Song Lyrics by Top Critiquers
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DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
13th Jul 2024 9:35pm
13th Jul 2024 9:35pm
The Great Deceiver
Fueled by a consuming rage
Pointed at every situation
As I fall into the final stage
Right before the initiation
Locked inside self-torment
Wiggling out of the noose
Keeping all the spirits dormant
Until madness is busting loose
Pressure building within me
Anger clouding all that I see
Face to face with destiny
Victim of the great deceiver
Tangled within this mutiny
Built by the great deceiver
Wilting on the forbidden vine
Loyal to the art of betrayal
Sinking to depths so asinine
Casted in...
Pointed at every situation
As I fall into the final stage
Right before the initiation
Locked inside self-torment
Wiggling out of the noose
Keeping all the spirits dormant
Until madness is busting loose
Pressure building within me
Anger clouding all that I see
Face to face with destiny
Victim of the great deceiver
Tangled within this mutiny
Built by the great deceiver
Wilting on the forbidden vine
Loyal to the art of betrayal
Sinking to depths so asinine
Casted in...
#lyrics
159 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 8:09pm
27th Nov 2024 8:09pm
Bill Cosby's Favorite Disney Princess Is Sleeping Beauty
She likes it long in the back
She likes it short on the top and the sides
She likes it back in black
She wants to go for a mustache ride
I am your mullet man
Yes I am
Gonna take you for a ride in my van
I am your mullet man
Because I damn well can
Gonna give you all some lovin tonight
That's right
She wants in my pants
Cause they're the tightest of tight
She like my sexy teeth
Cause they are the whitest of white
I got a finger and I want you to pull it
Let me show you the power of the mullet
...
She likes it short on the top and the sides
She likes it back in black
She wants to go for a mustache ride
I am your mullet man
Yes I am
Gonna take you for a ride in my van
I am your mullet man
Because I damn well can
Gonna give you all some lovin tonight
That's right
She wants in my pants
Cause they're the tightest of tight
She like my sexy teeth
Cause they are the whitest of white
I got a finger and I want you to pull it
Let me show you the power of the mullet
...
#funny
#lyrics
#men
#satirical
#sex
81 reads
11 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 10:42pm
30th Sep 2024 10:42pm
My Heart (the song version)
https://suno.com/song/4759b5a3-a3c7-45f4-af94-6452f2c0d384
Who said that I can't have it all
When the sun is shining & you're in my heart
Where else would I wanna be
Just sitting here watching you looking at me
And when this all comes to an end
I know I will enjoy every second we spend
And if you ever have a doubt
Just reach for me and you'll find out
You are my heart that is beating
you're the stars that are gleaming
you are the dream I keep seeing
you are everything that I needed ...
Who said that I can't have it all
When the sun is shining & you're in my heart
Where else would I wanna be
Just sitting here watching you looking at me
And when this all comes to an end
I know I will enjoy every second we spend
And if you ever have a doubt
Just reach for me and you'll find out
You are my heart that is beating
you're the stars that are gleaming
you are the dream I keep seeing
you are everything that I needed ...
#rhyming
225 reads
18 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
21st Oct 2021 9:59pm
21st Oct 2021 9:59pm
THOUGHTS ABOUT WRITING A LOVE SONG
#1
There are millions of love songs
written since the dawn of man;
many have been lost
many still roam the land.
Every love song is special
written from desire in the heart
each one is about unique love
how and where it starts.
CHORUS
If I could write a love song
it would be about you;
it would contain your name
and my promise to be true.
If I could write a love song
I would sing it every day,
to remind us both
that our love is here to stay.
...
There are millions of love songs
written since the dawn of man;
many have been lost
many still roam the land.
Every love song is special
written from desire in the heart
each one is about unique love
how and where it starts.
CHORUS
If I could write a love song
it would be about you;
it would contain your name
and my promise to be true.
If I could write a love song
I would sing it every day,
to remind us both
that our love is here to stay.
...
#happiness
#love
#hope
#respect
#emotions
500 reads
3 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
26th Sep 2020 4:52pm
26th Sep 2020 4:52pm
SAY NOT... JUST STAY & 'BREATHLESSLY #SPB' (Two Translated Lyrical Duet Poetry Of Love Eternal)
Song 1*: SAY NOT... JUST STAY
(in full the duet composition, feminine voice in italics)
(Thematic Refrain: பல்லவி~ Pallavi)
Say Not .. Ask Me Not to say so the say
Don’t go away from me, apart from me
(Higher PItch: அனுபல்லவி~ Aṉupallavi)
To sing of You, is there a word you say
Never ever speaks, this Soul, Never speaks ...
(Refrain) ...
(in full the duet composition, feminine voice in italics)
(Thematic Refrain: பல்லவி~ Pallavi)
Say Not .. Ask Me Not to say so the say
Don’t go away from me, apart from me
(Higher PItch: அனுபல்லவி~ Aṉupallavi)
To sing of You, is there a word you say
Never ever speaks, this Soul, Never speaks ...
(Refrain) ...
#love
#music
#lyrics #sensual
#lyrics #sensual
562 reads
4 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
30th Sep 2022 5:34am
30th Sep 2022 5:34am
This Litte Piggy
This Little Piggy went to market this Little Piggy still trying to find her way back home
Where once upon a time her evil sisters and mother turned their back on her existence leaving her all alone
In her father’s eyes she never measured up
Where can a small child get love if it is not given from the crown of her generational cup
No matter how hard she tried, dysfunctional and slightly obese
Hiding her true self behind baggish boyish clothes worn down to her knees
To everyone else she was a mistake, a disgrace, now scarred face, and lack luster of no...
Where once upon a time her evil sisters and mother turned their back on her existence leaving her all alone
In her father’s eyes she never measured up
Where can a small child get love if it is not given from the crown of her generational cup
No matter how hard she tried, dysfunctional and slightly obese
Hiding her true self behind baggish boyish clothes worn down to her knees
To everyone else she was a mistake, a disgrace, now scarred face, and lack luster of no...
#dark
#Halloween
#witches
#shadows
#monsters
661 reads
3 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 1:15am
1st Apr 2024 1:15am
Practice Bars
Ya neck snaps as I grab your attention.
A head bang and a graphic direction.
My "techs clap" like an Apple convention.
Connects "hang" like a dangling necklace.
Some lawn work - "move green" like Hulk.
Got all the blue dream in bulk.
The chakra, Scooby in jolts.
Them kinds of clues lead to coke.
I'm "on the blocks" like a gutted Deville.
Still forming plots of the thuggery thrill.
My quarry rocks pay me utmost in bills.
Mind more to guap than a couple of pills.
...
A head bang and a graphic direction.
My "techs clap" like an Apple convention.
Connects "hang" like a dangling necklace.
Some lawn work - "move green" like Hulk.
Got all the blue dream in bulk.
The chakra, Scooby in jolts.
Them kinds of clues lead to coke.
I'm "on the blocks" like a gutted Deville.
Still forming plots of the thuggery thrill.
My quarry rocks pay me utmost in bills.
Mind more to guap than a couple of pills.
...
#rhyming
#lyrics
#myself
#rap
#metaphor
529 reads
5 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
14th Jul 2024 00:07am
14th Jul 2024 00:07am
Flown Away - with Grace
I guess I've been living in a bottle
turning my mind, odd fellow
to awake and find a feather
of a dove that's flown away
I know without you by my side
my shadow will fall and quake
I have sinned among the bottles
knowing I have tarnished our vows
of all the years and forgotten chores
listening to the devil make a fool of me
to awake and find a feather
of a dove that's flown away
the eastern sky blushes with the dawn
a new page opens a chapter written
the stories of the past are not...
turning my mind, odd fellow
to awake and find a feather
of a dove that's flown away
I know without you by my side
my shadow will fall and quake
I have sinned among the bottles
knowing I have tarnished our vows
of all the years and forgotten chores
listening to the devil make a fool of me
to awake and find a feather
of a dove that's flown away
the eastern sky blushes with the dawn
a new page opens a chapter written
the stories of the past are not...
#collaboration
#WritingPoetry
125 reads
4 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 1:35am
2nd Dec 2024 1:35am
This Song (It's for You)
You showed up in a dream last night
and you were not ok
You never said a word,
but tears were rolling down your face
I didn’t ask you questions,
just held you while you cried
And when I woke, the rain
was pouring down outside
I know that I can’t call you,
How random that would seem
We’re really not that kind of friends,
We only talk in memes.
I’m not the one you’d turn to
if things were going wrong,
But you’re the one who crashed my dream,
so I’m writing you this song.
...
and you were not ok
You never said a word,
but tears were rolling down your face
I didn’t ask you questions,
just held you while you cried
And when I woke, the rain
was pouring down outside
I know that I can’t call you,
How random that would seem
We’re really not that kind of friends,
We only talk in memes.
I’m not the one you’d turn to
if things were going wrong,
But you’re the one who crashed my dream,
so I’m writing you this song.
...
#friendship
#music
#relationships
#respect
#support
106 reads
17 Comments
Everavalon
Poem Published
31st Mar 2023 3:15am
31st Mar 2023 3:15am
The misbegotten starvation
The ultimate conversion
Of segments in time
The creation; dishonest
Controlling
I’m milking the grave
Justification
Stealing the breed
I’m a soul involved in misery
Conceiving the deceit
For my mind
Will soon be overtaking your illusive kind
From what
does the world descend
Shaping all creations thoughtless lives
Condemned to a mourning sin
seduce me til your ill-infested end
Drawn to avoidance
A resistance
A capability to die
A blood tear
I shed
I’m left too...
Of segments in time
The creation; dishonest
Controlling
I’m milking the grave
Justification
Stealing the breed
I’m a soul involved in misery
Conceiving the deceit
For my mind
Will soon be overtaking your illusive kind
From what
does the world descend
Shaping all creations thoughtless lives
Condemned to a mourning sin
seduce me til your ill-infested end
Drawn to avoidance
A resistance
A capability to die
A blood tear
I shed
I’m left too...
#death
303 reads
2 Comments
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
26th Sep 2024 3:19am
26th Sep 2024 3:19am
Forgive me my love (music)
Hi there,
Check out this song on Suno. The words are mine based on my poem “forgive me my love”
https://suno.com/song/9c7671e9-d74f-4296-8eae-ee711bb266bc
Check out this song on Suno. The words are mine based on my poem “forgive me my love”
https://suno.com/song/9c7671e9-d74f-4296-8eae-ee711bb266bc
#lyrics
145 reads
9 Comments
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