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Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
17th May 2019 2:15am
17th May 2019 2:15am
Neoteric Canzonet
There’s a new song in my heart
since Beautiful Em
has set it free
There’s a new song in my heart
it’s a wonderful
synchronicity!
Most of my cares
are cast away
via transparencies
on display. . .
O what peace of mind
this is sooo sublime
There’s a new song
in
my heart!
since Beautiful Em
has set it free
There’s a new song in my heart
it’s a wonderful
synchronicity!
Most of my cares
are cast away
via transparencies
on display. . .
O what peace of mind
this is sooo sublime
There’s a new song
in
my heart!
#love
#romantic
#spiritual
123 reads
15 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2015 11:59pm
2nd Jul 2015 11:59pm
It Takes Two To Ghost Dance
I've traveled this trail of tears
so many times before
always ending with a crying shaman
left behind holding the bag
waving a white flag
Here I am, not as lawman, just a layman
giving you a taste of your own medicine
Man, do you hear what I'm sayin'?
when I say that
Apache servers make for poor spirit horses
charging buffalo wing style across
battlefield littered with bull shitters impaled
by their own disdain dipped arrows scrolled
dulled keyboard warrior...
so many times before
always ending with a crying shaman
left behind holding the bag
waving a white flag
Here I am, not as lawman, just a layman
giving you a taste of your own medicine
Man, do you hear what I'm sayin'?
when I say that
Apache servers make for poor spirit horses
charging buffalo wing style across
battlefield littered with bull shitters impaled
by their own disdain dipped arrows scrolled
dulled keyboard warrior...
578 reads
2 Comments
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
30th May 2018 4:56am
30th May 2018 4:56am
The Right Side of the Grass
Well, I done lost my grip...
and my skin don't fit...
My perky parts ain't perky any more.
Cain't find my keys
and now my knees
are evenin' the score...for
all the stupid things I done
when I was just a lass.
So don't be a dope
'cause there's always hope
on the right side of the grass.
Every cliff I climbed
All the falls I took
as I bounced down the slope on my ass..
But, hey... it's OK
'cause I'm still...
and my skin don't fit...
My perky parts ain't perky any more.
Cain't find my keys
and now my knees
are evenin' the score...for
all the stupid things I done
when I was just a lass.
So don't be a dope
'cause there's always hope
on the right side of the grass.
Every cliff I climbed
All the falls I took
as I bounced down the slope on my ass..
But, hey... it's OK
'cause I'm still...
#courage
#LifeStruggles
#fate #luck
#fate #luck
226 reads
2 Comments
Jiminex
Poem Published
10th Sep 2019 00:46am
10th Sep 2019 00:46am
You have my heart forever
I need you here with me
So much my love for you to see
The kids ask of you all the time
I tell them god needed flowers
But what do I tell this heart of mine
I just dont think i have the power
You made this world a pretty place
Just by putting a smile upon you face
My hearts was buried with you
Without the kids i couldnt do
I need you here with me
So much my love for you to see
You have my heart forever
As we layed you in the ground
Couldnt leave in the stormy weather
These two you left are the...
So much my love for you to see
The kids ask of you all the time
I tell them god needed flowers
But what do I tell this heart of mine
I just dont think i have the power
You made this world a pretty place
Just by putting a smile upon you face
My hearts was buried with you
Without the kids i couldnt do
I need you here with me
So much my love for you to see
You have my heart forever
As we layed you in the ground
Couldnt leave in the stormy weather
These two you left are the...
#sadness
#grief
#loneliness #heartbroken
#loneliness #heartbroken
67 reads
2 Comments
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
jade tiger
Poem Published
16th Jan 2019 10:26am
16th Jan 2019 10:26am
Faith, in Chains
( uncut version )
When the weather takes a turn
For the worst of how you feel.
Ripped down to bare bones that burn,
Stripped down to your cage of steel.
I’m the lover waiting there,
In the deepest of your pain.
Lets you know your heart I’ll wear,
Locked it with your ball & chain.
Sudden glimpse the underworld,
I furtive meet another.
Brazen crave, the other’s furled,
Of every man his brother.
Gone, my sweet touch while alive,
Feel the claws that open you.
Take the honey from the hive, ...
When the weather takes a turn
For the worst of how you feel.
Ripped down to bare bones that burn,
Stripped down to your cage of steel.
I’m the lover waiting there,
In the deepest of your pain.
Lets you know your heart I’ll wear,
Locked it with your ball & chain.
Sudden glimpse the underworld,
I furtive meet another.
Brazen crave, the other’s furled,
Of every man his brother.
Gone, my sweet touch while alive,
Feel the claws that open you.
Take the honey from the hive, ...
#dark
#faith
#lyrics
#lover
#denial
277 reads
14 Comments
David_Macleod
Poem Published
16th Apr 2019 11:50pm
16th Apr 2019 11:50pm
GAS
Humpty Dumpty sat on his ass
full of wind that he wanted to pass
all the king's horses and people of class
couldn't survive and they were all gassed
full of wind that he wanted to pass
all the king's horses and people of class
couldn't survive and they were all gassed
#childhood
131 reads
6 Comments
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
3rd Jun 2015 7:06pm
3rd Jun 2015 7:06pm
POETDITTY
(Sung to the tune of Waylon Jennings' "Momma Don't Let Your Babies Grow Up To Be Cowboys"-intended to be funny not inflammatory, after all I'm a member of the tribe)
*"Momma don’t let your babies"
grow up to be poets
don’t let’em write stanzas
or live in a loft
expose ‘em to hard labor
before they go soft
"Momma don’t let your babies"
grow up to be poets
they always complain
and the best are insane
pining for someone they love
* Quoted verbatim from Waylon Jennings' song,...
*"Momma don’t let your babies"
grow up to be poets
don’t let’em write stanzas
or live in a loft
expose ‘em to hard labor
before they go soft
"Momma don’t let your babies"
grow up to be poets
they always complain
and the best are insane
pining for someone they love
* Quoted verbatim from Waylon Jennings' song,...
497 reads
12 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
30th Aug 2019 8:44pm
30th Aug 2019 8:44pm
Song of The Sumptian
Running the Mill
for a Spill of the Swill.
Make of it what you Will,
and i'll be your Buffalo Bill ,
(honey'doll)
And so this song occurred in me brain,
it recalls of an undies skidmark stain.
Human'life bogged down in folly's domain .
(As goes la provenzia, so goes the urbane).
I say, ol'chum, have you e'er did see,
A sight so sightly as a knuckle'head tree?
Or perhaps standing at the precipice be,
Waggin' me dickie-bird for one last pee.
ddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd ...
for a Spill of the Swill.
Make of it what you Will,
and i'll be your Buffalo Bill ,
(honey'doll)
And so this song occurred in me brain,
it recalls of an undies skidmark stain.
Human'life bogged down in folly's domain .
(As goes la provenzia, so goes the urbane).
I say, ol'chum, have you e'er did see,
A sight so sightly as a knuckle'head tree?
Or perhaps standing at the precipice be,
Waggin' me dickie-bird for one last pee.
ddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd ...
#happiness
#storm
#heroin
#food
#hurt
72 reads
4 Comments
SerenitySongs
Poem Published
31st Aug 2019 4:41pm
31st Aug 2019 4:41pm
Wild is the Wind
You
Touch me
I hear the sound
Of mandolins
You
Kiss me
With your kiss
My life begins
You're spring to me
All things
To me
Glastonbury, Wild is the wind live
David Bowie
#love
90 reads
4 Comments
Vamps
Poem Published
21st Aug 2019 6:42pm
21st Aug 2019 6:42pm
Misspent Youth
Don't fear the Grim Reaper
Fear what's around us
When you look a little deeper
Go through life, carve a crater
You've got what it takes
You know you have, ain't cha?!
Misspent youth
All I'm after is the truth
I'm gonna need proof
Misspent youth
Feel like a marked man since birth
Waiting for a slip-up
Down on the pavement
The vultures erupt
Tomahawk missile
Read the signs and the reasons
Money makes my head go around
All scarred up with lesions
Misspent youth
All I'm...
Fear what's around us
When you look a little deeper
Go through life, carve a crater
You've got what it takes
You know you have, ain't cha?!
Misspent youth
All I'm after is the truth
I'm gonna need proof
Misspent youth
Feel like a marked man since birth
Waiting for a slip-up
Down on the pavement
The vultures erupt
Tomahawk missile
Read the signs and the reasons
Money makes my head go around
All scarred up with lesions
Misspent youth
All I'm...
#strength
#lies
#betrayal
#freedom
#rebellion
97 reads
6 Comments
RexDurkin
Poem Published
18th Jul 2019 00:40am
18th Jul 2019 00:40am
I.F.C.
#sex
#lyrics
#satirical
#funny
#dirty
138 reads
0 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
27th Jul 2018 4:00pm
27th Jul 2018 4:00pm
Revelry
The morning pangs still drum out revelry
but now are cast aside in this self-made leprosy
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're already suffering
So I hit the shelf and pour out some punishment
get riled up on CNN and the government
I burn my songs with a lifetime effigy
senseless days long lost in the wondering
Midday comes and the smoke's still stuttering
life's a mess, as my mind keeps uttering
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're...
but now are cast aside in this self-made leprosy
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're already suffering
So I hit the shelf and pour out some punishment
get riled up on CNN and the government
I burn my songs with a lifetime effigy
senseless days long lost in the wondering
Midday comes and the smoke's still stuttering
life's a mess, as my mind keeps uttering
ten days gone might as well be a thousand
but no one's counting when you're...
#depression
#death
207 reads
11 Comments
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