Poems About the Sun Seeking Honest Critique
#sun
Ogbonna
Poem Published
20th Jan 2024 11:00am
20th Jan 2024 11:00am
The Golden Sun
Deify me, I illuminate your world.
I shine like your luminous guardian angel.
In the cosmos, I am your adored arch-angel.
I awake to brighten a lack-luster morning.
I always your routine activities herald.
I glitter for the flora to have their fill,
so do I for men to energize their mill.
Of the ocean currents I keep on warning.
I make the flora lush for medicine and food.
I awake for the globe's universal good,
and sleep at even with a sated crimson smile.
I pave the way for the silver and dew for a while.
The globe's...
I shine like your luminous guardian angel.
In the cosmos, I am your adored arch-angel.
I awake to brighten a lack-luster morning.
I always your routine activities herald.
I glitter for the flora to have their fill,
so do I for men to energize their mill.
Of the ocean currents I keep on warning.
I make the flora lush for medicine and food.
I awake for the globe's universal good,
and sleep at even with a sated crimson smile.
I pave the way for the silver and dew for a while.
The globe's...
#sun
#sky
#nature
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1 Comment
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
20th Jan 2024 5:04am
20th Jan 2024 5:04am
The Awe Of A Winter Wonderland
Unto the barren what dreams become bare by the absence of trees
Where fantasies are found in dreams as we atrial in the subconscious of our sleep
Snowcapped mountains as far as the eyes can see
Polar bears swimming in the depth of the frigid oceans just as easy as breeze
Their time of the season as human huddle under blankets for Winter’s cold hibernation
As the Artic fox roam in search of prey or be consumed by the nature victor’s starvation
Enjoy your presence upon the Earth and surround yourself with love
The blanket of the Winter season is...
Where fantasies are found in dreams as we atrial in the subconscious of our sleep
Snowcapped mountains as far as the eyes can see
Polar bears swimming in the depth of the frigid oceans just as easy as breeze
Their time of the season as human huddle under blankets for Winter’s cold hibernation
As the Artic fox roam in search of prey or be consumed by the nature victor’s starvation
Enjoy your presence upon the Earth and surround yourself with love
The blanket of the Winter season is...
#sun
#winter
#water #lover
#water #lover
221 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Jan 2024 12:42pm
19th Jan 2024 12:42pm
Boreal Flower
the flower screaming
in the creases of the night
the afternoon screaming
your sunsets
its dawns and the
long night
leans out the window
and watch the procession pass
the night is still in the churchyard
loaded with wounds
the night falls from the eyes
of insomniacs and falls asleep
in the bed of all rivers
the night peers
the unfathomability.
in the creases of the night
the afternoon screaming
your sunsets
its dawns and the
long night
leans out the window
and watch the procession pass
the night is still in the churchyard
loaded with wounds
the night falls from the eyes
of insomniacs and falls asleep
in the bed of all rivers
the night peers
the unfathomability.
#grief
#sun
#despair
#emotions
#dawn
71 reads
1 Comment
janiselizabeth
Janis Miller
Janis Miller
Poem Published
13th Jan 2024 12:28pm
13th Jan 2024 12:28pm
Impossible Things
Like dipping my feet into a golden sunset
Or drinking the moon from a silver straw
I like to do impossible things
Or drinking the moon from a silver straw
I like to do impossible things
#sun
#moon
#stars
90 reads
7 Comments
javalini
Poem Published
6th Jan 2024 1:37pm
6th Jan 2024 1:37pm
NEW PRAYER TO THE SUN
dream me rising
through this damp haze
to bask in your glory
oh, light of the world,
merciful sun of the gods,
giver of light and life
and maker of this
and all days
grey and bright
you, who rise from
the tomb of dark night
and ascend to reign
from the azure throne
of heaven,
nourish thy green kingdom
and all that lives
therein,
this we pray in earnest
amen
through this damp haze
to bask in your glory
oh, light of the world,
merciful sun of the gods,
giver of light and life
and maker of this
and all days
grey and bright
you, who rise from
the tomb of dark night
and ascend to reign
from the azure throne
of heaven,
nourish thy green kingdom
and all that lives
therein,
this we pray in earnest
amen
#sun
#prayer
73 reads
2 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
4th Jan 2024 3:55pm
4th Jan 2024 3:55pm
Justified
sunrise
justification
to watch the day unfold
sunset
justification
to snuggle
justification
to watch the day unfold
sunset
justification
to snuggle
#sun
#TruthOfLife
#gratitude
75 reads
2 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
4th Jan 2024 00:05am
4th Jan 2024 00:05am
He's the Sun
He’s the sun
Our source of warmth and light
Can’t you sense how important his presence is?
It’s worth giving up my life.
Just as he died for us
To take in all our earthly sins
If only we could see the big picture
And focus on bettering what’s within.
I’ve loved and lost
I’ve cursed and cried
One moment I’ve hit rock bottom
The next I’m flying on cloud nine.
He’s within each of us
For we’re all his sacred temple
Can’t you feel that blooming warmth?
A soothing caress forever gentle.
He’s the...
Our source of warmth and light
Can’t you sense how important his presence is?
It’s worth giving up my life.
Just as he died for us
To take in all our earthly sins
If only we could see the big picture
And focus on bettering what’s within.
I’ve loved and lost
I’ve cursed and cried
One moment I’ve hit rock bottom
The next I’m flying on cloud nine.
He’s within each of us
For we’re all his sacred temple
Can’t you feel that blooming warmth?
A soothing caress forever gentle.
He’s the...
#love
#sun
#God
#spiritual
#rhyming
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2 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
28th Dec 2023 5:30pm
28th Dec 2023 5:30pm
Devouring The Sun
under scrutiny of the sun i toil
showered with light and heat
with origins ninety three million miles afar
warming muscles and flesh
each shovel full
with billions of creatures
bacterium nematodes
slugs earthworms
each leaf a magical factory
transforming
minerals solar radiation and air
into lipids proteins carbohydrates
mycelial internet
sending emails
to and fro
from tree to flower to bee
messages from father sun
eventually nourishing me
with this single perfect ...
showered with light and heat
with origins ninety three million miles afar
warming muscles and flesh
each shovel full
with billions of creatures
bacterium nematodes
slugs earthworms
each leaf a magical factory
transforming
minerals solar radiation and air
into lipids proteins carbohydrates
mycelial internet
sending emails
to and fro
from tree to flower to bee
messages from father sun
eventually nourishing me
with this single perfect ...
#sun
#nature
#spiritual #gratitude
#spiritual #gratitude
66 reads
1 Comment
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2023 6:07pm
23rd Dec 2023 6:07pm
Golden Apple
nothing to lose
mind’s already gone
happy as the morning sun
dawn growing into day
rising lazy solar star with nothing to do
but roll around cosmic neighborhood
sun burning in sky
above silver-lined mushrooms
strands of floating clouds
long lonely streams moving on
don’t stare solar radiation easily blinds
close your eyes it’s alright
blind men know when
they’re walking in the sun
warm sunshine on shoulders
waiting for raging dark
sun sinking slowly down
flame...
mind’s already gone
happy as the morning sun
dawn growing into day
rising lazy solar star with nothing to do
but roll around cosmic neighborhood
sun burning in sky
above silver-lined mushrooms
strands of floating clouds
long lonely streams moving on
don’t stare solar radiation easily blinds
close your eyes it’s alright
blind men know when
they’re walking in the sun
warm sunshine on shoulders
waiting for raging dark
sun sinking slowly down
flame...
#happiness
#grief
#sun
#moon
#nature
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1 Comment
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
21st Dec 2023 1:21am
21st Dec 2023 1:21am
I See Your Worth
Oh, I see you shooting your vibes past the stars
Raise the conscious level, it’s still grounded, push the limits, my throne will tell you how far
I do not solicit the pulsations of my Chi, my star dust softly floats from Jupiter after it has been tenderly kissed upon Mars
A Hebrew King is ordained by the will of Allah and in him I trust
Not by his will to fall into temptation of mental lust
My value is worth far more the silver, titanium, and from the minerals embedded in Mother Earth, the natural elements of gold
I am...
Raise the conscious level, it’s still grounded, push the limits, my throne will tell you how far
I do not solicit the pulsations of my Chi, my star dust softly floats from Jupiter after it has been tenderly kissed upon Mars
A Hebrew King is ordained by the will of Allah and in him I trust
Not by his will to fall into temptation of mental lust
My value is worth far more the silver, titanium, and from the minerals embedded in Mother Earth, the natural elements of gold
I am...
#sun
#philosophical
#wisdom
#TruthOfLife
#spiritual
320 reads
5 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
21st Dec 2023 1:13am
21st Dec 2023 1:13am
Visual Appeal
I love the look of beautiful women
And I love female beauty
in all the forms it presents itself
Each man must define visual beauty for himself
But my preference for beautiful has not changed
It is pretty, perfect, and black
Perfectly Black
A darkness of the skin that brings joy to my heart. A vivid, visceral beauty that brings forth happiness, and hunger, in me.
Ever feel the sun on your face and revel in the warmth of soaking up all the sun's rays?
That is how I feel looking upon skin which collects all the colors...
And I love female beauty
in all the forms it presents itself
Each man must define visual beauty for himself
But my preference for beautiful has not changed
It is pretty, perfect, and black
Perfectly Black
A darkness of the skin that brings joy to my heart. A vivid, visceral beauty that brings forth happiness, and hunger, in me.
Ever feel the sun on your face and revel in the warmth of soaking up all the sun's rays?
That is how I feel looking upon skin which collects all the colors...
#romantic
#beauty
#sun #environment
#sun #environment
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3 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
19th Dec 2023 11:10pm
19th Dec 2023 11:10pm
Fading Memory
solar radiation
orange red purple
cloudy irregularity
focused through
corneal filtration
visions of eye
analyzed with
retinal detachment
cerebral recognition
unrecognizable
patterns shifting color
increasingly intense
fading slowly
oozing into
shades of gray
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
orange red purple
cloudy irregularity
focused through
corneal filtration
visions of eye
analyzed with
retinal detachment
cerebral recognition
unrecognizable
patterns shifting color
increasingly intense
fading slowly
oozing into
shades of gray
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
#sun
#memories
#unicorns #sensual
#unicorns #sensual
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6 Comments
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