Poems About the Sun Seeking Honest Critique
#sun
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:04pm
Yesterday 6:04pm
Astral Shores beyond the second Sun
Moon and sun merge
To relieve the sleeping night
lean Nomads wander astral shores
Where black diamond tides
Mirror the stars lost under the second sun
Time slows the dawn
Time slows the dusk
Long enough to feel
The movement of the earth
To relieve the sleeping night
lean Nomads wander astral shores
Where black diamond tides
Mirror the stars lost under the second sun
Time slows the dawn
Time slows the dusk
Long enough to feel
The movement of the earth
#sun
#moon
#music
#meditation
#dawn
20 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 12:10pm
Yesterday 12:10pm
When I Woke Up And Saw The Sun
When I
woke up and saw
the sun rising between
two of the tall buildings in this
city, I felt like saying "Good Morning".
woke up and saw
the sun rising between
two of the tall buildings in this
city, I felt like saying "Good Morning".
#city
#sun
#morning
#fiction
#dialogue
17 reads
1 Comment
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
29th Jan 2023 3:54pm
29th Jan 2023 3:54pm
Whispers through Sunlight
Art
My art
Self
Painter
Modern Art
Contemporary Art
Whispers through Sunlight
My art
Self
Painter
Modern Art
Contemporary Art
Whispers through Sunlight
#beauty
#sun
#TruthOfLife
#art
#philosophical
100 reads
31 Comments
a_piscean_dream
Tierra
Tierra
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2023 1:22am
22nd Jan 2023 1:22am
Poem 2: January '23 (The End)
Solar rays return
Soulful haze, music plays
The day adjourns
Branches weave about
Nests rest in the cross sections
Careful, yet dangerous
Nine, natural days left
Lose track of time
Meticulous rhythms set
A ball of rubber bands, stretch to unwind
Soulful haze, music plays
The day adjourns
Branches weave about
Nests rest in the cross sections
Careful, yet dangerous
Nine, natural days left
Lose track of time
Meticulous rhythms set
A ball of rubber bands, stretch to unwind
#sun
#winter
#nature
32 reads
0 Comments
cjflier
Poem Published
21st Jan 2023 9:27pm
21st Jan 2023 9:27pm
Haiku - Dawn's Beginning
dewy grass glistens
as the morning sun rises,
bird song greets the day.
as the morning sun rises,
bird song greets the day.
#sun
#morning
#nature
#haiku
#dawn
25 reads
2 Comments
A_Failed_Artist
Poem Published
21st Jan 2023 6:24pm
21st Jan 2023 6:24pm
Indifference
Is it better to hate yourself or to be indifferent?
The feelings I had changed with the season
The feelings are in winter
Must I wait for the snow to melt?
I couldn’t bare the burning sun
But I guess it’s better to be frozen solid
The feelings I had changed with the season
The feelings are in winter
Must I wait for the snow to melt?
I couldn’t bare the burning sun
But I guess it’s better to be frozen solid
#anxiety
#depression
#sun
#snow
#MentalHealth
68 reads
1 Comment
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
19th Jan 2023 10:05am
19th Jan 2023 10:05am
Fear of Loss (Funeral: The Last Rites Competition Entry)
Always the same scenario...
repeated in my head.
Long days now rarely do
stop haunting in my bed.
The wind is rather quiet;
alas, a whispered song.
I'm blind, my eyes are shut.
For I must be wrong.
No one has died yet;
but I attend a funeral;
for my love is upset
to lose, though presumable.
The weepers shriek,
but can't revive,
along the corpse still vivid.
A mourner, I'm weak,
deader inside,
than the soul forever lifted.
The dead are gone;
but I am here.
Lonely,
on...
repeated in my head.
Long days now rarely do
stop haunting in my bed.
The wind is rather quiet;
alas, a whispered song.
I'm blind, my eyes are shut.
For I must be wrong.
No one has died yet;
but I attend a funeral;
for my love is upset
to lose, though presumable.
The weepers shriek,
but can't revive,
along the corpse still vivid.
A mourner, I'm weak,
deader inside,
than the soul forever lifted.
The dead are gone;
but I am here.
Lonely,
on...
#grief
#hope
#death
#sun
#dawn
83 reads
10 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
14th Jan 2023 1:07am
14th Jan 2023 1:07am
Relief
With the sun’s last rays
My heart leaps to the sky
And your endearing praise
Fills me with a sigh…
-
Of relief, of repent
That I’m free from my sin’s rent
Your words, your caress; they heal my soul
And I took back my reins of control
-
With the moon’s reflection
My soul returns to the source
I’m filled with bountiful affection
And I start to cry…
-
In relief, in release
As I’m stitched back piece by piece
To reconnect with my true self
And the dark night of the soul can finally be placed back on the...
My heart leaps to the sky
And your endearing praise
Fills me with a sigh…
-
Of relief, of repent
That I’m free from my sin’s rent
Your words, your caress; they heal my soul
And I took back my reins of control
-
With the moon’s reflection
My soul returns to the source
I’m filled with bountiful affection
And I start to cry…
-
In relief, in release
As I’m stitched back piece by piece
To reconnect with my true self
And the dark night of the soul can finally be placed back on the...
#sun
#moon
#spiritual #rhyming
#spiritual #rhyming
82 reads
14 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
12th Jan 2023 3:57pm
12th Jan 2023 3:57pm
Afternoon Delight
light plays
on pond surface
ripples dancing
with the breeze
(C)2023 Raibeart Bruis
on pond surface
ripples dancing
with the breeze
(C)2023 Raibeart Bruis
#sun
#water
#nature
34 reads
2 Comments
Alviola
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2023 5:41pm
2nd Jan 2023 5:41pm
The Pandemic Stole My Magic Hour
The poison in the air gnawed
through the time inexorably,
my magic hour now truncated,
the wise and esteemed could not
tell us when the rot would end,
what would remain of my last hour.
The sun did peep after a while,
warily, seemingly chastened,
sniffing for the evil in the air.
But the glisten is gone, the gold
the sun throws at all it sees
during that magical hour,
rooftops and cars, boats at sea
and the irises of children,
that glow, now wan and cautious.
Unlike the sun,...
through the time inexorably,
my magic hour now truncated,
the wise and esteemed could not
tell us when the rot would end,
what would remain of my last hour.
The sun did peep after a while,
warily, seemingly chastened,
sniffing for the evil in the air.
But the glisten is gone, the gold
the sun throws at all it sees
during that magical hour,
rooftops and cars, boats at sea
and the irises of children,
that glow, now wan and cautious.
Unlike the sun,...
#sadness
#sun
#aging
#redemption
#disappointment
100 reads
8 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
26th Dec 2022 7:31pm
26th Dec 2022 7:31pm
Dominant Sunshine
your dominance
is not shrouded
in cold mystery
that leaves me
intrigued
addicted
shivering
your dominance
is sunny and true
warm radiant heat
beautifully
blazingly
fierce
just often enough
it's been years
since i've experienced
your climate
now i'm planning a vacation
i can't wait
to feel
the warmth
and
maybe
even
be healed
is not shrouded
in cold mystery
that leaves me
intrigued
addicted
shivering
your dominance
is sunny and true
warm radiant heat
beautifully
blazingly
fierce
just often enough
it's been years
since i've experienced
your climate
now i'm planning a vacation
i can't wait
to feel
the warmth
and
maybe
even
be healed
#happiness
#BDSM
#sun
178 reads
8 Comments
Em-ily
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2022 8:51pm
23rd Dec 2022 8:51pm
Thoughts upon driving home, on a busy, long road in a car that's in danger of overheating or breaking an axel
If an embarrassing disaster occured, would I want to to be holding “this” thought / emotion / ego within myself at that same time?
Same time as if, if I ran into an friend or known acquaintance (a loved one), would I want to find my self, my eyes, or my countenance clothed in it upon their making sight of me?
How embarrassing!
Same time as if, if I ran into an friend or known acquaintance (a loved one), would I want to find my self, my eyes, or my countenance clothed in it upon their making sight of me?
How embarrassing!
#love
#sun
#beach #water
#beach #water
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5 Comments
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