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NewBeginnings
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:31am
Yesterday 4:31am
You
When you’re sad, I’ll hold you close to me…and catch your tears.
And when you’re old, I’ll still be there for you…through all the years.
You are beautiful like evergreens, riverbeds, and rocky streams!
You caught my eye!
You are beautiful like daffodils that grow along the rolling hills!
I’m so in love!
And I don’t think I’ve ever felt this way about anyone but...
You.
And when you’re down, I’ll always be around…to make you smile
When you’re glad, I’ll be there for you too…I’ll stay awhile.
You are beautiful like...
And when you’re old, I’ll still be there for you…through all the years.
You are beautiful like evergreens, riverbeds, and rocky streams!
You caught my eye!
You are beautiful like daffodils that grow along the rolling hills!
I’m so in love!
And I don’t think I’ve ever felt this way about anyone but...
You.
And when you’re down, I’ll always be around…to make you smile
When you’re glad, I’ll be there for you too…I’ll stay awhile.
You are beautiful like...
#love
#wife
#beauty
#nature
#lyrics
59 reads
13 Comments
Tallen
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2019 4:20pm
2nd Jan 2019 4:20pm
Once is not Enough
I’ve discovered an endlessness of love
when I scaled the highest heavens above
‘cause I’ve held the most precious in my life
and it’s You, it’s You - oooooooooo
It’s been crazy
how I hunger for Your touch…..(Your touch)
even when our closeness prevails
lovin’ You, I found
once is not enough
Inside Your love
I feel Your warmth greeting me;
I sail the oceans of our labors
and when we’re done
laying quietly together
Still ----
I’m wanting You more.
It’s been crazy
how I hunger for Your...
when I scaled the highest heavens above
‘cause I’ve held the most precious in my life
and it’s You, it’s You - oooooooooo
It’s been crazy
how I hunger for Your touch…..(Your touch)
even when our closeness prevails
lovin’ You, I found
once is not enough
Inside Your love
I feel Your warmth greeting me;
I sail the oceans of our labors
and when we’re done
laying quietly together
Still ----
I’m wanting You more.
It’s been crazy
how I hunger for Your...
#lyrics
54 reads
0 Comments
SoulzGirl69
Poem Published
8th Dec 2018 8:13pm
8th Dec 2018 8:13pm
Love me back to life
Your words
Your touch
Your loving
Your passionate kiss
I have your words
Your touch lingers
In my dreams
Your love for me
Sealed with your
Final kiss
This is no goodbye
I touch your lips
Skin on skin
Forever
Here in
My dreams
I don't love you
...not yet
But I love
Everything about you
Your touch
Your loving
Your passionate kiss
I have your words
Your touch lingers
In my dreams
Your love for me
Sealed with your
Final kiss
This is no goodbye
I touch your lips
Skin on skin
Forever
Here in
My dreams
I don't love you
...not yet
But I love
Everything about you
#hope
#admiration
98 reads
13 Comments
theEgoEffect
Barona
Barona
Poem Published
13th Jan 2019 8:19am
13th Jan 2019 8:19am
you are love
**************
I know all too well
What's it's like in that hell
To feel all alone
Right down to the bone
I know that you tried
Smiled instead of cried
Always selfless
Guess it's now time
to rest
~-~-~-~-~-~-~
Your are love
What have you done
You are me
Why could I not see
~-~-~-~-~-~-~
Even today
You still light my way
Grateful somehow
Cause I feel you smile now
~-~-~-~-~-~-~
You are love
It can’t be undone ...
I know all too well
What's it's like in that hell
To feel all alone
Right down to the bone
I know that you tried
Smiled instead of cried
Always selfless
Guess it's now time
to rest
~-~-~-~-~-~-~
Your are love
What have you done
You are me
Why could I not see
~-~-~-~-~-~-~
Even today
You still light my way
Grateful somehow
Cause I feel you smile now
~-~-~-~-~-~-~
You are love
It can’t be undone ...
#love
#brother
#spiritual
#music
#lyrics
47 reads
12 Comments
crowfly
Poem Published
21st Oct 2014 4:25pm
21st Oct 2014 4:25pm
Dracula: The Opera
Mist rising from the twilit ground
Awake, my children of the night
The sun has retreated and the lost are found
And darkness encourages our sight
I rejoice in this perfect hour
As remnants of sleep fall away
I thrill in this surge of power
Still growing with the death of day
We're emerging in a barren land
The landscape long curse with terror
The righteous will no longer take a stand
Their resolve has vanished in the air
My spirit will learn to dip and soar
Set sail beneath the stars above
I will step proudly on a foreign...
Awake, my children of the night
The sun has retreated and the lost are found
And darkness encourages our sight
I rejoice in this perfect hour
As remnants of sleep fall away
I thrill in this surge of power
Still growing with the death of day
We're emerging in a barren land
The landscape long curse with terror
The righteous will no longer take a stand
Their resolve has vanished in the air
My spirit will learn to dip and soar
Set sail beneath the stars above
I will step proudly on a foreign...
379 reads
2 Comments
Lookawaynow
Rose
Rose
Poem Published
31st Mar 2018 6:27am
31st Mar 2018 6:27am
Eighth Ball
#UnrequitedLove
143 reads
4 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
27th Jul 2018 4:00pm
27th Jul 2018 4:00pm
Revelry
The morning pangs still drum out revelry
but now are cast aside in this self-made leprosy
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're already suffering
So I hit the shelf and pour out some punishment
get riled up on CNN and the government
I burn my songs with a lifetime effigy
senseless days long lost in the wondering
Midday comes and the smoke's still stuttering
life's a mess, as my mind keeps uttering
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're...
but now are cast aside in this self-made leprosy
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're already suffering
So I hit the shelf and pour out some punishment
get riled up on CNN and the government
I burn my songs with a lifetime effigy
senseless days long lost in the wondering
Midday comes and the smoke's still stuttering
life's a mess, as my mind keeps uttering
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're...
#depression
#death
120 reads
11 Comments
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
jade tiger
Poem Published
16th Jan 2019 10:26am
16th Jan 2019 10:26am
Faith, in Chains
( uncut version )
When the weather takes a turn
For the worst of how you feel.
Ripped down to bare bones that burn,
Stripped down to your cage of steel.
I’m the lover waiting there,
In the deepest of your pain.
Lets you know your heart I’ll wear,
Locked it with your ball & chain.
Sudden glimpse the underworld,
I furtive meet another.
Brazen crave, the other’s furled,
Of every man his brother.
Gone, my sweet touch while alive,
Feel the claws that open you.
Take the honey from the hive, ...
When the weather takes a turn
For the worst of how you feel.
Ripped down to bare bones that burn,
Stripped down to your cage of steel.
I’m the lover waiting there,
In the deepest of your pain.
Lets you know your heart I’ll wear,
Locked it with your ball & chain.
Sudden glimpse the underworld,
I furtive meet another.
Brazen crave, the other’s furled,
Of every man his brother.
Gone, my sweet touch while alive,
Feel the claws that open you.
Take the honey from the hive, ...
#dark
#faith
#lyrics
#lover
#denial
69 reads
14 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2015 11:59pm
2nd Jul 2015 11:59pm
It Takes Two To Ghost Dance
I've traveled this trail of tears
so many times before
always ending with a crying shaman
left behind holding the bag
waving a white flag
Here I am, not as lawman, just a layman
giving you a taste of your own medicine
Man, do you hear what I'm sayin'?
when I say that
Apache servers make for poor spirit horses
charging buffalo wing style across
battlefield littered with bull shitters impaled
by their own disdain dipped arrows scrolled
dulled keyboard warrior...
so many times before
always ending with a crying shaman
left behind holding the bag
waving a white flag
Here I am, not as lawman, just a layman
giving you a taste of your own medicine
Man, do you hear what I'm sayin'?
when I say that
Apache servers make for poor spirit horses
charging buffalo wing style across
battlefield littered with bull shitters impaled
by their own disdain dipped arrows scrolled
dulled keyboard warrior...
507 reads
2 Comments
runaway-mindtrain
Poem Published
21st Apr 2018 8:33am
21st Apr 2018 8:33am
walking their haunted mind
Chorus six part:
Oh such brilliant contradiction the antiquarian rewound
The verse of ideas shows a world of people the same
Mistletoe carried tree to tree but never reaching ground
The scope of people shows a world of ideas the same...
Ol' Jim atomic crow bombing of the minds in the streets
Squaring the circle headed with some smoke and blow
A pack of pyrias ten deep with minds of women in leech
As the enlightenment brought darkness so we pimp and ho...
Ten sec drum solo with bass...
Organ:
An old master ringing a...
Oh such brilliant contradiction the antiquarian rewound
The verse of ideas shows a world of people the same
Mistletoe carried tree to tree but never reaching ground
The scope of people shows a world of ideas the same...
Ol' Jim atomic crow bombing of the minds in the streets
Squaring the circle headed with some smoke and blow
A pack of pyrias ten deep with minds of women in leech
As the enlightenment brought darkness so we pimp and ho...
Ten sec drum solo with bass...
Organ:
An old master ringing a...
#music
#rhyming
#satirical
167 reads
7 Comments
cold_fusion
Poem Published
30th Dec 2017 1:16pm
30th Dec 2017 1:16pm
mama never told me no lie
mama you said there is light
mama i can't see
mama i can't see
mama you say that there is light
mama i can't see
mama i can't see
though you never told me no lie
mama how can it be?
mama how can it be?
then why can't i see?
you say dad'll come home soon
mama when will he?
mama when will he?
you said dad'll come home soon
mama when will he?
mama when will he?
it's been too long we played
mama daddy and me
mama daddy and me...
mama i can't see
mama i can't see
mama you say that there is light
mama i can't see
mama i can't see
though you never told me no lie
mama how can it be?
mama how can it be?
then why can't i see?
you say dad'll come home soon
mama when will he?
mama when will he?
you said dad'll come home soon
mama when will he?
mama when will he?
it's been too long we played
mama daddy and me
mama daddy and me...
272 reads
14 Comments
again
Poem Published
11th Jan 2014 2:52am
11th Jan 2014 2:52am
Flowers in heaven
Flowers in heaven
Let there be a bed of roses
where they bury me
as flowers will be my friends
for eternity,
as you flock on behalf of again
the essence will be
in the Garden Of Heavens Eden also
throughout my extra-terrestrial life
I shall remain
and all will be welcomed by me
again and again
well again
Let there be a bed of roses
where they bury me
as flowers will be my friends
for eternity,
as you flock on behalf of again
the essence will be
in the Garden Of Heavens Eden also
throughout my extra-terrestrial life
I shall remain
and all will be welcomed by me
again and again
well again
582 reads
2 Comments
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