015 10:12pm
Entitled
Take me back to the time
When she wanted me to go with her to the school dance
I was a bad kid so I got in-school suspension
Sweet talked the teacher into letting me go
Showed up late to find her dancing with someone else
Just hung out the rest of the day with my friends
As they blasted Offspring’s “Pretty fly” on the radio
It was good to live through my generation
Guess its all perspective but
Late 90s early 2000s is where I found my favorite songs
Wish I would have known it while it lasted
Still have my old blink records in the attic...
When she wanted me to go with her to the school dance
I was a bad kid so I got in-school suspension
Sweet talked the teacher into letting me go
Showed up late to find her dancing with someone else
Just hung out the rest of the day with my friends
As they blasted Offspring’s “Pretty fly” on the radio
It was good to live through my generation
Guess its all perspective but
Late 90s early 2000s is where I found my favorite songs
Wish I would have known it while it lasted
Still have my old blink records in the attic...
353 reads
2 Comments
David_Macleod
Poem Published
1st Aug 2017 6:54pm
1st Aug 2017 6:54pm
BITCH! - - - - For the Hardcore Rap Comp
Ah aint no body’s fool
An Am hung like a mule
Gotta a huge meaty dagger
It’s why Ah walk with a swagger
There aint nobody bigger
What rhymes with bigger?
You got it ma trigger
Ma grave digger
Full of vigour
Aint got no rigor
Like an Irish jigger
Step off
Hey now wazzup
Ah tried to smack ma bitch up
An Am hardcore
Ah don’t snore
Cause Am a porn dawg
Ah play leapfrog
With ma own cock
It’s like a rock
A puts it in a sock
Like Michael Jackson Ah beat it ...
An Am hung like a mule
Gotta a huge meaty dagger
It’s why Ah walk with a swagger
There aint nobody bigger
What rhymes with bigger?
You got it ma trigger
Ma grave digger
Full of vigour
Aint got no rigor
Like an Irish jigger
Step off
Hey now wazzup
Ah tried to smack ma bitch up
An Am hardcore
Ah don’t snore
Cause Am a porn dawg
Ah play leapfrog
With ma own cock
It’s like a rock
A puts it in a sock
Like Michael Jackson Ah beat it ...
225 reads
16 Comments
runaway-mindtrain
Poem Published
21st Apr 2018 8:33am
21st Apr 2018 8:33am
walking their haunted mind
Chorus six part:
Oh such brilliant contradiction the antiquarian rewound
The verse of ideas shows a world of people the same
Mistletoe carried tree to tree but never reaching ground
The scope of people shows a world of ideas the same...
Ol' Jim atomic crow bombing of the minds in the streets
Squaring the circle headed with some smoke and blow
A pack of pyrias ten deep with minds of women in leech
As the enlightenment brought darkness so we pimp and ho...
Ten sec drum solo with bass...
Organ:
An old master ringing a...
Oh such brilliant contradiction the antiquarian rewound
The verse of ideas shows a world of people the same
Mistletoe carried tree to tree but never reaching ground
The scope of people shows a world of ideas the same...
Ol' Jim atomic crow bombing of the minds in the streets
Squaring the circle headed with some smoke and blow
A pack of pyrias ten deep with minds of women in leech
As the enlightenment brought darkness so we pimp and ho...
Ten sec drum solo with bass...
Organ:
An old master ringing a...
#music
#rhyming
#satirical
198 reads
7 Comments
Ely
Poem Published
30th May 2018 4:56am
30th May 2018 4:56am
The Right Side of the Grass
Well, I done lost my grip...
and my skin don't fit...
My perky parts ain't perky any more.
Cain't find my keys
and now my knees
are evenin' the score...for
all the stupid things I done
when I was just a lass.
So don't be a dope
'cause there's always hope
on the right side of the grass.
Every cliff I climbed
All the falls I took
as I bounced down the slope on my ass..
But, hey... it's OK
'cause I'm still hangin' here
on the...
and my skin don't fit...
My perky parts ain't perky any more.
Cain't find my keys
and now my knees
are evenin' the score...for
all the stupid things I done
when I was just a lass.
So don't be a dope
'cause there's always hope
on the right side of the grass.
Every cliff I climbed
All the falls I took
as I bounced down the slope on my ass..
But, hey... it's OK
'cause I'm still hangin' here
on the...
#courage
#LifeStruggles
#fate #luck
#fate #luck
148 reads
1 Comment
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