Song Lyrics by Top Critiquers
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Bluevelvete
Poem Published
14th Dec 2020 8:14pm
14th Dec 2020 8:14pm
A Senryú Ode To Somewhere Over The Rainbow
Somewhere bluebirds fly
Troubles melt like lemon drops
Why oh why, can't I
Troubles melt like lemon drops
Why oh why, can't I
#love
#rainbow
#music
#lyrics
#nostalgia
207 reads
23 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2021 5:57am
23rd Sep 2021 5:57am
A Soft Taste Of Reminise
Caresses of heart yearns in all its splendid glory of a hushed confession
Tasting the dew drops of a skin to skin, breath to breath heated obsession
Such beautiful minds conjoined I must say
Bodies teetering within the sweetest melody of rapture ever played
Rainfalls of soaking blissful love
Such a beautiful word felt when the heart and mind has been given its due from above
Mm... kiss me tenderly in the height of tomorrow, his hungry hands rove as they patrol
Blend me under the sheets, tongues...
Tasting the dew drops of a skin to skin, breath to breath heated obsession
Such beautiful minds conjoined I must say
Bodies teetering within the sweetest melody of rapture ever played
Rainfalls of soaking blissful love
Such a beautiful word felt when the heart and mind has been given its due from above
Mm... kiss me tenderly in the height of tomorrow, his hungry hands rove as they patrol
Blend me under the sheets, tongues...
#lover
#sensual
#passion
184 reads
10 Comments
WilliamEdwardNight
Poem Published
14th Nov 2021 7:46am
14th Nov 2021 7:46am
Trees In The Golden Rain
With a long wind song cool
The distant day is passing
Wishing well hope sounds a spell
These sonnets of the depth make
Hours cope
I see trees in the golden rain
Redolent moments then are true
The distant day is passing
Wishing well hope sounds a spell
These sonnets of the depth make
Hours cope
I see trees in the golden rain
Redolent moments then are true
#fire
38 reads
6 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
10th Nov 2021 4:27am
10th Nov 2021 4:27am
My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
Don't box me in
Cause these Spanish feathers
Been dreaming of embracing the wind
Rollercoaster heartbeat within
Small town Americana
West Coast Prima Donna
Tired of kissing rainbows
from below
Come on baby
its time to go
Won't be taking the car
Cause my wings
baby they stretch far
Nope I won't be touching the wheel
I just don't like the way they make me feel
Gotta be in the air that's the deal
Been burning in park for so so long
Won't be taking the car ...
Cause these Spanish feathers
Been dreaming of embracing the wind
Rollercoaster heartbeat within
Small town Americana
West Coast Prima Donna
Tired of kissing rainbows
from below
Come on baby
its time to go
Won't be taking the car
Cause my wings
baby they stretch far
Nope I won't be touching the wheel
I just don't like the way they make me feel
Gotta be in the air that's the deal
Been burning in park for so so long
Won't be taking the car ...
#love
#travel
112 reads
18 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
27th Jul 2018 4:00pm
27th Jul 2018 4:00pm
Revelry
The morning pangs still drum out revelry
but now are cast aside in this self-made leprosy
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're already suffering
So I hit the shelf and pour out some punishment
get riled up on CNN and the government
I burn my songs with a lifetime effigy
senseless days long lost in the wondering
Midday comes and the smoke's still stuttering
life's a mess, as my mind keeps uttering
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're...
but now are cast aside in this self-made leprosy
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're already suffering
So I hit the shelf and pour out some punishment
get riled up on CNN and the government
I burn my songs with a lifetime effigy
senseless days long lost in the wondering
Midday comes and the smoke's still stuttering
life's a mess, as my mind keeps uttering
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're...
#depression
#death
437 reads
11 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2015 11:59pm
2nd Jul 2015 11:59pm
[2015] It Takes Two To Ghost Dance
I've traveled this trail of tears
so many times before
always ending with a crying shaman
left behind holding the bag
waving a white flag
Here I am, not as lawman, just a layman
giving you a taste of your own medicine
Man, do you hear what I'm sayin'?
when I say that
Apache servers make for poor spirit horses
charging flaming buffalo wing style across
battlefield littered with bull shitters impaled
by their own disdain dipped arrows...
so many times before
always ending with a crying shaman
left behind holding the bag
waving a white flag
Here I am, not as lawman, just a layman
giving you a taste of your own medicine
Man, do you hear what I'm sayin'?
when I say that
Apache servers make for poor spirit horses
charging flaming buffalo wing style across
battlefield littered with bull shitters impaled
by their own disdain dipped arrows...
830 reads
2 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
21st Oct 2021 9:59pm
21st Oct 2021 9:59pm
THOUGHTS ABOUT WRITING A LOVE SONG
#1
There are millions of love songs
written since the dawn of man;
many have been lost
many still roam the land.
Every love song is special
written from desire in the heart
each one is about unique love
how and where it starts.
CHORUS
If I could write a love song
it would be about you;
it would contain your name
and my promise to be true.
If I could write a love song
I would sing it every day,
to remind us both
that our love is here to stay.
...
There are millions of love songs
written since the dawn of man;
many have been lost
many still roam the land.
Every love song is special
written from desire in the heart
each one is about unique love
how and where it starts.
CHORUS
If I could write a love song
it would be about you;
it would contain your name
and my promise to be true.
If I could write a love song
I would sing it every day,
to remind us both
that our love is here to stay.
...
#happiness
#love
#hope
#respect
#emotions
104 reads
3 Comments
Wired6
Poem Published
25th Nov 2021 3:00pm
25th Nov 2021 3:00pm
USE WORDS-
Disgraceful-
Shattered delights-
Unstable.
What made you-
De-human this Child-
She Hates you.
Hates you.
Hates you.
Why, does her heart,bleed inside-
She just wants 2 die- yeah.
Why,does her brain-
play those game's-
She just wants 2 cry.
Use Words-
Not fists 2 get them all-
It'll blow them away-
If that don't work-
then tell me now-
What Steps Do We Take?
©Wired6./Inc.1997.
Shattered delights-
Unstable.
What made you-
De-human this Child-
She Hates you.
Hates you.
Hates you.
Why, does her heart,bleed inside-
She just wants 2 die- yeah.
Why,does her brain-
play those game's-
She just wants 2 cry.
Use Words-
Not fists 2 get them all-
It'll blow them away-
If that don't work-
then tell me now-
What Steps Do We Take?
©Wired6./Inc.1997.
#abuse
#emotional
#fear
23 reads
0 Comments
Insiderew
Rew
Rew
Poem Published
10th Nov 2020 7:26pm
10th Nov 2020 7:26pm
Song Of Joy.
The organ blasts such great big windblown notes
out into the bright Sabbath's morning air,
bring a lump to lazy laggards throats
disturbing Sunday lunchtime slumbers there.
I can hear a bass-baritone voice, voice
words of Joy ''...help the weak and curb the strong...''
'tis such a huge hopeful thundering noise
thrilling this rapidly gathering throng.
Then all the bells in all the steeples ring
out in ringing appeals in this refrain
'' build the road of peace before us '' and sing
our song of joy, in peace, again.
out into the bright Sabbath's morning air,
bring a lump to lazy laggards throats
disturbing Sunday lunchtime slumbers there.
I can hear a bass-baritone voice, voice
words of Joy ''...help the weak and curb the strong...''
'tis such a huge hopeful thundering noise
thrilling this rapidly gathering throng.
Then all the bells in all the steeples ring
out in ringing appeals in this refrain
'' build the road of peace before us '' and sing
our song of joy, in peace, again.
#lyrics
128 reads
3 Comments
Joseph-Zenieh
Poem Published
20th Jul 2021 9:58pm
20th Jul 2021 9:58pm
WE HAVE ONE HEART.
WE HAVE ONE HEART.
If you love me, you can tell me
that we are two with one heart.
Both of us are singing one song
imposed on us by one guide.
I'm so happy when l hear you.
It's the same song that l sing.
As l hear it, my heart flutters
and l cheer up that you're near.
Tune of love, you stir all my life
giving me all what l want.
Hills and valleys get such nice fields
full of flowers and song birds.
Flowers give scent, birds their vocals,
changing my life to great mirth.
All that happens when you tell...
If you love me, you can tell me
that we are two with one heart.
Both of us are singing one song
imposed on us by one guide.
I'm so happy when l hear you.
It's the same song that l sing.
As l hear it, my heart flutters
and l cheer up that you're near.
Tune of love, you stir all my life
giving me all what l want.
Hills and valleys get such nice fields
full of flowers and song birds.
Flowers give scent, birds their vocals,
changing my life to great mirth.
All that happens when you tell...
#love
147 reads
22 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
18th Nov 2021 3:15pm
18th Nov 2021 3:15pm
Untitled, for now
We all need a muse from time to time
Someone to amuse when the notes won’t rhyme
A heart reaching for that same sunshine
I’ll be yours if you’ll be mine
It’s not a tryst or a love affair
Humanity’s burden just needs to be shared
Our souls are breathing the same dark air
I’ll be here if you’ll be there
We’re fighting battles and losing wars
Sending support from distant shores
Opening hearts to open the doors
Sing my song, and I’ll sing yours
Pull me, push me…
Higher than I thought I’d go
See me, teach me… ...
Someone to amuse when the notes won’t rhyme
A heart reaching for that same sunshine
I’ll be yours if you’ll be mine
It’s not a tryst or a love affair
Humanity’s burden just needs to be shared
Our souls are breathing the same dark air
I’ll be here if you’ll be there
We’re fighting battles and losing wars
Sending support from distant shores
Opening hearts to open the doors
Sing my song, and I’ll sing yours
Pull me, push me…
Higher than I thought I’d go
See me, teach me… ...
#friendship
#music
#support #crush
#support #crush
90 reads
18 Comments
Feet-Fanatic
Poem Published
14th Nov 2021 4:55am
14th Nov 2021 4:55am
These Are Good Old Days
Oh, how I miss the ''Good Old Days''.
Here I am Just thinking back to a time when I was a young, an invincible rebel, living like there were no tomorrows.
I was just another player in a band of high-strung passengers traveling warp speed and blazing through the ''Good Old Days''.
And it seems that it was not so long ago that I was adventurous, bullet proof, and oblivious to all of life's indelible sorrows.
I often wish that I could go back in time and relive my fun filled reckless nights that are burned into my brain like a unstoppable fiery blaze. ...
Here I am Just thinking back to a time when I was a young, an invincible rebel, living like there were no tomorrows.
I was just another player in a band of high-strung passengers traveling warp speed and blazing through the ''Good Old Days''.
And it seems that it was not so long ago that I was adventurous, bullet proof, and oblivious to all of life's indelible sorrows.
I often wish that I could go back in time and relive my fun filled reckless nights that are burned into my brain like a unstoppable fiery blaze. ...
#inspirational
#memories
#nostalgia #emotions
#nostalgia #emotions
73 reads
8 Comments
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