Song Lyrics by Top Critiquers
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Poems written by Top Critiquers
Adelphina
Poem Published
28th Nov 2022 1:38am
28th Nov 2022 1:38am
Temporary Grave
In a Temporary Grave
Buried alive but
Don’t worry about me
I’m doing just fine
Got veins that vine
Getting ready to climb
Through soil and dirt
Bloom into a garden of verses
Cause throughout it all
Might as well grow
Into my own sense of style
I’ll be here for a while
Waiting on future sunrays
Of brilliant amber strings
Strong enough to melt
Everything I once felt
Through ice and pain
Bloom within freezing sleet and rain
In a Temporary Grave
Buried...
Buried alive but
Don’t worry about me
I’m doing just fine
Got veins that vine
Getting ready to climb
Through soil and dirt
Bloom into a garden of verses
Cause throughout it all
Might as well grow
Into my own sense of style
I’ll be here for a while
Waiting on future sunrays
Of brilliant amber strings
Strong enough to melt
Everything I once felt
Through ice and pain
Bloom within freezing sleet and rain
In a Temporary Grave
Buried...
#courage
#inspirational
#TimeHeals
104 reads
39 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
30th Sep 2022 5:34am
30th Sep 2022 5:34am
This Litte Piggy
This Little Piggy went to market this Little Piggy still trying to find her way back home
Where once upon a time her evil sisters and mother turned their back on her existence leaving her all alone
In her father’s eyes she never measured up
Where can a small child get love if it is not given from the crown of her generational cup
No matter how hard she tried, dysfunctional and slightly obese
Hiding her true self behind baggish boyish clothes worn down to her knees
To everyone else she was a mistake, a disgrace, now scarred face, and lack luster of no...
Where once upon a time her evil sisters and mother turned their back on her existence leaving her all alone
In her father’s eyes she never measured up
Where can a small child get love if it is not given from the crown of her generational cup
No matter how hard she tried, dysfunctional and slightly obese
Hiding her true self behind baggish boyish clothes worn down to her knees
To everyone else she was a mistake, a disgrace, now scarred face, and lack luster of no...
#dark
#shadows
#Halloween
#monsters
#witches
198 reads
3 Comments
Em-ily
Poem Published
5th Aug 2022 2:35pm
5th Aug 2022 2:35pm
LGBT
Loving the Individuation of Duality rather than the enforcement of non-differentiation? Yes please, I'll take the All of That. No fancy metaphysics needed to see the logic Behind that.
#LGBT
#spiritual
217 reads
2 Comments
Her
Poem Published
27th Oct 2022 9:04am
27th Oct 2022 9:04am
Gotta Love A Thick Girl
Round bottom’d
And stacked
On top
I got the body
You know
You gonna rock
Moves for you
You know
I got plenty
You see me walkin’
Round your block
My moves
You know
You gonna clock
Moves for you
You know
I got plenty
Gotta love a thick girl
(Thick girl)
You on a mission
Don’t need no admission
You got my permission
Put me in positions
Gotta love a thick girl
(Thick girl)
Baby, you know
You got
That good game ...
And stacked
On top
I got the body
You know
You gonna rock
Moves for you
You know
I got plenty
You see me walkin’
Round your block
My moves
You know
You gonna clock
Moves for you
You know
I got plenty
Gotta love a thick girl
(Thick girl)
You on a mission
Don’t need no admission
You got my permission
Put me in positions
Gotta love a thick girl
(Thick girl)
Baby, you know
You got
That good game ...
#lust
#women
#lyrics
135 reads
3 Comments
DevilsChild
Poem Published
16th Dec 2015 10:12pm
16th Dec 2015 10:12pm
Entitled
Take me back to the time
When she wanted me to go with her to the school dance
I was a bad kid so I got in-school suspension
Sweet talked the teacher into letting me go
Showed up late to find her dancing with someone else
Just hung out the rest of the day with my friends
As they blasted Offspring’s “Pretty fly” on the radio
It was good to live through my generation
Guess its all perspective but
Late 90s early 2000s is where I found my favorite songs
Wish I would have known it while it lasted
Still have my old blink records in the attic...
When she wanted me to go with her to the school dance
I was a bad kid so I got in-school suspension
Sweet talked the teacher into letting me go
Showed up late to find her dancing with someone else
Just hung out the rest of the day with my friends
As they blasted Offspring’s “Pretty fly” on the radio
It was good to live through my generation
Guess its all perspective but
Late 90s early 2000s is where I found my favorite songs
Wish I would have known it while it lasted
Still have my old blink records in the attic...
674 reads
2 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
6th Nov 2022 2:26am
6th Nov 2022 2:26am
Sorry, Again
How does it feel
to know what you think before you've said it
How does it feel
to know what you feel before you blow it
What’s it like
to know you’ve got the answers right
What’s it like
to go to bed content at night
How does it feel
to know what you want before you hurt it
How does it feel
to know what you need before you’ve lost it
What’s it like
to always know you’ve done your best
What’s it like
to know you’re gonna pass the test
I’m sorry
My foot got in my mouth...
to know what you think before you've said it
How does it feel
to know what you feel before you blow it
What’s it like
to know you’ve got the answers right
What’s it like
to go to bed content at night
How does it feel
to know what you want before you hurt it
How does it feel
to know what you need before you’ve lost it
What’s it like
to always know you’ve done your best
What’s it like
to know you’re gonna pass the test
I’m sorry
My foot got in my mouth...
#love
#regret
164 reads
12 Comments
JiltedJohnny
Poem Published
27th Nov 2022 6:58am
27th Nov 2022 6:58am
Two hearts in the snow - cooperation with MichaelA
This song was part of a ‘same lyrics challenge’, when everyone involved made a song, based on MichaelA’s lovely lyrics.
As the first advent started today, it seemed like a good idea to dig this one up.
Instead of a syrupy Christmas song, I made a festival one.
Please copy paste this link in your browser, as DUP still hasn’t answered my prayers for clickable links:
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/2018-259-5-same-lyrics-challenge
And here‘s the most important thing of this challenge, @MichaelA ’s beautiful lyrics:
Two...
As the first advent started today, it seemed like a good idea to dig this one up.
Instead of a syrupy Christmas song, I made a festival one.
Please copy paste this link in your browser, as DUP still hasn’t answered my prayers for clickable links:
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/2018-259-5-same-lyrics-challenge
And here‘s the most important thing of this challenge, @MichaelA ’s beautiful lyrics:
Two...
#love
#Christmas
#lover
34 reads
4 Comments
Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
8th Jan 2022 7:41pm
8th Jan 2022 7:41pm
Prams, Piers and Gutter Tears
The traffic of breaths
Gridlocked broken promises
Along summer’s exhausted highroad.
Enter stage left:
The performance of her life
Delivered splayed wide
(on a piss-stained mattress).
Under the croak of creaking pier,
The rivets nailed the baby to the floor.
Another bottle and the waves of
Suggestion will invite her in.
The girl just couldn’t take it anymore.
Gridlocked broken promises
Along summer’s exhausted highroad.
Enter stage left:
The performance of her life
Delivered splayed wide
(on a piss-stained mattress).
Under the croak of creaking pier,
The rivets nailed the baby to the floor.
Another bottle and the waves of
Suggestion will invite her in.
The girl just couldn’t take it anymore.
#nostalgia
236 reads
0 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
28th Oct 2022 5:54pm
28th Oct 2022 5:54pm
MY SWEET ADDICTION
Salacious thought
Brought on by persuasion
A part of the equation
That equals the occasion
Addicted to the rush
The high is amazing
Subside; never does the craving
The need you're evading
But my flesh is weak
And the need is strong
My resistance is fading
Brought on by persuasion
A part of the equation
That equals the occasion
Addicted to the rush
The high is amazing
Subside; never does the craving
The need you're evading
But my flesh is weak
And the need is strong
My resistance is fading
#lust
#lover
#temptation
#passion
#seductive
99 reads
7 Comments
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:07am
Yesterday 1:07am
The thirteen days of Christmas
On the thirteenth day of Christmas, my family gave to me:
indigestion and a migraine,
12 chums incoming,
11 gripers griping,
10 uncles sleeping,
9 fights advancing,
8 fir trees wilting,
7 sozzled women,
6 nieces playing,
5 Cold Kings!
4 brawling girls,
3 quenched friends,
2 purple gloves,
and a parsnip with some spare Brie!
indigestion and a migraine,
12 chums incoming,
11 gripers griping,
10 uncles sleeping,
9 fights advancing,
8 fir trees wilting,
7 sozzled women,
6 nieces playing,
5 Cold Kings!
4 brawling girls,
3 quenched friends,
2 purple gloves,
and a parsnip with some spare Brie!
#family
#Christmas
#alcohol #food
#alcohol #food
41 reads
3 Comments
Wired6
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2022 7:36pm
23rd Jul 2022 7:36pm
This Jungle Life.
This Jungle life's forever
When will it come 2 an End.
Let's join our hands 2gether.
Let's make this Life worth Living.
Everybody Sing It.
Come on and Sing It 2 You Sister.
Everybody Sing It.
Come on and Sing It 2 Your Brother 2.
Everybody Sing It.
Come On and Sing It With Me Bay-ber-er
Everybody Sing It.
Come On and Listen 2 My Prayer for The World.
©Wired6./Georgie. 1997.
When will it come 2 an End.
Let's join our hands 2gether.
Let's make this Life worth Living.
Everybody Sing It.
Come on and Sing It 2 You Sister.
Everybody Sing It.
Come on and Sing It 2 Your Brother 2.
Everybody Sing It.
Come On and Sing It With Me Bay-ber-er
Everybody Sing It.
Come On and Listen 2 My Prayer for The World.
©Wired6./Georgie. 1997.
#earth
#universe
#evolution
135 reads
0 Comments
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