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In the Grey
I'm in the middle
of night and day
one foot in
one foot out
of my grave
I'm in the middle
of thunder and
miles of rain
where all the color
is washed away
You'll find me
in the grey
Colorblind
and that's okay
The clock
has her hands
filled with time
too busy to
pay any mind
My roots have
turned to stone
from my head
I grew a throne
to sit and wait
Weathered and dry
when it's time to die
keeping my cool
where all the color
is washed away
You'll find me
in the grey
Writing you notes
and that's okay
I'll write you waves of words
that will inspire your mind
I'll write to you about your voice
that I hope you'll find
I'll write you sheets of music
that I hope you'll make
Please play them for me
at my grave to keep me awake
I'll write you about the beyond
What a beautiful Swan Song
nothing but harmony
In the grey
of night and day
one foot in
one foot out
of my grave
I'm in the middle
of thunder and
miles of rain
where all the color
is washed away
You'll find me
in the grey
Colorblind
and that's okay
The clock
has her hands
filled with time
too busy to
pay any mind
My roots have
turned to stone
from my head
I grew a throne
to sit and wait
Weathered and dry
when it's time to die
keeping my cool
where all the color
is washed away
You'll find me
in the grey
Writing you notes
and that's okay
I'll write you waves of words
that will inspire your mind
I'll write to you about your voice
that I hope you'll find
I'll write you sheets of music
that I hope you'll make
Please play them for me
at my grave to keep me awake
I'll write you about the beyond
What a beautiful Swan Song
nothing but harmony
In the grey
Author's Note
This came from believe it or not watching an
episode of Emily in Paris on Netflix. LOL
She was working on a product to market grey hair.
Went with it and this is what I came up with.
I haven't written a song in a while
so I thought I'd give it a shot.
Plus, I'm turning half a century next year! Yikes
But in all honesty, I feel like I'm in my twenties:)
Wrote while listening to Metric - suckers
https://youtu.be/4VyaBOJoEe4
episode of Emily in Paris on Netflix. LOL
She was working on a product to market grey hair.
Went with it and this is what I came up with.
I haven't written a song in a while
so I thought I'd give it a shot.
Plus, I'm turning half a century next year! Yikes
But in all honesty, I feel like I'm in my twenties:)
Wrote while listening to Metric - suckers
https://youtu.be/4VyaBOJoEe4
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Re. In the Grey
25th Aug 2024 9:10pm
This is wonderful and introspective. Aging is a blessing to some. Wisdom is the payoff.
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Re: Re. In the Grey
25th Aug 2024 9:23pm
Hi Shiloh:)
thank you for that. Aging comes whether we want it or not.
As people age brings new perspectives. I'm in a great place in my life and it has only gotten better. Nothing perfect but I'm working on it.
Thanks for the RL:)
thank you for that. Aging comes whether we want it or not.
As people age brings new perspectives. I'm in a great place in my life and it has only gotten better. Nothing perfect but I'm working on it.
Thanks for the RL:)
Re. In the Grey
25th Aug 2024 9:45pm
This is very 'new age' Adelphina. No? Lol. Well, it's very current anyhow. Stay cool. 😊
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Re: Re. In the Grey
25th Aug 2024 9:48pm
hahaha
I like that - New Age Adelphina:)
It's still a bit away but I ain't scared. LOL
Thanks for commenting Billy!
I like that - New Age Adelphina:)
It's still a bit away but I ain't scared. LOL
Thanks for commenting Billy!
Re. In the Grey
25th Aug 2024 10:17pm
How you "Feel" is what matters! Not the number of years you have under your belt. I honestly thought you were in your late 20's/early 30's myself! Your spirit is young yet wise.
The first thing I thought about when reading this was waves on the ocean. The caps of them are grey and white and mesmerizing to watch, like many older women who are confident in themselves and know exactly what they want. The youth have their beauty but the aged the wisdom of experience.
Enjoyed reading this, particularly the author's note! I giggled when I read that. That's a cute show!
The first thing I thought about when reading this was waves on the ocean. The caps of them are grey and white and mesmerizing to watch, like many older women who are confident in themselves and know exactly what they want. The youth have their beauty but the aged the wisdom of experience.
Enjoyed reading this, particularly the author's note! I giggled when I read that. That's a cute show!
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Re: Re. In the Grey
Hi A!
I agree. I wrote a poem called Blue Jean Sea
a while back and I talked about that.
But I referred to them as frayed edges of my jeans. haha
The ocean can totally hypnotize you and take you places.
Even the sound calms me:)
And bless you for thinking I'm in my thirties:)
Made my day chica.
But I'm bright old 49:)
and loving life
and the show!! OMG I'm addicted
Sometimes you need cute and silly.
It's fun to watch!
Poor Alfie!!
Now I have to wait until Sept. to
see the other half. I'm not know for my
patience. LOL
thanks for the RL:)
and stopping by for a comment
I agree. I wrote a poem called Blue Jean Sea
a while back and I talked about that.
But I referred to them as frayed edges of my jeans. haha
The ocean can totally hypnotize you and take you places.
Even the sound calms me:)
And bless you for thinking I'm in my thirties:)
Made my day chica.
But I'm bright old 49:)
and loving life
and the show!! OMG I'm addicted
Sometimes you need cute and silly.
It's fun to watch!
Poor Alfie!!
Now I have to wait until Sept. to
see the other half. I'm not know for my
patience. LOL
thanks for the RL:)
and stopping by for a comment
Re. In the Grey
This is a wonderful spill. I love the "I'll write you waves of words
that will inspire your mind
I'll write to you about your voice
that I hope you'll find
Perfect. Fia xoxo
that will inspire your mind
I'll write to you about your voice
that I hope you'll find
Perfect. Fia xoxo
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Re: Re. In the Grey
25th Aug 2024 10:40pm
Hi Fia
thank you for that.
It's one of my favorites too:)
Sometimes in writing it feels like
autopilot. Like it's not really me writing
even though it is. We get in that
writer trance and things
just flow. Thank goodness for muses:)
physical or spiritual.
Thanks for stopping by for a comment:)
thank you for that.
It's one of my favorites too:)
Sometimes in writing it feels like
autopilot. Like it's not really me writing
even though it is. We get in that
writer trance and things
just flow. Thank goodness for muses:)
physical or spiritual.
Thanks for stopping by for a comment:)
Re. In the Grey
25th Aug 2024 10:21pm
50 is new whatever ...
I had a hard time with turning 50 but I'd take it now since I've blown past that..
Aging is quirky but I've always said you get the wisdom package at 50 and not a minute before. All the things you couldn't see before suddenly start to make sense.
You'll be fine kid !!
I had a hard time with turning 50 but I'd take it now since I've blown past that..
Aging is quirky but I've always said you get the wisdom package at 50 and not a minute before. All the things you couldn't see before suddenly start to make sense.
You'll be fine kid !!
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Re: Re. In the Grey
25th Aug 2024 10:45pm
Hey PS
50 is the whatever I say it is. hahaha
That's me being bossy!
Grey is the new black.
Black is the new grey
its all good
age is a blessing
so is writing.
I feel in great shape so I'm running with it.
Things do make more sense at this age.
I don't have it all figured out but where's the
fun in that. hahaha
Thanks for stopping by amigo:)
50 is the whatever I say it is. hahaha
That's me being bossy!
Grey is the new black.
Black is the new grey
its all good
age is a blessing
so is writing.
I feel in great shape so I'm running with it.
Things do make more sense at this age.
I don't have it all figured out but where's the
fun in that. hahaha
Thanks for stopping by amigo:)
Re. In the Grey
25th Aug 2024 11:42pm
to quote billy joel, yesterday wasn't all that good and tomorrow ain't as bad as it seems
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Re: Re. In the Grey
27th Aug 2024 3:19am
Hey Jimmy:)
I was a Billy Joel fan way back in the day.
Great quote!
thanks for stopping by
I was a Billy Joel fan way back in the day.
Great quote!
thanks for stopping by
Re. In the Grey
26th Aug 2024 00:59am
I love that you used "Grey" 🌼 I use it as a nod to my English grandmother.
Your poem has a beautiful vibe about the way of things. Isn't it amazing what thoughts a good show or song will unlease?
Your poem has a beautiful vibe about the way of things. Isn't it amazing what thoughts a good show or song will unlease?
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Re: Re. In the Grey
27th Aug 2024 3:17am
Hi Joe
I was in a grey moment! And I got to thinking
about staying in the grey. Finding all the good in it.
Grey clouds and rain, to me, look menacing but beautiful.
find the positive even if there's a moment of dread. LOL
thanks for stopping by!
I was in a grey moment! And I got to thinking
about staying in the grey. Finding all the good in it.
Grey clouds and rain, to me, look menacing but beautiful.
find the positive even if there's a moment of dread. LOL
thanks for stopping by!
Re. In the Grey
26th Aug 2024 2:48am
Phenomenal write. With age comes wisdom. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Re: Re. In the Grey
27th Aug 2024 3:20am
Hi Damien
thanks for the phenomenal!
made my evening so thank you
for the RL too!
thanks for the phenomenal!
made my evening so thank you
for the RL too!
Re. In the Grey
27th Aug 2024 2:24am
I b4 U
Dark room, no windows in a long time
With no furniture to confuse you
as you sit, back to wall
ass to floor
and wait for your ghosts
The idle light below the door
like a dropped sword
Like a line of was
or will be
a trespass
While you count your wounds
and try to rub them
off of your forehead
I hate to know
you get like this
I hate to feel worthless
Yet only fair
since I have my own moments
in my murky solitude
Ghosts are most vivid in the dark
You can sit there and conjure
one at a time, make it easier
to deal with them
Ask each the same questions
but none ever talk
Asking each ghost "what if"
never warmed a soul for long
It's a debt that
you can't take on
So now you sit alone
in that room surrounded in onyx
A sword of light below the door
too short to make it to your feet
Too far away to reach your toes
No rapture can reach...
~
I'm an old car now
I want to take you out
as far as I can
No one really wants to be alone
We all just watch for shadows
of shoes, under the door
The last of my compassion
is enough fuel to get us gone
To go watch today's sun die quiet
Or perhaps to the ocean
as it struggles at the shore
to be relevant
combating only sand
But there's so much of it
If I give out, keep going
Park me under a shade tree
and I will play my radio
as you go look for an edge
Where all of your light and dark
are swords and shields
Where the lava of a melting sun
hisses at the grasping sea
As I rust slow, silently
knowing that you found
a destiny.
~~~
Dark room, no windows in a long time
With no furniture to confuse you
as you sit, back to wall
ass to floor
and wait for your ghosts
The idle light below the door
like a dropped sword
Like a line of was
or will be
a trespass
While you count your wounds
and try to rub them
off of your forehead
I hate to know
you get like this
I hate to feel worthless
Yet only fair
since I have my own moments
in my murky solitude
Ghosts are most vivid in the dark
You can sit there and conjure
one at a time, make it easier
to deal with them
Ask each the same questions
but none ever talk
Asking each ghost "what if"
never warmed a soul for long
It's a debt that
you can't take on
So now you sit alone
in that room surrounded in onyx
A sword of light below the door
too short to make it to your feet
Too far away to reach your toes
No rapture can reach...
~
I'm an old car now
I want to take you out
as far as I can
No one really wants to be alone
We all just watch for shadows
of shoes, under the door
The last of my compassion
is enough fuel to get us gone
To go watch today's sun die quiet
Or perhaps to the ocean
as it struggles at the shore
to be relevant
combating only sand
But there's so much of it
If I give out, keep going
Park me under a shade tree
and I will play my radio
as you go look for an edge
Where all of your light and dark
are swords and shields
Where the lava of a melting sun
hisses at the grasping sea
As I rust slow, silently
knowing that you found
a destiny.
~~~
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Re: Re. In the Grey
I love this write!!
Speechless right now even though I've read it like
three times.
and you are my destiny baby:)
And you are not giving out - I will remind you about
maintenance and all kinds of annoying things
because I love you. We'll also have an extra gas
tank in the back of the truck just in case!!
So beautiful and bittersweet.
You need to put this on your page!!
Stat!
Speechless right now even though I've read it like
three times.
and you are my destiny baby:)
And you are not giving out - I will remind you about
maintenance and all kinds of annoying things
because I love you. We'll also have an extra gas
tank in the back of the truck just in case!!
So beautiful and bittersweet.
You need to put this on your page!!
Stat!
Re: Re. In the Grey
27th Aug 2024 3:41am
It's posted exactly where it belongs. Just a reminder until we are together again. I miss our physical presence, a lot. No picture, no camera, captures how awesome you really are. In person is the you that is most desired.
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Re. In the Grey
27th Aug 2024 2:29am
Kinda cool that our writes are somewhat similar themed, even though we had no idea what the other was writing.
I love your write. And you are ageless. All that enthusiasm and energy keeps you young.
I love your write. And you are ageless. All that enthusiasm and energy keeps you young.
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Re: Re. In the Grey
27th Aug 2024 3:30am
When I told you about it, I had no idea you were
working on this theme. You make me feel younger
each day. It's like my age is reverting back to my twenties!
No joke.
I work off your energy too babe.
and the reply to this - it makes me all teary eyed every time I read it.
working on this theme. You make me feel younger
each day. It's like my age is reverting back to my twenties!
No joke.
I work off your energy too babe.
and the reply to this - it makes me all teary eyed every time I read it.
Re: Re. In the Grey
27th Aug 2024 3:35am
Even if no one believes it, both our writes reflect on a journey. And you write of a road and then I use a car in my write. And we had no idea what the other was writing.
And, me mentioning rubbing my feet on your legs, is like a car on a road.
Hey, you are beautiful and incredible, and you're perfect for me.
Smooch!
And, me mentioning rubbing my feet on your legs, is like a car on a road.
Hey, you are beautiful and incredible, and you're perfect for me.
Smooch!
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Re: Re. In the Grey
27th Aug 2024 3:39am
That's the fun part. Surprising each other with our write.
why cheat. it wouldn't be as fun. Unless collaborations!
Hey, you're handsome and funny and perfect for me too.
and a great kisser. What?!!! hahahaha
why cheat. it wouldn't be as fun. Unless collaborations!
Hey, you're handsome and funny and perfect for me too.
and a great kisser. What?!!! hahahaha
Re. In the Grey
Dear A,
I love grey. For me I think it’s a soft and loving hue that accommodates a range of emotions. Kind of like soft landings so you don’t hit the bricks hard when life events appear harsh.
While I wish I had the chutzpah to go grey, age is just a number because I feel sassier now that I’m as old as methuselah than I did waaaaaaaay back in my younger years. I enjoyed this piece for its reflection and coming to terms with all the possibilities available as we move onward. Lovely write. H🌷
I love grey. For me I think it’s a soft and loving hue that accommodates a range of emotions. Kind of like soft landings so you don’t hit the bricks hard when life events appear harsh.
While I wish I had the chutzpah to go grey, age is just a number because I feel sassier now that I’m as old as methuselah than I did waaaaaaaay back in my younger years. I enjoyed this piece for its reflection and coming to terms with all the possibilities available as we move onward. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. In the Grey
2nd Sep 2024 11:48pm
Hi H!
I enjoy the flexibly of grey. It's soft:) Just like you brilliantly stated
for harsh landings. It also highlights other colors. It blends so well with everything.
I also think it's great symbolism for something being unfinished. You still got time to say what you want to say while in transition. it's great to hear from you!
Thanks for the RL and stopping by lovely:)
I enjoy the flexibly of grey. It's soft:) Just like you brilliantly stated
for harsh landings. It also highlights other colors. It blends so well with everything.
I also think it's great symbolism for something being unfinished. You still got time to say what you want to say while in transition. it's great to hear from you!
Thanks for the RL and stopping by lovely:)
Re. In the Grey
29th Aug 2024 1:22am
Re: Re. In the Grey
2nd Sep 2024 11:49pm